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Still too powerful. The shikai abilities were not changed at all. a couple of them were considered godmodding on the first version, and since they haven't changed I still say they're godmodding.

And the second bankai ability, it says purge the target, which says to me, especially if you think about the usuall use of the word purge,this guy is still going for an instant kill type attack. When you purge an enemy, you instantly kill them and ring them out of existence.

Sadly no. If I don't have the person's name on my friends list, Or if they're not a member of the guild, or if I don't have a post to utilize belonging to them, I can't Pm them...as far as I know.

He doesn't seem to understand that there's a difference between captain powerful and godmodd powerful.

@Wire
I think it's good! 3nodding It's just the shikai ability about transforming inanimate objects into vehicles. As long a the size of the vehicle isn't larger than a helicopter and/or boat, it's good! mrgreen Approved.

Let me say one thing before I fully reject Siras's character. He sent me an updated version of the profile and I forgot to post the updated Shikai abilities. This is what he said in response to what Wire_C said about the second Bankai ability.


He was just trying to extend his vocabulary and misused the word purge.

I hope you are ready for this guy.


Username: Wire_Colossus
Character Name: Kuraudojaianto
Race: vizard
Age: 36 years, but looks to be about 21. He was born the exact moment that Ichigo Kurosaki defeated Sosuke Aizen.
Birthday (optional): n/a
Height: 30ft
Weight (optional): 20 tons
Eyes: black sclera’s with crimson irises even when his mask is gone. He can’t really get rid of the color.
Hair: none, naturally bald
Unusual Features: His eyes for one, his sheer size for another. His father was Gidambo, the west gate guard of the seireitei.
Blood Type (optional): unknown, since no one has ever seen him injured, despite the fact he’s been hurt many times.
Affiliation: loner at present, but is looking forward to joining the court guard squads of the seireitei.
Squad: unknown, but there is hopefully at least one squad that could use his talents.
Rank: hopes to become Captain.
Relatives (optional): Gidambo. Mother is unknown and unfortunately dead.
Appearance: tall and lean, but with wide broad shoulders and a well muscled form. His body is covered in scars from attacks he’s endured in the past, being bullied purely for his size. He has long elf like pointed ears and his skin is a dark tan from his time in the sun. His only malformation or deformity is his size really, unless you count his hollow eyes.
Mask: A welders mask, but with large fangs on the lower jaw and a pair of sideways jaws that are smaller than the lower jaw and look similar to it. The side jaws when closed look inter lock and cover the interlocking fangs of the upper and lower jaws, but when open that extend out to the sides slightly as if on small arm like appendages. Because of His condition, his mask is capable of moving all it’s parts while he is wearing it over his face.
Personality: Brutish and surprisingly highly intelligent, with strength that far surpasses that of even someone of his incredible size, but this strength is physical.
History: Born in the area of the rukon district known as zaraki or area 80, Kuraudojaianto is strangely a vizard, but what’s strange about it is that he was born a vizard. Before he was born, His mother was an arrancar who was in hiding. And as a final gift to her son, he was born with his own inner hollow, born a vizard, but his mother died giving birth. He was since raised by locals of the area 80, but doesn’t know his father.
Zanpakuto Name: Kami tan'ya no kiri no (( God of the forge and of the fog))
Sealed State: His normal sealed state is a simple though oversized zanapkuto with a traditional guard and hilt, but with a saw like serrated blade, and each tooth of the blade appears to be made from an imbedded claw shaped gemstone of black coloration. There are 13 claw like serrations total in the blade, and the hilt of the zanpakuto’s sealed state has a short black chain on it’s end tipped with a small human skull about the size of a golf ball made from stone. This skull’s eyes glow with tiny flames. The sheathe of this zanpakuto is more like a guitar case, seeing as it opens up and has to be opened and closed in order to store or draw the sword. The hilt is white in color with a beautiful pink orchid flower shaped guard.
Zanpakuto Spirit: a mountain shaped like a man, a literal mountain man. His back is covered with snowy peaks while his arms and legs are covered in a mossy green from patches of forests. His eyes glow green with good intentions and overwhelming earth based power.
Release: “Create and destroy, Kami tan’ya no kiri no…” and then storm clouds and fire engulf the weapon in a vortex of pure power as it transforms to shikai. The storm clouds and flames are created by the zanpakuto.
Shikai: Kami tan’ya no kiri no is a massive smelting hammer who’s powers are as scary as they are dangerous. In appearance this hammer has a handle or hilt like that of a zanpakuto, but attached directly to the hilt is a short but very thick broad blade and then the blade is tipped with a heavy steel mallet head.
Shikai Abilities: This impressive and godly weapon has the ability to impart immense amounts of explosive energy into objects and opponents when it is slammed into or against them. This energy is usually a mix of Fire, water, electrical, and sound based energy, but it’s not as dangerous or as elemental as it seems. Each time the zanpakuto’s hammer end hits something, no matter what it’s made of, the zanpakuto imparts the sensation of extreme heat and gives off small glowing sparks as well as the sounds of a clap of thunder. After the zanpakuto’s business end is removed from the target after a strike, the spot where the target was hit will give off a heavy amount of steam as the moisture in the air directly over it boils. This particular zanpakuto is a creator and a destroyer. Since it is capable of not only destroying, but also of creating. Inside the shikai state’s hilt there is a reservoir of elixir that when used properly, can heal wounds, be used to repair structures and objects of high importance, and even make plants grow when the situation is dire enough, but when used improperly, can cause stone to seemingly grow and cause new terrain to form at a dangerous speed that can accidentally kill people. It’s all about how it is used. The shikai also effects the clothing that Kuraudojaianto wears, which has led many to believe that he has a bankai, though that is simply not the case. No matter what clothes he is wearing, when the zanpakuto is released to shikai, his clothes transformed into a shihakusho covered in steel armor plating, with the black sleeves torn away at the shoulder and the white ones beneath being narrow, armor plated, form fitting, and ending in black gloves with steel spikes at the knuckles.
Bankai (optional): None
Bankai Abilities: None
Kido: None
Hoho: None
Cero: Kuraudojaianto doesn’t have a normal or even traditional looking cero. It’s Black in color with a crimson red outline.
Other Information: Despite his scary appearance and deadly strength, he is a gentle and careful guy who as has a hobby of crafting beautiful one of a kind glass sculptures for those he cares about.

Thankyou!

*hugs tightly and jumps up and down* Yay!!!!!