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 Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 6:37 am
Hey, I hear, the futurebirds; it's called spaceships...
A fancy, sophisticated hole through meat then wink
(I tease with love, Cobra! Though I have never heard of a 'claudostern-whats-it'...)
That's all understandable and reasonable - I'll add it into the description! Thank you for everything!
...astronauts and all, let's trade all these types of things for wings.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 7:39 am
So, how does it continue to beat? Chakra? Then put a chakra cost to each use of it. Say, the rank of a C-Rank Genjutsu each time it heals you. Remember that you got this simply from the past, so it is not your original bloodline and will not sit like it would if you were an original clan member.
Not to mention, loosing her neck would be pretty bad. Until she would link her head back and regain her senses one could easily go up to her and take her heart out. Although loosing a limb would not be as bad, as even if you can't control your arm you can still evade.
Although you could somehow make it that the Tendril can re-energize your bones with the necessary minerals, I still don't get how you would re-attach your bones; which I haven't talked about above and I was too lazy to edit it in.
Maybe Kakuzu could do it in the Anime, but remember that this is a RP. And seeing as she gained it basically for free, and doesn't even take a slot of a custom weapon, she still has to pay for something.
Question:
Can I also take her second heart out and use it for myself? Would be a pretty fun adventure living another few years.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:45 am
The Criticizer So, how does it continue to beat? Chakra? Then put a chakra cost to each use of it. Say, the rank of a C-Rank Healing Jutsu each time it heals you. Remember that you got this simply from the past, so it is not your original bloodline and will not sit like it would if you were an original clan member.
Not to mention, loosing her neck would be pretty bad. Until she would link her head back and regain her senses one could easily go up to her and take her heart out. Although loosing a limb would not be as bad, as even if you can't control your arm you can still evade.
Although you could somehow make it that the Tendril can re-energize your bones with the necessary minerals, I still don't get how you would re-attach your bones; which I haven't talked about above and I was too lazy to edit it in.
Maybe Kakuzu could do it in the Anime, but remember that this is a RP. And seeing as she gained it basically for free, and doesn't even take a slot of a custom weapon, she still has to pay for something.
Question:
Can I also take her second heart out and use it for myself? Would be a pretty fun adventure living another few years.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:57 am
Still have to know how it works and stuff. We could make it that she feeds the heart with chakra every now and then for all of it's services.
If its that, then we could give her a cost of 5/5. We could basically give the heart it's own chakra point system. Example, It can have maximum Forty Chakra Points. The Five Chakra Cost is paid by the heart, while the stamina by the user herself.
Say her character was genin and with no modifiers she has Twenty-Five Chakra Points, such Twenty-Five Stamina Points. But we don't care about Chakra Points as they're in the second's heart's account. So, she used the second heart to heal whatever injury once and she would now have Twenty SP [Stamina Points] and still Twnety-Five CP [Chakra Points]. However, the five chakra points are drawn from the heart's own system. So the heart would now have Thirty-Five Chakra Points left.
What do you think?
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 6:23 am
Sounds like a reasonable idea.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:47 am
Name of Weapon: Blood Sacrifice
Who Owns the Weapon: Konaga Sai
Who Made it? The blade was forged by a Kirigakure Master Weaponsmith and was given to Sai. On his last official mission for the Kirigakure, Sai's hunter-nin team was sent to locate and eliminate the man who was forging powerful weapons to be used against the village. Sai tracked the man down and the team infiltrated his location, but before Sai killed him, the man offered him a weapon of his choosing if he allowed him to live. Without a second's hesitation, Sai turned on his comrades and cut them down with a few quick swipes. After disposing of the bodies to leave no trace, Sai was offered a choice of any of the weaponsmith's forged items. After feeling a strange connection with the blade, Sai chose 'Blood Sacrifice' and left the man to continue his work and returned to the Kirigakure.
Range: Melee, (~5 foot striking distance from user)
Weakness: Blood Sacrifice has no enhanced durability, nor is it any stronger then any regular katana in terms of cutting power and weight. As such, against other weapons of the shinobi world, it is not particularly powerful aside from it's special abilities and may tend to break easily against stronger weapons.
Weapon Description: What Blood Sacrifice lacks in durability or power, it makes up for in precision of the blade. It is lightweight, well balanced, and of thinner design then the average katana, making it rather aerodynamic and a quick weapon to wield despite it's length. The blade is actually forged specifically to draw blood on every stroke and though the wounds may not threaten to lacerate a muscle, or cut through bone, that is not it's intent in the first place. The blade itself is jet black, save for a single crimson streak which runs down the cutting edge of the blade. The handle also has inlayed blood red threads to make the diamonds between the tsukamaki.
Total Length: 103 cm (39.5 in.)
Blade Length: 75 cm (29.5 in.)
Tsuka (Handle) Length: 28 cm (11.0 in.)
Special Properties/Abilities: Blood Sacrifice was designed to feed off of the pain it inflicts on another, using the blood it draws as a source of energy to produce it's own techniques. When the blade slices flesh, the pain caused by the wound is immense as the sword not only cuts them, but also draws blood from the wound. Every cut Blood Sacrifice makes drains 3 Stamina from the victim and adds 3 Stamina to it's own supply of energy. The maximum amount of Stamina that can be drained from a single individual within the course of a battle is 9 Stamina (3 slices). After this, the taste of that person's blood has grown stale to the blade and it refuses to draw or absorb anymore of their Blood/Stamina. The blade will also never accept a blood sacrifice from it's current owner.
Using a specialized one-handed seal, the user can then draw on the Blood/Stamina stored in the blade to reproduce a variety of specialized jutsu and abilities. The blade can store a maximum of 30 Stamina.
Blood Sacrifice techniques:
Reforge Blade - (3 Stamina) - Considering the blade's light weight and thin design, it stands to reason that when it is forced to clash with larger, more durable, and stronger weapons, it is very likely that the blade itself can be splintered or destroyed. As long as the user has the tsuka in hand however, he can use this technique to re-forge the blade in the middle of battle. Once activated, a stream of blood flows out of what is left of the blade and handle and connects with the lost pieces, gathering them and bringing them back to the blade as it is re-assembled and reforged back to new.
Blood Clone - (12 Stamina) - Using the collected blood from it's most recent victim, the owner of the blade can create a clone from the stored Stamina in the blade so long as the blade has drained at least hlaf the cost of the technique from the most recent victim. Initiating the technique, blood flows out of the blade, falling on the ground before suddenly shooting up into a column of blood. The blood then coagulates and forms itself into an exact replica of it's last victim. This clone has enough chakra to use any one jutsu up to A-rank that it's predecessor knew, whether it be a Bloodline Technique, Hiden jutsu, Summoning, or otherwise. It retains all of the physical characteristics of the predecessor as well. One solid hit will destroy the clone.
Blood Rage - (21 Stamina) - Performing the necessary seal, Blood Sacrifice releases a stream of flowing blood which covers the blade and the user momentarily. After a few seconds, the blood then seeps into both the weapon and the user, enhancing the qualities of both dramatically. Blood Sacrifice's blade is now a blood red color and it's durability has increased significantly as well as the sharpness of it's cutting edge. The blade can now easily cut through nearly anything, bone, rock, steel effortlessly and can hold it's own against even chakra coated weapons without breaking. The user's abilities are also enhanced for a brief period, raising their Speed and Strength by 1 rank [Active bonus]. During the Blood Rage, the user cannot use any ninjutsu, only Taijutsu and Kenjutsu. The Blood Rage ends after 2 posts.
Blood Rain - (30 Stamina) - Using the collected blood from at least 4 different victims, the user can trigger Blood Sacrifice's strongest technique. After performing the necessary hand seal, the user lifts the blade into the air at which point blood explodes off of the blade, forming into tiny droplets which separate and fill the air above the battlefield. The droplets then elongate and thin out to form thousands of blood hari, about 6 inches long and incredibly sharp at both ends. The Blood Hari then rain down onto the battlefield, threatening to skewer anyone within the zone of the attack. Any Blood Hari which pierces a user causes extreme pain and a burning sensation in the area, as if burned by acid. The Blood Hari rain down over an area approximately 100 square feet.
Rp Sample: (If required, it can be provided, but i think we all know I could RP this if I had the time. The descriptions should speak for themselves.)
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:08 pm
If the History behind this weapon doesn't show Sai's ruthlessness...I don't kow what will.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 1:29 pm
Martin Spiralwave If the History behind this weapon doesn't show Sai's ruthlessness...I don't kow what will.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 2:04 pm
I skimmed somewhat thoroughly and my only concern is the Blood Clones ability to use the Summoning Jutsu. Does this mean that you can summon a creature up to A-rank?
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 2:33 pm
Martin Spiralwave I skimmed somewhat thoroughly and my only concern is the Blood Clones ability to use the Summoning Jutsu. Does this mean that you can summon a creature up to A-rank? That's a good point Cobra. Wouldn't the clone disappear after using the summoning jutsu and, once the summon sees its summoner, join his summoner's side to fight against you?
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:10 pm
Whoever says the clone disappears after using the jutsu?
...and no summons don't work that way... they would just refuse to fight a summoner they have signed a contract with.
I can see the concern, but it makes sense given the jutsu. Would you like me to restrict summonings to B-rank?
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:36 pm
Well, isn't that the problem? The clone may have the enemy's ADN and all, but remember that the user needs to sign the contract to be able and summon. So, would they still spawn if they knew that your clone is not the real one?
Anyways, how does the clone get that chakra?
@ Reforge Blade Ability: We know [At least by the manga] that reforging is something big, no matter the size or density. Zabuza's sword's ability is to use the blood of the few he slashed to regain his form. Remember that Zabuza's Sword is considered one of the seven most strongest swords in the Naruto World, and his only ability is reforging. So, having this AND with a cost of only 3 Stamina would be too much.
@ Blood Rage: Maybe 2 Posts are too much? Even from his name and great bonuses it tells that it should be only for a short time.
@Blood Rain: If hit, the user will suffer pain as well, right?
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:57 pm
The Criticizer Well, isn't that the problem? The clone may have the enemy's ADN and all, but remember that the user needs to sign the contract to be able and summon. So, would they still spawn if they knew that your clone is not the real one?
Anyways, how does the clone get that chakra?
@ Reforge Blade Ability: We know [At least by the manga] that reforging is something big, no matter the size or density. Zabuza's sword's ability is to use the blood of the few he slashed to regain his form. Remember that Zabuza's Sword is considered one of the seven most strongest swords in the Naruto World, and his only ability is reforging. So, having this AND with a cost of only 3 Stamina would be too much.
@ Blood Rage: Maybe 2 Posts are too much? Even from his name and great bonuses it tells that it should be only for a short time.
@Blood Rain: If hit, the user will suffer pain as well, right?
Reforged Blade: The Seven Swordsmen were just the Seven Strongest Swordsman. I don't think the title extends to their swords otherwise the Kusanagi, Ten Span Sword, and the Second Hokage's Lightning Lightsaber would have made that list and ranked well above Zabuza's sword. And it's not like Zabuza's sword was fragile or comparable in durability to a katana. Blood Rage: Well cutting through steel effortlessly would be the only problem I see with this. I'd say Cobra would need to decide between the enhanced cutting ability or the Speed/Strength boost, or limit the two somehow. I'm a little dry on suggestions right now sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:47 pm
If by Kusanagi you meant Orochimaru's sword, then I agree that he would rank in there; However the swordsmen are only Kirigakure ninja and as the others fear them that means that Kirigakure is expert in Kenjutsu Ninja. The Second Hokage's sword or whatever was easily broken by Two A-Ranked Ninjutsu, and finally if Ten Span Sword is Susanoo's sword then you're going too far. Susanoo is not even a shinobi, it's a jutsu itself.
Either way, we have seen that all of those Seven swords have extraordinary Special Abilities, and as simple it may sound. His [Zabuza's] Sword's such special ability was the Reforging. Anyways, the cost is too low either way you put it. It's like completely reforming a weapon.
And on the Blood Rage you're correct, but the Stamina cost covers that up. He would be able to use it after Three Battles [Seeing as he can drain only Nine SP in a battle]
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 5:57 am
Reforging the blade isn't that big of a deal. First off, reforging would be a post at max in any regular forum. Reforging my blade costs 3 stamina which I have to drain from someone in combat... normally much more then one post.
Also, keep in mind, Im getting this from a Kirigakure Swordsmith. I think there is a certain level of power we can allow if were talking about the weapons of the 7 Swordsmen of the MIST. Also, I think we all know Id be responsible with it.
Blood Rage... 21 Stamina, is at least 3 combats... and I don't think its that broken to be able to cut through steel at all. Most customs will have some ability to counteract this in someway. If truly needed I could just buff the sword's durability only and keep the stat buffs... but I don't think the increased cutting power is an issue.
Blood Rain: Yes... if hit by dozens of Hari raining down from the sky... it would hurt. I could detail the pain though.
Blood Clone: Well the contract is formed in blood, and the summon summoned by blood... so the summon would definitely come and respond, once the clone is dispersed however, the summon would poof. And the clone has the ability to do that and the chakra to do it essentially because I said so... the 9 Stamina cost is enough to legitimize such a thing, imo.
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