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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 2:24 pm
xX Magic and Mystery Xx StrawberryZ0mbie He's approved. I just have one question (doesn't affect approval, it's just clarification)--the over creative liar bit. Does he do this intentionally, or is he just kind of prone to exaggerate? Intentionally. emotion_donotwant He's like a used car salesman, twisting the truth to make it sound better than it actually is. Okay! That's great then. The wording just made me unsure. Anyway, I like him. He seems fun. <3
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 3:40 pm
Marc has been press ganged by Mhai into rejoining the RP. xP I need to reformat his profile and I will repost it here before putting it back in my thread. Mhai also wanted me to post a spell casting teacher since that's an important class so here he is. StrawberryZombie presents. . . Yulian Jacobs department: Spellcasting Teacher "If you wait too long to act, the chance to reach your dream may slip away." ⋆ ⋆ ⋆THE RESONANCE SKIES FILES⋆ ⋆ ⋆ classified ❥nickname: Ian ❥age: 25 ❥gender: Male ❥height and weight: 180 cm and 61 kg ❥blood type: A ❥sexual orientation: Straight ❥status: Single ❥birthday: January 30 ❥zodiac sign : Capricorn ❥appearance: Ian stands at about 5'11" when he stands up straight, which is rarely. Due to a genetic condition, his spine and legs are very weak causing severe lack of lower body strength and coordination. He is able to walk with the use of a cane and special leg braces but on bad day has to resort to using crutches or even a wheelchair sometimes. He has hazel eyes and light brown hair long enough to be kept in a short ponytail. Tends to dress business casual and wear an old newsboy cap. Has a lot of uper body strength due to working out. ❥personality: Ian is a friendly, sweet guy that likes to joke around and tease his students. In spite of his disability, he's a fun loving, optimistic guy who is rarely down in the dumps. He tries to be self sufficient and hates having to rely on others, but is resigned to the fact that he has physical limitations that prevent him from being as agile and efficient as other people. As much as he hates it, he will ask for help when he needs it, albeit grudgingly.
Though he comes across as a somewhat gregarious extrovert, Ian wasn't always so outgoing and used to be quite shy as a teen. Though hes's overcome many of his insecurities, he's still a little lacking in confidence and can still be a bit bashful--particularly when people compliment him, or when there are women around. ❥character flaws: ✖ Inferiority complex - as much as he has tried to overcome this, he still lacks confidence because of his handicap. Tends to expect people to look down on him for it. ✖ Idealist - Ian is something of an idealist, always trying to believe the best in people. This might be a good thing except that he frequently has unrealistic hopes and expectations, leading to frequent disappointment. ✖ Impatient - he does not like to wait and tends to fidget or get annoyed if things are going too slowly. ✖ Perverted - Well, he likes to pretend he's not but he fails in relationships and is kind of affection starved so he is a full blown closet pervert. ✖ Weak willed - cannot resist temptation of any kind. He has no will power at all and easily gives in to other people or to personal temptations. ❥ability: ~Healing ~Sanctuary ❥talents: sculpting - he may not look it, but Ian has a love for sculpting. Being confined to a chair for much of his early life, led him to find activities he could do with his hands and this is one of his favorites.
origami - another thing he's remarkably good at due to his limited physical capabilities as a child.
good with his hands - in general, he's just...good with his hands. Tends to be good at making things and building stuff. ❥bio: Ian and his older brother Scott were orphaned at a young age and raised as wards of the state. Because the two of them had to stay together, and because of Ian's disability (which he was born with), Ian and his brother were considered hard to place, and never had the opportunity to be adopted. They were raised by the orphanage and it wasn't until Scott was old enough to take guardianship of Ian and pull him out, that they finally left and began to live on their own.
Ian spent much of his childhood in a bed, then finally a wheelchair when the orphanage could afford one for him. He was frequently bullied and almost always excluded from things by the other children. Scott gave up on so much to constantly look out for him that Ian began to develop a complex over having people help him. He hated the idea of holding his brother back and would push himself to be involved in things for Scott's sake.
Unfortunately, most of the other children were not accepting of his disability and Ian became a shy, withdrawn little boy who was often left on his own.
After he and Scott finally left the orphanage, Ian was involved in an accident that resulted in a painful tumble down a steep embankment in his wheelchair. He received a serious back injury (and still has a large scar across his back. His recovery was long and the medical bills extensive.
Fortunately a charitable patron of the hospital donated to Ian's recovery and also helped him acquire braces with which he learned to walk for the first time in his life.
Ian finally managed to come out of his shell and eventually ended up at Resonance Skies as a teacher. ❥likes: ✔ watching sports ✔ girls ✔ swimming ✔ helping people ✔ jack daniels ✔ dogs ✔ playing cards
❥dislikes: ✖ coffee ✖ people who are judgemental ✖ overly serious people ✖ violence ✖ arguing and bickering ❥extra information: Ian's braces are worn under his trousers so usually they can't be seen. They do make audible clicking and whirring sounds as he walks though.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 4:07 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie presents. . . Marcarius Loewe department:Astronomy Student "I spent my whole life trying not to be careless. Women and children can afford to be careless, but not men." ⋆ ⋆ ⋆THE RESONANCE SKIES FILES⋆ ⋆ ⋆ classified ❥nickname: Marc ❥age: 17 ❥gender: Male ❥height and weight: 191 cm 64 kg ❥blood type: AB ❥sexual orientation: Straight ❥status: Single ❥birthday: November 4th ❥zodiac sign : Scorpio ❥appearance: Tall and well built, Marcarius has a slightly imposing figure. He has brown hair that he keeps neatly trimmed, and green eyes. He is extremely well dressed, always wearing the most expensive brands. Whether in school or out, he keeps himself well groomed and looking good. He tends to dress on the formal side, even outside of class, often opting for a nice shirt and slacks, even when it's not required. Seeing him in jeans would be extremely unusual.
He has a large tattoo of a lion and an iron cross on his back, in reference to his family name, which means "lion." ❥personality: Though he likes to present a calm, collected front, Marc is high strung and exciteable. He is easily flustered or sent into a panic. He has a great deal of insecurities, but also a lot of pride. Even trivial mistakes will haunt him for months, even years. But if he holds himself to a high standard, he holds others to a high standard as well. And those who don't meet the standard, he treats with open scorn.
Something of a misogynist, Marcarius doesn't have a need or desire for romance as he finds most females frivolous and dull. That isn't to say shrewd girls with a good head on their shoulders can't catch his eye. But he has no use for anyone good for little else besides being someone else's arm candy. Due to his somewhat chauvinistic outlook, he's more comfortable in the company of men than women; he simply cannot relate to the fairer sex and has little respect for women in general. Despite his upbringing, he has a strong sense of honor and tries to always keep his word. ❥character flaws: ✖ misogynist - he's a sexist jerk that hates women and treats them like crap ✖ arrogant - thinks he's better than everyone else ✖ ruthless - has absolutely no mercy toward people he dislikes ✖ difficult to please - he has high standards which most people cannot meet ✖ cold - comes across quite emotionless and doesn't seem to care for others besides himself ❥ability: (ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE) ❥talents: playing piano-taking piano lessons since he was small, Marc is a fairly good player. marksman - he's a fair to decent shot with most guns. deductive reasoning- Marc is fairly good with puzzles and mysteries. He's a very logical person and can easily pick up on clues and piece them together to solve problems. ❥bio: The Loewe family heads a fairly large, notorious crime syndicate in one of the nation's largest cities. Headed by Gaspare Loewe, Marc's father, the family is heavily entrenched in a variety of shady businesses from selling information, weapons or technology on the black market, to loan sharking, and illegal gambling--not to mention extortionism. A mafia family with a strong wizarding heritage is certainly a force to be reckoned with the underground, and Marc, as the only son of the Don, has been groomed to head the family himself, one day.
He has been surrounded by a world of crime and death since he was very young and his father never once made an effort to shield his son from the grim reality of the family business. Marc, in turn, has never tried to turn away or hide from what his family does.
Having been part of several shoot outs and battles, Marc was finally sent to Resonance Skies after several attempts on his life, and a nearly successful kidnapping attempt. Gaspare thought it would be best to secret him away in a safe place for a while, until things with rival families cooled down. But even so, occasionally his men can be seen lurking about the grounds, keeping an eye on the only heir to the Loewe family.
Marc doesn't especially try to hide who his family is, but neither does he really boast about it or draw attention to it. If people assume he's the son of some other Loewes, that is fine with him, and probably for the best. ❥likes: ✔ logic ✔ literature ✔ decent conversation ✔ hot chocolate ✔ sailing
❥dislikes: ✖ most women ✖ disloyal people ✖ suck ups ✖ liars ✖ simpering, coy or whiny people ❥extra information: Wears a small, gold hoop in his right ear.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:38 pm
Hi there! I've read your profile and so is Berry's comments about Rere.. I shall take over what she left for approval.. But before I do.. While reading your profile thoroughly, I've notice that you made a MAJOR changes from the one you did last time.. Especially the personality and her bio. I'll go through one by one... First, about her appearance, does the pic contradicts her being flat chested? I mean, the pic is somehow 'boingy' so I would like to ask you if you're going to stick about ReRe being flat chested or not?.. Somehow, we are particular when it comes to pics and appearance it must be correlated ^^.. Second, Personality.. Her personality is somehow contradicting with each other, she's sweet, gentle, caring and when she's angry Rere will start yelling even its a plant? >.< Uh.. I think that isn't sound GENTLE.. So, yes.. I suggest you to stick on which personality is she.. If you need help, I could help you out.. Third, about her talents, while going through it, she is somehow PERFECT.. Cooking better than chef's, Gunnery and a good sneaker.. So, no.. I won't allow her to be like that, just to be fair with anyone else ^^.. And a sweet and gentle girl handling guns >.< is somewhat a little confusing.. Fourth, her bio.. The last time I go through it.. The Mafia is not yet included.. But, we almost had two characters being part of a mafia.. So, I'll request you to make her bio unique.. Rui is going to handle a handful of rebels and headaches if the school turns out to be a nest of mafia mobs.. And yes, her personality being sweet, gentle is contadicting again.. To sum it all, Bunnie, before I approve your profile, I suggest you have to make Rere unique and original ^^.. As much as possible, we're encouraging members to have their profiles somehow unique, that way, our characters will interact better.. Like I've said, if you want help, me and berry shall help you.. ^^
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:12 pm
Ah yes,Im sorry about that.Im re-making her profile right now ^^; Sorry if Im putting you through the trouble of telling me all this.I've been trying to put her together when I first made her,and Im afriad to say that my mind is set on one thing of what she should be and the other with the way Im used to -as you know that I like making the shy girls =w =; - As for her talent's,Im taking the last two out and adding one's that would be more suited to her and make her stick out less along that they would be suited to the new bio.The flaw's of course,will also be fixed along with her personality,and I am also taking that flat chested part out > w> All in all,Im sorry again about this all ^^;
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:12 pm
Nah.. its alright ^^.. Since this guild is a learning ground too.. If you're done.. I'll go through it again.. Just tell me.. And we'll help you. We even start out that way too xD.. haha.. So yeah, just quote me when you're done
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:32 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Marc has been press ganged by Mhai into rejoining the RP. xP I need to reformat his profile and I will repost it here before putting it back in my thread. Mhai also wanted me to post a spell casting teacher since that's an important class so here he is. emotion_awesome Ian is approved and so is Marc again emotion_donotwant
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:36 pm
I just noticed that all the female characters except Angela and Robin are severely underweight. Like...by a lot. emotion_awesome First thing we need to do is establish a support group for eating disorders.
For the record, Angela is slightly underweight for her height because she is supposed to be a very small person. But nearly every other girl in the guild is taller than Angela, but weighs far, far less. In other words, they're all terrifyingly skinny bags of bones.
You guys can find the ideal weight for your character's height online if you google it. =3 Just put "ideal weight for _______" and put their height in. Most likely it will give you sites that have either charts or calculators where you can look up the ideal weight.
Just want to point out that if you want your girl to have any curves at all? Those sexy curves we all love are caused by fat. If your girl is underweight, she has no fat and thus, no curves. No sexy hips, no boobs, no cute booty, and definitely not attractive legs.
Just thought I'd point that out. wink
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:49 pm
Angel Mhai presents. . . JERICHO STEPHEN STUART department: Music Student "I know! I know! This will work! Trust me!! Oh c'mon!" ⋆ ⋆ ⋆THE RESONANCE SKIES FILES⋆ ⋆ ⋆ classified ❥nickname: Eros ❥age: 16 ❥gender: Male ❥height and weight: 160 cm/ 52 kg ❥blood type: A ❥sexual orientation: Straight ❥status: Single ❥birthday: 21st of June ❥zodiac sign : Leo ❥appearance: This guy is 'small but terrible'. He's the shortest of the boys and compromises a small body stature. Likes to wear simple sweaters, tops, pants everything!
His hair goes to dark brown to reddish when being stroke by the rays of sunshine.. Skin is fair and wanted to get himself tan.. The thought of having a fair complexion is somewhat off and gayly for him.. ❥personality: Eros is a very hyperactive boy, he's very energetic and very friendly too. He loves to play and goof around, even though he lacks height, that isn't keeping him away from sports. His curiosity sometimes draws him to trouble..
He's one heck of a stubborn brat and a pain in the neck.. ❥character flaws: ✖Over acting ✖ Mama's boy- Ahh~~ No one can ever beat his mother!.. For him, she's the one and only girl he will really love! ✖ Very hard headed- You told him not to do this... He will definitely do it! ✖ Too loud- He's really noisy! emotion_donotwant Sometimes you can hear him complain, rant and do a lot of talking which requires you to hit that MUTE button really hard!! ✖ Trouble maker- Eros is really a pain in a neck!.. It's normal for him to get himself into trouble every day.. I wonder how would he ever survive ❥ability: (ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE) ❥talents: Mechanics- Eros just assumes he's good at it.. But in reality, he was just curious in twitching and inventing things. And as always, ends up into trouble.. Basketball- He's proud to say that this was one of the sports he's really good at! Height is never an issue when it comes to basketball.. Archery- The very first ability he ever learned. Back on his hometown, Archery is one of the basic skill which they required to learn for a living especially during hunting season. ❥bio: Eros live his days of youth at the Mountains of Tralala.. I know what you're thinking, the name itself certifies that this midget's origin is from the natives of Tralala.. His ancestors are not cavemen, somehow their village is urban.. Huts, clothings are like from the ones we have now and people hunt and tends the farm for a living.
Eros somehow wants to make a difference in their village. Just like other normal teens, he dreamed that someday, his village will prosper.. The reason why he started to do his makeshift inventions out from 'lost things'. Lost things are tools or junks being thrown by tourists visiting the Mountains of Tralala. And with this, he is being seen to brought jinx on his land, for whenever he's around dorking with his inventions, the villagers experienced misfortunes and unexplainable events. It's just because his inventions fail him.. But that didn't stop him from dreaming.
One sunny day, while this young boy is making a makeshift sprinkler in his secret cave hideout. A tourist discovered his refuge and offered to sponsor his studies. Eros accepted and momentarily bid his temporary separation from his parents and the villagers.. Though his mother strongly disagrees to let him go and yet promised her he will bring good news once he graduates. This had made known by the elders and decides to throw a party for him, bestowing him the blessings from their Gods. Well, actually unknown to Eros, they were celebrating that the jinx is gone and their village will be blessed..
The Tourist is so happened the Director of Resonance Skies Academy.. ❥likes: ✔ Inventing things- A natural tinker.. He loves to spend his time inventing stuffs. ✔ Adventures and discovering new things! ✔ Basketball ✔ Archery ✔ Gadgets- He's curious when it comes to this things!
❥dislikes: ✖ To be called as a midget ✖ Messing with his hair ✖ Gays!- For him they were outcasts! ✖ Ketchups and TOMATOES!! ✖ Being pinch at the cheeks ❥extra information: - Eros is always amazed with new things so just ignore him if he's a bit dreamy looking at the TV or other stuffs..
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 10:44 pm
Peter 8D the skinbag!.. haha.. he's approved..
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 10:59 pm
Angel Mhai Peter 8D the skinbag!.. haha.. he's approved.. >D Hehe
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:24 am
StrawberryZ0mbie syllphiel_enna StrawberryZ0mbie Enna, the only "issue" I see with your character is something fairly minor--can you explain what you mean by 'low sense of gender difference'? Mhai and I debated and we're not sure if this should count as a flaw or not because we're not sure if you just mean she's kind of androgynous or something. Otherwise, she's completely fine so as soon as you get that out of the way, I will approve her. ^^ Actually I got the idea from Haruhi (Ouran High Host Club). Low sense of gender difference in a way that she'll strike head on even if she's aware that it's something she couldn't handle. She doesn't care much as to whether you're a man or woman. Like instead of asking for help, she will face enemy's alone because she thinks it's not something dependent in one's gender (you know, the idea where girls can't face thugs and all that). Other thing about it is that because she couldn't see the sense of 'gender' that would somewhat make's her difficult to 'get the point in terms of relationships and stuff. I created the idea that she's the type that couldn't understand why... ummm... an example situation: Ryu hates women... she doesn't get the sense why discriminate thus it could be a start up argument. Hm. Okay, the top part, I can't really visualize. I mean, most people do that unless they're specifically misogynist or chauvinistic. I honestly do not know anyone who differentiates gender when it comes to altercations, again, unless it's someone who is specifically chauvinistic (like guys who won't hit girls). Striking something head on, regardless if you can handle it honestly has nothing to do with gender. Angela literally does the same thing and it hasn't got anything to do with gender and more to do with the fact that she's stubborn and reckless. The last part makes far more sense but at the same time, I can't see it really as a flaw. Think of it like....is it a flaw to not see the point of something others enjoy? I don't see the point of football but that doesn't mean something is wrong with me, really. The only way this would be a flaw is if she was like fanatical about making other people the same way, or did things like try to use the boy's bathroom because she doesn't care about gender dichotomy and has no issues with privacy for that reason. See what I'm saying? Low sense of gender differences seems more like a normal character trait than a real flaw and it's kind of vague. Having said all that, I'm going to approve her because she has four other valid flaws and, really, the character is otherwise perfect so I'm not going to worry about something that trivial. Just keep in mind for future characters that if a flaw is vague, it will probably need a logical explanation listed before we approve it. Anyway, she's approved so you can post your character thread now. =3 Haha... ok got it! I decided to edit the profile just to place that trait into the extra info so at least it wouldn't be too much of a determinant of her whole character. I'll make it as a description for her, instead of making it a major behavior. >.<
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:46 am
Alrighty, she's approved then. 8D
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 2:52 am
She's approved--just remember about changing "fierce" to "passive" instead. =3
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 3:32 pm
Angel Mhai Nah.. its alright ^^.. Since this guild is a learning ground too.. If you're done.. I'll go through it again.. Just tell me.. And we'll help you. We even start out that way too xD.. haha.. So yeah, just quote me when you're done I remade her profile,and hopefully everything is arranged where it should be as well matching her personality. ^^;
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