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 Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2011 7:37 am
 Current WIP Crits appreciated. I never get crits on my WIPs. Ever. It's getting frustrating D:
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:06 am
Hello!
I'm not particularly wizardly at proportions, so I hope I don't say anything ridiculous - forgive me if I do.
At a glance it's hard to tell the gender of the person. The nose and jawline seems pretty broad and mannish, and they have a bit of flab, so it's a guess between a tomboyish girl and a slightly pudgy guy with man boobs. Or maybe that's exactly the look you're after.
Nice detailing on the face - though alittle more needed for the hands to define the length of fingers/hand angle/relation to forearm.
The thighs could be alittle longer - should probably be roughly of similar length to the shins/calves.
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:20 am
I've gotten over it over and over againThanks for the feedback! I was thinking kindof like a masculine woman, but not to an androgynous extent xD Maybe I'll change the nose, and hopefully that helps a bit x:
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:01 am
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2011 11:29 am
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2011 4:35 pm
I would say that the main things hindering this piece artwork are the bold, thick lines. Try not to delineate so much but instead focus on the real shapes and forms you are trying to achieve.
I also would've liked to see her in some sort of atmosphere? Even a hint of her shadow would've been nice. She's just sort of there, in a white empty void, which probably isn't helped by the thick outline.
In general, though, not bad. And you did pretty well regarding her proportions.
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2011 5:28 pm
Mlle Farouche I would say that the main things hindering this piece artwork are the bold, thick lines. Try not to delineate so much but instead focus on the real shapes and forms you are trying to achieve.
I also would've liked to see her in some sort of atmosphere? Even a hint of her shadow would've been nice. She's just sort of there, in a white empty void, which probably isn't helped by the thick outline.
In general, though, not bad. And you did pretty well regarding her proportions. I've gotten over it over and over againHm, okay! I haven't quite figured out how to achieve nice looking lineart just yet ._.
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:02 am
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:34 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:59 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:56 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2011 4:41 pm
I've gotten over it over and over again Latest update to the WIP I have been slooowly working on this for EVER. I'm lazy. Also I just screencap'd it because saving and uploading the full sized image would take for EVER. so sorry about the bad quality.
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