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"Well, I wouldn't that happening to me in a fight like this, so I spared you. I didn't really lose, since we're both technically alive right now...so, yeah.", Balance replied telepathically smoothly into SabaDrith's head. He looked to be unphased by the gaze he gave him, as he had recieved that glare alot lately, particularly in this fight.

((Tell me, were you truthfully expecting as much from this fight as you'd recieved?

That groin hit woulda hurt reguardless if you had balls or not. It just makes me feel even better knowing I had the upper hand in the end.))

((Wait a minute...looking back at that situation, dropping down my knee wasn't my only choice of action. I could've extended my whole left leg out and bring it back down like a pendelum to slam my heel into any part of your torso, or even in your face. So like I said, even if I do lose, I know had the mere choice or oppurtunity to win...and that's all I need.

I'm glad we ended this match on a good note. I was afraid it wouldn't turn out this way.))

((I'm just gonna start calling your character a robotic slab of meat, 'cause you've seemed to have tried to make him as perfect as possible....strength, speed, genderless, and a tail. That just makes life a peach for you, huh?

And I'll think about it...the next place I definitely plan on invading is Seig Ecsteffan's place.

Are you kidding? After what I did I should be at least a 4 eye...))

((Meh...as far as I'm concerned, neither you or me can make any judgements about our other rp characters without first hand experience. Just look what happened in this fight. And this was without weapons...

Tough, huh? That's exactly why I want to go there. I frankly feel a little uneasy visiting a place where you're in all control, a lil bit scary really.))

BIG a** DISCLAIMER


The views are as follows, my views. This is just my judging on the fight. Don't bother bitching that I don't know what I'm talking about. If ya don't like it. Don't ******** read it ho bags!

Spelling and Grammar - 1 to 20 points with 10 being average.

Aight... Tamashii didn't put alot of effort into his spelling. That hurts, especially with something thats so easy to fix... Though his posts were easier to understand as a whole despite the minor spelling errors. Snoop's posts became alittle hard to understand for me with his multi-syllable words. Being understandable is crucial to writing no matter who the reader(s) may be. Since there is no section, I will put that along with grammar.

Tamashii 14
Snoop 16

Character Physical limitations: 1-20 pts.

I didn't really like it when Tamashii said that Snoop couldn't do two kicks from where he was in the air, but Snoop didn't argue. So meh. Nothing really to stand out here. Both fought at close range, though there was a part where you were both spinning. Mysteriously you both gained a trait that you could hold each others arms despite all the momentum being generated by your spinning. Some superhuman strength came into play. It should've realistically ended in your grip slipping and both flying away from each other unharmed. No points for either of you here. Something should've slipped there. No need to get into the rest.

Attack Creativity and depth: 1-40 pts

Snoop shined here. A pressure point attack, during melee combat was unique. More unique than anything else in the fight. The rest was just counter after counter, and that thing with holding hands and spinning. Very cute fellows. Tamashii had nothing really remarkable here. Must've spent too much time thinking of ways to call himself the Lordship. He did alright enough. What can you do with melee fighting after all? Theres only so many ways to word a punch and a kick.

Snoop 30
Tamashii 22

Defense Creativity and Depth: 1-40 pts

Nothing astonding here for either combatant. Moving along.

Imagery: 1-40 pts

As writers... you're both excellent at painting pictures in my mind. Howver, Tamashii takes the cake here. The snarling sexy beast that he is. He really put that into my mind at times during the battle.

Tamashii 40
Snoop 35

Passion: 1-30 pts

Ah.. the final two in this tornement. I for sure can tell you both care about the fight. Even though you both claimed to have lost your will during battle. It really seemed like you both regained it. its 30 for each, or 0. Keep in mind that I'm not discrediting either of you by not giving points in a section. Its just equal so theres no point in doing so.

Damage: 1- 20 pts

Both of you took damage at some points during the fight. Minor damage at that. It was a flurry of counters with two damage points. One in the middle when Snoop got slammed, and one where Tamashii had his leg cut alittle. Tamashii with the slight edge here, as Snoop said nothing about his back being hurt, or even something along the lines of his adreneline was pumping. The pain was all but a faded memory. All that was there, was Tamashii, and Snoop. Just for example.

Tamashii 15
Snoop 10

Artistry and general RP skill: 1-20 pts

I like different parts of your styles. Tamashii gets a slight boost here, because he just was more understandable.

Tamashii 20
Snoop 18

No knockouts here, so lets get to adding up the scores

Tamashii 111
Snoop 109

I was suprised at this total, but it makes perfect sense. The fight in my mind was that close. Keep in mind that Oni's word is final. This is purely my opinion, and should reflect nothing on the final outcome of this fight, unless Oni sees fit to use this.