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 Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 8:05 am
malavaes I don't see anything wrong with these weapons, but the tail is making me uneasy. Resubmit it again, but be more descriptive or else I can't approve it. Everything else is good to go. I added more in in the description and under it.
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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 2:57 pm
Weylin_Morven malavaes I don't see anything wrong with these weapons, but the tail is making me uneasy. Resubmit it again, but be more descriptive or else I can't approve it. Everything else is good to go. I added more in in the description and under it. Remove the part where it is useless to others or change it to as long as your character is alive. Also add how strong the metal is and what it can naturally block.
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 1:27 am
malavaes Weylin_Morven malavaes I don't see anything wrong with these weapons, but the tail is making me uneasy. Resubmit it again, but be more descriptive or else I can't approve it. Everything else is good to go. I added more in in the description and under it. Remove the part where it is useless to others or change it to as long as your character is alive. Also add how strong the metal is and what it can naturally block. done and added a penatly for over damaging it
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:47 am
Weylin_Morven malavaes Weylin_Morven malavaes I don't see anything wrong with these weapons, but the tail is making me uneasy. Resubmit it again, but be more descriptive or else I can't approve it. Everything else is good to go. I added more in in the description and under it. Remove the part where it is useless to others or change it to as long as your character is alive. Also add how strong the metal is and what it can naturally block. done and added a penatly for over damaging it Claws both cost 1500 The circles cost 1750 The tail costs 2500
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 2:21 pm
iMama Harkles Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Toxic
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This serum causes the smoke to gain paralyzing effects. This lasts for five posts. Once inhaled, all stats are lowered by 1/2 rank until the effects are cured. After one post, the body begins to grow numb and can no longer defend against taijutsu or bukijutsu of equal or greater rank. After two more posts, the body will become completely paralyzed for three more posts. After the paralysis wears off, the afflicted party will remain numb and weakened until treated by a medical shinobi that can remove the poison from the blood system. This poison is also completely non-lethal.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Sticky
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. Once this smoke gets onto a surface, it creates an adhesive that will mimic cement. Unless the body that is stuck has strength higher than the Kiseru member's, they will be locked down for three of their posts unless a C-Rank Suiton or Katon technique washes or burns away the adhesive.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Explosive
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. All of the smoke that is let out can be ignited to create an explosion. The explosions do C-Rank damage no matter what size they are. They are enough to destroy buildings and set fire to villages. The Kiseru member's physical body is immune to these explosions, but if they go into the smoke body form and the smoke is ignited, it will take their life. Could you please add at least one post for them to spread through your system? (The user not enemy) As for Toxic, it is simply too easy for a ninja to inhale something. That poison is too strong unless you change the effects and/or post duration. Sticky is approved. 1500 Explosive is approved. 1500
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:40 pm
malavaes iMama Harkles Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Toxic
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This serum causes the smoke to gain paralyzing effects. This lasts for five posts. Once inhaled, all stats are lowered by 1/2 rank until the effects are cured. After one post, the body begins to grow numb and can no longer defend against taijutsu or bukijutsu of equal or greater rank. After two more posts, the body will become completely paralyzed for three more posts. After the paralysis wears off, the afflicted party will remain numb and weakened until treated by a medical shinobi that can remove the poison from the blood system. This poison is also completely non-lethal.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Sticky
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. Once this smoke gets onto a surface, it creates an adhesive that will mimic cement. Unless the body that is stuck has strength higher than the Kiseru member's, they will be locked down for three of their posts unless a C-Rank Suiton or Katon technique washes or burns away the adhesive.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Explosive
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. All of the smoke that is let out can be ignited to create an explosion. The explosions do C-Rank damage no matter what size they are. They are enough to destroy buildings and set fire to villages. The Kiseru member's physical body is immune to these explosions, but if they go into the smoke body form and the smoke is ignited, it will take their life. Could you please add at least one post for them to spread through your system? (The user not enemy) As for Toxic, it is simply too easy for a ninja to inhale something. That poison is too strong unless you change the effects and/or post duration. Sticky is approved. 1500 Explosive is approved. 1500
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:44 pm
iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Toxic
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This serum causes the smoke to gain paralyzing effects. This lasts for five posts. Once inhaled, all stats are lowered by 1/2 rank until the effects are cured. After one post, the body begins to grow numb and can no longer defend against taijutsu or bukijutsu of equal or greater rank. After two more posts, the body will become completely paralyzed for three more posts. After the paralysis wears off, the afflicted party will remain numb and weakened until treated by a medical shinobi that can remove the poison from the blood system. This poison is also completely non-lethal.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Sticky
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. Once this smoke gets onto a surface, it creates an adhesive that will mimic cement. Unless the body that is stuck has strength higher than the Kiseru member's, they will be locked down for three of their posts unless a C-Rank Suiton or Katon technique washes or burns away the adhesive.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Explosive
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. All of the smoke that is let out can be ignited to create an explosion. The explosions do C-Rank damage no matter what size they are. They are enough to destroy buildings and set fire to villages. The Kiseru member's physical body is immune to these explosions, but if they go into the smoke body form and the smoke is ignited, it will take their life. Could you please add at least one post for them to spread through your system? (The user not enemy) As for Toxic, it is simply too easy for a ninja to inhale something. That poison is too strong unless you change the effects and/or post duration. Sticky is approved. 1500 Explosive is approved. 1500 Nah.
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:28 pm
malavaes iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Toxic
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This serum causes the smoke to gain paralyzing effects. This lasts for five posts. Once inhaled, all stats are lowered by 1/2 rank until the effects are cured. After one post, the body begins to grow numb and can no longer defend against taijutsu or bukijutsu of equal or greater rank. After two more posts, the body will become completely paralyzed for three more posts. After the paralysis wears off, the afflicted party will remain numb and weakened until treated by a medical shinobi that can remove the poison from the blood system. This poison is also completely non-lethal.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Sticky
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. Once this smoke gets onto a surface, it creates an adhesive that will mimic cement. Unless the body that is stuck has strength higher than the Kiseru member's, they will be locked down for three of their posts unless a C-Rank Suiton or Katon technique washes or burns away the adhesive.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Explosive
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. All of the smoke that is let out can be ignited to create an explosion. The explosions do C-Rank damage no matter what size they are. They are enough to destroy buildings and set fire to villages. The Kiseru member's physical body is immune to these explosions, but if they go into the smoke body form and the smoke is ignited, it will take their life. Could you please add at least one post for them to spread through your system? (The user not enemy) As for Toxic, it is simply too easy for a ninja to inhale something. That poison is too strong unless you change the effects and/or post duration. Sticky is approved. 1500 Explosive is approved. 1500 Nah.
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:49 pm
iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Toxic
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This serum causes the smoke to gain paralyzing effects. This lasts for five posts. Once inhaled, all stats are lowered by 1/2 rank until the effects are cured. After one post, the body begins to grow numb and can no longer defend against taijutsu or bukijutsu of equal or greater rank. After two more posts, the body will become completely paralyzed for three more posts. After the paralysis wears off, the afflicted party will remain numb and weakened until treated by a medical shinobi that can remove the poison from the blood system. This poison is also completely non-lethal.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Sticky
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. Once this smoke gets onto a surface, it creates an adhesive that will mimic cement. Unless the body that is stuck has strength higher than the Kiseru member's, they will be locked down for three of their posts unless a C-Rank Suiton or Katon technique washes or burns away the adhesive.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Explosive
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. All of the smoke that is let out can be ignited to create an explosion. The explosions do C-Rank damage no matter what size they are. They are enough to destroy buildings and set fire to villages. The Kiseru member's physical body is immune to these explosions, but if they go into the smoke body form and the smoke is ignited, it will take their life. Could you please add at least one post for them to spread through your system? (The user not enemy) As for Toxic, it is simply too easy for a ninja to inhale something. That poison is too strong unless you change the effects and/or post duration. Sticky is approved. 1500 Explosive is approved. 1500 Nah. I'm just not feeling the paralysis. It's a guaranteed win even against higher ranking ninja. You can keep the stat loss after one post and after two the numbness kicks in. Does that sound good?
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 8:01 pm
malavaes iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Toxic
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This serum causes the smoke to gain paralyzing effects. This lasts for five posts. Once inhaled, all stats are lowered by 1/2 rank until the effects are cured. After one post, the body begins to grow numb and can no longer defend against taijutsu or bukijutsu of equal or greater rank. After two more posts, the body will become completely paralyzed for three more posts. After the paralysis wears off, the afflicted party will remain numb and weakened until treated by a medical shinobi that can remove the poison from the blood system. This poison is also completely non-lethal.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Sticky
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. Once this smoke gets onto a surface, it creates an adhesive that will mimic cement. Unless the body that is stuck has strength higher than the Kiseru member's, they will be locked down for three of their posts unless a C-Rank Suiton or Katon technique washes or burns away the adhesive.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Explosive
Item Range: Self
Item Cost:
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This lasts for five posts. All of the smoke that is let out can be ignited to create an explosion. The explosions do C-Rank damage no matter what size they are. They are enough to destroy buildings and set fire to villages. The Kiseru member's physical body is immune to these explosions, but if they go into the smoke body form and the smoke is ignited, it will take their life. Could you please add at least one post for them to spread through your system? (The user not enemy) As for Toxic, it is simply too easy for a ninja to inhale something. That poison is too strong unless you change the effects and/or post duration. Sticky is approved. 1500 Explosive is approved. 1500 Nah. I'm just not feeling the paralysis. It's a guaranteed win even against higher ranking ninja. You can keep the stat loss after one post and after two the numbness kicks in. Does that sound good?
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 8:04 pm
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Numbing
Item Range: Self
Item Cost: 2,250
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This serum causes the smoke to gain paralyzing effects. This takes one post before effects occur in the smoke and lasts for five posts. Once inhaled, all stats are lowered by 1/2 rank until the effects are cured. After one post, the body begins to grow numb and can no longer defend against taijutsu or bukijutsu of equal or greater rankThe afflicted party will remain numb and weakened until treated by a medical shinobi that can remove the poison from the blood system. This poison is also completely non-lethal.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Sticky
Item Range: Self
Item Cost: 1,500
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This takes one post before effects occur in the smoke and lasts for five posts. Once this smoke gets onto a surface, it creates an adhesive that will mimic cement. Unless the body that is stuck has strength higher than the Kiseru member's, they will be locked down for three of their posts unless a C-Rank Suiton or Katon technique washes or burns away the adhesive.
Item Name: Smoke Altering Serum: Explosive
Item Range: Self
Item Cost: 1,500
Item Ability: After drinking this serum in solid form, the Kiseru member will experience a change in their smoke. This takes one post before effects occur in the smoke and lasts for five posts. All of the smoke that is let out can be ignited to create an explosion. The explosions do C-Rank damage no matter what size they are. They are enough to destroy buildings and set fire to villages. The Kiseru member's physical body is immune to these explosions, but if they go into the smoke body form and the smoke is ignited, it will take their life.
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 8:04 pm
iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles I could add a change so that it takes a post before the poison enters your system and add into it that you don't feel the stat reduction until after the paralysis wears off. Sound good? Nah. I'm just not feeling the paralysis. It's a guaranteed win even against higher ranking ninja. You can keep the stat loss after one post and after two the numbness kicks in. Does that sound good? Great. With those changes the price is 2250. I added 250 extra since all stats get affected.
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2014 2:41 am
malavaes iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles malavaes iMama Harkles I could add a change so that it takes a post before the poison enters your system and add into it that you don't feel the stat reduction until after the paralysis wears off. Sound good? Nah. I'm just not feeling the paralysis. It's a guaranteed win even against higher ranking ninja. You can keep the stat loss after one post and after two the numbness kicks in. Does that sound good? Great. With those changes the price is 2250. I added 250 extra since all stats get affected.
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2014 7:16 pm
Item Name: Z.I.O.N. 4.20
Item Range: 3x Sight Range
Item Cost: 1750
Item Ability: These goggles are powered with chakra. When they are activated they increase the perception of the user. There are three levels of perception to gain that do not stack with each other. Each level of zoom requires chakra to power it per post.
1x Zoom: +1/2 (1 Chakra Point)
2x Zoom: +1 (2 Chakra Points)
3x Zoom: + 1 1/2 (4 Chakra Points)
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2014 10:52 pm
A faint smile
Item Name: Z.I.O.N. 4.20
Item Range: 3x Sight Range
Item Cost:
Item Ability: These goggles are powered with chakra. When they are activated they increase the perception of the user. There are three levels of perception to gain that do not stack with each other. Each level of zoom requires chakra to power it per post.
1x Zoom: +1/2 (1 Chakra Point)
2x Zoom: +1 (2 Chakra Points)
3x Zoom: + 1 1/2 (4 Chakra Points)
Approved
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