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Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 12:43 pm


Elgar the Regicide
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Name of weapon: Tamashiigari (Soul Taker)
Who owns the weapon: Mugen
Where it was found/Who made it: Found in the Forests of Otagakure
The Range of weapon: 7 feet
Weakness: Heavy, Slow swings
Description: This large blade was found By Mugen in the deepest reaches of the forest in Otagakure. This blade was inscribed with various symbols that seem to be seals. Although this blade is heavy, with enough training it can be wielded with great ease and precision. [Train for 30 posts to wield without much trouble]
Rp Sample: Mugen arrived in the clearing with 2 Jounin waiting for his arrival. The Jounin ready to attack Mugen, he pulls out a scroll from his back and opens it. In a blast of smoke a colossal blade stood in its place, Mugen grips the handle and rests it over his shoulder and motioning the Jounin to attack him. The one Jounin stood his ground, but the other charged at Mugen trying to thrust his Katana through Mugen’s heart. But when the blade struck Mugen it burst into a puff of smoke, a clone. Mugen then appeared above the Jounin swinging his great blade down on him, cutting him in two. The other Jounin was scared after seeing his comrade be cleaved in two and attempted to run away, but Mugen wouldn’t let him. He dashed toward the fleeing Shinobi, swing his great sword, breaking the ground as it dragged and cleaving the coward into pieces. After finishing off the Jounin Mugen heads back to the village, his mission complete.

So... is it just big?
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 12:55 pm


Cobra_X
Elgar the Regicide
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Name of weapon: Tamashiigari (Soul Taker)
Who owns the weapon: Mugen
Where it was found/Who made it: Found in the Forests of Otagakure
The Range of weapon: 7 feet
Weakness: Heavy, Slow swings
Description: This large blade was found By Mugen in the deepest reaches of the forest in Otagakure. This blade was inscribed with various symbols that seem to be seals. Although this blade is heavy, with enough training it can be wielded with great ease and precision. [Train for 30 posts to wield without much trouble]
Rp Sample: Mugen arrived in the clearing with 2 Jounin waiting for his arrival. The Jounin ready to attack Mugen, he pulls out a scroll from his back and opens it. In a blast of smoke a colossal blade stood in its place, Mugen grips the handle and rests it over his shoulder and motioning the Jounin to attack him. The one Jounin stood his ground, but the other charged at Mugen trying to thrust his Katana through Mugen’s heart. But when the blade struck Mugen it burst into a puff of smoke, a clone. Mugen then appeared above the Jounin swinging his great blade down on him, cutting him in two. The other Jounin was scared after seeing his comrade be cleaved in two and attempted to run away, but Mugen wouldn’t let him. He dashed toward the fleeing Shinobi, swing his great sword, breaking the ground as it dragged and cleaving the coward into pieces. After finishing off the Jounin Mugen heads back to the village, his mission complete.

So... is it just big?

I think he made it big because it would have a Great Damage Delivering Effect,if it he hits the target.And it's shape could prove being effective too.

ledriiskillzave


Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 12:57 pm


kuro-uchi
I made a long RP showing how the blade would be incorporated into my overall style of fighting
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Name of weapon: Byakurai
Who owns the weapon: Kuro Uchi
Where it was found/Who made it: it was given to him by his Assassin Sensai for being the top of his class.
The Range of the weapon: 1 foot long
Weakness: it is a hidden blade under his arm so it is a hard weapon to use in open combat
Description: It was crafted by the Assassin Academy Grand Master himself and was infused with his chakra during being made. Once it was cooled he extracted the chakra creating a void in the blade that would act as a vacuum and suck-in any chakra it comes into contact with, giving it the ability to absorb Ninjutsu but it cannot absorb all of a Demon ninjutsu only some. It can only absorb so much chakra before need to release it in someway.

First off, I don't think we are allowing things which absorb other people's chakra anymore. It seems to be much too strong of an ability to gain through a weapon, especially if it's capable of absorbing ANY ninjutsu it comes into contact with.

I like that there was a penalty for absorbing the chakra, and I think it COULD be allowed, but only if you limit the type of techniques that can be absorbed (persay, techniques that are more energy based... since obviously it couldn't absorb rocks or tons of water... but could absorb fire, or electricity, or some forms of wind[those which have chakra embedded within the wind to cause damage])

...I will confer with Cory and Tenshi to get a ruling.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 12:59 pm


-Duki Uchiha-
Cobra_X

So... is it just big?

I think he made it big because it would have a Great Damage Delivering Effect,if it he hits the target.And it's shape could prove being effective too.

Well whatever the reason, I'll wait to see what he says. If it's just a big weapon I'll approve it as he's written it. I sjut wanted to make sure that's all there was too it.

Cobra_X
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Elgar the Regicide

PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 2:30 pm


Cobra_X
-Duki Uchiha-
Cobra_X

So... is it just big?

I think he made it big because it would have a Great Damage Delivering Effect,if it he hits the target.And it's shape could prove being effective too.

Well whatever the reason, I'll wait to see what he says. If it's just a big weapon I'll approve it as he's written it. I sjut wanted to make sure that's all there was too it.


Well I thought about making a Weapon style for this weapon, and I'm working on it right now. Oh something I did forget the sword is cursed.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 3:01 pm


Cobra_X
kuro-uchi
I made a long RP showing how the blade would be incorporated into my overall style of fighting
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Name of weapon: Byakurai
Who owns the weapon: Kuro Uchi
Where it was found/Who made it: it was given to him by his Assassin Sensai for being the top of his class.
The Range of the weapon: 1 foot long
Weakness: it is a hidden blade under his arm so it is a hard weapon to use in open combat
Description: It was crafted by the Assassin Academy Grand Master himself and was infused with his chakra during being made. Once it was cooled he extracted the chakra creating a void in the blade that would act as a vacuum and suck-in any chakra it comes into contact with, giving it the ability to absorb Ninjutsu but it cannot absorb all of a Demon ninjutsu only some. It can only absorb so much chakra before need to release it in someway.

First off, I don't think we are allowing things which absorb other people's chakra anymore. It seems to be much too strong of an ability to gain through a weapon, especially if it's capable of absorbing ANY ninjutsu it comes into contact with.

I like that there was a penalty for absorbing the chakra, and I think it COULD be allowed, but only if you limit the type of techniques that can be absorbed (persay, techniques that are more energy based... since obviously it couldn't absorb rocks or tons of water... but could absorb fire, or electricity, or some forms of wind[those which have chakra embedded within the wind to cause damage])

...I will confer with Cory and Tenshi to get a ruling.


The absorbing of ninjutsu seems a bit cheap. We don't want to see genins surviving S-ranked jutsu... Just because that wouldn't happen.

Aqua Fall 12
Crew


kuro-uchi

PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 3:34 pm


Aqua Fall 12
Cobra_X
kuro-uchi
I made a long RP showing how the blade would be incorporated into my overall style of fighting
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Name of weapon: Byakurai
Who owns the weapon: Kuro Uchi
Where it was found/Who made it: it was given to him by his Assassin Sensai for being the top of his class.
The Range of the weapon: 1 foot long
Weakness: it is a hidden blade under his arm so it is a hard weapon to use in open combat
Description: It was crafted by the Assassin Academy Grand Master himself and was infused with his chakra during being made. Once it was cooled he extracted the chakra creating a void in the blade that would act as a vacuum and suck-in any chakra it comes into contact with, giving it the ability to absorb Ninjutsu but it cannot absorb all of a Demon ninjutsu only some. It can only absorb so much chakra before need to release it in someway.

First off, I don't think we are allowing things which absorb other people's chakra anymore. It seems to be much too strong of an ability to gain through a weapon, especially if it's capable of absorbing ANY ninjutsu it comes into contact with.

I like that there was a penalty for absorbing the chakra, and I think it COULD be allowed, but only if you limit the type of techniques that can be absorbed (persay, techniques that are more energy based... since obviously it couldn't absorb rocks or tons of water... but could absorb fire, or electricity, or some forms of wind[those which have chakra embedded within the wind to cause damage])

...I will confer with Cory and Tenshi to get a ruling.


The absorbing of ninjutsu seems a bit cheap. We don't want to see genins surviving S-ranked jutsu... Just because that wouldn't happen.


ok, I changed some things, better4? if not just say what.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 9:37 pm


I think that I would say it would almost be better for it to absorb, at most, a Jounin level technique, but to do so, the user themselves has to expend an equal amount of their own chakra to absorb the ninjutsu. they could then, release the jutsu back at the user at any given time without the need to expend the chakra.

...this however could only be done once every 3 posts, or something to that effect. Whats nice about it, is that as a Konaga clan member, you have plenty of chakra to spare for such absorptions.

Cobra_X
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Shruikan Tenshi
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:53 am


My only saying is the rules are no chakra absorbing weapons, like the samehada. We can change it, but there will be a serious limit on it. So we'll see about it
PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:53 pm




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Name of weapon: Dabaru Piripiri (Double Stinger)
Who owns the weapon: Cory Anaboko (My to-be-RPC)
Where it was found/Who made it: Ancient smiths from Cory's home village. After the blade was created, it was put into his family as an heirloom, where he stole it after fleeing a large catastrophe.
The Range of the weapon: 0.8m
Weakness: Once the target has realized that they are suffering multiple wounds per strike, they can clearly see the chakra-blade that is created by the original. Up to then, it's near invisible.
Description: Using chakra, the blade is able to make a duplicate of itself for a short time using chakra. The duplicate is made of chakra, and isn't solid, but can still create gashes in flesh like the original. Because of this, the victim will suffer multiple wounds per strike. The blade can only be blocked by physical items, while the chakra blade can only by blocked by chakra. The duplicate chakra-blade may only be created every three posts, and requires a C-ranked amount of chakra along with a small toll on the user's chakra system that prevents them from using B-ranked and up techniques for two posts.
Rp Sample:

Placing his hand on his katana's handle as he bowed respectfully, Cory smirked, noting that this was his first fight with a rogue ninja. He had always wanted to kill at least one person within his career as a shinobi, which was a unique mentality from his native clan: The Anaboko. The Anaboko were feirce warriors, most of which were bred to kill and maim; And Cory himself was one of the many prodigies. The rogue that stood before him what clad in gothic attire, the male shinobi wearing many belts and trinkets which, on a normal person, would belong on their belt.
"Is that a freaking water-bottle fastened on your shoulder?" Cory asked mockingly. "And a belt around your little finger?"
The target looked at him as if he were crazy, offering an insult of his own.
"You're the one wearing a bath-robe, kid." he rogue replied, taking out his katana gracefully and delicately, as if holding a newborn child. He suddenly lunged, the rogue's speed greater than anything Cory had seen up to this point in his life. As Cory's attacker swung his sword, Cory unseathed his own with perfect timing, blocking the sword of his opponent.
"You've got much to learn, Rogue." Cory taunted, moving the opponent's sword out of the way as Cory slashed at his target, smiling briefly for a few moments until the rogue parried and countered in one fluid motion, leaving room for the chakra-blade to carry on with it's purpose.
"Now, die!" he rogue screamed, attempting to impale Cory's now-un-gaurded body. A large gash appeared across the rogue's chest, blood gushing out of the deep wound as he collapsed to the ground, twitching.
"You're a fool," Cory said, the man still alive as he readied his sword, and driving the sword through the man's neck.

Aqua Fall 12
Crew


Unrelinquished Despair

PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:04 pm


Metaphorically Insane
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Name of weapon: Dual-Tessen (Dual Iron Fans)

Who owns the weapon: Kimi Tsukino

Where it was found/Who made it: The fans were scavenged off the body of her village leader who protected them if physical conflict ever arose. They were passed down from a small Kunoichi group who were closely affiliated with Geisha.

The Range of the weapon: 1'4", can be lengthened if a chakra element is used.

Weakness: The material concealing the blades is made of a special silk as strong as cardboard. If not cared for properly they can easily fall apart.

Description: The fan itself is made of unique material, although it looks like a regular fan to any eye. Upon testing and closer inspect, the silk happens to be stronger than average, holding the strength of cardboard, but keeping it finesse. The blades that are cleverly concealed beneath the material are made out of the same metal that chakra conducting weapons use, and can be manipulated in such a way. The tips of each blade, posing as a piece of metal that folds with the fan, pokes out just enough to harm anyone struck with it.

Rp Sample:

Chatter, movement, and singing were the only things heard within the compound of which was commonly known as a whore house. Several women danced around on designated spots, flaunting special features, clothes, and other items that were used to boost desire for them. Kimi herself was among the dancers, using a new tool of enticement called a pole, which was built into the floor directly to the cieling. With her usual sex appel, her petite figure twisted around its metal surface. The cloth upon her waist known as a skirt fluttered about freely but carefully, starving hungry eyes of a view most said forbidden.

I just need to get closer...

With the purple optics that so easily enticed men, she gazed at the man who she was sent specifically to kill. He was the owner of several organizations that dealt with rogue ninja, and sneaking them about when needed. Kimi was charged with the oppurtunity to kill the man, and bring only his head as proof.

An alien smile coated her crimson lips at the thought of what she was going to do, unconsciously raising more interest from the men around her. To boost the mysticism of the situation, since she was a newcomer, she drew two fans with a black surface out of thin air, twirling them about. Gasps of amazement came from the hungry males, even the target, pushing her unconscious mind to give off a sexual note.

Clearly, the target knew that she had her eyes on him, and he showed his interest as well. With unseen signs, he beckoned Kimi towards him, and she oblidged. Slowly, with sexual finesse her figure twirled around the pole and gracefully dismounted, casually walking towards the man with her fans in hand. Immediately the man stood up and coiled his left appendage around her shoulder, guiding her by rule to a clean room to which he could do what he desired.

For moments in the room, fantasies flowed in and out of the targets eyes, his hands sliding across her body and gently kissing the pale skin that she held. Nothing could be heard from her besides gentle giggles, and soft moans that made her target go beyond belief with his mind. Lightly she grasped his shoulders and pushed his figure away, giving yet another soft giggle and standing up.

"Now for a private dance..." Kimi said. Nothing was odd about her voice, but to the man it was full of sexual desire.

With seemingly expert attention, she began swaying her hips and twisting in place, not moving her feet an inch from their position. An added feature of the dance were the fans being lightly tossed into the air, twirled, and waved in the direction of the man.

Near the end of her sexual expose, her small digits lightly brushed against the hold her clothes had upon her shoulders, the slightly heavied cloth falling down just before her poking nipples could be displayed. The man became overwhelmed with his gesture and began crowling towards Kimi like a doll, his pants being strained by a force not appropriate for young readers. As he approached, she began slowly dancing with the fans as the main attraction, pulling the man closer with her trance.

In seconds the tension of sexual intercourse was released from either of them, and blood became spatterd across the yellow walls that encased the room. The man could not even let out a blood curtling scream before his head was shaven off by the hidden blades within the fans. Their professional look kept true, as the small tips were but enhanced and lengthened by lightning chakra, and allowed its appearance to stay clean.

"Nnn... that's so much better." Kimi whispered. To her, the man looked a lot more appealing while he was dead, and pulled her head towards the males deceased form. Softly, the canines that lined her mouth piereced the flesh near the open neck and began pulling blood out of the body while it was fresh, renewing the vigor in her limbs and mind.

The room that the male was unknowingly led to was semi-special, and held within it devices related to a particular type of sexual pleasure. None of them were needed however, and she snatched a bag from one of the corners, rolling the head within the bags leathery contents. A smirk carved itself into her deep crimson lips.

"The clean up can be left to someone else." Her voice let the words escape with a personal ecstasy within it, her figure casually walking out of the room and exiting the building quickly. All that was left was to bring the head to the client.


The lightning is just my RPC's chakra. >-<;; Approve or deny please~
PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:45 pm


I think it sounds fine. Nothing crazy insane about it, but it is pretty cool!

Cobra_X
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Aqua Fall 12
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:58 pm


Cobra_X
I think it sounds fine. Nothing crazy insane about it, but it is pretty cool!

But ju fergotted meeeeee.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:23 pm


My jury is out on your weapon. I like the concept, but this is a pretty strong ability to have with a custom weapon. I would say that in order to create a nearly invisible chakra based weapon the following drawbacks would have to exist...

1. The Actual chakra blade can only be created every other post.

2. Creating the chakra duplicate takes a decent amount of chakra... equivalent to a Chuunin level technique.

Cobra_X
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Aqua Fall 12
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:31 pm


Aqua Fall 12


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Name of weapon: Dabaru Piripiri (Double Stinger)
Who owns the weapon: Cory Anaboko (My to-be-RPC)
Where it was found/Who made it: Ancient smiths from Cory's home village. After the blade was created, it was put into his family as an heirloom, where he stole it after fleeing a large catastrophe.
The Range of the weapon: 0.8m
Weakness: Once the target has realized that they are suffering multiple wounds per strike, they can clearly see the chakra-blade that is created by the original. Up to then, it's near invisible.
Description: Using chakra, the blade is able to make a duplicate of itself for a short time using chakra. The duplicate is made of chakra, and isn't solid, but can still create gashes in flesh like the original. Because of this, the victim will suffer multiple wounds per strike. The blade can only be blocked by physical items, while the chakra blade can only by blocked by chakra. The duplicate chakra-blade may only be created every three posts, and requires a C-ranked amount of chakra along with a small toll on the user's chakra system that prevents them from using B-ranked and up techniques for two posts.
Rp Sample:

Placing his hand on his katana's handle as he bowed respectfully, Cory smirked, noting that this was his first fight with a rogue ninja. He had always wanted to kill at least one person within his career as a shinobi, which was a unique mentality from his native clan: The Anaboko. The Anaboko were feirce warriors, most of which were bred to kill and maim; And Cory himself was one of the many prodigies. The rogue that stood before him what clad in gothic attire, the male shinobi wearing many belts and trinkets which, on a normal person, would belong on their belt.
"Is that a freaking water-bottle fastened on your shoulder?" Cory asked mockingly. "And a belt around your little finger?"
The target looked at him as if he were crazy, offering an insult of his own.
"You're the one wearing a bath-robe, kid." he rogue replied, taking out his katana gracefully and delicately, as if holding a newborn child. He suddenly lunged, the rogue's speed greater than anything Cory had seen up to this point in his life. As Cory's attacker swung his sword, Cory unseathed his own with perfect timing, blocking the sword of his opponent.
"You've got much to learn, Rogue." Cory taunted, moving the opponent's sword out of the way as Cory slashed at his target, smiling briefly for a few moments until the rogue parried and countered in one fluid motion, leaving room for the chakra-blade to carry on with it's purpose.
"Now, die!" he rogue screamed, attempting to impale Cory's now-un-gaurded body. A large gash appeared across the rogue's chest, blood gushing out of the deep wound as he collapsed to the ground, twitching.
"You're a fool," Cory said, the man still alive as he readied his sword, and driving the sword through the man's neck.


I reworked it just a bit, but I put a few more limitations on it to prevent myself from using a too-powerful weapon.
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