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 Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 7:00 pm
Lonliness
Lonlieness surrounds me,
like a dark mist.
Everywhere I look,
no comfort can be found.
I have wandered this city,
for a thousand years in solitude.
No one to turn to for comfort,
no one to lend a helping hand.
Often misunderstood,
lashing out in anger as defense.
Knowing no love ever,
only wanting someone to care for me.
Longing for friendship,
finding none.
Lurking in the shadows,
wanting to hide from the world.
No parents to care for me,
since they never did.
Long since truley dead,
because of my anger.
Lonlieness surrounds me,
can no one help me?
((This came out bad))
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:18 pm
Overprotected 3/15/2006
There are times in my life,
when things seemed controlled by someone else.
It feels like I don't have,
any freedom at all.
It feels like I can't do anything,
and I am constantly being watched.
It feels like I am being overprotected,
and no one cares what I think.
Is there anyone who can help me,
help me be free?
Can someone help me prove,
that I am no longer a little girl?
I am so sheltered,
not knowing a lot of the things my friends do.
I feel so alone,
even though I am in a crowd.
I want my own life,
A life just for me.
A life where I am not sheltered,
A life where I am not...overprotected.
((The sad thing about this poem is, that this poem is very true about me))
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 5:19 pm
Friends 3/15/2006
Friends are there when needed,
to comfort you when their is no one else.
They are there to help you along your way,
and to ease the pain of loss.
Friends are shoulders to cry on,
and arms to wrap you in comfort.
Sometimes it is rough,
other times it is simple.
There are always bumpy roads,
and you have to work together to get through them.
Friends can be a getaway,
from reality and can take you into a fantasy world.
They give advice when it is needed,
and offer a lending hand.
Friends are a really great wonder,
and will always help.
Friends...we ALL need them.
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Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 5:45 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 1:08 pm
Faith 3/16/06
What is a world without faith?
Is it a good world?
A world without faith,
is a world lost.
People say they don't need it,
but I say differently.
Life without faith,
is not a life at all.
You need to have faith in something,
even if it is quite small.
You need faith in your friends,
and in your family.
The best faith you can have,
is faith in God.
He will always be there,
for you to call on when you need him.
He will never let you down,
like friends and family could.
It is painful when your family or friends,
make your faith in them be shaken.
Put your faith in someone,
that can prove they deserve your faith.
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 3:09 pm
Very nice job Akita. I like the story.
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 3:59 pm
Counting down the minutes... November 4, 2005
She was counting down the months,
until her breath would leave the air,
and her life was gone from the earth.
She was counting down the weeks,
only three left to go,
and she wouldn't see the people and their tears.
She was counting down the days,
only five more to go,
and she wouldn't be on this earth anymore.
It's the last day now,
her hair is gone,
her skin is pale.
Her body grows colder,
with each passing minute,
her hands can't be held without gloves.
She stares at her mother's teary eyes,
as the last hours come soon,
and she wonders to herself 'Why don't you see I'm happy?'
As the last minutes come by,
and she counts them down,
she opens her mouth and says: "I love you mom".
Her body goes lifeless,
the light gone in her eyes,
as they disease wins the fight.
The last thing she saw,
was her mother's smiling face,
as the girl smiled back.
Hang on 'til forever... November 5, 2005
"Hang on 'til forever" I heard my little sister say,
it made me cry,
because I knew I couldn't.
"I'll see you again one day" I told her,
as I tried to reassure her,
it didn't seem to be working too well.
'This never would have happened,
if that drunk hadn't been on the road.',
I was thinking to myself.
My family wouldn't be in so much grief,
and I wouldn't be dying,
there wouldn't be these tears.
I was mad at the drunk,
but I knew I couldn't do anything,
suddenly I heard a noise.
I knew what it was,
when my family's tears burst out,
it was the flatline,
I had just left the world.
Coma... November 5, 2005
I wonder where I am,
everything is so dark,
I can't see anything.
I hear the crying,
but I can't see the tears.
I hear the voices,
but I can't see the faces.
I hear a beeping noise,
and I know I am still alive.
If I am still alive,
then why is everything black?
I feel someone grab my hand,
and I hear them say: "I love you".
I hear someone say something about a coma,
and I wonder, 'how'?
How could that have happened?
Then I heard something about an accident.
Tears silently rolled down my face,
as I remembered what happened.
I remember the speeding car,
and a barely audible voice.
When I could hear things again,
everything was black.
'Will I come out of the coma,
or will I die like this?'
I hear someone ask the same thing,
and I know they care.
I want to wake up,
I want to see my family again,
I want to see my friends.
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 8:18 pm
Something Uncontrollable
by: HIkaru-chan
Disappearing beneath the fading
Disappearing beneath the ending
Disappearing beneath the world
My anger bottles up inside
My love just won't realize
My happinese disappears
My sadness controls me
My emotions destroy me.
Stepping off the building
Falling too quickly
Blacking out into darkness
Pain screaming inside of me.
Silence surrounds me
I feel nothing near me
I feel empty and afraid of what's left of me
Eyes wide and scared
Skin gone pale
except for the few parts where
I'm bleeding
I attempted suicide
and died that same night
Don't know if I did it right
but I felt the light and warmth escape me
The Light fadede away from me
The darkness engulfed me
I know something just isn't right
Something isn't right
Nothing was every right
I was never the normal girl
I was never the girl of a guy's dreams
I was never right
I was never wrong
I was just stuck in between
Then that night happened
I disappeared
I faded away
beneath the world above
I feel nothing
No emotion
nothing's left of me as I disappear
No one remembers me
No one know me
No one knows that I existed.
I disappeared
Faded away
Fell beneath the world to quickly.
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