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dramallama ima let ya'll imaginations run wild wit this

Rounds rounds, he's shootin' off rounds!
Pounds pounds, he's weighin' in pounds!
Powder powder, he's deep in the powder!
50 Cent's biggest fan get's even bigger by the hour!

the read-through of his verse calls for serious editing,
You took the english language and introduced it to a process called 'ignorance & severing',
I've come to provide some lyrics with a better ring
than the usual talk of guns, ancient punchlines, your commercial things,
I see my own lines, which he read, have been posted?
Wow - I'm battlin' myself 'cuz I must have been recyclin' or ghostin'!
He refused the challenge at first 'cuz he took his first s**t and re-wrote it,
He can type 'em up but his lyrics are yet to spoken,
If your s**t made any sense I might have given you props
but the fact that I respond let's you know what you are not,
You're not a lyricist and you're not Hip-Hop,
You're not even skilled enough to make a cold forum hot,
One knock and I'll leave you with a red, swolen knot,
So don't go around boastin' about what you got,
You're so great and s**t, assuming you're higher?
Mother ********, you're having a battle right now with me on Gaia!
Run your s**t through spell check please
You caught one of America's social diseases
because you apparently lack the ability to read,
Over-done lines full of rhyming words won't win you a battle if you can't get s**t across clearly,
Go through your verse again and use a ********' dictionary,
You're not only rippin' my rhymes this dude is rippin' my style,
Nobody else would have dared touch more than 5 bars if I didn't try
or spark the start and ignite the heat of the iron,
Check the record - apparently Makairo is death defyin',
One flick of the wrist and I smash you - crack you to sediment,
You must be in special ed. 'cuz you've got a vicious writing impediment,
What's good with the name change? From 50 to Jay?
No matter who you choose to ride on you always stay
on your path of commercialism and idiotic vocabulary,
This isn't a diss verse, this is honesty that'll leave you buried,
You took days to respond and plenty of excuses to post this
only for it to have no meaning,
I don't know who you were leaning on or what you were looking for but you seemed to have ignored
the most basic of the basics, the base of the pyramid,
The first thing you should learn and here it is,
Write what you know, what you live and what you've said,
All you've done is waste time writing a novel that means absolutely nothing when read,
Jokes on homosexuals, mom jokes and the use of the word "*****",
Expecting votes or even a possible victory - how you figure?
When all you've done is combine stereotypes and poor ethics,
If that was your attempt then that was simply pathetic..

I don't need any more to win because he stole a whole bunch of my lines. rofl

Edit: And it didn't make any sense.. neutral I'm sorry, but..it's jibberish and a random assortment of words.

HAHA! i don't and never will steal lines espeacially those that belong ta fagots drop it son it ain't hittin just like ya verse

ya'll please notice how he can't keep my name or 50's out his mouth and off his mind comin into a whole other battle postin bout me HAHA! I swear ta god and you wonder why i think you gay i must be a threat he payin me so much attention this some unsuspectin s**t never thought i'd have a GROUPIE 3nodding keep it comin i luv this s**t...

stare i never claimed ta be one but keep thinkin da best bout me mrgreen

I don't give a ******** I don't have no respect for his whack a**. He ain't no MC and he damn near a lyricist far as im concerened he ain't gone never be one. I usually don't go off on kids like this but for him ta be such a lame a** he do alotta hatin. He ain't even worth battlin no more and I don't care how many votes he get outta this he still ain't better than me I can't even take him seriously "MC" please all he do is sit around postin lil insults he more like a ******** wannabe comedian hell Worm is more ov a challenge. So wit that said im done I got more important thingz ta focus on than battlin supposedly MC's on here so i said it before and ima say it again ******** you and ******** everybody you got followin you.

thatz real s**t Outlaw speaken da TRUTH

i still remember when i used to take s**t u said to the heart now i personally couldnt give a ******** wat someone say over the internet lol