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 Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:39 am
chippymunk i like poems..... there nice to write. i write them about love.... but i wrote one for my grand father cuz he died november 15, 2006. so here it is. We think of you in silence And often repeat your name But all that is left to answer us Is a picture in frame. To your resting place we wander With flowers we place with care No one knows the silent heartache As we turn and leave you there. To some you are forgotten To others part of the past But to us who loved you dearly Your memory will always last. It broke our hearts to lose you But you did not go alone For part of us went with you The day god took you home. A million times we needed you A million times we've cried If love could have saved you You never would have died. God took your hand, we had to part He gave you peace, but broke our hearts. Your memory is our keepsake With which we'll never part God has you in his keeping We have you in our hearts. that was the prettiest thing i have ever read! crying it reminds me of my great uncle's funeral...
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 11:37 am
as i staggered under my wounds, i looked down at my defeated enemy. i couldn't beleive that i, who had never hurt anyone before, had killed another human being. i went over to the dead body and whispered, "May you rest in peace."
just a part of the novel that i am writing... mrgreen what do u think?
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 3:52 pm
my heart beats for you like a beating drum.
in an orchestra, no matter how loud they play, my love for you will always be louder,
when we are in the snowy Mt. Everest,
i will be warmed by your love,
but if you leave me, my heart will shatter the beating drums,
and the orchastra will seice to play,
and the snowy Mt. Everest will seem colder than it has ever been, because you left me.
well, what do you think? i like it...
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:09 am
Euchi101 squinty1989 Topic: Can't Live Without You By: Squinty Everytime i look at you, i get this weird feeling inside me. When i want to express it i get scared !! I'm afraid what i'll say may ruin our friendship or DESTROY it!! =S I love everything about you and i will always continue loving you until i die. I tell you everything because your one of my best friends and i trust you with my life!! =) I know i might've hurt you or annoyed you. But plz forgive me, in the end, we're all humans. And humans make mistakes. I wish if i knew what i rly want. Sometimes i want you as my BEST FRIEND and sometimes i want MORE!! Hope we stay best friends till we die. . . I never met a person like you !! =D I just CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU!! P.S: my writings are.. short.. sweatdrop that was so pretty! mrgreen Thanks! sweatdrop But I think I can have done better...
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:11 am
Euchi101 as i staggered under my wounds, i looked down at my defeated enemy. i couldn't beleive that i, who had never hurt anyone before, had killed another human being. i went over to the dead body and whispered, "May you rest in peace." just a part of the novel that i am writing... mrgreen what do u think? Your really making a novel?! COOL! I hope it gets sold so fast! xd
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:12 am
Euchi101 my heart beats for you like a beating drum. in an orchestra, no matter how loud they play, my love for you will always be louder, when we are in the snowy Mt. Everest, i will be warmed by your love, but if you leave me, my heart will shatter the beating drums, and the orchastra will seice to play, and the snowy Mt. Everest will seem colder than it has ever been, because you left me. well, what do you think? i like it... Well.. I am not a poet.. But I think it is ok.. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 10:51 am
i dont usually post my poems but heres one i hope you all think its ok
i let myself fall into this lie
i let myself fall to your lies
if only you could see the tears in my eyes
i wish you were watching as i die
all i wanted was something real
something to to hold onto
all i have is
the big void you left in my heart
misery is my one and only
i feel so alone
i feel myself running away
far away into the darkness of the world
no one by my side
my emotions are nullified
misery long dead
im truly alone
all i wanted
was love
all i wanted was you
all i get was false hope
and your lies
your poison
i just wanted someone to call my own...
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:29 pm
The Colors (i didn't write this)
The Colors live
Between black and white
In a land that we
Know best by sight.
But knowing best
Isn't everything,
For colors dance,
And colors sing,
And colors cry,
Turn off the light,
And colors die,
They make you feel
Everything there is,
From the grumpiest grump,
To the fizziest fizz
And you, I
Know well
Each has a taste,
Each has a smell,
And each has a wonderful story to tell. . .
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:31 pm
squinty1989 Euchi101 as i staggered under my wounds, i looked down at my defeated enemy. i couldn't beleive that i, who had never hurt anyone before, had killed another human being. i went over to the dead body and whispered, "May you rest in peace." just a part of the novel that i am writing... mrgreen what do u think? Your really making a novel?! COOL! I hope it gets sold so fast! xd thanx... redface smile
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 6:30 am
Euchi101 squinty1989 Euchi101 as i staggered under my wounds, i looked down at my defeated enemy. i couldn't beleive that i, who had never hurt anyone before, had killed another human being. i went over to the dead body and whispered, "May you rest in peace." just a part of the novel that i am writing... mrgreen what do u think? Your really making a novel?! COOL! I hope it gets sold so fast! xd thanx... redface smile welcome! 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:14 pm
wow cool poetry oh here some of mine
Moonlight
Once upon a moonlit night my lover turned to me
Then looked upon my moonlit face and said this to me
He said “you love me so an this I know
But if what you say is true
Then upon you I’d look with soulful eyes
but this I can not do”
Lover’s spell
The lover’s spell has called to me
That sweet sound of serenity
The spell that makes me fall for you
The spell that will rip my heart in two
As it has already called to me
It will eventually call to thee
And upon that day it calls
Turn away ignore it all
Because in all it is the same
And all it does is cause you pain
It has already ripped my heart in two
It will do the same to you
Passion of Red
Beating
Beating
Beating
Beating heart
The beat of passion
The beat of love
A red blanket has fallen
And all goes silent
A scream of a woman
And he is dead
She weeps in desire
Of seeing him again
Her heart is still
Beating
Beating
Beating
For him
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 3:42 am
lizmutt... your poems are GREAT!
I love them!
And i think you can write great poems! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:36 pm
oh thanks i wish i could get out there more with my poetry but alot of it is quite morbid cause my dad is a medical examener
im pretty shur my 6th grade teacher thought i was syco when i wroght pasion of red i was realy close to geting sent to a counsler several times rolleyes oh well i hate when ppl misjudge me
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:37 am
It is ok.. Just keep doing what you love and like and you don't have to share it with the people who make you get in trouble! 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 7:44 am
I'm new, but I was sent a PM by uh Agika (I think...). I just had a little flick through this and I must say, some of these are great. I could post a little something I am doing with some of my other online friends. It is long though...
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