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Augoeides
Vice Captain

Romantic Hunter

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:41 am


White Water Lilly
lol, just read your post. Don't know why but I laughed. Anyways. It seems I'm gonna be overwhelmed within 6 posts or so. XP

Dang, both nervous and excited. ><


Was it the Condoms?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:52 am


It was definitely the condoms...

Cobra_X
Captain

Aged Gaian


White Water Lilly
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:18 pm


More like his nonchantly attitude towards his junk filled room and the tasting of a randomly found biscuit. XP

Though that video was rather hilarious. Random too. 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:09 pm


Lance Fulgurant

Upon observing your post, I realized you are using the outdated version of the Armor of Wind technique. Please update your profile (if you got your description from it) and your post to reflect the new version.

Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
Description:
The user utilizes his chakra and the wind around him to create a whirlwind around himself. The wind forms a circle around the user, five feet in radius, so ten feet in diameter. The wind picks up debris and acts as armor for the user. The wind armor lasts for three posts. Debris on the ground strengthens the armor and projectiles thrown towards the wind also become part of the armor. Taijutsu is dangerous for the attacker to use against the armor considering the debris it can pick up and whip around within the wind.

...any attack D-rank below attack will be stopped, but will shorten the post duration of this jutsu by one post per hit. A C-rank attack will pass through the barrier, destabilizing the jutsu, but the armor will not fully dispel until the next post (it will still block 1 barrage of non-enhanced projectiles or un-named tai/kenjutsu strike) and will reduce the damage of the attack by 1 rank. Otherwise, without being hit the armor can last for 3 posts, at which point the air dissipates and all of the flying debris is dropped to the ground. This jutsu reduces the visibility of the user of because of the debris, but at the same time obscures opponent(s) view of the user. If you pay double the cost for this jutsu, its duration changes to 5 posts, but it then has a 2 post cool-off once the jutsu ends.
 

Deil Grist
Vice Captain


Cobra_X
Captain

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:57 am


Deil Grist
Lance Fulgurant

Upon observing your post, I realized you are using the outdated version of the Armor of Wind technique. Please update your profile (if you got your description from it) and your post to reflect the new version.

Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
Description:
The user utilizes his chakra and the wind around him to create a whirlwind around himself. The wind forms a circle around the user, five feet in radius, so ten feet in diameter. The wind picks up debris and acts as armor for the user. The wind armor lasts for three posts. Debris on the ground strengthens the armor and projectiles thrown towards the wind also become part of the armor. Taijutsu is dangerous for the attacker to use against the armor considering the debris it can pick up and whip around within the wind.

...any attack D-rank below attack will be stopped, but will shorten the post duration of this jutsu by one post per hit. A C-rank attack will pass through the barrier, destabilizing the jutsu, but the armor will not fully dispel until the next post (it will still block 1 barrage of non-enhanced projectiles or un-named tai/kenjutsu strike) and will reduce the damage of the attack by 1 rank. Otherwise, without being hit the armor can last for 3 posts, at which point the air dissipates and all of the flying debris is dropped to the ground. This jutsu reduces the visibility of the user of because of the debris, but at the same time obscures opponent(s) view of the user. If you pay double the cost for this jutsu, its duration changes to 5 posts, but it then has a 2 post cool-off once the jutsu ends.

You need to explain what aspect of it you do not think is appropriate.

...I was under the impression that he WAS using the current version. I could be wrong, but please state exactly what it is you didn't like about how he used the jutsu.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 7:55 am


Cobra_X
Deil Grist
Lance Fulgurant

Upon observing your post, I realized you are using the outdated version of the Armor of Wind technique. Please update your profile (if you got your description from it) and your post to reflect the new version.

Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
Description:
The user utilizes his chakra and the wind around him to create a whirlwind around himself. The wind forms a circle around the user, five feet in radius, so ten feet in diameter. The wind picks up debris and acts as armor for the user. The wind armor lasts for three posts. Debris on the ground strengthens the armor and projectiles thrown towards the wind also become part of the armor. Taijutsu is dangerous for the attacker to use against the armor considering the debris it can pick up and whip around within the wind.

...any attack D-rank below attack will be stopped, but will shorten the post duration of this jutsu by one post per hit. A C-rank attack will pass through the barrier, destabilizing the jutsu, but the armor will not fully dispel until the next post (it will still block 1 barrage of non-enhanced projectiles or un-named tai/kenjutsu strike) and will reduce the damage of the attack by 1 rank. Otherwise, without being hit the armor can last for 3 posts, at which point the air dissipates and all of the flying debris is dropped to the ground. This jutsu reduces the visibility of the user of because of the debris, but at the same time obscures opponent(s) view of the user. If you pay double the cost for this jutsu, its duration changes to 5 posts, but it then has a 2 post cool-off once the jutsu ends.

You need to explain what aspect of it you do not think is appropriate.

...I was under the impression that he WAS using the current version. I could be wrong, but please state exactly what it is you didn't like about how he used the jutsu.


Nope, it's not the same version. Here's what he has in his post (I will bold the significant differences):

Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
Description: The user utilizes his chakra and the wind around him to create a whirlwind around himself. The wind forms a circle around the user, five feet in radius, so ten feet in diameter. The wind picks up debris and acts as armor for the user. The wind armor lasts for five posts. Debris on the ground strengthens the armor and projectiles thrown towards the wind also become part of the armor. A taijutsu user is useless against the armour. A genin who gets caught in the wind will become part of the armour, Chuunin will be knocked back five feet, and a Jounin will be knocked back two feet. An elemental jutsu is useless against the armour, but if one is used against the armour it weakens it greatly. Two posts after an elemental jutsu is used against the Kaze no Yoroi the armour is dispelled. (-3 ch, -2 st)

So the major differences here are:
A. The jutsu only lasts for a max of 3 posts unless you double the cost, at which point it lasts for up to 5 posts.
B. Taijutsu isn't useless against the armor (it's capable of weakening and breaking through the armor), and you don't get blown back or sucked into the armor for hitting it.
C. Unlike in the previous version, elemental techniques play a significant role in weakening the armor and breaking through it. In the old version (as worded) it could stop an infinite number of S-rank attacks for two posts. Now anything C-rank and above can pass right through it, though the damage is weakened by a rank. Lilly's attack is a B-rank capable of causing severe burns (some second degree with a majority of third degree). A one rank reduction would still deal significant burn damage, some first degree with a majority of second degree. I believe that's a good bit more painful and damaging than "uncomfortable for a few days." He roleplayed through it mostly as if it was the new version of the armor of wind, but I think the damage was nerfed too much. Would you agree?

On a side note: His cost calculations are off. He didn't subtract the cost for the Empty Palm from his totals, and reversed the cost of the armor of wind by subtracting 2 chakra/3stamina instead of 3chakra/2stamina.

Sorry if I sound nitpicky, but let's face it: nobody likes the referee. XD

Deil Grist
Vice Captain


Cobra_X
Captain

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:05 am


Deil Grist
Cobra_X
Deil Grist
Lance Fulgurant

Upon observing your post, I realized you are using the outdated version of the Armor of Wind technique. Please update your profile (if you got your description from it) and your post to reflect the new version.

Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
Description:
The user utilizes his chakra and the wind around him to create a whirlwind around himself. The wind forms a circle around the user, five feet in radius, so ten feet in diameter. The wind picks up debris and acts as armor for the user. The wind armor lasts for three posts. Debris on the ground strengthens the armor and projectiles thrown towards the wind also become part of the armor. Taijutsu is dangerous for the attacker to use against the armor considering the debris it can pick up and whip around within the wind.

...any attack D-rank below attack will be stopped, but will shorten the post duration of this jutsu by one post per hit. A C-rank attack will pass through the barrier, destabilizing the jutsu, but the armor will not fully dispel until the next post (it will still block 1 barrage of non-enhanced projectiles or un-named tai/kenjutsu strike) and will reduce the damage of the attack by 1 rank. Otherwise, without being hit the armor can last for 3 posts, at which point the air dissipates and all of the flying debris is dropped to the ground. This jutsu reduces the visibility of the user of because of the debris, but at the same time obscures opponent(s) view of the user. If you pay double the cost for this jutsu, its duration changes to 5 posts, but it then has a 2 post cool-off once the jutsu ends.

You need to explain what aspect of it you do not think is appropriate.

...I was under the impression that he WAS using the current version. I could be wrong, but please state exactly what it is you didn't like about how he used the jutsu.


Nope, it's not the same version. Here's what he has in his post (I will bold the significant differences):

Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
Description: The user utilizes his chakra and the wind around him to create a whirlwind around himself. The wind forms a circle around the user, five feet in radius, so ten feet in diameter. The wind picks up debris and acts as armor for the user. The wind armor lasts for five posts. Debris on the ground strengthens the armor and projectiles thrown towards the wind also become part of the armor. A taijutsu user is useless against the armour. A genin who gets caught in the wind will become part of the armour, Chuunin will be knocked back five feet, and a Jounin will be knocked back two feet. An elemental jutsu is useless against the armour, but if one is used against the armour it weakens it greatly. Two posts after an elemental jutsu is used against the Kaze no Yoroi the armour is dispelled. (-3 ch, -2 st)

So the major differences here are:
A. The jutsu only lasts for a max of 3 posts unless you double the cost, at which point it lasts for up to 5 posts.
B. Taijutsu isn't useless against the armor (it's capable of weakening and breaking through the armor), and you don't get blown back or sucked into the armor for hitting it.
C. Unlike in the previous version, elemental techniques play a significant role in weakening the armor and breaking through it. In the old version (as worded) it could stop an infinite number of S-rank attacks for two posts. Now anything C-rank and above can pass right through it, though the damage is weakened by a rank. Lilly's attack is a B-rank capable of causing severe burns (some second degree with a majority of third degree). A one rank reduction would still deal significant burn damage, some first degree with a majority of second degree. I believe that's a good bit more painful and damaging than "uncomfortable for a few days." He roleplayed through it mostly as if it was the new version of the armor of wind, but I think the damage was nerfed too much. Would you agree?

On a side note: His cost calculations are off. He didn't subtract the cost for the Empty Palm from his totals, and reversed the cost of the armor of wind by subtracting 2 chakra/3stamina instead of 3chakra/2stamina.

Sorry if I sound nitpicky, but let's face it: nobody likes the referee. XD

She listed her jutsu as C-rank... is it actually B-rank?

...oh, wait, I see what she did... she crossed out B and put C, due to chakra control... but it's still a B-rank strength, it just has a C-rank cost. Yeah... I see what happened. That would totally blow through his shield.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:52 am


Ah, I wasn't aware that I was using an outdated version, I think I must still have the jutsus in my profile linked to VR's jutsu list. May I edit my post then since using that jutsu would be pointless, I'd rather do something that won't end in me getting severely burned.

About my totals I've only subtracted the cost of the empty palm in the heading of my profile format, I don't put the new total till the next post, so in the next post i'll have 35 and 35, or at least I will if I'm not allowed to edit my post.

Lance Fulgurant


White Water Lilly
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 10:56 am


Lance Fulgurant
Ah, I wasn't aware that I was using an outdated version, I think I must still have the jutsus in my profile linked to VR's jutsu list. May I edit my post then since using that jutsu would be pointless, I'd rather do something that won't end in me getting severely burned.

About my totals I've only subtracted the cost of the empty palm in the heading of my profile format, I don't put the new total till the next post, so in the next post i'll have 35 and 35, or at least I will if I'm not allowed to edit my post.


Hey Lance, feel free to edit your posts. You didn't know about the jutsu updates and since I have yet to post its still fair game for you if you want to edit. Just let me know when you're done and I'll come up with a response to it.

Also, sry about the confusion as to the rank of my technique. I just scratch it out cause its a easier method to show my cost deductions. I can think of something else if its too confusing to deal with.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 1:00 pm


White Water Lilly
Lance Fulgurant
Ah, I wasn't aware that I was using an outdated version, I think I must still have the jutsus in my profile linked to VR's jutsu list. May I edit my post then since using that jutsu would be pointless, I'd rather do something that won't end in me getting severely burned.

About my totals I've only subtracted the cost of the empty palm in the heading of my profile format, I don't put the new total till the next post, so in the next post i'll have 35 and 35, or at least I will if I'm not allowed to edit my post.


Hey Lance, feel free to edit your posts. You didn't know about the jutsu updates and since I have yet to post its still fair game for you if you want to edit. Just let me know when you're done and I'll come up with a response to it.

Also, sry about the confusion as to the rank of my technique. I just scratch it out cause its a easier method to show my cost deductions. I can think of something else if its too confusing to deal with.


Thank you very much. And I personally think that's a good way to show it since you put "(chakra control)" at the end. I just thought that the wind would work because I just figured wind would blow away steam, I didn't really think it was like a "blasty" technique sweatdrop

Before I do something that doesn't make sense again, would the "Hakkeshou Kaite" - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin" work? It says that "If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack." I realize I probably wouldn't be able to protect Zenko from the attack, but would it still work to protect Atsureki?

Lance Fulgurant


Deil Grist
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 1:23 pm


Lance Fulgurant
White Water Lilly
Lance Fulgurant
Ah, I wasn't aware that I was using an outdated version, I think I must still have the jutsus in my profile linked to VR's jutsu list. May I edit my post then since using that jutsu would be pointless, I'd rather do something that won't end in me getting severely burned.

About my totals I've only subtracted the cost of the empty palm in the heading of my profile format, I don't put the new total till the next post, so in the next post i'll have 35 and 35, or at least I will if I'm not allowed to edit my post.


Hey Lance, feel free to edit your posts. You didn't know about the jutsu updates and since I have yet to post its still fair game for you if you want to edit. Just let me know when you're done and I'll come up with a response to it.

Also, sry about the confusion as to the rank of my technique. I just scratch it out cause its a easier method to show my cost deductions. I can think of something else if its too confusing to deal with.


Thank you very much. And I personally think that's a good way to show it since you put "(chakra control)" at the end. I just thought that the wind would work because I just figured wind would blow away steam, I didn't really think it was like a "blasty" technique sweatdrop

Before I do something that doesn't make sense again, would the "Hakkeshou Kaite" - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin" work? It says that "If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack." I realize I probably wouldn't be able to protect Zenko from the attack, but would it still work to protect Atsureki?

That's a tough call, because it's a C-rank chakra barrier versus a B-rank ninjutsu. Essentially, the B-rank overpowers the C-rank. I would say your palms receive first-second degree burns, but the rest of your body is protected. As for cost, because it's a very intense physical technique and requires a lot of chakra, I would say it costs 5 chakra and stamina.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 2:01 pm


Well, if I remember correctly the hands of the Hyuuga wouldn't be close to the outside of the sphere, they would be held in to maintain the fastest possible rotation, othewise the technique wouldn't be possible. So why would my characters hands be any more likely to be burned, especially when they are at least somewhat protected by the extra long sleeves that my character wears?

I hope I'm not coming off as rude, I just want to make sure sweatdrop

Lance Fulgurant


Deil Grist
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 2:44 pm


Lance Fulgurant
Well, if I remember correctly the hands of the Hyuuga wouldn't be close to the outside of the sphere, they would be held in to maintain the fastest possible rotation, othewise the technique wouldn't be possible. So why would my characters hands be any more likely to be burned, especially when they are at least somewhat protected by the extra long sleeves that my character wears?

I hope I'm not coming off as rude, I just want to make sure sweatdrop

If you look at Neji as he uses the technique, his hands are actually held away from his body.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 7:40 pm


One hand is always extended all the way forward, palm facing out when performing the spin. I also disagree with the 5 chakra/stamina cost though. Hyuuga techques should be more akra heavy.

I think 5 chakra 3 stamina should be sufficient.

...and attack like the triagrams divination strikes would cost more stamina... but the heavenly spin is clearly a chakra based taijutsu maneuver. I think that it should weaken the B-rank to only burn one of the Hyuuga's arms.

Cobra_X
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