▌ＭＡＩＮ ＩＮＦＯＲＭＡＴＩＯＮ ▌ ☐ Name: Chikari Shihōin - Chikari: meaning strength; force; might; vigor and the origin is Chikara. ☐ Nickname/Famous Name: ---
☐ Age: Twelve [ 12 ] ☐ Birthdate: 05 / 22
☐ Gender: Female ☐ Sexuality: Straight ☐ Ethnicity: Japanese
☐ Height: 5 ' 0'' ☐ Weight: 95 lbs
☐ Personality:
Chikari is the kind of person who thinks things through logically…most of the times anyways. Her mind is almost never at rest because whenever she finds something new - which happens often - it becomes a subject of research until she knows all she can about that particular subject. Most people call her curious which is correct, but she takes it to the level of wanting to learn a new jutsu or training technique until there is nothing left to learn. She’s not afraid to ask questions about things she doesn’t know either. Chikari often says she’s like an well just waiting to be filled up.
On the other hand she tends to make even the most simple of matters completely and unnecessarily complicated. It makes her a bit unpredictable. People often find her difficult to understand what kind of person she actually is. For example; if she need to paint a wall, but couldn’t reach the top half with a normal brush she go out of the way to make a pulley system and a scaffolding to hold her and the paint up instead of simply getting a longer brush. It makes life with her a little surprising. A couple more of her bad traits are that she’s a bit of a “Miss know-it-all” and she is very superficial at times. All of this combine into making people misunderstand her ninety percent of the time.
Chikari’s unpredictable-ness goes as far as having tremendous mood-swings. One minute she’ll be happy as any child should be and then one little word can send her into a depressed mood or even a temper tantrum. No one really knows how Chikari will react to certain situations. Chikari often hears people calling her ‘bouncy’ since her mood tends to bounce in all directions. Along with her multi-personality she’s incredible at multi-tasking. This means that Chikari is the kind of person who can juggle fifty different things to do in one day. And she always keeps her cool while doing it.
One part of her, that’s very fun to hang around, is the side of her that will try anything at least once. From trying a new food, going to a new area, or having a new adventure. As long as Chikari has someone to talk with along the way she’ll do most anything. She adapts to any situation so long as it has nothing to do with swimming. This little energetic, bundle of joy will drag you on all sorts of crazy adventures while wearing a smile all the time.
Personality wise her strengths would be her high energy, intelligence, creativity, and adaptability. She’s probably one of the most spirited people whom you might ever meet. Her energy is almost on the level of being contagious. However, she does have her weaknesses. Her superficial tendencies make it hard for her to get into any kind of deep meaning out of anything, her spontaneous nature often makes others feel annoyed at her, in response Chikari gets agitated quickly.
While Chikari is unpredictable the one thing that is sure to be the same at any given time is that Chikari will be sure to keep you on your toes.
☐ Family: - The Uchiha Clan - The Shihōin Clan ---- Jade Shihōin [Cousin] aka Auntie
☐ Theme Song:--- ☐ Nindo: " I'll laugh happily even under cloudy skies. " ☐ Background:
Chikari isn’t sure where she was born. She never cared to ask what country they were passing through at the time. Her parents were traveling merchants in a small caravan with one or two other families. They were all different, but stuck together anyways. Her parents were very different from each other. Her mother was from a Clan known as the Shihoin clan and her father was from the Uchiha Clan. Both were well known Clans throughout a few of the lands they traveled, but Chikari never bothered to ask why. She was to busy playing with the other children to realize anything at the time.
While she traveled with her parents across the land Chikari grew a fondness for learning something new whenever the caravan stopped to trade or sell items. One day they had stopped in a bustling village. Chikari was still really young, but often wandered a little ways from her parents market stall. The village was located in the Land of Fire, but it was just a small town outside of Konohagakure. Chikari can still remember all of the hotels, food stalls, and games that were open. Apparently her parents had chosen a time when a festival was going on. But what Chikari remembers the most is a meeting a kid about her age while her parents were busy with customers.
She and her new friend spent almost all day together for an entire week. However, one week was all Chikari had to spend with her friend. The caravan never stayed in one place for too long. A week had actually been a rather long time to spend in one town alone. When Chikari told her friend that she was leaving and probably never coming back, it made her friend upset. Her friend thought she would stay around for a longer time. At least until the festival was completely over. Chikari got upset because she didn’t quite understand what was wrong. Already being rather superficial about things she couldn’t see why her friend was angry at her. The two parted holding childish grudges against each other. Neither would see the other for several years.
At the age of ten, Chikari had seemed to have forgotten or at least gotten over the week she spent in that festival town. Nothing of importance had happened since then. She had a normal childhood as far as she was concerned. The only thing to really note was the level of risk taking that Chikari seemed to develop as she got older. Each time they stopped at a new place Chikari would somehow manage to hurt herself doing something a bit dangerous. Climbing trees and cliffs, falling into rivers, getting lost in the local forests, getting chased by animals, you name it and she’s done it. In fact she’s fallen into rivers or lakes so often that she has refused to learn how to swim and is only cautious around deep lakes and fast rivers.
One night Chikari was wandering the forest that surrounded the clearing the caravan had stopped at for the night. The sun had only just set a few minutes ago, but there was no moon, so it was more than just a little dark in the forest. Chikari didn’t seem to notice that there was something off about the silent forest as she made her way to the shallow river that cut through the forest. Not bothering to take her sandals off she walked into the river looking for some stones or shells that could be made into jewelry. It didn’t take her long to find a stone that had washed down from the mountains or perhaps it was dropped by an unfortunate person who lost it to the more rapid parts of the river upstream. It was so black that it actually had a deep purple color to it. It was smooth and had sharp edges as well. Chikari could think of quite a few ways to use such a stone.
Her thoughts were cut short but an explosion cutting through the quiet night air. Chikari wheeled around and stared at the smoke and fire that was coming from the clearing where her family was. She ran out of the river, slightly tripping over the soggy hem of her dress, and bolted back towards the caravan. Just before she could reach the clearing a hand shot out from the bushes and dragged her to the forest floor. It took a moment for Chikari to realize that it had been her parents who had caught her by surprise. While she was extremely glad to see her parents, the chaos coming from the caravan was the main concern. Her parents forced her to go to the nearest village and find a cousin of hers.
Chikari didn’t want to leave her parents that night. She had a bad feeling in the pit of her stomach, but she figured it was because she was in shock. She did as she was told however, still clutching the black stone she had picked up from the river. It took her a few hours of non-stop running before she came to the closet town, completely out of breath and extremely dirt with a few cuts from running through the forest. She was able to get word of the caravan and her parents being attacked, but she never figured out what happened to her parents. Later that day she had been told that they weren’t found. To Chikari that just means they were still out there somewhere and refuses to think anymore on the matter.
After that Chikari ‘settled down’ in Tsukigakure. It was the village where her older cousin was located. For the first few months of living in the village Chikari was a tiny bit of a menace. She was not used to staying in one place for longer than a week. Even though she had begun her training as a shinobi it wasn’t enough to contain her high energy. She still continued to fall down cliffs, get stuck in tall trees, get chased by wild animals and so on. Her ways didn’t exactly change even after two years and graduating from the Academy.
☐ Class:Weapon Master - Multi-Weapon Master: Users are able to excel at the usage of many different weapons, and master none totally. They will never beat out a single weapon master in their chosen weapon but are better than others at pretty much every other weapon. They most often use scrolls in combat to summon a mass amount of these weapons. ☐ Bloodline:Sharingan - Stage: --- ☐ Clan:Shihōin ☐ Demon: --- ☐ Summoning(s): ---
☐ Passives: - Strength: 1 - Speed: 1 - Perception: 1 - Weapon Master/Sword-master: 1 - Genjutsu: 1 1/2 ☐ Personal Attributes: - Fanning the flames: As an Uchiha Chikari has a natural affinity to Katon [Fire] style jutsus. With this ability the cost of Katon style jutsus are cut down by 20% [i.e S-ranks cost 20 instead of 16]
☐ Strengths: - Very flexible - Has precise aim - Close - Mid range combat ☐ Weakness: - Can't swim - Has limited weapons - Long range combat ☐ Fears: - Drowning - Losing her eyesight or having her eyes harmed/removed - Wild animals
☐ Missions: - D: - C: - B: - A: - S:
☐ Special Items: - --- - --- - ---
☐ Weapons: - Kunai Knives ---- She keeps these in a pouch strapped to her right leg. - Shuriken ---- She keeps these in a the same pouch as her kunai. - A small hand fan made of steel ---- This is simply in her hands or tucked into her red sash. - Tekagi shuko ---- These are hidden under her long sleeves, but are strapped to her arms. - A Bo Staff ---- This is a staff that's strapped to her back. - Meteor Hammer ---- The meteor hammer is attached to her red sash. - Ninja Wire (used for controlling kunais and for certain jutsu) ---- She keeps this with her kunais and shuriken. - The Glaive | Ref 2 ---- The glaive is attached to the left side of her sash.
☐ Gender: Female ☐ Sexuality: Bi sexual ☐ Ethnicity: Caucasian
☐ Height: 5'8 ☐ Weight: 100lb
☐ Personality: Isphet is somewhat of a loner, however this doesnt mean she is anti social. She just prefers to be alone, mostly. Occaisionally she gets the urge to let loose. let her hair down, party with her inner child. However she is innocent to the more sexual aspects of life. With her almost childlike innocence intact, Isphet enjoys laughing, and is easy to anger, however, instead of revealing her anger she tends to affect a cold silence, along with a chilling glare to accompany it. With no sense of loyalty, and honesty bordering on non existence, Isphet is pedantic, confident, and calculating. ☐ Family: Isphet's family includes, an estranged father, Michael, an indifferent mother, Esmerelda, a deceased brother, Andy, aged 5 and her pet ferret, Annabella.
☐ Theme Song ☐ Nindo: The ultimate silence, to slaughter my prey. That is my nindo, my ninja way. ☐ Background: It was a bright morning, as Isphet slid easily from her mothers womb, a small miracle. A process that would normally take many hours, took just one, and she slid silently and without struggle from the womb. She spent her first few years without making a noise, watching quietly and calmly, with bright intelligent eyes. She spent many a day with medical ninja, trying to work out why she refused to speak or make a noise, but no one could work it out. At the age of three they just gave up and hoped one day she would speak.
At the age of five, Andy was born. Her sweet little brother fought with tooth and nail before he was free, screaming, like babies are want to do, and all the while Isphet sat perched on a stool beside her mothers bedside, silently watching. The normally cool look in her young eyes softened markedly as she set eyes on the bloody screaming mes that was her favorite thing in the world. A first ever smile graced her lips as she gazed upon him.
When they got him home from the hospital, Isphet began to speak, only to Andy. She had learned, over her five years, the basics of language, even if she hadnt practiced, and her first fumbled words to the new born where coarsely spoken, stumbled over, though quickly mastered. Her parents were surprised, though any close bond that could have formed between parents and child were severed by her indifference to them. She only spoke to Andy.
The pair grew up inseparable, Isphet would drag Andy off onto adventures, wandering through town. Which isn't really an adventure, but when you are 10 and five years old, it seemed pretty exciting to the pair. One such adventure, the day after Andy's first birthday, Andy begged Isphet to take them up onto the roof of a nearby building. He convinced her it could be the ultimate adventure. Isphet could never say no to the bright eyed, mischievous little package that was her little brother. The pair clambered up a trellis up the side of the building, giggling and playing about, Calling to each other as they raced up the building. Andy made it first, Isphet let him win, and as she pulled herself over the lip of the roof top, she saw Andy running along the barrier. She called to him to be careful but her voice startled him, and he turned, the heel of his foot slipping and he started to fall, Isphet ran over, reached for him, but his hand slipped from hers and he tumbled to his death on the pavement below.
The girl lay across the balustrade, staring down at the bloody puddle that had been her precious brother. Tears streamed down the girls face as people gathered around the tiny corpse. She would forever blame herself for the loss of that one person dear to her. She returned down the trellis she had but moments ago climbed with her shining brother, and walked slowly home, heart in her stomach. A steady stream of tears still coursed from her eyes. She walked through the front door and her mother ran out with open arms for her little boy, her face fell when she noticed Isphet's mood, and the lack of Andy. She hesitated to ask, but did none the less and collapsed on the ground at Isphet's response, screaming and and rocking back and forth, heart ripping asunder.
It was at that moment her father returned and taking in the scene, asked with dread. Her mother answered and Isphet went flying as the back of her fathers hand collided with her face. He turned and left yelling that she was a horrible little girl and he wished it had been her. She walked to her room, thinking much the same. The funeral service was small. The coffin Tiny. It was at this point that isphet began wearing dark colors and elaborate dresses, veils, and hats. Her mourning attire.
Five years on, her fifteenth birthday and just two weeks from the anniversary of Andy's death. She woke early. Hadnt seen her father since the day he walked out five years ago and her mother didnt acknowledge her presence. she would have to make her birthday good all on her own. She planned to walk down to the cemetery and spend the day with Andy, like she had every year. After stealing into his unchanged bedroom, and making off with one of his favorite childhood toys, Isphet left, Her favorite purple dress and hat on, veil covering her face, umbrella hooked over her arm, and the toy in her hand, she walked slowly to the cemetery.
She took the same cobbled path she always took, smiled sadly at the graves she passed, until she reached Andy's. heart breaking all over again. She looked up and a tiny ferret sat atop his headstone. The same shade of brown as her brothers hair, the same bright blue of his eyes. She stepped up and reached out her hand, instead of fleeing, the creature climbed onto her hand, shimmied up her sleeve and curled up on her shoulder. Joy ripped through her, leaving her breathless. Isphet instantly believed it was Andy reincarnated to be with her. She sat beside the grave, one hand absently petting the small rodent, the other playing with the toy, as she spoke to her brother, telling him everything about what had happened since her last visit, a week ago. What she had been doing at school, the people who had tried to speak to her. Her weekly visits with her brother were the only times she spoke, which frustrated her teachers to no end,
One year and 52 visits later, we come to the present day where our story continues.
☐ Passives: - [Stealth Passive] Users are stealthier than others their rank and if they are hiding can only be seen via a dojutsu/technique that spots chakra/life force or by someone with 1 rank in perception higher than their rank. - Can manipulate shadows - 20% Chakra reduction to Clan Techniques - 25% Chakra reduction to chakra based techniques - Ability to sense chakra, no matter how away in the thread they are. - Can suppress own chakra to become 'invisible' to other sensors.
☐ Personal Attributes: (I havnt decided on one, I will run it by crew obviously, before giving her one XD) -
☐ Strengths: - Can use shadows on the battle field to capture her prey. - Close combat - Can move silently ☐ Weakness: - Fighting in open spaces - - Prolonged battles ☐ Fears: - Natural disasters - Snakes - Ladders
☐ Missions: - D: - C: - B: - A: - S:
☐ Special Items: - - -
☐ Weapons: - Six Kunai - Ten Shuriken - Two Explosive tags - Ten Senbon - Four Smoke Bombs
Its going to be funny when tsuki has a tsunami and a hurricane at the same time :3 approved! All you have to do is pm me when you decide on a personal attribute. Bbeh, you fine thang~
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Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 12:53 pm
▌ＭＡＩＮ ＩＮＦＯＲＭＡＴＩＯＮ ▌ ☐ Name: Kuchiro Ishida Mistalune ☐ Nickname/Famous Name: The Two-Tailed Demon Cat/Yuki's Dragon of Smoldering Ash
☐ Age: 18 ☐ Birthdate: 12/25
☐ Gender: Male ☐ Sexuality: Heterosexual ☐ Ethnicity: Caucasian/Japanese
☐ Height: 5'9'' ☐ Weight: 143lbs
☐ Personality: A man of valor and dignity, Kuchiro is loyal to those who places immediate ties to. As a genin without established relationships, his loyalties would be to Yuki and to the Yukikage. He is dedicated to intense training in preparation for the Chunin Exams. Kuchiro will become a Chunin, even if it means killing his opponents. While many jinchuuriki deal with isolation and bullying, Kuchiro is far too emotionally secure and strong willed to be brought down by such weak attempts to troll. But, this is in part to the fact that he really doesn't acknowledge that he is a jinchuuriki as it has not surfaced since he was a child. Kuchiro is not one to follow the rules set in stone by authority, and is at many times a serious troublemaker. It is known that if one tells him to not do something, more than likely he will do it to intentionally upset that command. While he is young and sometimes childish, if the situation demands it of him, he will meet the seriousness with a cool and calm state of mind where he makes rational decisions. He always puts the lives of others before his own, no matter what. His focus on mastering his Fire Style element is his current training and it will not be interrupted. ☐ Family: Father: Ishin Kishiki Mistalune (Deceased) Mother: Kaoru Nahasa Mistalune (Deceased) Matatabi: Relationship yet to be bonded.
☐ Theme Song:When The Lights Are Down, Kamelot ☐ Nindo: "I walk a road of fiery destruction. And in my wake, the wake of a dragon, I will scorch the ninja world. A legend paved in the remnants of smoldering ash." ☐ Background: Kuchiro had grown up in Yukigakure his whole life. It was a place that was friendly to those who lived there, but outsiders were not so welcomed. The harsh climate presented a cold environment met with blizzards and constant snowy days. It was ironic, that a place of such a cold climate would be attacked by such a hot creature. The Two-Tailed demon had been running free for some time. They tried sealing it before, but it was simply too fast and too intelligent to be caught. It took to hiding in places it was not expected to be found. However, the Yukikage and their sealing squad were able to locate the Two-Tailed. They located the demon and after a long and grueling battle, which cost many Yuki shinobi their lives, they were able to seal the demon in Kuchiro. Kuchiro was only a boy then, a boy who volunteered not by choice, but by sheer shock. They convinced him then that this was the only way to stop the Two-Tailed from killing more people. More people other than his father and mother who died fighting the Two-Tailed as it rampaged. Of course, once the sealing was finished, Kuchiro passed out before waking up in a hospital. He had amnesia and forgot that he had been chosen as the jinchuuriki. Years passed by and the demon within him laid dormant. Kuchiro would not be reminded that the Two-Tailed existed until much later in his life. He finished his years at the academy, the local academy and became a proud aspiring genin. He noted an aptitude for the flame element and devoted his time to preparation for the Chunin Exams.
☐ Element(s):Katon - Fire Style ☐ Chakra Points: 20
☐ Passives: • Ninjutsu Mastery [1/2 Rank in Ninjutsu Increase] (Class) • Fire Resistance and Mastery (Demon) • Speed bonus (Demon)
☐ Personal Attributes: Lethal Fire - Using his supreme mastery over the Fire nature, Kuchiro has increased the potency of all of his Fire techniques. [Fire Style 1/2 rank stronger] Flame Prodigy - Having the Matatabi and focusing on mastering his single nature Fire, has given Kuchiro an advanced control over that nature. [20% Reduction in chakra cost for Fire Style Techniques.] Fireskin - After having constant exposure to intense flames, Kuchiro has developed an affinity for resisting fire damage. [All Fire Style techniques cause -2 ranks of damage on impacting Kuchiro.] Burning Sensation - Using his Fire nature, if Kuchiro is caught in a genjutsu, he may set himself ablaze, which will break the genjutsu. This will not work if the genjutsu is of a higher rank than he is or if the genjutsu has some unique circumstance where physical pain will not free Kuchiro from its affects. [All genjutsu equal to Kuchiro's rank may be cancelled]
☐ Strengths: -I attack at long-range with Fire Style techniques. -I have a Tailed Beast. -My ability to adapt to the combat situation. ☐ Weakness: -I avoid close-range combat. -My Fire Style is chakra heavy. -Working with others, as my attacks attack everything in the vicinity. ☐ Fears: -I really don't want to be rejected by my friends. -Losing my Fire nature. -Complete darkness.
Nice choice of music, my friend. Couple of things, though. *Ninjutsu and Ninjutsu Paths - We're currently in the works of changing the Ninjutsu Class, essentially giving the Paths buffs and fine tuning them for better results. Just letting you know.
*Personal Attributes - Demons do not take Personal Attribute slots, so you have a total of five slots to play with. However, even with the added P.A. slot, you'll need to change Fireskin and Burning Sensation.
Fireskin - After having constant exposure to intense flames, Kuchiro has developed an affinity for resisting fire damage. [All Fire Style techniques cause -2 ranks of damage on impacting Kuchiro.]
Ok, so the general rule about increase or decreasing a particular type of attack's power is by the 1/2 rank rule. Essentially a P.A. can be used to increase/decrease by 1/2 rank. With your other P.A.s, you'll only be able to lower the damage dealt by Fire techniques by one rank, not two. If you delete Burning Sensation, you can decrease the damage by another 1/2, making the total 1 1/2 ranks.
Burning Sensation - Using his Fire nature, if Kuchiro is caught in a genjutsu, he may set himself ablaze, which will break the genjutsu. This will not work if the genjutsu is of a higher rank than he is or if the genjutsu has some unique circumstance where physical pain will not free Kuchiro from its affects. [All genjutsu equal to Kuchiro's rank may be cancelled]
This will require a chakra cost equal to the rank of the genjutsu casted on Kuchiro. You can either have it happen automatically or once Kuchiro realizes he's in a genjutsu. HOWEVER!!!!!!!! The chakra cost will increase a total of [2] chakra points per genjutsu broken out of after the first. So if you get caught in four genjutsus, Burning Sensation will cost (Equal to Genjutsu's Rank + ([2]+[2]+[2]). So if the fourth genjutsu is a C-Rank, it will cost (5+2+2+2)= 11 chakra.
As I said, you can chose to have it happen not automatically. However, on top of the chakra cost equal to the genjutsu's rank, you have a upkeep of [1] post being within the genjutsu per illusion after the first. So, five genjutsus broken. Regardless of rank, you stay in the genjutsu for two posts. This means until you reach the limit, you cannot break out of the technique. This does not mean you need to use your Burning Sensation to Kai out of a genjutsu. (You can save it for when you really need it).
It's a pretty strong P.A, so the pay offs of extensive use are harsh. Either path taken, this P.A. will replace your Kai technique.
Nice choice of music, my friend. Couple of things, though. *Ninjutsu and Ninjutsu Paths - We're currently in the works of changing the Ninjutsu Class, essentially giving the Paths buffs and fine tuning them for better results. Just letting you know.
*Personal Attributes - Demons do not take Personal Attribute slots, so you have a total of five slots to play with. However, even with the added P.A. slot, you'll need to change Fireskin and Burning Sensation.
Fireskin - After having constant exposure to intense flames, Kuchiro has developed an affinity for resisting fire damage. [All Fire Style techniques cause -2 ranks of damage on impacting Kuchiro.]
Ok, so the general rule about increase or decreasing a particular type of attack's power is by the 1/2 rank rule. Essentially a P.A. can be used to increase/decrease by 1/2 rank. With your other P.A.s, you'll only be able to lower the damage dealt by Fire techniques by one rank, not two. If you delete Burning Sensation, you can decrease the damage by another 1/2, making the total 1 1/2 ranks.
Burning Sensation - Using his Fire nature, if Kuchiro is caught in a genjutsu, he may set himself ablaze, which will break the genjutsu. This will not work if the genjutsu is of a higher rank than he is or if the genjutsu has some unique circumstance where physical pain will not free Kuchiro from its affects. [All genjutsu equal to Kuchiro's rank may be cancelled]
This will require a chakra cost equal to the rank of the genjutsu casted on Kuchiro. You can either have it happen automatically or once Kuchiro realizes he's in a genjutsu. HOWEVER!!!!!!!! The chakra cost will increase a total of [2] chakra points per genjutsu broken out of after the first. So if you get caught in four genjutsus, Burning Sensation will cost (Equal to Genjutsu's Rank + ([2]+[2]+[2]). So if the fourth genjutsu is a C-Rank, it will cost (5+2+2+2)= 11 chakra.
As I said, you can chose to have it happen not automatically. However, on top of the chakra cost equal to the genjutsu's rank, you have a upkeep of [1] post being within the genjutsu per illusion after the first. So, five genjutsus broken. Regardless of rank, you stay in the genjutsu for two posts. This means until you reach the limit, you cannot break out of the technique. This does not mean you need to use your Burning Sensation to Kai out of a genjutsu. (You can save it for when you really need it).
It's a pretty strong P.A, so the pay offs of extensive use are harsh. Either path taken, this P.A. will replace your Kai technique.
I don't want the Kai technique at all.
I agree to making Fireskin only 1/2 instead of 2. I thought 2 was a little too much to get away with anyway. Since, fire resistance can be trained, I really don't need 2.
And I actually like what you are requiring for Burning Sensation. So, say I'm against a genjutsu user. I break out of his first technique. He gets me again. So then it's that same cost of his technique +2 chakra points. And this increases as the battle escalates. Seems fair to me. I don't want it instant though. It would be stupid if I don't at least acknowledge the genjutsu. The RPC would have to at least recognize he is in one, to counter it. Do you mind if I add your exact wording to the P.A.?
And, I have a free slot still?
Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 5:53 pm
Kuchiro Mistalune
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Kuchiro Mistalune
Nice choice of music, my friend. Couple of things, though. *Ninjutsu and Ninjutsu Paths - We're currently in the works of changing the Ninjutsu Class, essentially giving the Paths buffs and fine tuning them for better results. Just letting you know.
*Personal Attributes - Demons do not take Personal Attribute slots, so you have a total of five slots to play with. However, even with the added P.A. slot, you'll need to change Fireskin and Burning Sensation.
Fireskin - After having constant exposure to intense flames, Kuchiro has developed an affinity for resisting fire damage. [All Fire Style techniques cause -2 ranks of damage on impacting Kuchiro.]
Ok, so the general rule about increase or decreasing a particular type of attack's power is by the 1/2 rank rule. Essentially a P.A. can be used to increase/decrease by 1/2 rank. With your other P.A.s, you'll only be able to lower the damage dealt by Fire techniques by one rank, not two. If you delete Burning Sensation, you can decrease the damage by another 1/2, making the total 1 1/2 ranks.
Burning Sensation - Using his Fire nature, if Kuchiro is caught in a genjutsu, he may set himself ablaze, which will break the genjutsu. This will not work if the genjutsu is of a higher rank than he is or if the genjutsu has some unique circumstance where physical pain will not free Kuchiro from its affects. [All genjutsu equal to Kuchiro's rank may be cancelled]
This will require a chakra cost equal to the rank of the genjutsu casted on Kuchiro. You can either have it happen automatically or once Kuchiro realizes he's in a genjutsu. HOWEVER!!!!!!!! The chakra cost will increase a total of [2] chakra points per genjutsu broken out of after the first. So if you get caught in four genjutsus, Burning Sensation will cost (Equal to Genjutsu's Rank + ([2]+[2]+[2]). So if the fourth genjutsu is a C-Rank, it will cost (5+2+2+2)= 11 chakra.
As I said, you can chose to have it happen not automatically. However, on top of the chakra cost equal to the genjutsu's rank, you have a upkeep of [1] post being within the genjutsu per illusion after the first. So, five genjutsus broken. Regardless of rank, you stay in the genjutsu for two posts. This means until you reach the limit, you cannot break out of the technique. This does not mean you need to use your Burning Sensation to Kai out of a genjutsu. (You can save it for when you really need it).
It's a pretty strong P.A, so the pay offs of extensive use are harsh. Either path taken, this P.A. will replace your Kai technique.
I don't want the Kai technique at all.
I agree to making Fireskin only 1/2 instead of 2. I thought 2 was a little too much to get away with anyway. Since, fire resistance can be trained, I really don't need 2.
And I actually like what you are requiring for Burning Sensation. So, say I'm against a genjutsu user. I break out of his first technique. He gets me again. So then it's that same cost of his technique +2 chakra points. And this increases as the battle escalates. Seems fair to me. I don't want it instant though. It would be stupid if I don't at least acknowledge the genjutsu. The RPC would have to at least recognize he is in one, to counter it. Do you mind if I add your exact wording to the P.A.?
And, I have a free slot still?
Not at all, and yes. Essentially, you have five slots to give your character something unique. Every buffer for an increase or decrease is equal to 1/2 per P.A. used. Making Fireskin only a 1/2 rank reduction makes it only take one P.A. Lethal Fire, Flame Prodigy, Fireskin, and Burning Sensation only takes up 4 P.A.s, so you have one left.
☐ Name: Kuchiro Ishida Mistalune ☐ Nickname/Famous Name: The Two-Tailed Demon Cat/Yuki's Dragon of Smoldering Ash
☐ Age: 18 ☐ Birthdate: 12/25
☐ Gender: Male ☐ Sexuality: Heterosexual ☐ Ethnicity: Caucasian/Japanese
☐ Height: 5'9'' ☐ Weight: 143lbs
☐ Personality: A man of valor and dignity, Kuchiro is loyal to those who places immediate ties to. As a genin without established relationships, his loyalties would be to Yuki and to the Yukikage. He is dedicated to intense training in preparation for the Chunin Exams. Kuchiro will become a Chunin, even if it means killing his opponents. While many jinchuuriki deal with isolation and bullying, Kuchiro is far too emotionally secure and strong willed to be brought down by such weak attempts to troll. But, this is in part to the fact that he really doesn't acknowledge that he is a jinchuuriki as it has not surfaced since he was a child. Kuchiro is not one to follow the rules set in stone by authority, and is at many times a serious troublemaker. It is known that if one tells him to not do something, more than likely he will do it to intentionally upset that command. While he is young and sometimes childish, if the situation demands it of him, he will meet the seriousness with a cool and calm state of mind where he makes rational decisions. He always puts the lives of others before his own, no matter what. His focus on mastering his Fire Style element is his current training and it will not be interrupted. ☐ Family: Father: Ishin Kishiki Mistalune (Deceased) Mother: Kaoru Nahasa Mistalune (Deceased) Matatabi: Relationship yet to be bonded.
☐ Theme Song:When The Lights Are Down, Kamelot ☐ Nindo: "I walk a road of fiery destruction. And in my wake, the wake of a dragon, I will scorch the ninja world. A legend paved in the remnants of smoldering ash." ☐ Background: Kuchiro had grown up in Yukigakure his whole life. It was a place that was friendly to those who lived there, but outsiders were not so welcomed. The harsh climate presented a cold environment met with blizzards and constant snowy days. It was ironic, that a place of such a cold climate would be attacked by such a hot creature. The Two-Tailed demon had been running free for some time. They tried sealing it before, but it was simply too fast and too intelligent to be caught. It took to hiding in places it was not expected to be found. However, the Yukikage and their sealing squad were able to locate the Two-Tailed. They located the demon and after a long and grueling battle, which cost many Yuki shinobi their lives, they were able to seal the demon in Kuchiro. Kuchiro was only a boy then, a boy who volunteered not by choice, but by sheer shock. They convinced him then that this was the only way to stop the Two-Tailed from killing more people. More people other than his father and mother who died fighting the Two-Tailed as it rampaged. Of course, once the sealing was finished, Kuchiro passed out before waking up in a hospital. He had amnesia and forgot that he had been chosen as the jinchuuriki. Years passed by and the demon within him laid dormant. Kuchiro would not be reminded that the Two-Tailed existed until much later in his life. He finished his years at the academy, the local academy and became a proud aspiring genin. He noted an aptitude for the flame element and devoted his time to preparation for the Chunin Exams.
☐ Element(s):Katon - Fire Style ☐ Chakra Points: 20
☐ Passives: • Ninjutsu Mastery [1/2 Rank in Ninjutsu Increase] (Class) • Fire Resistance and Mastery (Demon) • Speed bonus (Demon)
☐ Personal Attributes: Lethal Fire - Using his supreme mastery over the Fire nature, Kuchiro has increased the potency of all of his Fire techniques. [Fire Style 1/2 rank stronger] Flame Prodigy - Having the Matatabi and focusing on mastering his single nature Fire, has given Kuchiro an advanced control over that nature. [20% Reduction in chakra cost for Fire Style Techniques.] Fireskin - After having constant exposure to intense flames, Kuchiro has developed an affinity for resisting fire damage. [1/2 reduction to all Fire Style Jutsu damage to Kuchiro] Burning Sensation - Using his Fire nature, if Kuchiro is caught in a genjutsu, he may set himself ablaze, which will break the genjutsu. This will not work if the genjutsu is of a higher rank than he is or if the genjutsu has some unique circumstance where physical pain will not free Kuchiro from its affects. [This requires a rank of chakra cost equal to the cost of the genjutsu technique negated. Additionally, it is not instant. It takes at least 1 post for Kuchiro to realize he is in a genjutsu. And for further genjutsu that Kuchiro breaks out of it costs an additional 2 chakra points. Furthermore, for every genjutsu broken after the first, Kuchiro must be within the genjutsu for 1 post longer. For example, if Kuchiro breaks out of 5 genjutsus all being D-rank it costs him 10 + 8 = 18 chakra and in order to escape his 5th genjutsu he has to at least be in the genjutsu for 4 posts.] Will of Fire - Kuchiro was told as a child stories of the people of Konoha, shinobi who had inherited this beautiful ideology of the will of fire. After reading a scroll about this will of fire, he felt something inside him wake up. He inherited Konoha's will of fire. That the shinobi world could be brought peace through love. [1/2 rank to perception]
☐ Strengths: -I attack at long-range with Fire Style techniques. -I have a Tailed Beast. -My ability to adapt to the combat situation. ☐ Weakness: -I avoid close-range combat. -My Fire Style is chakra heavy. -Working with others, as my attacks attack everything in the vicinity. ☐ Fears: -I really don't want to be rejected by my friends. -Losing my Fire nature. -Complete darkness.
☐ Weapon Name:Katana of the Lost Dragon [Link to accepted] ☐ Length: 30 inches of blade length. 9 1/2 inch hilt. 39 1/2 inches worth of reach. ☐ Item Cost: 1500 and must be found in RP ☐ Chakra Cost: C-Rank chakra for the stream of fire ☐ Description: A family heirloom, passed through the family to the next heir. It was forged in the Land of Lightning, where the best blacksmiths exist. Kuchiro Mistalune, being the last and most current heir to the Mistalune family had found the blade in their old home. It is made of tempered cold steel and sharpened to deadly perfection. There is an inscription on the blade that says "The Dragon Dreams!" What distinguishes this blade from an average katana, is the fact that it has two special effects. Firstly, if the blade is rubbed by the user along the inscription, the inscription will change to "The Dragon Rages!" At this point, the blade will then glow a crimson red, where following a slash a stream of fire is unleashed similar to the breath of a dragon in a cone formation. This flame reaches out to about 10 feet in front of the user. The second effect possible, is that if someone takes the blade that is not of Mistalune blood, the blade's inscription will change on its own to "The Dragon Weeps!", by which follows the blade's hilt will super heat before the blade unleashes an explosion of flames in a 10 foot radius around the blade.
Will of Fire - I meant that you need to pick either a Chakra Upkeep of [2] points every genjutsu you break out of or a genjutsu lengthen of [1] post every [2] genjutsus broken out of. You don't need to succumb to both penalties. Choose one, edit out the other, and you're approved.
Will of Fire - I meant that you need to pick either a Chakra Upkeep of [2] points every genjutsu you break out of or a genjutsu lengthen of [1] post every [2] genjutsus broken out of. You don't need to succumb to both penalties. Choose one, edit out the other, and you're approved.
xD I'll go with the second one. Btw, my honest reason for having that, is that I've noticed the large number of genjutsu users in the guild. And I think I will actually be using that technique. Thank you so much for your patience. Excellent moderation.
Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 7:05 pm
Final product.
▌ＭＡＩＮ ＩＮＦＯＲＭＡＴＩＯＮ ▌
☐ Name: Kuchiro Ishida Mistalune ☐ Nickname/Famous Name: The Two-Tailed Demon Cat/Yuki's Dragon of Smoldering Ash
☐ Age: 18 ☐ Birthdate: 12/25
☐ Gender: Male ☐ Sexuality: Heterosexual ☐ Ethnicity: Caucasian/Japanese
☐ Height: 5'9'' ☐ Weight: 143lbs
☐ Personality: A man of valor and dignity, Kuchiro is loyal to those who places immediate ties to. As a genin without established relationships, his loyalties would be to Yuki and to the Yukikage. He is dedicated to intense training in preparation for the Chunin Exams. Kuchiro will become a Chunin, even if it means killing his opponents. While many jinchuuriki deal with isolation and bullying, Kuchiro is far too emotionally secure and strong willed to be brought down by such weak attempts to troll. But, this is in part to the fact that he really doesn't acknowledge that he is a jinchuuriki as it has not surfaced since he was a child. Kuchiro is not one to follow the rules set in stone by authority, and is at many times a serious troublemaker. It is known that if one tells him to not do something, more than likely he will do it to intentionally upset that command. While he is young and sometimes childish, if the situation demands it of him, he will meet the seriousness with a cool and calm state of mind where he makes rational decisions. He always puts the lives of others before his own, no matter what. His focus on mastering his Fire Style element is his current training and it will not be interrupted. ☐ Family: Father: Ishin Kishiki Mistalune (Deceased) Mother: Kaoru Nahasa Mistalune (Deceased) Matatabi: Relationship yet to be bonded.
☐ Theme Song:When The Lights Are Down, Kamelot ☐ Nindo: "I walk a road of fiery destruction. And in my wake, the wake of a dragon, I will scorch the ninja world. A legend paved in the remnants of smoldering ash." ☐ Background: Kuchiro had grown up in Yukigakure his whole life. It was a place that was friendly to those who lived there, but outsiders were not so welcomed. The harsh climate presented a cold environment met with blizzards and constant snowy days. It was ironic, that a place of such a cold climate would be attacked by such a hot creature. The Two-Tailed demon had been running free for some time. They tried sealing it before, but it was simply too fast and too intelligent to be caught. It took to hiding in places it was not expected to be found. However, the Yukikage and their sealing squad were able to locate the Two-Tailed. They located the demon and after a long and grueling battle, which cost many Yuki shinobi their lives, they were able to seal the demon in Kuchiro. Kuchiro was only a boy then, a boy who volunteered not by choice, but by sheer shock. They convinced him then that this was the only way to stop the Two-Tailed from killing more people. More people other than his father and mother who died fighting the Two-Tailed as it rampaged. Of course, once the sealing was finished, Kuchiro passed out before waking up in a hospital. He had amnesia and forgot that he had been chosen as the jinchuuriki. Years passed by and the demon within him laid dormant. Kuchiro would not be reminded that the Two-Tailed existed until much later in his life. He finished his years at the academy, the local academy and became a proud aspiring genin. He noted an aptitude for the flame element and devoted his time to preparation for the Chunin Exams.
☐ Element(s):Katon - Fire Style ☐ Chakra Points: 20
☐ Passives: • Ninjutsu Mastery [1/2 Rank in Ninjutsu Increase] (Class) • Fire Resistance and Mastery (Demon) • Speed bonus (Demon)
☐ Personal Attributes: Lethal Fire - Using his supreme mastery over the Fire nature, Kuchiro has increased the potency of all of his Fire techniques. [Fire Style 1/2 rank stronger] Flame Prodigy - Having the Matatabi and focusing on mastering his single nature Fire, has given Kuchiro an advanced control over that nature. [20% Reduction in chakra cost for Fire Style Techniques.] Fireskin - After having constant exposure to intense flames, Kuchiro has developed an affinity for resisting fire damage. [1/2 reduction to all Fire Style Jutsu damage to Kuchiro] Burning Sensation - Using his Fire nature, if Kuchiro is caught in a genjutsu, he may set himself ablaze, which will break the genjutsu. This will not work if the genjutsu is of a higher rank than he is or if the genjutsu has some unique circumstance where physical pain will not free Kuchiro from its affects. [This requires a rank of chakra cost equal to the cost of the genjutsu technique negated. Additionally, it is not instant. It takes at least 1 post for Kuchiro to realize he is in a genjutsu. For every 2 genjutsu broken out of, Kuchiro must endure the next genjutsu for 1 additional post before breaking free. Will of Fire - Kuchiro was told as a child stories of the people of Konoha, shinobi who had inherited this beautiful ideology of the will of fire. After reading a scroll about this will of fire, he felt something inside him wake up. He inherited Konoha's will of fire. That the shinobi world could be brought peace through love. [1/2 rank to perception]
☐ Strengths: -I attack at long-range with Fire Style techniques. -I have a Tailed Beast. -My ability to adapt to the combat situation. ☐ Weakness: -I avoid close-range combat. -My Fire Style is chakra heavy. -Working with others, as my attacks attack everything in the vicinity. ☐ Fears: -I really don't want to be rejected by my friends. -Losing my Fire nature. -Complete darkness.
☐ Weapon Name:Katana of the Lost Dragon [Link to accepted] ☐ Length: 30 inches of blade length. 9 1/2 inch hilt. 39 1/2 inches worth of reach. ☐ Item Cost: 1500 and must be found in RP ☐ Chakra Cost: C-Rank chakra for the stream of fire ☐ Description: A family heirloom, passed through the family to the next heir. It was forged in the Land of Lightning, where the best blacksmiths exist. Kuchiro Mistalune, being the last and most current heir to the Mistalune family had found the blade in their old home. It is made of tempered cold steel and sharpened to deadly perfection. There is an inscription on the blade that says "The Dragon Dreams!" What distinguishes this blade from an average katana, is the fact that it has two special effects. Firstly, if the blade is rubbed by the user along the inscription, the inscription will change to "The Dragon Rages!" At this point, the blade will then glow a crimson red, where following a slash a stream of fire is unleashed similar to the breath of a dragon in a cone formation. This flame reaches out to about 10 feet in front of the user. The second effect possible, is that if someone takes the blade that is not of Mistalune blood, the blade's inscription will change on its own to "The Dragon Weeps!", by which follows the blade's hilt will super heat before the blade unleashes an explosion of flames in a 10 foot radius around the blade.
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