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 Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:54 am
so i should add more? -_-
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:56 am
Nope it isn't
I'll give you an example
Ichigo Kurosaki
Zapakuto Sealed: Large Broadsword, unlike any other sealed Zapakuto
Shikai: A large Sword, curved like a cresented type blade, no hilt to it, Allows Ichigo to use Getsuga Tenshou, Ichigo's is stuck like this
Bankai: Pitch Plack Katana, Hilt has chain going off of it, Gives Ichigo a massive boost and stats.
That is his Zapaku-to's basic description....But his spirit looks Like this
A man, long black hair, cape black on outside, red on inside. Looks sorta ghost ish...Of course the only thing the same between His Bankai and his Spirit is that Ichigo is basically wearing the cape....
Bankai is more than likely the thing that would have something similar to what your spirit would be.
Yes Add more Ino, Gotta be descriptive, If your Shikai just stays in the Sealed form and can send the beam of klight say that, Be more descriptive.
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:07 pm
Wait, so can I make an arrancar? D;
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:08 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:13 pm
Can someone check my profile on page 2 at the bottom I think
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:24 pm
@ Kai:
Sure I checked it out. Stilll needs a little work but seems fairly solid (until later Izann has the final say)
@ Ino:
I see no changes. Plus stats are taken from 30, so 50 anything is impossible right now unless that is a typo.
@ Koffeh:
You can, just not yet until it's implemented later (your allowed to RPC right now anyway)XD
@ Mint:
Hmm -reading-
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:30 pm
Aegis Fyrehart @ Koffeh: You can, just not yet until it's implemented later (your allowed to RPC right now anyway)XD Then I'll just be patient. :]
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 1:19 pm
(Zanpakuto)  (Shakai)  (Bankai)  (Me) 
Name: Ryo Zanzaz Division: 1th division captain Age of Death: 24 Height: 6'4 Weight: 124 Personality: stubbon and easy going Likes: Women, Money, Fights, and Raman Dislikes: People who think they are stronger then me, Know it all, and Veggie Appearance: (You May Use A Picture To AID, But Have A Paragraph Of Description) Special Items: Zanpakuto Skills: Speed Abilities: Able to connect to other znpakuto but can not controll them ______________________________________________________________________________________ Zanpaku-to: Sun God Amaterasu Release Phrase (Shikai): Cry Amaterasu Release Phrase (Bankai): "From day to night joy and death moon from sun I Ryo will always be on top of that BANKAI" Spirit Description: up there Shikai Description: up there Shikai Abilities: Able to Slash any solid object Bankai Description: up there Bankai Abilities: My Strengh, Speed, and Power level grows ______________________________________________________________________________________ History: Ryoichi had a poor family and they didnt have enough to eat. A Kung fu master had tooken his family in to live with him. He had tought Ryoichi how to use swords and kung fu. % years later Ryoichi was 24 and when he came back from school a group of bandits had killed his family and his kung fu master. He tried to fight but there were too many of them and he didnt have his sword. During the fight he saw his family sprits leaveing as he was dieing. After dieing he had figure out that he is a shigamai. He then went to the Shigami school and the teacher said he had great power. Now he is a Shaigama.
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:21 pm
Ikari Fajuka  Personal InformationName: Ikari Fajuka
Age: died at: 16
Gender: Female
Birthday: 1-21General InformationDivision: 11 Seat/Rank: 4 Specialty: power Personality: calm, quiet, not talkative. Equipment: supplies, clothing, Zanpakuto, rose headband. Biography:Ikari's name means anger, but shes rarely angry. She usually was seen just standing at her home until she got a invitation to become a soul reaper. She made her way through the academy and became a strong student. She was rather pale and skinny, and all the other students called her a vampire. Ikari passed the final test with flying colors. She became the third seat in squad 11, but she was still called a vampire. Zanpakuto Information   Sealed: When her Zanpakuto is sealed, it looks like a normal sword, just with a silver cord hanging off of the hilt.
Shikai: When her Zanpakuto Shikai form, it turns into a scythe with only one blade. Attack is "Stun them, Magician"
Bankai: Her scythe becomes a triple bladed scythe with a long silver cord off of it that she uses to control its directionality. Activation of "Time to preform, magician"  Quote: Death Counts: 30 (you start off with this)
Speed/Agility: 11
Power/Strength:15
Stamina/Endurance:15
Reiatsu:15
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:23 pm
Zetsumei Fenikkusu  Personal InformationName: Zetsumei Fenikkusu
Nicknames:Zetsu
Age: 19, young
Gender:Male
Birthday:10/12General InformationDivision:3
Seat:Captain
Specialty: Power
Personality:Often drifts off into own little world, very passionate in battle.
Equipment: Two Kitana's sheathed on left side of waist. (ones normal other is the Zanpakuto)
Biography: Zetsumei was part born into the fabled Fenikkusu clan at the wrong time. They had finally gone to war with the near hollow that terrorized their village. The hollow were strong as were the Fenikkusu but, the hollows outnumbered them by a huge margin, rendering their efforts virtually useless.The Fenikkusu planned on making one final stand toward the hollows, even if it ment the total annihilation of their clan, they were strong believers in honor and thought death in battle was the highest level of honor. They planned on matching the first wave of Hollows with weakest members or pupils only to hold them off so that the women and children could get to safety, then they would follow up with a second wave of their toughest clan members. His dad was among the second wave, he strongly suggested that they flee to a village far from theirs, he gave his wife a Katana passed down through his family's generation and a scroll to teach him all the techniques he learned and their code, so their tradition would live on. Zetsumei's mom believed that her baby's death was imminent during this time, seeing as the Hollow's planned on wiping the clan off the face of the earth thus, naming him Zetsumei (Means the end of life). She sent Zetsumei to a far village where she raised him for a few years, teaching him the technique left in the scroll by his father. When Zetsumei was 17 a hollow attacked the village and killed his mother, although he was very young, he had a sufficient amount of skill in battle, and with the anger of witnessing his mother's be devoured, made him only stronger. He took out the hollow with one blow with one blow, and in the remains of the hollow he searched for any sign of his mother, he found no trace. Since that time, He has joined the soul society, and is the current captain of squad 3.Zanpakuto InformationSpirit: Sealed: Kigen Yori Haigara-Rise from Ashes: This blade was given to Zetsumei by his father when he was and infant. It is said to be the most sacred blade of the Fenikkusu. This blade can be reformed if broken in a small period of time(5 post). It is light as a feather but, somehow packs a huge punch.
Shikai: Umaretsuki Kaen - Birth by Fire: The released form of Kigen Yori Haigara. In this form the blade in enlarged with the pure power that Zetsumei holds. It holds the same abilities of its release form. Zetsumei is also able to form fire around the blade or around him at will, this can be used offensively and defensively. There is a detachable chain on the end of the blade that Zetsu often uses as weapon, seeing as there is a blade attached to the chain. The prongs at the back of the blade can be thrown/fired at the opponent using a sudden act of rietsu. This blade emits off unbearable hit and if made contact with skin it can cause severe burns. When his Shikai is active/in use, his power increases by 25, stamina by 6 and speed decreases by 1.
Quote: Shikai attacks:
Kisoku Fenikkusu - Breath of Phoenix: Zetsumei channels energy into blade and releases as he slashes vertcally, diagnally, or horizontally.The blast are usually 1 ½ yards in length and 6 inches in width and have a max of them are 8 yards in length and 3 yards in width. The blast are very unstable, making them uncontrollable, unabsorbable, and very difficult to block due to the raw power of the attack. The blast looks like pure red flames condensed into the form of a slash. Fenikkusu Tsuya - Wake of the Phoenix: Zetsumei cocks back and smashes his blade into the ground, sending a circular shock wave of fire on the ground. This attack sends anyone within 15 feet of him hurling into the sky. The wave stops when reached maximum length, thus giving away its range. Tsume Fenikkusu - Claw of the Phoenix: Zetsumei detaches the chain and blade at the end of Umaretsuki Kaen. He then flings it at his enemy, it then swirls around them, trapping them in a vortex of fire. This attack is usually used to capture/restrain foes. Ryuujin Sougishiki - Dragon King's Wake: Zetsumei channels energy into blade and releases it as a large dragon when he slashes vertcally, diagnally, or horizontally. The dragon seems to branch off the sword as it swings, and it charges at the foe.This attack has the power of Kisoku Fenikkusu except, now it is more controllable. The dragon looks alot like toshiro's dragon, except is made of fire, its red/orange and that its eyes are yellow. Shakudo Ryuujin - Scale of the Dragon King: Zetsumei thrusts his sword in the ground, sending waves of flames seeping at great speeds out the ground. This attack is used to either, send foes to close to the user flying or clearing out multiple enimies surrounding the user. This can also be used to cancel out Reiatsu.
Bankai: Shouten Kaen - Death by Fire : It holds all abilities as the Shikai form, except the ones involving its detachable weapons.In this form, Zetsu's arm in which he holds his blade becomes enveloped in a red tattoo in that covers the whole arm in a phoenix as the clothes that cover that arm disintegrate up to shoulder. Giant flame wings sprout from Zetsumei's back along with two giant flamming shuriken(like toushiro) that loom about two feet higher than the wings, giving him the ability to fly. In this form Zetsumei's blade can become completely consumed by fire, and the temeperature of the blade can be compared to that of the sun. If this blade makes contact with its enemy then they will suffer from extremely severe bruns from the slice, and 2nd degree burns if the blade comes within 1 foot of the skin. Zetsumei can also use a blast version of Kisoku Fenikkusu with his free arm. There is also a special jewel dangling from the chain attached to it's hilt. When in this form Zetsumei's Strength increases by 50, his speed by 20, stamina to 10 and reiatsu by 15.
Quote: All attacks of Shikai can be used (except for Tsume Fenikkusu)
Hane Fenikkusu - Feather of the Phoenix: Zetsumei seems to attempt to pierce the sword through their palm but, the closer it gets to the palm it dematerializes, send shards of black flames hovering around the him, in the shape of bright red cherry blossoms. When an attack is directed at the user when this effect is activated, a flame wall appears in the direction of the attack(s). This only works on projectile attacks. Ryuujin Guntai - Dragon Kings Army : Zetsumei spins his blade rapidly above his head with both hands, until a lage amotunt of dragons seems to exit the portal made by the blades spinning.(Max 7) The dragons are double the size of those of Ryuujin Sougishiki, they also are even less controllable but, far more destructive.
Fenikkusu Ryoukin - Charge of the Phoenix: Zetsumei's blade begins to be consumed in flames as his wings send a gust of wind beneith him, sending him hurling at his opponent at a baffling speed. Zetsumei still has full control, he can make extremely sharp turns, he can even take the attack to the skies.(thanks to the gust his speed doubles only for this attack). If this attack lands, the opponent is swirled in a huge vortex of flames, causing extremely severe burns (Near Fatal). Kaen Shimiru Narauku - Fire Piercer of Hell: Zetsumei gentle stabs his sword into the ground, then using his ability to manipulate fire, sends a wave of fire swords shooting out of the ground rapidly in any direction he wishes. The swords maximum length is 8 feet long and 4 inches long in width. Hitofuki Fenikkusu - Gust of the Phoenix: Zetsumei flies high in the skies. He then opens his wings wide and flaps them both simultaneously, sending millions of fire feathers at his foe. This attack burns badly if made contact with, and they also cut like daggers. Umarekawari Fenikkusu - Rebirth of the Phoenix: Zetsumei snatches the jewel at the end of his blade and tosses it above him. The jewel shines brightly, blinding any enemy within twenty feet of Zetsu during this attack.It then creates a barrier around him and heals him of all Fatal injuries, while replenishing some stamina.This can only be done once per battle. This can only be done when Zetsu suffers from a fatal wound. Doki Fenikkusu - Wrath of the Phoenix: Zetsumei flies high in the air, he then point the arm in which he hold his blade in the air. The blade begins emit of a blinding bright yellow light as he begins to shift his shoulder and spin it around. Zetsu then using all his power, thrust his arms downward, sending a Elegant phoenix made of fire flying at his enemy. The Phoenix is 50 yards wide(Thanks to wings) and 25 in length. *Note:The Phoenix can do Hitofuki Fenikkusu and Kisoku Fenikkusu* Quote: Stats: 30
Speed/Agility: 7
Power/Strength: 10
Stamina/Endurance:7
Reiatsu:6
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:05 pm
Isshin Tsukami  Personal InformationName: Isshin Tsukami
Age: 24 ((-Around 200-))
Gender: Male
Birthday: March 17, ???? General InformationDivision: 9th??? Seat/Rank: Captain??? Specialty: Power Class Personality: Arrogant, crass, uncaring, bold, serious, hates non-sense. Equipment: Nothing Except His Blade Biography: Isshin was born a long time ago, so long that some sometimes ask if he was from the stone ages. Jokes aside he was born in the Ido Era which is one of the reasons for his demeanor. He was raised by the blade and this is the only thing he holds truly to his heart. His upbringing was training, feelings were only a hindrance which made him a perfect swordsman. He fought countless battles and was given the nickname "Reincarnate Of Heru". The name Heru was an old proverb which stood for the devil, though devil may have been a bit much. All and all he was a terror on the battlefield. But every terror meets it's end, Isshin died protecting a village while waiting for comrades, but that wasn't before taking out over 200 soldiers alone. He was a true swordsman and now he wishes, as a shinigami, to once again show his medal and his worth to the Sereitei and protect it with his very life. Zanpakuto Information Sealed: When sealed Isshin's blade has one of the beautiful looks in all of soul society. It has been praised for it's carvings, markings, and sheen of pure white which is seen running through it. Isshin comments on his blade all the time, saying it how ironic a bloodied man had such a beautiful weapon.
Shikai: --"Twist Tysuki-Hime"-- ((Moon Princess))
Freeze Frame: The blade constantly emits a frozen aura when going into it's sealed stage. When battling anyone who comes within a 15 Ft mark ((To start off with, feet is equal to P/S)) while slowly begin to freeze over from Tysuki-Hime. The ice's power and the freeze speed can be compared to the amount of Power Isshin holds. Every 5 points increases the speed of the freeze as well as the strength of it. Naturally one could break it if they had power to match or surpass Isshin. If wet the freeze is x3 more effective. This technique is the base for most of Isshins attacks.
Quote: Ice Flare: A simple and straight-forward attack, Isshin collects spiritual energy in his blade before allowing it to fly forward at his opponent, this energy takes on the frigid aspect of ice when released. The attack freezes almost anything in it's path. Spd/Pow= Power Frozen Wasteland: Isshin will stab his blade into the ground while rapidly expressing spiritual energy. This will cause the earth to freeze over and become barren, sucking the spiritual force present into the ice itself. Anyone who is caught in this rapid sheet of ice will be stuck in place and feel a drain of energy. This technique won't work if the opponent does have power to match or surpass Isshin. The spread of ice equals 5ft for every 3 Pow.
Bankai: --- Editing--- Quote: Death Counts: 30
Speed/Agility: 5
Power/Strength: 15
Stamina/Endurance: 5
Reiatsu: 5
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:11 pm
Mint: Denied, I still don't get what your zanpakuto's ability is. Don't describe the spirit's appearance in your Shikai, do it under another heading if you so wish.
Ino: Denied, need to be much more descriptive.
jaxnax: Denied, you can't have an ability that slashes everything. More description needed, and the profile structure is there for a reason.
Ikari: Still need Shikai abilities, but if you want to make them later on it's fine as well.
lilldizzle: Accepted, that's a pretty cool zanpakuto XD
Dcme: It's very good, but I would prefer it if you didn't make everything too stat based. This is only a semi-stat based guild.
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:15 pm
So should I change the stat stuff around?
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:19 pm
Yep, like the "drained 5 stamina per turn"--I'd prefer it if you described and rped it out. Oh and speed/power = power x 2 is a little too much...
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