DimitriFate
Corrections and Praises:
arrow Everyone still has yet to tell me how much of the 500 exp they have remaining.
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Vel:
arrow Please change your Starborn feat into Startouched.
arrow Currently you should only have the bonus to Appraise and not Listen as well.
arrow I think you should at least 2 more languages.
arrow Oh, the misc. mod. for the following should be at zero, Listen (see second arrow), Balence, Climb, Escape Artist, Hide, Jump, Move Silently, Sleight of Hand, Swim, Tumble. If it's because of check penalty, it already done for you. It's the column on the far right.
Good use of desciption and history in background story.
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Kyte:
arrow You should have 11 hp. Ranger hp is 1d8+con.
arrow Remember to put down Armor Check Penalty and weight penalty for the following skills: Balence, Climb, Escape Artist, Hide, Jump, Move Silently, Sleight of Hand, Swim, Tumble.
arrow Kinda wish you use the d20 but whatever floats your boat.
arrow Still waiting for the background story xd :.
Good job in filling in the location of your items. It helps to know whether I should make you take a free, standard, or full action to retrieve certain objects.
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pretty hitomi:
arrow Armor might be a good thing as well as some basic equipment.
arrow Your missing the starting Zodiac feat and Birth feat.
arrow Just likeGlo, kinda wished you used the d20. But whatever puts winds in your sails.
Nice picture, and only picture if I remember correctly.
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Binary Samurai:
arrow Missing the weight of your items.
arrow Armor check penalty if any.
arrow It should be +2 to Sleight of Hand
arrow There is no need to put your weapon and armor in the other possesion slot.
arrow You need some ranks in Perform buddy!
arrow Not really a correction, but what the do-da is Song of the Heart?
Very interesting background story.
((Vel, I'm no good at this, but can you make sure everyone has the right amount of skill points?))
arrow Everyone still has yet to tell me how much of the 500 exp they have remaining.
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Vel:
arrow Please change your Starborn feat into Startouched.
arrow Currently you should only have the bonus to Appraise and not Listen as well.
arrow I think you should at least 2 more languages.
arrow Oh, the misc. mod. for the following should be at zero, Listen (see second arrow), Balence, Climb, Escape Artist, Hide, Jump, Move Silently, Sleight of Hand, Swim, Tumble. If it's because of check penalty, it already done for you. It's the column on the far right.
Good use of desciption and history in background story.
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Kyte:
arrow You should have 11 hp. Ranger hp is 1d8+con.
arrow Remember to put down Armor Check Penalty and weight penalty for the following skills: Balence, Climb, Escape Artist, Hide, Jump, Move Silently, Sleight of Hand, Swim, Tumble.
arrow Kinda wish you use the d20 but whatever floats your boat.
arrow Still waiting for the background story xd :.
Good job in filling in the location of your items. It helps to know whether I should make you take a free, standard, or full action to retrieve certain objects.
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pretty hitomi:
arrow Armor might be a good thing as well as some basic equipment.
arrow Your missing the starting Zodiac feat and Birth feat.
arrow Just likeGlo, kinda wished you used the d20. But whatever puts winds in your sails.
Nice picture, and only picture if I remember correctly.
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Binary Samurai:
arrow Missing the weight of your items.
arrow Armor check penalty if any.
arrow It should be +2 to Sleight of Hand
arrow There is no need to put your weapon and armor in the other possesion slot.
arrow You need some ranks in Perform buddy!
arrow Not really a correction, but what the do-da is Song of the Heart?
Very interesting background story.
((Vel, I'm no good at this, but can you make sure everyone has the right amount of skill points?))
im sorry I thought I did the D20 thing correctly, the way I did it is onlt way I know of... and since my incident with my characters deleted, its taken me time to re-shapen what I had already worked for... slowly but surely..an my gf likes to rush meh or interrupt me...
