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for me, I would say that as far as Kai's personality goes, when I watch the show, I see a lot of determination, like he either wants to prove something to himself or he is hurt so badly that it fuels his beyblade. Kai needs his anger, but if it is controled in like a more subtle way...like instead of hating those alive today like Tyson...*cough* but more like he could be angry over how something turned out like his grandfather Voltaire turning to the side of evil instead of good, Boris treating those people at the abbey as bad as he did...like if Kai saw what was truly bad in some people, and turned his anger from just pure rage, his bit beast dranzer I am sure would be more powerful than he ever was. true Kai learns from his past, a good thing. Now defeat is nothing to be so angry over, however, being angry over wrongdoing...fuse Kai's anger with what Tyson is doing to the sport of Beyblade and beating opponents who are truly evil, and Kai....well, then he will be unstoppable. and yet, Kai...if you do get to be unstoppable, do not let it go to your head...because power can do that to people. It did that to you once already. Just looking out for a hopefully soon to be friend. (my mom has a big crush on you kai...hee hee hee and it would be nice to see you and her become friends too. that is if you happen to see this)

*does a cartwheel*

I like writing Kai as a scary OCD-infested erotomaniac.

I love it when I actually know what I'm doing instead of making up something with the label 'stalker' attached

hmmm that suckzorroz.

Have you ever tried writing a story plan where you plan out (basically) what happens?

That's what I do- they normally turn out to be around two or three pages. Then I break it down into chapters and go from there. The plan isn't rigid (I normally add sub plot and even characters as I go) but it gives me a guide as to where each chapter is ultimately headed and generally prevents me from getting irreversibly stuck.

Unless, of course, you're me and phail at writing final chapters. I go well until I reach the last two chapters and then I get sudden massive writers block. I think it's just from me not wanting to let teh story go but it normally ends with me locking myself in a room with coffee and refusing to let myself out before it's done

Well the only way to fix inexperience is to get experience so at least that's doable, right?

I need to learn how to write emotional scenes that I don't come back to two weeks later and go... that's s**t.

Sometimes I make him smile/smirk a lot more than he usually does. He definately talks more, and is sometimes the star comedian of my fanfic ^_^

i given up on the bryka

...

well sorta.

Sorta give me hope 3nodding

@flame: I would be so lost without my plans. Mostly because of the way that I plan out the stories in my head- meaning that I know every detail of the climatic parts and tend to forget the little parts in between so if I don't sit down and plan I will get lost. The chapter plans just help me further with orienting myself

I... kinda hafta finish my stories. Otherwise I feel guilty because I get all these nice reviews and then... I just feel bad. *sad nod*

My first story 'Innocence' is one of those stories I go back to and go 'WTH? I phail!'

But that's mostly because half of it is in first person and I couldn't figure out how to have current thoughts combined with past tense without it looking stoopid (still haven't for that matter) because the rest of the damn thing is in third person past tense.

I was intending to go over it sometime in the next few months but I'm lazy XD And I have two stories that I need to update. And the urge to begin a new one. And to write lots and lots of oneshots.

*sigh* life is tuff.