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 Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:48 am
*still being dragged along thinks for a second and... GRABBS YOUR TAIL!!! twisted *
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:53 am
KitsumeChanSexyness *still being dragged along thinks for a second and... GRABBS YOUR TAIL!!! twisted * .....Thats not very nice AND ow it OWW really hurts! leg'go!
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:56 am
*starts petting it* But it's so soft and sexy! blaugh
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:57 am
oh yeah? see how sexy it is NOW *taps you on the head* huh!? *taps you on the head again* I'm causeing you extreme discomfort! *tap tap tap*
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:02 am
Lothoran oh yeah? see how sexy it is NOW *taps you on the head* huh!? *taps you on the head again* I'm causeing you extreme discomfort! *tap tap tap* *now sleeping* night night sexy fox man
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:04 am
uh oh..Short Storys have to be 4 paragraphs? Okay, than my thing is now a free verse poem
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:05 am
*peaks one eye open* you just noticed that * than falls asleep again*
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 6:25 am
My Wish For A Boy
If there's a star out there tonight,
Hidden away from the moonbeams so bright,
A star that shines more brilliant then love,
Let my wish be carried there on the wings of a dove,
I wish for hapiness peace and joy,
But most of all for the love of a boy,
A boy who outshines that bright shining star,
Who will come to me no matter how far,
Who will love me even when I'm not near,
And will whisper sweet nothings for only me to hear,
In turn I'll give him all my heart,
From the very end to the very start,
With my wish now said I'll try to sleep,
For my star shall send me the boy I seek.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:55 am
Kayarna My Wish For A BoyIf there's a star out there tonight, Hidden away from the moonbeams so bright, A star that shines more brilliant then love, Let my wish be carried there on the wings of a dove, I wish for hapiness peace and joy, But most of all for the love of a boy, A boy who outshines that bright shining star, Who will come to me no matter how far, Who will love me even when I'm not near, And will whisper sweet nothings for only me to hear, In turn I'll give him all my heart, From the very end to the very start, With my wish now said I'll try to sleep, For my star shall send me the boy I seek. Very good I give it a 10 right in the middle.I like that you didn't try to rhyme on it you just let come to you.Very good.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 9:00 am
KitsumeChanSexyness Here we go! It's of the top of my head so be nice k? It's called "Useless Journey" Friends you may seek, But friend you never find, If it were so easy we never would be alone, You always look down when the rest look up, Sticking out could be that you wish to be loved, Or you seek that which you may already have, But the catorigalisation of our inner lives has blinded you, To only see those you wish not be. stare hum not my best but it's ok! I really like it.It has very few spelling errors and you didn't try to force rymheing words to come out. I give it a 9.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 9:04 am
gffhgfththtrutrhj Kayarna My Wish For A BoyIf there's a star out there tonight, Hidden away from the moonbeams so bright, A star that shines more brilliant then love, Let my wish be carried there on the wings of a dove, I wish for hapiness peace and joy, But most of all for the love of a boy, A boy who outshines that bright shining star, Who will come to me no matter how far, Who will love me even when I'm not near, And will whisper sweet nothings for only me to hear, In turn I'll give him all my heart, From the very end to the very start, With my wish now said I'll try to sleep, For my star shall send me the boy I seek. Very good I give it a 10 right in the middle.I like that you didn't try to rhyme on it you just let come to you.Very good. Thanks
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 11:44 am
I don't even think I'm good enough to rate a poem.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:59 pm
Thunderboltx I don't even think I'm good enough to rate a poem. Okay, Thunderboltx? If you can't write poetry or rate it than why..are you posting stare
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 2:23 pm
gffhgfththtrutrhj KitsumeChanSexyness Here we go! It's of the top of my head so be nice k? It's called "Useless Journey" Friends you may seek, But friend you never find, If it were so easy we never would be alone, You always look down when the rest look up, Sticking out could be that you wish to be loved, Or you seek that which you may already have, But the catorigalisation of our inner lives has blinded you, To only see those you wish not be. stare hum not my best but it's ok! I really like it.It has very few spelling errors and you didn't try to force rymheing words to come out. I give it a 9. uh thanks I think... sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 5:53 pm
Lothoran Thunderboltx I don't even think I'm good enough to rate a poem. Okay, Thunderboltx? If you can't write poetry or rate it than why..are you posting stare I have the right to post don't I. It says no bumping though. Unless a place is made where I'm not welcomed very well.
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