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 Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 8:07 pm
Well, I generally have a basic grasp on what happens. I plan on covering the following parts of the story:
- Awakening of the WEAPONS and the incident at the Great Northern Cave(and what happens to Cloud as they're awakened)
- Tifa and the group's arrival in the town through the battle vs. Ultimate WEAPON.
- Finally, the lifestream part of the story and what happens as Tifa helps Cloud get a hold of his mind.
Now, thus far, I simply need the basis on what Cloud's memories are and, yes, the most obvious thing ever, the town's name.
Thanks in advance ^^
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 12:45 pm
SephiOverlord Well, I generally have a basic grasp on what happens. I plan on covering the following parts of the story: - Awakening of the WEAPONS and the incident at the Great Northern Cave(and what happens to Cloud as they're awakened) - Tifa and the group's arrival in the town through the battle vs. Ultimate WEAPON. - Finally, the lifestream part of the story and what happens as Tifa helps Cloud get a hold of his mind. Now, thus far, I simply need the basis on what Cloud's memories are and, yes, the most obvious thing ever, the town's name. Thanks in advance ^^ Well, what happened to cloud in the northern crater was that he ended falling into the lifestream as the WEAPON's were awaking, and the other's barely escaped in the highwind. For the Tifa part, they ended up finding cloud here, in the town, being nursed to health by the local doctor's. Then tifa ends up leaving the party to stay and help the docters heal cloud. then sometime later, after some huge materia missions, you return to find that Ultimate WEAPON is terrorizing the city and u need to defeat it before it destroyes the damn thing. after the fight, tifa and cloud are trying to get out of the town because it's falling into the lifestream, but they end up falling in with the town. That leave's us with ur final bit of unanswered info, what was the name of the town, well if ur talking about his hometown, it's Nibelheim, but if it was the one where he was being treated , then it was Mideel, i think, not sure on that one... well that about covers everything u needed to know, if i left anything out, just PM me and i'll tell you exclaim
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 1:37 pm
this is going great ^^ i have no problems with the last two points, but i think somebody else is writing the awakening of the weapons *checks* yes, return of say is writing the awakening of the weapons, so if you would please (sephioverlord) send Return of Say a PM and talk to him about where your writing should start and his should end, or even if you plan to over lap slightly please.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 4:52 pm
What I'll do is write my own variation of the awakening to go along with what happens to Cloud after he falls deeper into the crater and into the Lifestream. From there, I'll check whether or not it checks out with him about it. If all goes well and people like what I have to write, I'll write some more, but I'll save that for another time. I was thinking about doing the Nibelheim flashback, assuming no one's taken that (doesn't have first page in front of him).
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 6:03 pm
Well....I really don't have alot of time to dedicate at the moment, and sometimes not the right state of mind, if he really wants to write all that I'd be happy to have him take it over, he sounds more expirienced than I do....but I'd like to be an editor.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 6:10 pm
I'm not really experienced in writing stories or fan fics very much, but I have written poetry and essays and such in the past where people always compliment me on just how very well I write. I already wrote most of the Weapons part...but only from Cloud's point of view. I was going to edit it and add more myself, though, so I guess I'll just work on it. I'll post it when I'm done and leave it to Return of Say to edit it.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 7:18 pm
Suka said all parts have to be written in third person
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 9:19 am
i did, but then i changed it. i figured it would be limiting, so i thought people would write from what view and that the story could change pov throughout the whole thing. as long as we have a good mix of all kinds of pov then it should be okay, but if it is just one random single person pov in a story completly written in third person pov then it would seem odd. return of say, i am going to add you to my editors page then, okay?
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 5:03 pm
I'll put the Weapons part up in a little bit in this post. For the moment though, I'm going to go play Final Fantasy XI.
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 12:04 pm
so then... was i in anyway helpful???
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 1:49 pm
i dunno >< i guess we will have to wait to find out. you are helping me loads just by supporting my banner, i owe you a lot for that.
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 4:24 pm
I've got draft #1 done for the Weapon's part. As with most drafts, it's not perfect. I just need to get it and post it. One moment (expect one double post >.>; wink
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 4:56 pm
Quote: "Sephiroth...Black Materia...hahaha..." At that point, I'd lost my mind. Simple enough, I couldn't control it. My memories now began to haunt me. They absolutely refused to quit. To no end did the monsters of Sephiroth and Jenova force me to obey. I was their toy. I belong to them and no one else. "Give...haha...Sephiroth...ha...summon...Meteor...haha!" I was no more. The man once called Cloud Strife had faded from all existence, just as Sephiroth had 5 years previous. We once shared such similar lives. Yet now we were brothers, sons of Jenova. My eyes slanted and I could only think of Reunion. Slowly I stepped toward the large blue crystal before me. Laughing madly, I placed the Black Materia within the crystal. There was someone inside the crystal, Sephiroth. He did not stir as I placed the Materia inside. He won't right away. After all, he's sleeping, only just sleeping like he had been for the last five years. Yet, if that is the case, then who was the man we were chasing for so long? A ghost? Perhaps a an imposter Sephiroth beign controlled by the real thing? I couldn't say. I cackled insanity as lighting pulsed through the room. The ground shook and cracked. With that, my friends were herded out by the Turks. I think I might have heard someone, probably Tifa, scream, but at the time, I was deaf to the world. Deaf even to myself. The blue light of eternity pierced my eyes. I heard monsters emerge from the light of darkness surrounding me, but nothing mattered to me any longer. Now I was falling as the earth below my feet finally split wide open. I continued dropping into an abyss of green. As I plummeted towards the Lifestream below, I grinned and emersed myself in the laughter of one who was clinically insane. What was left of my sanity allowed me tear. As my face dampened, I could not have known I was the only one who was crying. As my laughs echoed on the walls, the gods up high wept, for their hero had fallen. There's what we got so far. I'm actually gonna call this draft #2 cuz I changed and added some stuff as I was typing the post. comments and criticism much appreciated, thanks! Edit note one: Byim, yes, you were, or more, will be very helpful with that info (I haven't started working on that segment yet) Edit note two: Suka, I'd put the banner in my sig, but it won't fit xd sorry
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:00 pm
Suka Strife i dunno >< i guess we will have to wait to find out. you are helping me loads just by supporting my banner, i owe you a lot for that. well ur welcome!!! i allways loved FFVII, and cant wait till april 25 for the movie to come out in english!!!
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 4:32 pm
!!! year 2006?!? serious?!?! what is your source!?!?! (send me a PM, as little spam as possible)
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