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 Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2016 7:11 pm
Picture:  Character Name: Lilian Periwinkle Semblance Name: Hop-Scotch Semblance description: By taking off her white stockings (Metal grieves) begins the activation of her Semblance. Anytime she makes for a dash or jump- a Glyph appears beneath her feet, this allows her to double jump while in mid air, and by doing so, enhances stronger kicks and longer jumps. Stats: Buff +1 STR Post duration: 3 Post Cooldown: 5 Post Is this better?
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Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2016 1:15 am
IvonKeir Picture: Character Name: Lilian Periwinkle Semblance Name: Hop-Scotch Semblance description: By taking off her white stockings (Metal grieves) begins the activation of her Semblance. Anytime she makes for a dash or jump- a Glyph appears beneath her feet, this allows her to double jump while in mid air, and by doing so, enhances stronger kicks and longer jumps. Stats: Buff +1 STR Post duration: 3 Post Cooldown: 5 Post Is this better? Much. You're good to go girlie.
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Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2016 1:06 pm
Picture:  Character Name: Ebony Grimjaw Semblance Name: Cats-in-the-cradle Semblance description: Since her overall body strength relies a brute force, using her left hook to land devastating blows, this switches to her right hand, and into a more nimble stance. By activating her Semblance, she will always land on her feet, much like a cat (hence the title), and is more agile, and quick, rather than her slow reflex time without it. While this is activated, it is easier to get herself out of headlocks, or body pins by contorting her body. Boost: - 4 STR, -3 Toughness, -2 Endurance, +2 Speed, +4 Perception, +3 Reflexes. Post duration: 4 Posts Cooldown: 6 Posts
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Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2016 1:27 pm
IvonKeir Picture: Character Name: Ebony Grimjaw Semblance Name: Cats-in-the-cradle Semblance description: Since her overall body strength relies a brute force, using her left hook to land devastating blows, this switches to her right hand, and into a more nimble stance. By activating her Semblance, she will always land on her feet, much like a cat (hence the title), and is more agile, and quick, rather than her slow reflex time without it. While this is activated, it is easier to get herself out of headlocks, or body pins by contorting her body. Boost: - 4 STR, -3 Toughness, -2 Endurance, +2 Speed, +4 Perception, +3 Reflexes. Post duration: 4 Posts Cooldown: 6 Posts This is completely fair and balanced, I like it. Approved.
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 4:35 pm
Picture: Character Name: Gabriel Cross Semblance Name: Distortion Semblance description: Summoning a black glyph to which Gabriel jumps through, and by doing so turns into a black Lion. Though in shadow, his form is Distorted and hard to make out, but the form is still that of a Lion. Outside of the battlefield, it was known that he was mistaken for a Grim. While in this form, he is only capable of doing Poison damage, as his entire body is corrosive, giving off a black tar shimmer. It also sacrifices some of his attributes, while gaining bonuses to others. Buffs:-2 Endurance -1 Perception -1 Intelligence +2 Reflex +1 Melee +1 Aura Post duration: 3 Cooldown: 6
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:27 pm
IvonKeir Picture: Character Name: Gabriel Cross Semblance Name: Distortion Semblance description: Summoning a black glyph to which Gabriel jumps through, and by doing so turns into a black Lion. Though in shadow, his form is Distorted and hard to make out, but the form is still that of a Lion. Outside of the battlefield, it was known that he was mistaken for a Grim. While in this form, he is only capable of doing Poison damage, as his entire body is corrosive, giving off a black tar shimmer. It also sacrifices some of his attributes, while gaining bonuses to others. Buffs:-2 Endurance -1 Perception -1 Intelligence +2 Reflex +1 Melee +1 Aura Post duration: 3 Cooldown: 6 I like the idea, the only thing I see that needs changing is the boost to aura. Aura is what powers the semblance, so the semblance shouldn't be able to boost aura. If you swap it with toughness, you should have the same effect I believe.
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:44 pm
Axel_Dragonfire IvonKeir Picture: Character Name: Gabriel Cross Semblance Name: Distortion Semblance description: Summoning a black glyph to which Gabriel jumps through, and by doing so turns into a black Lion. Though in shadow, his form is Distorted and hard to make out, but the form is still that of a Lion. Outside of the battlefield, it was known that he was mistaken for a Grim. While in this form, he is only capable of doing Poison damage, as his entire body is corrosive, giving off a black tar shimmer. It also sacrifices some of his attributes, while gaining bonuses to others. Buffs:-2 Endurance -1 Perception -1 Intelligence +2 Reflex +1 Melee +1 Toughness Post duration: 3 Cooldown: 6 I like the idea, the only thing I see that needs changing is the boost to aura. Aura is what powers the semblance, so the semblance shouldn't be able to boost aura. If you swap it with toughness, you should have the same effect I believe. ooooh okay. changes made :3
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:47 pm
IvonKeir Axel_Dragonfire IvonKeir Picture: Character Name: Gabriel Cross Semblance Name: Distortion Semblance description: Summoning a black glyph to which Gabriel jumps through, and by doing so turns into a black Lion. Though in shadow, his form is Distorted and hard to make out, but the form is still that of a Lion. Outside of the battlefield, it was known that he was mistaken for a Grim. While in this form, he is only capable of doing Poison damage, as his entire body is corrosive, giving off a black tar shimmer. It also sacrifices some of his attributes, while gaining bonuses to others. Buffs:-2 Endurance -1 Perception -1 Intelligence +2 Reflex +1 Melee +1 Toughness Post duration: 3 Cooldown: 6 I like the idea, the only thing I see that needs changing is the boost to aura. Aura is what powers the semblance, so the semblance shouldn't be able to boost aura. If you swap it with toughness, you should have the same effect I believe. ooooh okay. changes made :3 All set, approved.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2017 9:33 pm
Hikari Myst Character Name: Umbra Periwinkle Semblance Name: Puppeteer Semblance description: When activated, Umbra can, for a brief amount of time, control the minds of Grimm or opponents, depending on their intelligence. The more intelligent the enemy, the harder it is for him to orchestrate their movements. With this ability, he can control enemies to attack their allies, decimating their ranks. He can only control up to four Grimm of low intelligence. Higher intelligence means more concentration for him to control. He can control Grimm/enemies within a two mile radius. If he loses connection with his "puppet," his hold is released and the Grimm/enemy can control their bodies again. Post duration: 3 Cool down: 5 Denied. Direct mind manipulation is god modding. Even Annabel cannot directly control Grimm, she can only manipulate them to "sense" a large source of the negative feelings that attract them.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2017 9:40 pm
Axel_Dragonfire Hikari Myst Character Name: Umbra Periwinkle Semblance Name: Puppeteer Semblance description: When activated, Umbra can, for a brief amount of time, control the minds of Grimm or opponents, depending on their intelligence. The more intelligent the enemy, the harder it is for him to orchestrate their movements. With this ability, he can control enemies to attack their allies, decimating their ranks. He can only control up to four Grimm of low intelligence. Higher intelligence means more concentration for him to control. He can control Grimm/enemies within a two mile radius. If he loses connection with his "puppet," his hold is released and the Grimm/enemy can control their bodies again. Post duration: 3 Cool down: 5 Denied. Direct mind manipulation is god modding. Even Annabel cannot directly control Grimm, she can only manipulate them to "sense" a large source of the negative feelings that attract them. Oooh, gotcha. I'll delete and amend, then! Sorry! sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2017 9:50 pm
Hikari Myst Axel_Dragonfire Hikari Myst Character Name: Umbra Periwinkle Semblance Name: Puppeteer Semblance description: When activated, Umbra can, for a brief amount of time, control the minds of Grimm or opponents, depending on their intelligence. The more intelligent the enemy, the harder it is for him to orchestrate their movements. With this ability, he can control enemies to attack their allies, decimating their ranks. He can only control up to four Grimm of low intelligence. Higher intelligence means more concentration for him to control. He can control Grimm/enemies within a two mile radius. If he loses connection with his "puppet," his hold is released and the Grimm/enemy can control their bodies again. Post duration: 3 Cool down: 5 Denied. Direct mind manipulation is god modding. Even Annabel cannot directly control Grimm, she can only manipulate them to "sense" a large source of the negative feelings that attract them. Oooh, gotcha. I'll delete and amend, then! Sorry! sweatdrop s'all good, it's why I'm here.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2017 10:41 pm
Axel_Dragonfire Hikari Myst Axel_Dragonfire Hikari Myst Character Name: Umbra Periwinkle Semblance Name: Puppeteer Semblance description: When activated, Umbra can, for a brief amount of time, control the minds of Grimm or opponents, depending on their intelligence. The more intelligent the enemy, the harder it is for him to orchestrate their movements. With this ability, he can control enemies to attack their allies, decimating their ranks. He can only control up to four Grimm of low intelligence. Higher intelligence means more concentration for him to control. He can control Grimm/enemies within a two mile radius. If he loses connection with his "puppet," his hold is released and the Grimm/enemy can control their bodies again. Post duration: 3 Cool down: 5 Denied. Direct mind manipulation is god modding. Even Annabel cannot directly control Grimm, she can only manipulate them to "sense" a large source of the negative feelings that attract them. Oooh, gotcha. I'll delete and amend, then! Sorry! sweatdrop s'all good, it's why I'm here.
Thanks, dude. mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 6:23 pm
Picture: (if any) Character Name: Adriana Burrakudaria Semblance Name: Dark Night Semblance description: Dark Night: Adreana's Semblance is a rather unusual one where hers activates when she sees a lethal blow coming at her. The nearby shadows swarm to protect her creating an Ethereal shadow armor in the shape of a full set of Samurai Armor. This is an immediate effect but once used it has a five posts cooldown. Post duration: instant lasts for one post Cooldown: 5 minutes
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 8:24 pm
irishlassie96 Picture: (if any) Character Name: Adriana Burrakudaria Semblance Name: Dark Night Semblance description: Dark Night: Adreana's Semblance is a rather unusual one where hers activates when she sees a lethal blow coming at her. The nearby shadows swarm to protect her creating an Ethereal shadow armor in the shape of a full set of Samurai Armor. This is an immediate effect but once used it has a five posts cooldown. Post duration: instant Cooldown: 5 minutes Change post duration to 1, and it'll be fine.
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