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 Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:27 pm
Imerius smiled as he trotted up ahead of Jaxon. "Hullo, Ember. I would recomend you going to ground real quick. They are calling for back up from the agents in there. It will get messy soon."
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:31 pm
Ember giggled "dont worry bout me, bro taught me concelment spells, so I'll just make myself invisible. but if you need me, I'll burn something and make it seem like an accident" She said before maknig numerous hand signals and her body became transparent.
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 1:45 pm
Lebin entered through the window just to have a pillow tossed at his head. He caught it, and laughed as he continued walking forward. After about the third step a loud pop was heard, and the pillow exploded peeling his suit of steel of his arm.
"Interesting." He said in his thick german accent as the armor formed back around his arm. "Now, let's play catch." He thrust his hand forward at enhanced speed as a small blob of steel slammed into Lu's head.
A crack was heard as his skull fractured. "Now for the lightning bug." He said as the barrel of Matt's gun peaked around the corner. He fired a continuous burst of lead at the man, but as it connected with his suit, it was simply absorbed.
"Nice toy, boy." He said with a sickening smile.
((Huh, I might actually keep Lebin.))
Jaxon caught up just after the girl disappeared. "Let's go Imerius. I can hear the fight on the second floor." He ran for the fire escape with speed that could only be accomplished with his gift. He was soon standing in the window behind Matt.
((So, who wants to take bets on who will win?))
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:40 pm
The Knuckle Head Ninja ((I need advise on my writing. I chose this section because it includes both a lot of action, and a little dialogue as well. Isaac gave the bouncer a handshake as he entered the bar. “You don’t hear anything.” He said behind him as he scanned the room. There were plenty of potential fights waiting to happen; He just had to pick the right one.
Outside the bouncer checked what was in his hand. He was getting forty creds just to let some kid in. It wasn’t like he could get a drink anyway, so why not?
Isaac found a group that seemed particularly drunk. “Hey, big guy.” He said tapping the largest of the group on the shoulder.”I’d be willin’ to bet all of this…” He rose up his wallet which was as thick as a brick. “That you couldn’t beat me in a fight.”
The man seemed to ignore him. Isaac grinned. “What, you’re afraid?” He taunted looking to the rest of the group. “All of my money against all of yours. “ He said looking to one of the others. “Can you believe that? Fatty over here won’t even fight a kid.”
The man stood at the name.”Don’t call me that.” He growled glaring at Isaac.
“Don’t over-exert yourself.”Isaac said preparing for the immanent attack.
The man lunged after Isaac trying to connect with a right hook. Isaac smirked as he ducked, and put a foot out. The man tripped, and tumbled to the floor with a thud. He then grabbed the back of the man’s hair, and smashed his nose into the floor. He waited a few seconds before removing the man’s wallet.
“So, where’s my money?” He said holding his hand out to the two other men.
One of the men shook his head. “No way a kid could take him out like that. That was rigged.” He said.
“Nope, not rigged. I’m just that good.” Isaac said remaining steadfast.
The man sighed. “Fine.” He said digging into his pocket. Before Isaac could react the man imbedded a knife into his palm.”Now, where’s my money?” The man mocked with a smirk.
Isaac winced as he pulled out the knife, and tossed it to the side.”You have no idea...” He muttered walking towards the man. His eyes darted over to a nearby table. He grabbed a bottle of what looked like wine. “This stuff kills you know.” He said pouring a bit on his wound before smashing it against the man’s head.
The bottle shattered sending bits of glass scattering across the floor. The final member of the group charged at him. Isaac waited until the last moment, jumped in the air, and planted a knee in the drunkard’s sternum. As the man started falling back, Isaac shoved his thumbs into the man’s eye sockets.
“I think I won.” He said reaching into the last two men’s wallets. “Thank you very much.” He said over his shoulder before walking towards the exit. Several eyes watched in awe as the boy walked out and onto the streets without even a comment. Anyway, I need help with losing the whole "He said" thing after every quotation mark, and also, if you have any tips on my fight scene, that would be appreciated as well. Just so you know, This is a part of a large project I've been working on, that when I finish will have a total of 6 full length stories, all of them with a cliffhanger ending, and all of them tie together in interesting ways.))
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 8:22 pm
Imerius sighed and bounded up the fire escape as well. He spoke in an authorative agent like tone. "Status report."
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 2:37 pm
EMber squirmed in antipicipation before she darted towards the building and looked in her bag "here we go, wall climbing spikes.." she said before putting on the gear and slowly began scaling the wall so she could concentrate on staying invisible.
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Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:54 pm
Jaxon gave Imerius a dirty look as Matt turned to face them. Lebin took the opportunity to launch a blob of metal at the man. Jaxon's eyes widened as he charged towards Matt with amazing speed.
Out of pure instinct Matt unleashed a burst of ammo into Jaxon's stomach. Jaxon stumbled as he shot a time distortion at the metal slowing it down before it was able to kill Matt.
"What the hell are you doing?!" Lebin yelled out to Jaxon, "I could have had him!"
Jaxon took a deep breath as he shot another distortion at Matt slowing him down enough to snatch his gun. "Okay... no more killing... Alright?" He tossing the gun to Imerius.
During all of this, Lu had managed to get behind Lebin and was about to plant a hand on Lebin shoulder when it suddenly started sparking.
Lebin's attention was immediately brought back to the two in the living room with him. "Electricity won't work child."
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Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:26 pm
Imerius quickly re-armed the gun and swung it toward Lebin's direction. He lined up the shot so that it could hit either Lebin or Lu with just a hair's bredth of movement. "We are going for a live capture." He made subtle motion to Matt trying to bring his attention outside of the window.
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Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 6:21 pm
Ember just stayed outside on the wall, her eyes twitching 'what the hell did I idiotically jump into' she thought to herself as she kept her invisibility spell up.
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:54 pm
Lebin looked at the angel. "You are a nuisance." He muttered grabbing the boy's arms. "I take it you must focus your gift through your hand, yes?" He said as metal crawled around his hands.
"No more attacks from you." He said before being kicked by Nilo. A loud crack was heard as energy was released from his kick.
"Leave him alone!" He said going for an upper cut towards his un-armored head.
Jaxon looked to Matt. "Alright listen, I don't like kicking asses, and you don't like your a** being kicked... understand? Just let me cuff you, and you won't get hurt."
Matt shot a look to Imerius hoping he'd know what to do. Then it hit him. Noone had checked their scanners since they entered."Listen, I'm just a human. I was just trying to defend myself, and my home, look at what you guys have done!"
Jaxon cursed under his breath. "Just stay out of the way then." He said pushing the man onto his bed before heading into the real battle
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:52 pm
Imerius gave Matt a subtle wink. He kept Matt's gun trained on Lebin. "We should take this outside. There are civilians."
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:49 pm
Ember quickly crawled over to the window closest to the bed matt was pushed on 'Matt, I can sneak ya out, but you have to be subtle, Im outside the window with my wall climbing gear and im using one of my brother's cloaking spells. I cant cloak you, but I can get ya to the ground quickly enough for you to escape if you want' She said telepathically to him as she hung on the wall.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:48 pm
"Yeah probably should get out of here." Matt thought moving to the window. He held a wrist out for her to grab onto so she could get him down from the second story window. He looked to Imerius. "I'll be close if you need me." He mouthed as he waited for Ember.
Lu glanced at Jaxon. 'This is getting out of hand...' He thought looking over the agents to Imerius. 'I'll blind them, you shoot.' he thought as a sudden burst of light filled the room. He quickly grabbed Nilo and lept from the broken window.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:38 pm
Imerius cursed heavily and started firing the gun at random angles into the air. He had memorized all the locations of the agents and made sure to miss but at least pretend to try.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:14 pm
Ember grabbed his hand and pulled him out of the window before jumping off the wall with him in her arms and landed in the street. "you owe me one, k?" she whispered as she let him down and ran off, still cloaked.
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