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 Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:41 pm
It's coming along great - The first chapter is finished, and so's part of the second... There's this funny scene, where Sora's still unconsious from his near-drownding, and he ends up in this sem-lucid dream, which is really more like a memory...
...belonging to Roxas. And takes place in Roxas's room... with Axel... in bed... *snickers* Meanwhile, Sora(1) and Riku are trying to undress him, because he's soaking wet and they're worried he'll get sick, and... *wide grin*
"Uh, Sora? I think he's getting your bed all wet."
Sora looked up from his doppelganger, blinking several times before a look of understanding flashed across his face, and he placed a hand on the boy's chest, frowning slightly.
"Geeze... he's soaked. How the heck didn't he dry?"
"That's what I'd like to know... But first, let's get him out of those cloths before he gets sick or something." Riku said, standing up and stretching, wincing when he felt some unknown joint pop in his back.
He moved over and unbuckled the boy's shoes and took them off, placing them on the floor as Sora tugged the hoodie off of him, letting it fall to the floor as well. The gloves went next, but then Riku froze as Sora started taking the doppelganger's shirt off. He swallowed unconsciously, a dull flush rising in his cheeks as he watched Sora undress his look-alike. Mercifully, the sable-haired boy didn't notice his staring, innocent touches without hidden meaning meanwhile making Riku's thoughts turn in a direction he really, really didn't want them to go right now... But he couldn't help it. For all intents and purposes, it really looked like Sora was, well... undressing himself... or... or something... and... He didn't even bother trying to avert his stare as he saw the look-alike's chest, taking a silent sharp breath. He was more muscular than Sora, more matured, perhaps... but it wasn't noticeable unless you knew what to look for. Actually, at first glance he didn't seem to really have any muscle whatsoever, his body lithe and graceful, maybe even delicate. But then you looked closer, and you saw the taunt strength in his arms and chest, and you knew - knew - that he was strong. A lazy, coiled sort of strength, like a big cat...
Riku couldn't help blinking as the boy actually showed signs of being alive for the first time. He let out a yawn, rolled over onto his side and suddenly latched onto Sora's waist, completely catching the younger boy off-guard. The brunette yelped in response as the older boy pulled him up against the bed, nuzzling his head against his stomach, soft brown spikes undoubtedly tickling him. Riku couldn't help letting out a snicker as he shook his head.
"See? Just like you... How do you think I like getting grabbed like a stuffed animal in the middle of the night?"
Sora looked over at him with a half pouting, half pleading expression, the older-looking boy making a contented sound, before suddenly rolling back on to his back, yanking Sora onto the bed, and by extension onto himself, Sora flailing and letting out a yell.
"Wha-what the!? Riku!!! Heeelp!!!"
The silver-head just started laughing, pointing weakly at the sight, an arm curled around his stomach.
"Oh, oh my god... I've got to go get a camera..."
"Riku!!! This isn't funny!!!"
"Yes it is..."
He burst out into another round of laughter at Sora's enraged scream, as he walked out of the room to try and find a camera to capture the moment with, the brunette's yells trailing down the hall after him. He found one without too much difficulty downstairs, walking back to Sora's room snickering. He paused as he the yells suddenly stopped, making him blink several times before alarm bells started going off in his mind, racing up the stares and into Sora's room. And then, he froze. Well, he dropped the camera, but other than that he froze.
It was then he remembered that... other thing Sora tended to do when he slept.
He acted out his dreams... and if there was someone near by, they tended to get involved whether they liked it or not.
...They usually didn't.
He made a silent choking sound, his face going bright red.
Sora was still trapped on top of him... And was actually flailing more, but he kind of... couldn't yell anymore. It's kind of hard to do that when someone's making out with you. But when one of the older boy's hands moved down and squeezed Sora's a**, well, Riku decided that maybe it would be a good idea to save Sora any further trauma and started trying to yank him out of the other boy's grip. Unfortunately, the doppelganger didn't seem to fond of this idea, hooking his legs around Sora's and continuing to generally molest the poor boy.
Who the hell is he dreaming about!? Riku mentally wondered, seeing as the unconscious - or more correctly now, sleeping boy was so insistent...
Try as he might, though, the boy had a death-grip on Sora... Who finally managed to let out a shriek as the other boy finally broke for air, screaming for him to let go at the top of his lungs... Finally they managed to get Sora loose, falling in a heap on the ground by the bed, Sora still screaming and yelling in an interesting mix of rage and embarrassment.
"Uhn... Ri... no fair..."
The two of them froze and stared as the boy made an adorable whining noise and felt around blindly for 'Ri', before making a sad noise and settling back to sleep, a pouting expression on his face.
"...ku..."
...Oh. My. God.
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:09 pm
.... rofl That was so funny! Poor whittle Sowa! Molested by an older version of himself! xd Wait...that was the older Sora, wasn't it? The one 'acting out his dream'? Because you said that Sora was still unconscious and something about a dream, but then you said the name Roxas, so I got kinda confused. xp I think it's because I'm just reading little tid-bits. I just have to wait and read the whole thing. Keep it up! Will you not post this until it's completely finished?
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:32 pm
Well, see, I would post it... Buuuut see, though I've finished the first chapter, part of the second (part of which includes Sora jumping Axel in a flashback... as himself. Long story behind that), and random later chapters...
I uh... haven't typed up the first four or so pages yet. sweatdrop
And yeah, that was older Sora molesting younger Sora. And if Riku hadn't come in, chances are that the 14 might have been traumatised quite severely, before getting into it. xd
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:51 pm
Scathach13 B.N.A.P.Hime So when you do post it, is it gonna be in FF.net? Oh, and to anyone wanting more samples, I recommend the PMed ones. wink My FF.net account is Imay - but don't get your hopes up. I only have one story up there right now, and it starts off rather rough because I didn't know what I was doing back then. Essentially... the whole thing is Zidane - horror, angst, pain, blood, all that good stuff. Wanted to try my hand at an extended one of those... Meh. Anyways, the problem is I made this charecter Alex, for the story, and I have to keep fighting ever yaoi-impulse not to pair them... ><" ...I mean, I still have perverted jokes and hugging and stuff... *coughs* It's just sort of... vaugely suggested... Kinda like in the final fantasy games... *laughs* dont feel bad, i only have one story too and it sucks compared to the one you're working on crying
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:58 pm
whee it just gets better and better
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 7:49 pm
Now, here's a 'G' sample. However, there's a HUGE chance this is going to end up in the 'outtakes' sample of this fic, because it really doesn't make all that sense to me for Sora to suddenly be an increadibly good artist (by Riku's standards). So yeah, it'll probably end up 'on the second disk', so to speak.
Riku blinked as he looked over Sora's shoulder, realizing that the older boy was drawing... and was a pretty good artist at that. But he couldn't really make out what the drawing was of at this angle...
"Never knew you could draw..."
Sora jumped, turning around and smiling a little embarrassed at Riku, the pencil in his hand moving off the paper.
"Well, it's not like I'm that good, or anything..."
He blushed slightly, turning back to the drawing and resuming sketching. He leaned forward, covering what he was drawing with his body as Riku sat down next to him to get a look at it.
"C'mon... let me see it..."
"No way! You'd just laugh!"
He blushed hotly, hugging the pad of paper to his chest. Riku shook his head, laughing.
"You haven't changed at all - still the same Sora... Come on, I promise I won't laugh at you no matter how bad it is, okay?"
Sora pouted, before finally handing the pad over with a sigh, propping his head up in his left hand, his elbow resting on his knee. With his right, he flipped the notebook to the page he had been drawing on, blush still on his face as he tried to pretend he didn't care about Riku looking. There was a sharp intake of breath as Riku looked at the picture, realizing that he had to take back what he said before about Sora being a pretty good artist. He wasn't 'pretty good' - he was amazing. He never would have guessed Sora could draw like that - I mean, just judging the drawing in the secret place alone he had always assumed that the brunette had no artistic ability whatsoever... Of course, he had been a little kid when he had drawn it...
"Sora... this is incredible..."
The brunette looked up, shocked by Riku's words and the honest wonder in his tone.
"Are you serious?"
...As to what the picture is actually of, I'm not entirely sure, yet another reason why it might well be cut out of the story. I was however, considering asking a Deviant artist if I could use their picture, and give them credit at the end of the chapter for the description, but... That sounded like a bit too much work. <- is lazy when not totally interested in something, like say, biogenetics. Get's scary when it comes to biogenetics.
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 8:17 pm
Scathach13 Well, see, I would post it... Buuuut see, though I've finished the first chapter, part of the second (part of which includes Sora jumping Axel in a flashback... as himself. Long story behind that), and random later chapters... I uh... haven't typed up the first four or so pages yet. sweatdrop And yeah, that was older Sora molesting younger Sora. And if Riku hadn't come in, chances are that the 14 might have been traumatised quite severely, before getting into it. xd Oh, I see. You're actually writing it out before you type it, huh? Well, get typing! I can't wait to read this! whee
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 1:10 pm
B.N.A.P.Hime Scathach13 Well, see, I would post it... Buuuut see, though I've finished the first chapter, part of the second (part of which includes Sora jumping Axel in a flashback... as himself. Long story behind that), and random later chapters... I uh... haven't typed up the first four or so pages yet. sweatdrop And yeah, that was older Sora molesting younger Sora. And if Riku hadn't come in, chances are that the 14 might have been traumatised quite severely, before getting into it. xd Oh, I see. You're actually writing it out before you type it, huh? Well, get typing! I can't wait to read this! whee Actually, just those four pages. All the rest is typed... See, I was in school, and I didn't have my laptop, aaand... By the way... As for WHY Sora jumped Axel, as I said before, I'm starting to think it might be too mean to inflict that kind of issue on the poor boy. I mean... as funny as it is, the idea that... Well, the rough idea is that Nobodies would have sex drives that are twice as strong as the average person, to make up for the lack of a heart through ah... chemical-based emotions, yes? The second part of the idea is that when Roxas and Sora first seperated, they origionally each only had half of their power, but then it came back - but that means that they're both a full attributes, see...? And... when they re-joined, that had to go somewhere, and... and so, Sora got it all, and that would mean... that he would have a libido three times as strong as the average person... Which would be really, really hillarious, but I don't know if I can honestly write that without causing some major problems as far as the plot goes - damn, it would be fun though. xd So I might have to delete that scene, but still... funny concept. rofl
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 10:46 am
Well...you could post that scene as an outtake. Ya know, like a deleted scene. It wouldn't be part of the story, but it would be there for everyone to read. If that would work out well, I don't know if it would or not. It's up to you.
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 1:28 pm
The art thing, or the Sora-has-severe-issues-due-to-Roxas thing?
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 7:47 pm
I'm not sure. Whatever you were talking about in your last post... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 8:17 pm
i frigging love this story so far
i need to send you my axelxroxas story,i jst found it and i need to know if i should keep writing it
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 10:49 pm
Sure, I'd love to read it! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 3:48 pm
I heard from a reliable source of mine that you're naming your fic 'Moonflowers and Rum" Is this true?
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 5:58 pm
What can be read from a profile's comment's is not neccisarily what one would think... Just because I have one story, doesn't mean there aren't others. *slow smile* By the way, I have more of that scene done, if you want me to pm you any of it.
However, there is a chance that it will be something along the line of Moonflowers and Morning Glories... They're my favorite flowers, and it just occured to me, several seconds ago, in fact, how much they're like Riku and Sora respectivly...
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