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 Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:34 pm
Hehehehe credits to me, I feel special lol
Nicely done so far, awesome story!
Keep up the great work!
-Leeann
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:54 pm
Aaa no! Frankie must not die!
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:57 pm
|Commercial Person Voice|
Will He Die? Will He Live? Find Out In The Next Chapter Of TeEnAgErS
I wish books had commercials in them, that would be fun.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 2:06 pm
BREAK_down_CHILD |Commercial Person Voice| Will He Die? Will He Live? Find Out In The Next Chapter Of TeEnAgErSI wish books had commercials in them, that would be fun. DUN DUN DUN...! commericals in books would get annoying after a while.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:38 pm
scream ARGH WRITERS BLOCK!!! scream
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~IDEA~ YAY! mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 4:07 pm
I feel like I'm watching a teen soap or something, like The OC but in NJ and cooler.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 4:12 pm
I don't watch the OC so I can't really compare the two, but do explain.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 6:40 pm
The OC is a crappy teen soap opera concerning the problems and deeds of rich kids in Orange County.
That is all.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 6:41 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 11:32 am
Oh, sad My story is like a crappy teen soap opera?
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 12:46 pm
No of course not, it's a teen soapy thing sorta like the category of the OC but differenter (<
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 1:28 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:35 pm
Chapter 8!!!!! Woot I love updating this story. Also this was supposed to be the last chapter. BUT I HAVE FIGURED OUT A WAY TO MAKE IT LONGER! Now I'm not sure how long it will be, but oh well.And I didn't get a chance to have anyone check over the spelling and stuff so sorry for any mistakes. Now It's Time For.....
Chapter 8
My hand was shaking as I pushed open the door to Gerard's room. He was fast asleep, I let out a sigh of relief. This would be the hardest thing I ever had to do, and to be honnest I didn't even know why I was doing it. I pulled a chair up to Gerard's bed and started to plan the conversation out in my head.
"I'm sorry Gerard, I love you a lot. But I love..."
"Gerard, we need to talk. I know this is a bad time but I think we should..."
"I'm sorry, but I don't think we should..."
I couldn't say it, not even in my mind. I didn't want to break up with him, I didn't want to have feelings for Frankie. But I did and there was nothing I could do.
"Why me?!" I whispered to myself and any type of god that may be listening. I layyed my head down on Gerard's chest and could feel as it steadily went up and down with every breath he took. It felt too right, I couldn't break up with him. Besides it was probably just from the shock of everything that had happened. I didn't love Frankie, well not in that way. He was like a brother to me, infact he was better than the brother I had. I loved Frankie, but I loved Gerard in ways that I couldn't love Frankie. Not because I didn't want to but because I was with Gerard, and quite happy with him. I let out a small sigh which apparently was loud enough to wake my sleeping beauty from his slumber. He sat up and stared into my eyes, I could see how much he loved me. I loved him too and no one could make me think twice about it. I felt terrible for even thinking about breaking up with him.
"What's wrong?" Gerard asked, seeing the sad look on my face. I looked into his eyes, they were filled with worry. I loved that someone finally cared so much for me, well someone other than Frankie.
"Absolutely nothing." I replied, a smile coming across my face as I leaned in and kissed him.
"I'm dying for some coffee." Gerard said after a few seconds of slience.
"Want me to get us some?" I asked seeing as Gerard wouldn't be allowed on his feet for a few more days. He nodded and I left to get our drinks. I returned several minutes later, the hot liquid soaking through the cup and burning my hands. I let out a slight cry of pain as I placed them on the table beside Gerard's bed. We sat in the room for what seemed like hours, just talking and drinking our coffee. Everything was going fine, I actually thought today might be pretty good. That is until Mikey burst into the room.
"Something's wrong with Frank!" Mikey shouted, waking a few people from across the hall. I jumped up spitting put my mouthful of coffee.
"What!?" I yelled. I didn't wait for an answer, I ran straight to our hospital room. Nurses and doctors surrounded his small bed. Doctors yelling for needles and medicines, and nurses running to and from cupboards getting the supplies for the doctors. I stood there, frozen still. I was about to faint when I felt someone caught me, I looked up and saw Mikey holding me steady. He was very strong, even if he didn't look it. He led me over to my bed, past the large group of doctors and nurses. He sat down on the bed next to me, I finally snapped back from my frozen state and broke down crying in Mikey's arms.
"Shhh... everything will be okay Ky, I know it will." He said, his arms wrapped around me as I cried into his chest. Eventually all of the doctors left. A nurse told us that Frankie would be in a critical state for the next little while, although she never did tell us how long.
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It had been four days since Frankie had been put into critical condition, a little while went by after the first day and a half. Gerard was now able to walk around the halls but he did need help every now and then. Frankie had finally started looking better around the end of the fourth day. Unfortunetly I was awoken in the middle of the night by a lot of fast beeping sounds coming from his heart monitor. I called for the nurse, too scared to cry. It took about 2 minutes before any nurses came in, I was almost sure Frankie was going to die before someone came. The nurse was pure white when she saw Frankie's heart monitor, by the look on her face and the fast beepings coming from the machine I knew it was bad. She called in a bunch of doctors, they rushed Frankie into a different room. I didn't sleep at all. That afternoon, after hours of worrying and more tears than anyone could count. A nurse came into my room, Gerard and Mikey both sitting by the bed.
"I'm sorry to say this, but Frank might not make it to the end of the week." The nurse said, a deeply saddened look on her face.
"It seems a piece of the bullet in his stomach broke off and somehow made it's way to Frank's heart. And now it has lodged into his heart, we're doing surgery tonight to try and remove it. But it is a very dangerous procedure. We just wanted to make sure you all understood that he might not make it." We nodded.
"Can we see him?" I asked in a hushed voice.
"I'm sorry but he is being set up for the surgery, you can see him afterwards. If he makes it." The nurse then left the room, leaving me, Gerard and Mikey alone to cry out our worries. Another nurse came in that night to tell us that they were starting the surgery. I couldn't help but think the worst would happen. Gerard and Mikey tried to convince me otherwise, but I ignored their attempts. Soon it was time for them to go back to their rooms. The only thing I could think about the whole night was that the last time Frankie saw me was when I was covered in blood and gasping for air, and the fact that I never got to tell him how I really felt.
Okay even though I wrote it, this chapter still makes me sad. For two reasons, 1) I still haven't figured out if Frankie is gonna make it or not and 2) Because Kyla might break up with Gerard (still ahven't decided that either). And yes even though this is my story and I can make anything I want happen, I still suprise myself when I write. Anyways if you want to know what happens then you must comment. (comments are like drugs, they're addicting and make you feel good) So Please Comment!!!! heart
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:08 pm
Aww, Frankie must not die! He's too cute...
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 12:29 pm
12-String Pony Aww, Frankie must not die! He's too cute... I haven't decided if he lives or dies yet. But seeing as it's V-day and these stupid hallmark holidays always make me depressed he might. Who knows.... I'm working on chapter 9 right now. So you'll find out soon.
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