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 Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 5:48 pm
Spastic waffles I've noticed a slight lack of quality critiques in the guild.
Mine included.
Any suggestions as to how we can get this place better at critiquing other's work?
..Sorry if I offend anyone. I didn't mean to. I just want this guild to be..well...perfect, actually. XD
It's just that most of the comments I see on people's work are simply "that's really good". And that doesn't really help writers to become any better. Well you could just ignore the author's feelings, but...... hehe ^_^ Thats not why im here though. Im here to request a section devoted to collabrative stories, and the efforts of coauthors. ( I agree, by the way. I'd take scornful correction over meaningless praise any day)
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:57 pm
A hug, a kiss, a cookie, and a cure for the DAMN WRITER'S BLOCK.
But I don't mind criticism. I know my writing er......needs work sweatdrop and I don't like it when people miss things.
Like, I made this HUUUUUGE "duh" mistake, and NO ONE WHO COMMENTED NOTICED.
Seriously.
ick.
Much love, Waffles.
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 9:32 pm
Secret Santas or Wishlist! heart
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 9:44 pm
I WANT A CHRITMAS PARTY!
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CanIcanIcanIpleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase, Waffles?
PLeasepleaseplease? I'll organize the food and the presents and everrrrrrything!
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 1:07 pm
KirbyVictorious I WANT A CHRITMAS PARTY! heart CanIcanIcanIpleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase, Waffles? PLeasepleaseplease? I'll organize the food and the presents and everrrrrrything! OooOooOoo I'llhelpI'llhelpI'llhelp! 4laugh
PleasePleasePleasePlease!
*Turns puppy eyes on Waffles*
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 4:17 pm
()()
(o0) {*yawn*]
{"]{'}
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 5:56 pm
so what about that collaborative section?
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:26 pm
I'm forcing you to be the drink-maker-bartender-dude at the party if you don't stop YAWNING.
I can do that, you know.
I HAVE THE FLUFFY PINK SEVENTH DIMENSION POWER.
twisted
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:29 pm
KirbyVictorious I'm forcing you to be the drink-maker-bartender-dude at the party if you don't stop YAWNING. I can do that, you know. I HAVE THE FLUFFY PINK SEVENTH DIMENSION POWER. twisted That wasnt me! It was the boredom bunny. He's evil!
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:32 pm
You let him into your post.
TOTHEDRESSINGROOMWITHYOU. You get a weird Kirby-esque uniform. ):<
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:36 pm
KirbyVictorious You let him into your post. TOTHEDRESSINGROOMWITHYOU. You get a weird Kirby-esque uniform. ):< NOOO not a weird kirby esque uniform. I couldnt possibly have any fun dressed in one of those. [ hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things]
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:38 pm
*is offended*
You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal.
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:42 pm
KirbyVictorious *is offended* You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal. no! no more kirby related punishments! [ hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby, the other kirby, must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things]
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:56 pm
NovaKing KirbyVictorious *is offended* You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal. no! no more kirby related punishments! [ hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby, the other kirby, must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things] I heard that. I love Kirby more than you. And yes, I punish with random kirby-esque things. Like the pink fluffy pimp stick. *pokes*
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Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 12:07 pm
KirbyVictorious NovaKing KirbyVictorious *is offended* You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal. no! no more kirby related punishments! [ hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby, the other kirby, must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things] I heard that. I love Kirby more than you. And yes, I punish with random kirby-esque things. Like the pink fluffy pimp stick. *pokes* AHH! i should type in my head from now on.
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