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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 2:06 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 2:43 pm
Cobra_X Hey Xion,
Well, seeing as this is directly from Naruto, it will be an approved bloodline, along with most of the available techniques, but more work will have to be done with the specifics of the abilities and their requirements to make them balanced.
What I need from you is more of a description of what is required of a user to reach the various stages. Based on the jutsu ranks of the techniques, we know what is available to a user within each tier of the bloodline, but how we get from one tier to the next is my question.
Luckily, the Narutopedia has outlined the techniques of this jutsu quite well, so it shouldn't be too bad. I edited it see if its ok
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 2:44 pm
((I'll get back to you both later tonight))
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 2:48 pm
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 3:46 pm
Kamisama Clan Light, Angels, Darkness 
Description: Long ago, somewhere distant from the land of thunder. There was a clan where the members were born with angelic wings. These granted them flight, and also their own set of unique jutsu(s). They believed that the wings represented ones' life, ones nature. It turns out that if the wings are white, they are pure and good. They believe in justice and have light based techniques. Their wings were feathery but bright. However, the ones with a dark heart and has stepped into the path shrouded with darkenss have black wings and darkness as their element. Their wings are sometimes bat-like, other times feathery but a ghastly black color. They believe in dark ambitions and goals. The clan altogether had gotten in a war with another clan, which the two hated each other fiercely. In an epic fight between the leaders, the clans vanished. Recently members have been spotted here and there, showing the clan is slowly recovering.
Rules
-Members can fly
-Color is based on the rpc (either white or black)
-Small reserve of chakra
-Element of light or darkness is granted (based on rpc)
-Must have wings to use jutsu(s)
-Must be at least genin to grow wings
-Can fly at genin, but must be chunin to master flight
-All jutsu(s) are clan based only, meaning co leader or above can teach others or give you permission to teach others.
-Wings are chakra based. just like a bloodline, it takes chakra out for you wings to stay out.
-Must use hand-seals to grow out wings.
Weaknesses
-user can only fly 3 posts per rank and 3 post cool-down
-wings are weak against ice and lightning
Abilities
-Flight for a limited time
-light element (depending on rpc) *good*
-Dark element (depending on rpc) *bad*
Stage one - The members of stage one is usually the inexperienced ones. The rank of the shinobi tends to be from genin to chunin. Here they are becoming stronger so they can unlock the second stage.
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus:
----D Rank Techniques----
Heavenly Feather Clone
The user creates clones that have light skin showing "holy". The user also glows lightly the same way so it doesn't give it away. It is easy to destroy the clone, which it bursts into white feathers when destroyed. the higher rank the user is the more clones produced
Holy Feather Storm
The user sends a flurry of white feathers at the target which the chakra harden it to where it is sharp enough to cut through objects. The higher rank the more feathers appear
Angelic Light Barrage
The user concentrates the element of light in their hands and unleashes a series of small bullet like spheres of light which if strikes the target causes blinding in one eye and minor burns and bruising from the force of them.
Demonic Feather Clone
The user creates clones that have dark skin showing "unholy". The user also darkens a bit to match the clones so none can tell apart. Its easy to destroy the clones, which bursts into black feathers when destroyed
Unholy Feather/Scale Storm
The user sends a flurry of scales/black feathers at the target which is hardened by chakra. These are sharp enough to cut through objects. The higher rank the more feathers
Demonic Light Barrage
The user concentrates the element of darkness in their hands and unleashes a series of bullet like spheres of darkness which if it strikes the enemy it burns their skin, bruising from the force of them. The higher the rank, the bigger the bullets
----C Rank Techniques----
Angelic Swords of Light
The user creates multiple swords of light which they move around the target and try to impale them. If the sword reaches its target it doesn't damage the outside but damages the inside like a sword normally would. Up to 5 swords can be created at a time.
Holy Chakra Missiles
The user creates a series of light chakra which concentrates into bullets which homes in on the target. If it hits it leaves explosive results. The explosion releases a blinding light which blinds any who look at it for two posts
Shining Beam of the Heavens
The user concentrates chakra at the tip of their finger to the point where it starts glowing with a bright white light. They then point it at an object which they then fire a concentrated beam of the element of light which can blind people if they look at it too closely. If contact is made the beam would peirce through their body, not damaging the outside but burning the inside around the point of contact
Demonic Swords of Shadows
The user creates multiple swords of darkness which gives off an eerie glow. The user can manipulate them to move around the target and try to impale them. If the sword does it melts the flesh around the point of contact and sever whatever it comes in contact to. Up to 5 swords may be created
Unholy Chakra Missiles
The user creates a series of dark chakra which he molds into a bullet shape which homes in on the target. If it hits it leaves explosive results which scatters black fire everywhere which cannot be put out by water.
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Name: Kamisama Clan Stage 2
Description:Stage two of the Kamisama clan. Better, faster, and more powerful, and there wings have fully grown after this. The rank of the members are usually Jonin and above. .
Rules
Must be Jonin or higher to use 2nd stage
Must have a Family member or someone close of you dead to use 2nd stage (not you killing them, but someone else killed them.)
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus:
----B Rank Techniques----
Holy Rays
The user creates a several disks of light which are thrown at the target. The disks are concentrated chakra which means if the disks reaches the target it would slice through them, though no visible damage on the outside would be seen. In close range these would blind people who look directly into them. Up to five can be made
Heaven's Illuminating Sky
The user strings handsigns together and mixes their chakra with the air molecules, creating light which brightens the area to the point where the enemies have difficulty seeing and Light moves are increased. Fire and lightning get minor boosts here as well. This lasts about 3 posts per rank and darkness is weakened slightly
Barrier of the Angels
The user creates a barrier of light around himself which will protect him from any ninjutsu for three posts that are B rank and lower. Higher ninjutsu is weakened slightly but still passes through. Those who stare into it becomes blind until the barrier is down
Unholy Rays
The user creates several disks of darkness which is thrown and homes in on the target. The disks, if it were to hit, shreds through the body burning as it passes creating excruciating pain. In close range people who stare into this would get a sudden vision of horror
Shadow Sky
The user mixes the darkness element making the area become darker, the enemies vision would be hampered and darkness jutsus power increases. . This lasts 3 posts per rank. Occasionally dark orbs fall from the sky harming those who are not of the kamisama clan, roll a dice 1-6. if even your hit if odd your not. These orbs can burn but minor burns, though over a length of time it can be very painful
Defenses of the Fallen Angel
The user creates a barrier of darkness around him which will protect him/her from any ninjutsu that are B rank or lower. Higher ninjutsus are weakened but still can pass through. This lasts three posts. Those who look into it starts seeing horrible things
----A Rank Techniques----
Purity of Light
The user creates an ball of light which is concentrated chakra. The light isnt as bright but it causes heavy damage if it makes contact, which explodes causing alot of damage to all within a 20ft radius
Divine Bolt
The user concentrates light chakra in his/her finger tips. They then fire a bolt of pure light which travels at incredible speed and power. The bolt, if hits, goes through the body destroying everything around the point of impact. No visible damage is shown on the outside but in the inside the body is eletricuted and burned. This move is very powerful. It can be used on more then one finger but it weakens
Light from the Abyss
The user creates a ball of darkness which is concentrated chakra. The ball of darkness can cause heavy damage when it hits, and when it does it explodes sending black fire everywhere creating alot of damage within 20ft radius.
Demonic Bolt
The user concentrates dark chakra in his/her finger tips. They then fire a bolt of pure darkness which travels at incredible speed and power. The bolt, if hits, goes through the body melting the area where it struck. The bolt goes through and burns the inside causing vicious pain to the victim. The user can use more then one bolt from more then one finger, but it'll be weaker.
----S Rank Techniques----
Wrath from the Heavens
The user concentrates a mass amount of light chakra into the air, creating a massive disk of light in the sky. The user then makes a sign and a massive beam of light falls onto the target, destroying everything but the user from within a 25ft radius. Those within the beam struck from it would have massive burns all over there body. This move is said to be from the light of the heavens. Afterwards the user would be tired and cannot use this technique again after the battle is over and after they get some rest.
Punishment from the Abyss
The user concentrates a mass amount of dark chakra beneath the ground. The ground grows darker and energy rises to the top like hissing snakes. Making a handsign and a massive column of black fire shoots from the ground expanding to a 25ft radius, consuming all within the black fire except the user. The fire melts the body burning off their skin, then their flesh and then their bones. The death from this move is extremely painful and is said to be from the fires of hell. Afterwards the user would be tired and cannot use this technique again until the battle is over and after they rest
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 4:55 pm
Chouchou Clan
Graceful, Images, Accurate
Clan Name: Chouchou (Butterfly)
Clan History/Back Ground:
A clan not very well known throughout the villages, the Chouchou clan specializes in mainly kenjutsu, using their very own style of sword-play. The kenjutsu style, as suggested by their clan name, is very graceful, and nontheless very effective against those who aren't as such. The clan itself is just starting to come up to the surface, and nothing is known except for it's offensive manuvers.
((Undah Con!!)
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 7:47 pm
Jaded...
Sacrifice yourself
And let me have what's left
I know that I can find
A fire in your eyes
I'm going all the way
Get away, please...
Approved!!!!!!!
...You take the breath right out of me
you left a hole where my heart should be
You've gotta fight just to make it through
Cause I will be the death of you
Propaganda...
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:34 pm
Sorry jade, but I'm veto-ing your approval. I'm already working with tenshi on this and it needs another edit or so.
...essentially I agree with you that it WILL be approved, but i want to see a few more things first. thanks!
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:38 pm
Tenshi :
Yin and yang needs a range of effect. We know it's 360 degrees, and can affect a maximum of 3 people, but it needs a distance range as well. How far out from the user's center does the technique's effect reach?
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:51 pm
Demonic Slayer:
Something about wings in a Naruto RP just really rubs me the wrong way. This is well described and layed out, but what basis does it really have in Naruto?
I dunno, the whole Angel/Demon thing seems like it doesn't have a place in the Naruto universe. (in my opinion). perhasp the other VCs can weigh in on this bloodline with me.
[Whatever is ruled however, that S-ranked technique that just incinerates everything is ridiculous... and would have to be changed.]
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:03 pm
Alright, I'll change that. But the Kamisama clan has been into multiple RPG guilds. It was first made in NUR (Naruto Ultimate Roleplay) and been pass to other guilds.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:35 pm
oops. forgot to say this some time ago.
Edited.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:40 pm
I guess... *sigh* ...(stupid angels.)
1. Can we limit the flight to 3 posts per rank? with a 3 post cooldown?
2. Can we make the wings grow from the user as an affect of some kind activation...(kind of like Byakugan, which can be brought out by hand seals if needed, but later activated at will by the user?)
Maybe the wings could even be chakra based themselves?...rather then actual wings?
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:56 pm
Lol. well now that you put it that way, make it alot more fair and more naruto like. alright, i'll change it then.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:04 pm
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