Welcome to Gaia! ::

((are all the spots taken?))

((oh otay guess I cant take teh test gonk ))

((or will he? xd cry crying please no Kurai....))

"Instructer Sugawa Raine. It is good to have you return for another session of grading. Please be seated." The automated voice was quite friendly this time around, being a learning computer, it grew more familiar with those it conversed with each time it met them.

Raine took his seated upon request and observed the half-angel hybrid known as Lenair as she entered the room. He voice reflected nicely in return to her instructions just before the battle commenced. Raine watched every moment with severe intensity, making notes here and there on his papers. He finally wrote out his usual letter of assessment to the student after the battle had come to a close and sealed it away in the blank envelope before handing it in and retreating once more from the small observation room.

"Malchrist, LENAIR

You displayed a well arrayed control of power through the elements and the various ways you used them to take down such a daunting enemy. You were apparently instructed very well in your past. Although, I would expct nothing less from any creature that posseses any strong trace of angelic blood. Thus, you achieved the expectations I had set for you upon reading the information I was given about you. Well done, I am personally very proud of you. Much future successes to you,

Instructer Sugawa Raine." - IC assessment: 6/8

[ooc - Crew Member Mike's Assessment - Initiall, the fact that you can produce such a long post is quite impressive and since you were RPing solo, as you should in this context, it was a good thing. Your attention to physical detail is well maintained throughout and I could understand what she saw very well. However, I never really felt like I knew what she was feeling and that is also very important.

From a technical perspective I appreciated your desire to use a broad vocabulary an that is much to your advantage. I often find maiself using the same words over and over, becus, well, I'm kind of lacking in the area of vocab. You keep things freash and exciting, so keep it up. But, one thing to look out for in that is the tendency to use words incorrectly or to make up words. I saw a few instances of this.

Overall, a fairly good RP. OOC Assessment: 5/8]

Total Assessment from Mike/Raine: 5.5/8 and a pirate pirate??

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((Lol, I don't have to much free time on Gaia, either going to college for my summer semester, working or drawing. Length isn't bad either as long as you know what your doing its good, just when rping with others, which were not in the test, short breaks are a good thing to give others a chance to respond... anyways can't wait for the ratings to start coming out and see how people did.))

((Yep, taking 3D techincal design and web graphics classes, hoping to become either involved with special computer effects in movies or game design.))