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 Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 5:30 pm
[.Hermes.] Blind Dog Pride [.Hermes.] Blind Dog Pride [.Hermes.] Wait a second...
We don't know who Ian's brother is do we?
Or am I missing something? Nope, we don't yet. He could be an already existant character, or a completely new one, I just thought I'd put some drama in there. Ok good.
I thought I hadn't read it right.
=P Then I've done my job. cool Can I get a hint who he is?
D= I don't even know yet. mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 6:42 pm
I love it.
Love the way you incorperated Logan in there.
And a game. :3
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 6:43 pm
Thanks, got any questions/suggestions/corrections?
As soon as I get Wolf and Hermes' opinions (and anyone else who checks this out), I'll get it posted in the GCD and see what everyone thinks.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 7:11 pm
Personally, I love it.
Simply awesome.
=O
But Liam works at Crate and Apparal.
Leon is the guilds guy.
Or were you talking about Leon?
Dx
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 7:17 pm
[.Hermes.] Personally, I love it.
Simply awesome.
=O
But Liam works at Crate and Apparal.
Leon is the guilds guy.
Or were you talking about Leon?
Dx Talking about Liam. eek MAJOR mess-up. Thanks for catching that.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 7:33 pm
Blind Dog Pride [.Hermes.] Personally, I love it.
Simply awesome.
=O
But Liam works at Crate and Apparal.
Leon is the guilds guy.
Or were you talking about Leon?
Dx Talking about Liam. eek MAJOR mess-up. Thanks for catching that. xD
Watever.
The GCD shall never know.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 7:38 pm
[.Hermes.] Blind Dog Pride [.Hermes.] Personally, I love it.
Simply awesome.
=O
But Liam works at Crate and Apparal.
Leon is the guilds guy.
Or were you talking about Leon?
Dx Talking about Liam. eek MAJOR mess-up. Thanks for catching that. xD
Watever.
The GCD shall never know. Someone would have noticed, and I'd have been torn to shreds. gonk
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 7:44 pm
Blind Dog Pride [.Hermes.] Blind Dog Pride [.Hermes.] Personally, I love it.
Simply awesome.
=O
But Liam works at Crate and Apparal.
Leon is the guilds guy.
Or were you talking about Leon?
Dx Talking about Liam. eek MAJOR mess-up. Thanks for catching that. xD
Watever.
The GCD shall never know. Someone would have noticed, and I'd have been torn to shreds. gonk I meant that they will never know since we found it now.
If you'd have posted it they would have killed you.
xD
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 8:12 pm
Edited a few spelling errors here and there (except for Logan's parts of the dialog)
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 8:23 pm
Each time this plot updates it gets better and better, I hope the admins do something close to this come H2k7.
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 12:45 am
Plotline, simply genius, I love it.
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 7:54 am
Wolfram Lee Ysud Edited a few spelling errors here and there (except for Logan's parts of the dialog) Thanks. @Ice and Agent: Thanks. cool This should be up in the GCD in just a little bit. I'm gonna read over it again.
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 8:03 am
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 8:06 am
Thanks a bunch.
I'll be sure to place a link to the thread in the 2nd post when I put this in the GCD.
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 8:11 am
By the way... are we perchance going to see any of the elusive Labtech X this Halloween? I noticed he hadn't made his way into your plot yet (except for the pre-pre stuff we've already seen).
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