|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:34 pm
<3333333333333333 Beautiful Crayola-san!
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:36 pm
Those were like two of the best poems in here. <3
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:56 pm
I wrote my poem like a song.
The Spring and the Winter
Verse 1
In the Spring, when the girl blooms,
she starts smiling and laughing all so soon
Oh, what a sight to see...
her face all drawn with glee
you always want to say "wow."
In the Winter, when the boy frowns,
never caring and always looking down,
doesn't know where to go
what to do or what to know...
...he needs her more than ever now.
Pre-chorus
And as the seasons keep on passing by
he always hides his feelings inside...
and after she told him what was true,
that was when he realized that he knew...
Chorus
Alone always...will never be mentioned ever again,
because now he knows what he was missing all along.
A smile was.. all he needed to see to hope,
he finally knows where he belongs...
In all his life, the Winter finally knows where he goes to in this world...
Verse 2
The Spring keeps glowing like a star
always knowing where the lights are...
never needing a reason to cry,
as memories pass by,
but she's still missing one thing...
The Winter keeps on denying,
all the places and faces and everything.
Why is he so cold?
And never being told...
what it is like to spread your wings.
Pre-Chorus
A tear falls for the first time on the Springs face,
overwhelming all of the human race...
As she keep trying to catch up with Winter's fate..
can all Winter do is nothing but hate?
Chorus
Alone always...will never be mentioned ever again,
because now he knows what he was missing all along.
A smile was.. all he needed to see to hope,
he finally knows where he belongs...
In all his life, the Winter finally knows where he goes to in this world...
(Intrumental continues)
That's when he realized that he loved her...
Repeat Chorus
Alone always...will never be mentioned ever again,
because now he knows what he was missing all along.
A smile was.. all he needed to see to hope,
he finally knows where he belongs...
In all his life, the Winter finally knows where he goes to in this world...
And Spring finally realized what she missing...Winter's soothing words.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:27 pm
We need music for it, then we can sell it as a single.. Who here can sing? I'm a soprano! biggrin
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:32 pm
@Peaceful Light, Fading Light
Thank you! <3
@ Sakura~Chan
That's friggin awesome.
You should, like, totally sell it to someone awesome so we could listen to it.
whee
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:34 pm
PeacefulLight We need music for it, then we can sell it as a single.. Who here can sing? I'm a soprano! biggrin Oooh!I'm an alto so our voices will blend! Now we just need a baratone (dude voice). xDD @ C r a y o l a: You should write more. :3
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:58 pm
~[Fading Light]~ PeacefulLight We need music for it, then we can sell it as a single.. Who here can sing? I'm a soprano! biggrin Oooh!I'm an alto so our voices will blend! Now we just need a baratone (dude voice). xDD @ C r a y o l a: You should write more. :3 . You're going to make a song? I'd love to hear it oneday. rofl
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:02 pm
Thank you^^ This song was actually based on a melody already, I used the song "Alone" from Gensomaden Saiyuki. But I'm thinking about a melody right now...^^
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:07 pm
C r a y o l a
@Peaceful Light, Fading Light
Thank you! <3
@ Sakura~Chan
That's friggin awesome.
You should, like, totally sell it to someone awesome so we could listen to it.
whee
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:11 pm
Hee. I just realized that I had the song on my iPod.
whee
Awesome job.
And unfortunately, I haven't heard of Derrick Murrain.
::flies to youtube::
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:52 pm
Miyu-senpai ~[Fading Light]~ PeacefulLight We need music for it, then we can sell it as a single.. Who here can sing? I'm a soprano! biggrin Oooh!I'm an alto so our voices will blend! Now we just need a baratone (dude voice). xDD @ C r a y o l a: You should write more. :3 . You're going to make a song? I'd love to hear it oneday. rofl If I ever learn how to make a voice clip. >.<;
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 9:28 pm
~[Fading Light]~ Miyu-senpai ~[Fading Light]~ PeacefulLight We need music for it, then we can sell it as a single.. Who here can sing? I'm a soprano! biggrin Oooh!I'm an alto so our voices will blend! Now we just need a baratone (dude voice). xDD @ C r a y o l a: You should write more. :3 . You're going to make a song? I'd love to hear it oneday. rofl If I ever learn how to make a voice clip. >.<; We could meet up somewhere, get a band of highly-trained gutarists and such and then record for a record deal! biggrin Of course, the song will go to Crayola! :3
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 9:59 pm
PeacefulLight ~[Fading Light]~ Miyu-senpai ~[Fading Light]~ PeacefulLight We need music for it, then we can sell it as a single.. Who here can sing? I'm a soprano! biggrin Oooh!I'm an alto so our voices will blend! Now we just need a baratone (dude voice). xDD @ C r a y o l a: You should write more. :3 . You're going to make a song? I'd love to hear it oneday. rofl If I ever learn how to make a voice clip. >.<; We could meet up somewhere, get a band of highly-trained gutarists and such and then record for a record deal! biggrin Of course, the song will go to Crayola! :3 ?
Shouldn't it go to [~Sakura~chan~]?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:15 pm
Naw, it should go to both of us because we pwn everyone together. X3
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 4:54 am
Yeah yeah.. XP I said the wrong name.. Sorry.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
