|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:01 am
HelloItsJoe Would you like me to try again?
It's fine if you do. ^_^ yes if you coul just right up a brief description of the limitations and weaknesses of the sharingan in your own words I would really appreciate it; make sure you show me that you understand the bloodline and it's limitations so I know you won't abuse it
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:05 am
Martin Spiralwave Lance Fulgurant I like your rp sample, it was very well written, but while it shows me that you know what it can do, but now i need you to tell me what it can't do, give me a brief description of it's weaknesses and how it could be countered, it doesn't have to be an rp sample, but you should at least be able to give me a couple sentences The Kurama clan's doujutsu is limited to eye contact in order for them to manipulate the senses of their opponent. Their Taijutsu will most likely be underdeveloped and the constantly run the risk of being overtaken by an 'evil side'. Their mentality is often shaky due to the horrific visions they inflict upon their enemies, making their pyche vunerable to psychological attacks or other Genjutsu. alright looks good, i'm gonna put some faith in you to not abuse this fairly powerful bloodline; ACCEPTED!!! please send 1000g to bluewolfofmibu to make it official
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:09 am
-waves hands- what bout the last two clans!!!!!!!!!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:17 am
Joshua Collen Rpc Name: Kio Anabe Kaguya Village: Rock Village Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kaguya What you know about the clan/bl: People gifted with this bloodline are able to fully control the cells responsible for the bones structure. They are able to create bones and manipulate them as their weapon. They are extinct or at least it is what is thought.Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan): Kio was heading towards his home. His village was under attack and his parents here in danger. He knew he wasn’t very strong but he had to, at least, try and protect them since neither his father nor his mother were shinobis. He arrived his home was burning and his parents were outside with two shinobis maybe at chunin level. Kio went and appeared in front of them. They made the first move: the tallest guy went towards him trying to cut Kio with his kunai but quickly a bone exited Kio’s shoulder and protected him. Not only protected but also grew and stabbed this guy right on his heart. The other guy, smaller in high but maybe physically stronger than the other stayed there, maybe thinking how did a genin killed his partner. After some time Kio noticed why the other guy wasn’t moving. He was using gengutsu. He made serious damage on Kio but fortunately his bloodline helped him with it since he could regenerate faster but if his teacher hadn’t showed up and killed the b*****d probably Kio had died right there. He was grateful both his parents where alright and his teacher congratulated him for his bravura but also said he needed more training before another real battle. He agreed and he started training to become stronger. I'm sorry, but this rp sample does not show good enough understanding of the bloodline, you showed a basic knowledge of the bloodline, but i need to know that you understand the strengths and weaknesses beyond what the description simply states; i'm glad that you incorporated the weakness to genjutsus but that is not the only weaknesses that the bloodline has especially for a genin, feel free to try again, just remember to show me that you really understand the limitations of the bloodlines
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:31 am
little mintchan Rpc Name: Kai Hana Village: Iwagakure Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara clan What you know about the clan/bl: They are shadow minuplutars, extremely lazy and the men int he clan always want to find toa women relax and have a simple life while the women can be bossy at times when married but the clan is also very very! smart in strategies but lack in taijustu and are good in ninjustu don't know bout genjustu yet Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan): Kai jutted behind a rock as another exploding kunai flew past her proximity, exploding the base of a tree, falling down towards her. "Kid...you might as well give up. You know that you can't beat me." she yelled towards the man...he had been doing a good job of only alerting her opponent to just his general proximity, not to exact location. This open clearing in the middle of the forest was a good place to fight because of the shadow from the trees. I got to get to him..."Kagemane no Justu..." she whispered as her shadow stretches out...catching on to each other shadow along the way from the forestry. Turning around she made sure that she could see what was going on from behind a set of treeline, eventually his justu attaching onto one of his opponents's subordinants who was furthest away from him. Kai always wore his weapons in weird places for this perticular reason. Covering her own mouth with one hand, the subordinate immitated; then he pulled a kunai from the subordinate's weapons pouch and walked over to the other subordinates, slicing each's throat. Her opponent, too bothered with trying to find his target did not notice his own person killings his comrads. Eventually Kai jumped into the air, using both hands to stab the man into the oppents back, then releasing them. The man ripped his own comrad off his back...vicously smashing him into the ground. Nows my chance..."Kage Nui no Justu"... she said a loud...knowing she had him. Tendrels of black shadow shot forth stabbing into three of his four limbs. Fighting back vigilantly he grabbed one and kept ahold of it. "This is not the end for me!!!" he yelled just before the three other tendrels streched around the back of him, stabbing into the place in his chest where his heart lyed. "No it is...your time is up...Time to head back to the village" Kai whispered now heading back into the village after stopping the ninjas from entering her beloved village i'm sorry but this rp sample isn't gonna cut it. I can understand maybe one shinobi not realizing that one of his own comrades is killing the rest of his comrades, but how are none of the others going to realize? Also how would you have been able to manipulate the shinobi into killing these other shinobi without losing their cover and revealing their location to the enemy that is actively searching for you? Also you have to realize that these techniques do not reach their targets instantaneously, it is usually quite difficult to catch another shinobi in a shadow technique unless they are unaware of it happening or they simply have no way of escaping, which from how you described the scenario was not the case. Nara clan jutsus are more support jutsus than direct assault jutsus so the idea of a single Nara clan member taking down more than two or three shinobi by themeselves is a bit unlikely, especially if the only techniques used are the nara clan jutsus. Please feel free to try again, but try this time to really show me that you understand the limitations of the clan
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:36 am
I'm going to have to uhhm, challenge you on this. She did show she knew what the techniques are... remember this is just a scenario, things are going to be god-controlled really. It's very difficult to mimic something showing every single aspect. I notice you expect perfection, that won't happen. Don't make her write a whole new RP example, just her own in her own words explanation of what can and can't be done.
That goes for the other guy too. His example was excellent, at least he knew what genjutsu is capable of. Remember, people don't want to look bad, showing weakness that's very hard. Give them a break. Seriously.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:53 am
Lance Fulgurant Joshua Collen Rpc Name: Kio Anabe Kaguya Village: Rock Village Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kaguya What you know about the clan/bl: People gifted with this bloodline are able to fully control the cells responsible for the bones structure. They are able to create bones and manipulate them as their weapon. They are extinct or at least it is what is thought.Rp Sample (2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan): Kio was heading towards his home. His village was under attack and his parents here in danger. He knew he wasn’t very strong but he had to, at least, try and protect them since neither his father nor his mother were shinobis. He arrived his home was burning and his parents were outside with two shinobis maybe at chunin level. Kio went and appeared in front of them. They made the first move: the tallest guy went towards him trying to cut Kio with his kunai but quickly a bone exited Kio’s shoulder and protected him. Not only protected but also grew and stabbed this guy right on his heart. The other guy, smaller in high but maybe physically stronger than the other stayed there, maybe thinking how did a genin killed his partner. After some time Kio noticed why the other guy wasn’t moving. He was using gengutsu. He made serious damage on Kio but fortunately his bloodline helped him with it since he could regenerate faster but if his teacher hadn’t showed up and killed the b*****d probably Kio had died right there. He was grateful both his parents where alright and his teacher congratulated him for his bravura but also said he needed more training before another real battle. He agreed and he started training to become stronger. I'm sorry, but this rp sample does not show good enough understanding of the bloodline, you showed a basic knowledge of the bloodline, but i need to know that you understand the strengths and weaknesses beyond what the description simply states; i'm glad that you incorporated the weakness to genjutsus but that is not the only weaknesses that the bloodline has especially for a genin, feel free to try again, just remember to show me that you really understand the limitations of the bloodlines Here is my new RPS, I hope this suits you biggrin Kio was training. His jouning teacher was trying to let him be aware of his weaknesses so he could work on them. His teacher quickly stopped his hand-to-hand combat. Of course he was winning against Kio but it was Kio’s strongest point. His jounin attack him, but this time with only a water jutsu. He closed Kio into a ball of water and he could do nothing. His bloodline didn’t allow him to escape from that and he was just a genin so he couldn’t do anything against it. Soon his teacher stopped his ninjutsu and Kio could breathe. “You see, your bloodline can’t save you from everything…” he said with a friendly smile on his face. “Let’s try another thing, shall we?” he asked making some hand seals. Kio instantly fell into a gengutsu, it wasn’t very powerful but enough for Kio to fell for it. He saty there watching all his closest friends die, also his parents, by the hand of his teacher. He was shocked and he entered in a panic stance. Kio fell into the floor with his irregular breath. “You see Kio, your bloodline is powerful, but you have to learn how to play with it. Your strongest power is on hand-to-hand combat and your regeneration but you are weak against ninjutsu and gengutsu as you could see. You have also other weaknesses as any other mental bloodlines you can face. Watch out and be careful on your next mission, ok?” his teacher asked and he went of leaving Kio alone thinking about what had happened.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:17 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:18 pm
soo do i have to make another roleplay sample?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:32 pm
Thank you. I've already sent my trade to Blue...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:39 pm
Rpc Name: Seleste Mitsalune
Village: Iwagakura
Rank: Chunnin
Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Crystal Element (Kurisutaru: Crystal)
What you know about the clan/bl: Everything! (just kidding) The Crystal Element bloodline allows for the user to turn anything into Crystal via the combination of lightning and earth. The crystal is very strong; being unbreakable by ninjutsu. The only weakness against this is taijutsu, or someone with a stronger rank.
Rp Sample:
The drunks were fighting again. She sighed in utter irritation, behind the bar, before sitting up, listening to the bar fight. She shivered, running her hands up and down her biceps to create friction for the heat, when there was a loud crack, and Seleste saw stars burst out on front of her eyes. There was another loud crack, and she inhaled in the dirt of the ground. Ground...? How did her face get into the ground? She looked up, and felt the heat rise to her face as she saw a drunk man stretched over her body, pinning her to the ground. He was comatose, and further inspection showed he had been literally thrown out of back door. She pushed the guy off of her, taking in a breath of alcohol in the process. "What do we have here," somebody said above her. She looked up, the blood running cold in her face as she saw six guys standing in front of her. "Seleste baby, haven't we told you we never wanted to see you again without your mommy with you," one of the guy's said, reaching down for her collar.
She jumped, running down the hall. Man, she was just looking for her mother too! She turned the corner of another alley, pushing chakra into her feet. Wait, why was she running? She was a genin now! She didn't have to run. She spun on her heel, and her hands flying into hand seal, "Crystal Hexagon Disks," she said, throwing the crystal in her hand toward one of the men chasing her. He brought out a kunai (oh great, they were ninja, just what she needed) and slashed at the crystal hexagon, which shattered and stabbed his arm. He screamed, falling to his knees. Before pushing up and grabbing her around the throat and slamming her into the ground. She saw stars again. The kunai hung readily and poised above her head, before he plunged it down. Seleste closed her eyes, pulling her hands into another seal, "
Crystal Release: Crystal Armor," she said, her breath getting short from the lack of air. There was a crack and a shatter, before she opened her eyes and saw the kunai had shattered. She was protected by the crystal that covered her skin. She sighed in relief before the man picked her up and threw her into the wall. She slid down as his hands rapidly formed seals. She looked up in time to see a Katon jutsu aimed at her body. The shield over her cracked and shattered and she held her breath, feeling the burning flames lick her porcelain skin. She charged forward, "Crystal Blades," she shouted, and before he knew what had happened, she had slashed downwards with the blades on her forearm and cut his chest. He fell, and she turned to the other men. They took one look at her, and ran. She reached down into her pouch and pulled out a flare before lighting it above the man's head to alert any passing ninja that he needed medical assistance, before fading into the shadows.
(my God that was long)
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 1:01 pm
Accepted.
Make sure you pay Bluewolf.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:03 pm
*Nara clan*[i'm gona do the type the do and don't's]
academy students are limited to thier shadow lengths how long they can hold on[do to low chakra] genin are longer and able to do clan justu's with a longer capaticy[shiakamru genin is 2 mins tops] chuunin are longer a minute and shadows are much longer and can go in a dark hole comming out the other way...jounin can disguise themselves AS shadows and come out of them in sneaka ttack[shika vs hidan] shadows can stretch MUCH father a couple feet farther then chuunin and capaticy of holding the shadow minuplutation justu[learned at genin] is 5 mins tops! mininume is 2 mins or 3 mins.....sannin anbu and kage are up to 10 mins length is to 20 to 15 feet or more the things you CAN NOT do in nara clan is be stupid like a a*****e[*cough* kai in NUR*cough*] your shadow HAS limits to how long depending on rank for exsample i'm genin so my shadow will go 5 feet or 2 inchs i forget guilds are differnt in that section and holding time to grab and restrain someone is 2 mins but when i reach chuunin or jounin i can go 5 mins length is 8 or less feet or more [same thing dam guilds!] and the clan is lazy so your rpc has to be lazy, smart and GREAT at strategies and if it's a boy find girl to relax with when older women find a man ect ect
good anough? i'm a huge nara fan so i know more then most ppl^-^
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:16 pm
Acceptable. Your grammar scares me a bit. XD
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:19 pm
lol i was born with awesome grammer to spell huge words it's elementry my dear lad xD
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
