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Jesse.L

PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 4:41 pm


Ontaros eek wow another aliiance member is here at relitivly the same time as me
PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 4:44 pm


hehe, im on at random times, on lunch break at the moment hehe. gotta run in a few though o.<

Ontaros

Hilarious Genius


Xalin

PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 4:48 pm


Onislize
Xalin
ok*Ahem*



*As i ran into the room, gambino was already hold innocent people hostage, he stated " the alliance will never overcome!" and started to saw off one of the hostages head, at this point im pissed off so i ran at him, sword in hand i slashed at him with all the power i had, he barily even nodged, so i started to beat him, my efforts were in vain, with one flick of his finger, i flew acrose the room. having no energy left, gambino started to kick me until blood ran down my face "how can you stand being worthless? let me relive you of your suffering!!!" he said raising his blade. as i watched the grim fate waiting for me i remember cycon fathful words "WE WILL OVERCOME!!" this gaveme enough power to lift my sword, block gambinos attempt to kill me, stab gambino, and watched him lying on the ground, "can your money save you now gambino!?!" and as i finished my statement, gambino was, crying, he was also apalogizing for all the wrong's he did, not being alble to stand his crying, i decided to end his life more quickly, then to let him suffer. then leaving the room i sai "well, at least hes dead......"


how was that?
It was pretty good, but you should try to use "I" a bit less. Also, keep in mind that separating your RPs into paragraphs makes it much easier to read. If it's all one chunk, it gets very tedious to keep up with it.
thanks! ya i guess i do use I to much, and ill put paragraphs next time lol its amazing i even pass my english class lol
PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 4:56 pm


sorry about that last random post anyhow.

Jesse quickly puts his guard back up after dodging a thrust from his enemies sword. His enemy, a drone of gambino's, slashes from above trying to cut jesse in two. jesse quickly throws up his own blade and just catches catches his opponets attack. "An opening!" the drone shouts has he thrusts his knee into jesse's stomach. the blow sends jesse back a little a jesse barly has time to get up before the drone attacks again. jesse rolls to the side swiftly just missing the drones blade he jumps up to his feet and kicks the vunarable broad side of the blade sending it flying from the drones hand. THe drone unarmed tries to punch jesse in the gut but jesse proves to be to swift. He kicks his enemy in the gut and watches him fall. on his knees the drones mind gos blank as blood errupts from his mouth. Jesse twirls his blade in the air and thurst it donward piercing his opponets chest and cutting all the way to the other side. in his last breath the drone said "I've failed my lord gambino." Before he died jesse withdrew his sword and said to him. "heh don't worry you'll see you demon lord soon enough. in hell when we send him there"

HA i beem with joy. not bad huh

Jesse.L


Xalin

PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 6:31 pm


Xalin
ok*Ahem*



*Running into the room, gambino was already hold innocent people hostage, he stated
" the alliance will never overcome!"
and started to saw off one of the hostages head, at this point im pissed off, so im running at him, sword in hand slashing was my first move, he barily even nudged, so when there was an opening, my ambition sent a wave of a attacks, my efforts were in vain, but with one flick of his finger, it sent me flying acrose the room.

Having no energy left, gambino started to kick me "die!! die!!!"he said as blood ran down my face "how can you stand being so worthless? let me relive you of your suffering!!!" he said raising his blade.

As I watched my grim fate waiting for me, thoughts of Cycon's faithful words came into my mind,"WE WILL OVERCOME!!" this gave me enough power to lift my sword, block gambinos attempt to kill me, stab gambino, and watch him lying on the ground, "can your money save you now gambino!?!" finishing my statement, gambino was, crying, he was also apalogizing for all the wrong's he did "*sob* im sorry,I never should have tried to control all of you*sob*, he said cluchting his wound "my only regret is i was never the father i was ment to be".

Not being able to stand his crying, I decided to end his life more quickly,raising my blade, I said "You have done many wrongs, and comitted even more yet, it would be a fitting death for you to suffer, but that would not help anything" so in stead of leting him suffer, i ended his life quickly. then leaving the room I said "well, at least its over......"


how was that?
ok, there we go, i fixed it up a lot, is it better?
PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 7:23 pm


I felt like RPing that battle with a Moderator that I inferred in my previous RP. So, here you go.
_____________________

It took almost all of my strength to remain standing. A large, flowing gash spanned from my waist up to the nape of my neck, and countless other cuts crisscrossed my body. Across the field stood my adversary, a Moderator. Seeing through my Gaiaton disguise, the evil man leveled much of the surrounding countryside attempting to bring me down, and he damn near did it.

Cold rain began to fall as I stared down the Mod, stinging my cuts and causing me to grasp the hilt of my sword more firmly.

"You're not exactly proving to be an opponent, defector. More like an... annoyance," he smiled cockily as he slowly began to walk in my direction, "I would honestly expect more from a Sorcerer, even one as untrained as yourself."

Still, I said nothing. As the taller man walked nearer, I ground my foot into the scorched earth below me, attempting to gain a foothold against the Moderator's inevitable strike. Somewhere in the depths of my mind, I knew it was a futile gesture. The other Gaian was too fast, too devestatingly strong.

"Still nothing to say, defector? Very well then. I grow tired of this game."

The mod dashed at me, bringing his arm down in an attempt to crush my skull. I parried, clumsily, with my sword, leaping backwards as far as I could. The gash on my side burned furiously as I began to run, leaping over downed trees and rock rubble. Behind me, I heard the distinctive *swoosh* of the Moderator teleporting behind me. He was... toying with me.

No Alliance member could stand for this. It is much more honorable to perish in battle than it is to die running.

Quickly, I turned on my heel, aiming a savage slash at the Mod's neck. Like lightning, he ducked and delivered a crushing blow to my stomach. Gasping for air, I doubled down onto my knees. I coughed up an oily red substance.

"Bravo... I was expecting that to kill you."

"I... will... not... be... YOUR PLAYTHING!"

With a sudden burst of energy, I leapt into the air at my deadly adversary. I'm not sure what drove me to keep fighting, but I repeatedly aimed slashes and stabs at the evil man before me, paying no attention to the vicious volley of attacks he struck me with. Every shot of mine missed until...

Time seemed to freeze for a moment. Everything became crystal clear for a fraction of a second, as the blade of my sword grazed the Mod's cheek. Gasping with surprise, he backhanded me across the jaw, tossing my limp body aside as he felt his face. Vaguely, I noticed my blade begin to melt away. His blood was corrosive.

"You..." he gasped, "You will pay for this..."

The man advanced on me once again, much more quickly this time. My legs had finally given out, I couldn't stand. I tried lifting my arms in defence, but it was as if they were shackled to the ground.
____________________

I'm going to finish this one with a much shorter piece tomorrow or the next day.

onaciousd


Xalin

PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 7:31 pm


whoa eek holy crap man, thats cool!
PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 7:57 pm


"You would actually convince other Gaians to fight me?" Psiko said, turning from the guards he had neutralized to the moderator smiling in the corner.

"Come now Aerion, you can't even fight me yourself? I served under you, dammit, and you have the nerve to simply leave all of your Army to their' own devices, and you expected me not to lead the trail of Enlightenment?"

Smiling, Psiko takes off his longcoat and throws it in the corner, the white star on his grey shirt standing out as he turned.

"What is it you are trying to prove? That you're tough? That you stand out?" Aerion barked, standing up straight.

"I have nothing that needs to be proven. Everything I say is known by every Gaian, they just need to remember," Psiko said, making sure his shoe-laces were still tied. "The question is, are you going to shut me up?"

"Your causing civil unrest, Psiko."

"If people don't like what I have to say they should stop listening."

"Indeed they should."

With amazing swiftness, Aerion threw a kick to the head which Psiko idly ducked before throwing a punch that was dodged just as easily. With a swift kick, Psiko went flying into the wall, plaster and morter cracking off around him in a small cloud.

"Just give up Psiko... I don't want to hurt you."

"You didn't."

Psiko


Ontaros

Hilarious Genius

PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 10:37 pm


damnit, after reading all this, now i want to fight a mod! crying twisted ill see what i can do wink
PostPosted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 4:26 am


*unsheiths her mighty sword, light glistening from the sharpened blade*

"I shall slice you from naval to nose you cowardly excuse for a man."

*places her sword near Gambino's belt*

"I hope you enjoy your last moments of life Mr. Gambino. Our army is fierce and we will not be you slaves any longer. We know the truth and we will stop at nothing to keep you from doing what you think you can do with this world. We will overcome and we WILL over throw you!"

*watches as Gambino's face as she slowly begins to cut his belt buckle off*

"This humilation you are about to endure is only part of what the Alliance of Cycon will do to you now that we know what your plans are."

*starts to chuckle as gambino's pants fall to his ankles*

"Enjoy your walk home Mr. Gambino."

XD Sorry, I felt like a laugh I guess.

Taihomi

Anxious Vampire


Jesse.L

PostPosted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 5:16 pm


did anybody like mine please tell me
PostPosted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 5:53 pm


*the notorious Mod stands high above those of lower status, mulling about in their daily gaian lives. he smiles to himself as he spots one of the regular members pass by with a sig. he slowly shakes his head* YOU THERE! *he raises a hand, finger extended at the offender before him* your sig is in violation of our rules, and now i will deny you your freedom!

*the gaian gets to his knees* please dont take my sig away, i need it for my quest. without it ill never get that nitemare headband!

*the mod simply laughs* well if you need items, then perhaps you should donate to use then. then you would be able to buy anything you wanted. even a halo if you donated enough.

*the gaian looks sadly at the mud beneath his feet* but sir, i have no money, nor have i the credit card to make a donation with. im still only 14....

then come back when your older! *with that the mod banishes the gaians sig and turns around with a smile on his face, large and bold, as he basks in the feeling of his most recent deed.*

*that smile is soon dispersed as a man, enveloped in shadow wrought by the silver cloak around him, steps up* your time is up Mod, im here to save gaia from your evil tyrany and deliver it into the light that it was always destined for.

*the mod looks taken aback for a moment before he glares at him* if your another one of those fanatical followers of Cycon, we banned him long ago for inciting a revolution, and now i will have you banned for trying to do what he could not..... *the mod reaches for the sword, hanging loosly at his waist and draws his steel* its a shame that i must strike down another good member for the madness "he" created.

*ontaros shakes his head* you dont want to do that..... *aside from his lips, the rest of his body stands firm and ridgid.*

or what? *the mod scoffs* you hold no power over me *the mod charges forward, blade raise high. with a deft swing, he aims for ontaros's neck, looking to end it right off the bat, but his sword finds nothing as ontaros ducks underneath it. a blade now in onts hand.*

*the mod redirects his attack for the stooped ontaros, but before he makes contact the silver cloaked man tackles the mod, pinning him with a dagger to the mods throat*

you dont own gaia, the people do, you are merely there to keep balance and peace between the masses. *ontaros's words are gruff as they leave his lips but the expression on the mods face goes to a smirk. suddenly ontaros is once again in his crouching position and the mods blade heading for him. he begins his tackle once more, but the mod side steps him, and as the silver man stumbles forward, the mod lashes his back with the edge of his weapon, tearing a line through the cloak and leaving a crimson line across his back, red tears pouring forth. ontaros imidiately whirls around with a look of utter confusion* how the hell....?

*the mod laughs* have you forgotten who i am? i have the power to edit and even delete entire posts, and even threads! you have no chance against me..... i will ban you just like the man who led you here. your alliance will fall soon now that its leader has been taken care of and gaia can return to normal.

*ontaros grits his teeth as pain tears through his body, but he speaks through* no, we dont need cycon to win this. he's done his part, he has set the wheels of change in motion and now, with his removal, he has become a martyr to the people. his cause will live on through us, and now through many more. your unjust treatment will not be tollorateded any longer. the people will stand against, and together..... we, will over come all.

*rage flares in the modorators eyes* you fool, no if anyone dare rises against us, then i can merely ban them, and never have to worry about them again. *he charges once more, before leaping into the air, to bring his blade to bear against ontaros's skull, but crashes only into the ground*

*ontaros ducks to the left to evade the attack and quickly moves in to ram his dagger inbetween the mods upper ribs. the feeling sears through the mod, and is clearly visible on his face, but only breifly.*

*once more, ontaros finds himself below the oncoming blade of the mod. he ducks to the left again and moves in to attack, but the mod tumbles forward and gets to his feet, crouching, and breathing heavily.* damn you! you cant win! i will just continue to undo and evade every attack you land on me until i finish you off!

*ontaros now wears the smirk* and what are you to do should all of gaia hear the call to arms of cycon as i have? what will you do when those you lord your power on you, turn against you and seek your demise? ban them all? *ontaros's head shakes slowly* they are the ones you hold power over, but thats only because they are there and alow you to. without them, your nothing. without their donations, YOU are nothing!..... besides. banning isnt a permanant solution anyway. you banned me before, but here i am, standing before you, seeking to undo you.

*the mod looks worried but for only a breif moment* then i will make sure you stay gone.!! *he launches himself at ontaros, thrusting his metal for his opponents heart.*

*ontaros swings his dagger across and with an angry clang and feirce shower of sparks, the mod's blade is knocked off coarse and is soon after thrust into the chest of the raging mod.*

*once more the scene replays, the mods blade coming in for ontaros's heart, but as ontaros's blade swings to intercept the mods, the sword pulls back and to the side and is soon after sunk through ontaros's midsection, from his left side to his right. ontaros's blade falls freely of his hands and comes to land on the ground. the sound of the dagger hitting the floor rings through out the crowd below and soon heads begin to turn to look at the onslaught.*

*ontaros winces in pain, knowing that this blow will finish him, but he intends to make his last moments count* you may kill me now moderator, you may delete all my posts, and even deny my existance in this land, but what these people see here today, will never be removed from their minds.... WE WILL FREE GAIA FROM YOUR HOLD, WE WILL DELIVER THIS SITE FROM THE DARKNESS OF YOUR GOLD MONGERING ESTABLISHMENT AND BRING IT UNTO THE LIGHT, TO THE GLORY THAT GAIA WAS MENT TO LIVE IN! TOGETHER, WE WILL OVER COME!!!..... now fight..... on..... my gaian brothers, and.....sisters....... *with that, ontaros's last breath, he falls to his knees and fades from the veiw of all.*

Ontaros

Hilarious Genius


Ontaros

Hilarious Genius

PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:59 pm


guess i killed this thread o.o;;;
PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2005 12:49 pm


yeah this place is dead as hell >.<;;;

Ontaros

Hilarious Genius


Birthday Boy

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 7:11 am


I never did a RP before, here it goes.

*You walk into a dark, gray room. You see red stains on the walls. You've thought you've been here before, maybe in a dream, or a nightmare. Music starts playing, you know what it is, but you just cant up your finger on it. A dark figure walks through. The door he enters through dissapears. The music gets considerably louder. You black out for a second, red liquid is on the floor, ankle high. Now there is no way out. You must kill the man to exit to society, or you must perish.

Wow, I suck!
rolleyes
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