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Ageaus

PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 8:37 pm


CRITIQUE ME

Name: Ageaus
Character name: Glacus Masculli
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=5379651
Any notes before I review? not really
Method of delivery thread please
and i started you contest, but i don't know how indepth i'm supposed to go
PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 12:01 pm


AAAAAAAALMS PLZ~!
username: fallen_kitsune_thief
Quest Thread: Link
How long have you been questing?: Since November 5, 2005
How many events have you participated in?:
- Concept Contest October '05
- IoDM Secret Santa '05
- 10k page Celebration raffle '06
- IoDM Palooza '06

AMItotic

Nebulous Trash


Chi men Ryu

PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 4:52 pm


Me again, but this time is Short.

CRITIQUE ME

Name: Chi men Ryu
Character name: Jonathan Contreras
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=4996261
Any notes before I review? This time I change The Description of his personality, check that only.
Method of delivery: Thread.

One question, How Ienter in the Contest? Send you a PM? Post here? An E-mail? a Mail?

And Thanks Again!!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 1:16 am


AAAAAAAALMS PLZ~!
username: Bobbovski
Quest Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=3202155
How long have you been questing?: Since the beginning of May perhaps? But I didn't create my quest thread until the 26th of May (2006)
How many events have you participated in?: 10k Celebration raffle, Sabin's artcontest (if that counts), The Palooza and the concept contest (the Threadaversary). Hm... think that's all of them... ninja

Bobbovski


Nikorasu-Kun

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 10:20 am


AAAAAAAALMS PLZ~!
username: Nikorasu-Kun
Quest Thread: Linkie Linkie
How long have you been questing?: Just over three months, quest thread was made on Fri May 19, 2006 7:43 pm (XD)
How many events have you participated in?: Palooza event, Sabin art contest (Guessing that counts since a serum was available), and the Threadaversary, both concept and design categories.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 10:35 am


CRITIQUE ME

Name: Amy D
Character name: Osbourne Caldwell
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=2990113
Any notes before I review? everything seems to be there, but if anything is missing, let me know smile
Method of delivery: thread will be fine :3

Thank you ^-^

Bastian Brandt


Forbidden Filly

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 11:44 am


From this point on ALL REQUESTS ARE CLOSED

Just so I can catch up on everything thus far. ^ ^ So please don't request anything (after this post) until I finish and make a post saying everything's been done. thanks!


As for the contest, just post your entry here.

And you can go as indepth as you want to go. Really I'm only basing it on creativity and how well you handle your character. So it can be long or short, really detailed or not. That's completely up to you.

EDIT - You can still post any contest entries, that's fine as I won't be judging those till it's done with anyway.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 11:17 pm


Oh, durnit! I just saw your notice. I was just about request something too. xD Ah, well, I can wait. ^^

SkieBorne

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Elda-Chan

PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:21 pm


WOW! >.> How have I missed out on this for so long.... heart
PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 4:09 pm


Contest entry: Based on Prompt A:


Richard let loose a low whistle as he walked out of his duplex. It was hot, very hot, he could feel his pores preparing to dump vast quantities of salty fluid into this clothes. He wiped his brow with his handkerchief in vain motion to stem the tide. By all rights he should stay in the air conditioned duplex and wait for Dr. Moreau's call but there was an entire island to scope out. If Moreau was too busy to be interviewed then he'll get the story from the volunteers. Might think of some better questions if he had an idea what was going on.

Richard spied a leggy woman walking by and figuring there was no time like the present, called out to her. "Excuse me Miss! A moment of your time please!" The woman turned, looking at him with a look caught somewhere between curiousity and disqust. Richard paused as the woman seemed to wearing furred ear muffs and a furry bib on her chest. It was very odd, but who could follow fashion these days. Fashion among the terminally ill might be down right bizarre. With a mental shrug, Richard began to carefully plod down the stairs, his cane making a loud "THOWK" on each step.

Only when he reached the bottom did he look at the woman again. She was glaring at him, "Your a new arrival arn't you?" She asked, the scorn dripping from her voice.

Richard wondered what he had done to offend the young woman. Maybe she didn't like being called Miss? He hated starting off on the wrong foot, oh well, keep the titles out of it, then.

Richard gave her his grandfatherly smile, "I'm not a new volunteer, if that's what your asking. I'm a journalist, I'd love to ask you some questions about your treatment if you have a couple minutes."

The woman's face collasped into an angry scowl and he ear muffs, seemed to fold, mirroring her face. "Look old man, I've had a rough day and I don't want to deal with this right now."

Richard kept smiling but a note of concern touched his brow. "I'm sorry if this is a bad time. But are you sure you don't want to talk about it? It would only be a few minutes, it might make you feel better."

She muttered something under her breath that Richard didn't catch.
"Look. I'm sure you have great intentions but I don't want deal with YOUR angst right now." The muffs moved again, Richard ignored it and focused on the woman's face.

"My angst?" Richard was confused now.

She rolled her eyes at him. "Why do they always find me first!" She spat at the air. Then she looked directly at him, eyes blazing. "Let me spell it out for you grandpa, nobody here is a volunteer. We were all kidnapped by Moreau and we are all turning into friggin animals!" She turned and stalked off.

Richard watched her stalk off. Maybe she had a brain tumor? There had to be people here that were more illucid. With that, Richard plodded off, in search of sane persons.

MrFallenKitten


Elda-Chan

PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 5:11 pm


I'm so totally entering the contest!! <3

CRITIQUE ME

Name: Elda-Chan
Character name: Brandy Melson
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=2496611&page=1
Any notes before I review? I haven't ofically decided on a methoid to get her to the island... it seems to change with every contest I enter her in. XD
Method of delivery You're welcome to post it in the thread! <3
PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:50 pm


(Sorry it took me so long. It’s not my best. I can’t power play characters other than my own. It doesn’t turn out. I hope I got this even remotely correct. I read four of your role-plays and your profile before I started, but I still think I got Maryke's personality wrong... sweatdrop
Sorry If I was incorrect. Please note, Casey's thoughts/opinions do not reflect my own. ^^)

Quote:
CONTEST NUMBER ONE

Username: Casey_Mae
Quest thread:

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Prompt: Prompt A.


Warmth spread across Casey’s pale flesh as she steeped out of her duplex for the first time since her arrival. She stretched and yawned, her eyes adjusting to the bright sunshine, breathing deeply the sickly-sweet aromas of native flora.

Good old Guy had called ahead and pre-paid a stay in a top-class jungle-island themed resort. She cringed, imagining the large sum of money it must have cost him. Shaking the thought from her head she savored the temporary natural-high, beaming at the view. This would be a beautiful drawing experience for sure! Upon awakening she dressed in her casual-best and tied her hair up into a high ‘flare’. She grabbed the essentials and a brochure before dashing out the door without second thought.

She carefully unfolded the brightly colored pamphlet, her gaze shifting from one point to another. Her stomach wailed pathetically upon sight of the island bar. She grinned calmly. She wasn’t a wine or beer type person, but a small sip of tequila sunrise sounded fantastic.

The bar was quaint. It seemed rather empty, which surprised her. Still, so much was to be expected so early in the morning. She strolled around the corner of the shore-side hut and paused. There was only one other person. Sitting erectly on the bar, and sipping from a fine glass was a woman. She was quite beautiful in appearance and she held herself with utmost dignity.

This woman stood out in Casey’s mind. Pink in the face she stifled the giggles, for upon the woman’s head were rather matted and disfigured earmuffs. Not being fashion-oriented, even she knew better than to adorn such tacky tastes. Casey couldn’t help but fill petty for the woman. It must be dreadfully hot. The matching scarf was not such a faux pas, though it reminded Casey terribly of a misplaced beard.

Casey immediately silenced, catching the woman’s glare, and sat down lightly at the counter. A few moments passed. Casey looked up from the tides, curiosity displayed clearly on her face. She rung the counter bell, waiting anxiously for reply. After a moment she sheepishly turned to the woman. “Erm… It appears no one is here… Am I early?”

“Clueless, are we?” Maryke sneered bemusedly, running a well-manicured finger along the glass rim. “Hmm… so naive… and obviously still a virgin.” Maryke mumbled just loud enough for Casey to hear. Casey bit her tongue angrily. “No. You aren’t… It’s a help yourself thing.” Casey nodded, getting up and walking into the little hut. “Thanks…” She said, her voice sweet like vinegar.

She returned quickly with two icy glasses brimming with vibrant orange liquid. Maryke cocked a fine eyebrow. “Hm…. Thanks…” She took a sip, her hazel eyes scanning Casey well over. Casey shifted weight uncomfortably. “Erm… Aren’t you a little hot in that… outfit?” She asked after a moment, carefully sipping at the tangy liquid. Maryke’s hazel expression dulled, un-amused. “No. I’m used to it…” Maryke sounded aggravated, shortly following a “b***h” beneath her breath.

Casey leaned back, offended by the woman’s mean side-comment. “I’m sorry if I offended you… I was just curious.” She shrugged her shoulders. “Don’t know what you’re so worked up about.”

Maryke smiled coyly. “Oh… you’ll find out sooner or later. Enjoy it while you can.” Casey’s eyes narrowed in confusion. She looked uncertainly at her drink. “Erm… What?” She laughed bluntly. Maryke rolled her eyes. “Nothing…. Nothing at all.” Casey set down the drink no longer thirsty. “Are you okay?” She asked skeptically, her pocketed hand fingering her pocket knife. Maryke laughed. “No. Apparently neither are you.”

Casey scootched away slowly, biting her lip. Someone’s had one too many margaritas. “What the hell are you talking about?” … Awkward silence… Maryke grinned, leaning towards Casey. “Do you even know where you are?” Casey’s breathing grew slightly louder. “Tropic Sanctuary Island Resort, Georgia.” Maryke chuffed in amusement, raising her eyebrows in interest. “Really? And what brings you here?” “Guy bought me a two week stay while I’m on job interview.” Casey glared as she stood, taking a step backwards. “Wow… That’s one I’ve never heard before…” Maryke rolled her eyes. “Who’s this guy?”

“He’s a person I met at a caf- Eep!” Casey tripped blindly over a chair, falling backwards onto her butt. Maryke laughed, walking over to Casey and crouching down beside her. Casey opened her mouth to say more in her defense. She froze, realizing her folly. She looked up at Maryke, the skin beneath her eyes creasing in dismay. “Where am I?”

“Welcome to Dr. Moreau’s Menagerie.” Maryke said, her tone suddenly serious. Casey gaped silently several times, before finally blurting out, “What do you mean, Menagerie? Aren’t those like private zoos?” Casey grew uncomfortable with Maryke’s serious expression. “Ten points for the genius.” “What are you saying? We’re stuck in a people-zoo?” Casey was getting fed up.

Maryke looked pissed. “People? I wish. Listen up, carrot-top. Whether you like it or not, it’s the truth.” Casey set her hands on her hips. “Oh my ********, you’re drunk as hell.” Maryke’s ears twitched in aggravation. She grabbed Casey’s arm, her long nails driving into her flesh. “Let go!” Casey yelled, trying to wrench her arm away. “It doesn’t take a rocket scientist. Look…” Maryke let go and Casey grabbed her arm, rubbing it painfully. The skin, now swollen slightly, had a large bump with a distinct round scar. “What…. The mutilated mosquito bite?” Casey snapped.

“Humph. You’re so impossibly dim witted. That’s not a mosquito bite, it’s a syringe scar.” Casey looked from it to Maryke. “And I had to get vaccinated before traveling. Big whoop. What are you trying to say?” “Let me put it in terms even you could understand. Your not in Georgia, you’re on an island out at sea. You’ve been deceived, and now you’re Moreau’s personal lab rat… literally.”

Casey cocked an eyebrow, getting up rather quickly. “And now what? I’m going to turn into an animal or something?” “Exactly.” Maryke snapped, tugging on an ear. “It’s not just an accessory, its real. This is all real. Deal with it.” Casey grew sickly pale, her eyes widening. “And you expect me to believe this? That… that I’m going to turn into some freak of nature?” Casey began trembling. Maryke’s expression softened.

“Yes.” Casey looked solemnly at the ground. Complete silence invoking, before she finally spoke in a trembling voice. “I… Have to go…” She turned and walked into the thick woods, leaving Maryke once again alone.

Casey_Mae

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