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 Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 11:52 am
Character: Yamamoto Taizo
Technique Name: Futton no mu (Steam of emptiness)
Rank: Variable
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element:Sealing
Description: The user focuses their sealing chakra onto a surface, and creates a seal, that is transferred on physical contact. The seal forces the victim to expend chakra from their body Whenever they become active, in the form of a light blue steam; The only way to not expend the chakra is if the victim remains still for the entirety of the time length.The time and amount of chakra forced is dependent upon the amount of chakra used.
D - 2 turns 10 Chakra Each Post
C- 4 turns 20 Chakra Each Post
B - 6 Turns 30 Chakra per post
A - 8 Turns 40 Chakra per post
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 12:56 pm
Hmmm... seems alright, just make note that it'll be learned as the highest available rank for it... so... A. =/
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 7:02 pm
Shinsua Hmmm... seems alright, just make note that it'll be learned as the highest available rank for it... so... A. =/ kk
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 4:48 pm
Mmm... C rank, and it's fine.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 11:11 am
Denied for being a low scale copy of an S-rank forbidden technique. :I
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 7:50 pm
Character: Fuji no Yuki
Technique Name: Yuki no Jutsu: Yuki Yama-kabe [ Snow Mountain Wall ]
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton [ Combines Suiton & Fuuton ]
Description: only used in a place with snow, the user creates a massive wall out of condensed snow to protect themselves from attacks. Fire skills over time will melt through, so this only makes a temp. defense against those skills.
Character: Fuji no Yuki
Technique Name: Yuki no Jutsu: Yuki Tora Dageki [ Snow Tiger Strike ]
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton [ Combines Suiton & Fuuton ]
Description: The user after make acceptable hand signs brings up a massive amount of water similar to that of Water Dragon Strike using the Suiton Element, but in the shape of a tiger. The user than uses the Fuuton Element to freeze it. Making it into a cold, solid, and dangerous tiger shaped attack that upon contact with a large surface explodes into spikes of ice.
Character: Fuji no Yuki
Technique Name: Yuki no Jutsu: Yuki Shiro Hitoya [ Snow White Prison ]
Rank: C -to- S-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton [ Combines Suiton & Fuuton ]
Description: The user condenses the moister around his or her opponent using the Suiton element. One than uses the Fuuton element to quickly cool it creating a Ice sickle/ spike shaped prison to trap the target. It can be broken by Koton Skills, Strong Taijutsu, & Strong Bukijutsu.
Character: Fuji no Yui
Technique Name: Yuki no Jutsu: Mori no Aisu [ Forest of Ice ]
Rank: S - Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton [ Combines Suiton & Fuuton ]
Description: The user using the Suiton and Fuuton elements, the user causes massive spikes of ice to rupture from the earth or if on water freeze the water and shot up from under them. This skill is considered a double-edge because the spikes sprout in all directions and can hit event he user. This skill cover the length and width of a football field.
Character: Fuji no Yuki
Technique Name: Yuki no Jutsu: Yuki Ookami Nida [ Snow Wolf Pack ]
Rank: C - Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton [ Combines Suiton & Fuuton ]
Description: Only used in a place with snow or where snow had fallen, the user creates Six wolfs made of condensed snow. The wolfs are dense enough to uses their claws and teeth the stab and cut opponent. The user can order them similar to that of clones. And just like anything made of snow, they are weak against fire and will melt.
Just my ideas. If not, I understand. (> w <)
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 9:28 pm
They all look rather good... though, on the last one, you may want to make the created animal a bit smaller. A pack of tigers is a bit much... perhaps wolves, or lionesses, or something.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 6:07 am
Shinsua They all look rather good... though, on the last one, you may want to make the created animal a bit smaller. A pack of tigers is a bit much... perhaps wolves, or lionesses, or something. changed to wolfs O w O
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 7:26 am
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 8:26 am
Shinsua Denied for being a low scale copy of an S-rank forbidden technique. :I Well It's Low scale, Because the technique Wasn't even invented until The Second Hokage. My technique differs in that it's not nearly as powerful, because it's supposed to be the predecessor
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 8:57 am
The fact of the matter is, even toned down, the technique still requires a large drawback.
Have you seen the entry for it in the listing?
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 11:27 am
nooooooo
I ddn't notice it, but i read over it, and that's fine. it may be difficult..but i'll try nd work with that 83
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Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 10:52 am
Character: Yamamoto Taizo
Technique Name: Reflection in the Mirror Wheel
Rank: Variable
Type: Doujutsu
Element: (Variable)
Description: Using his prowess as a ninjutsu specialist and his new found Sharingan, Taizo has learned to add his intense sealing speed; with his Sharingans ability to read movement's and analyze Jutsu. If used proberly, this allows Taizo to mimic the technique his opponent used milliseconds after they begin the motion, studying and copying as they work, giving off the illusion that he is using the same technique at the very same time, allowing the two to nullify each other. This can be very unnerving to unwary opponents.
ø Only technique that the users sharingan can copy are viable
ø The technique costs the same amount of chakra as the mother technique
ø may only be used [3] times per battle
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