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 Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 2:10 pm
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Bubblegum Flavored Pandy
Poem: Dying from goat flu
Will hurt much more than the shot
So just suck it up.
Comments (optional): Basically what my mommy says to me when I have to get a shot. But it works. haha (Side note: Yay Haikus!)
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 5:31 pm
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Katjive
Poem:
Aich, there's no need to fear!
For SUPERMAN is here!
He will call out your goat flu,
and then will beat it black and blue!
You need not fear the needle's p***k,
for think of what's inside of it!
A fighting thing of might and men,
will set you back to rights again.
That liquid there, yeah that's the stuff!
Once it's in you, then you'll be tough!
And then that mean old nasty flu,
won't be a problem, not for you!
And then when all is said and done,
you will be my number one!
Upon your breast for all to see,
a sticker saying "Be proud of ME!"
For you, brave you, you beat your fear!
A good thing too, for death was near,
and then, as your fear fell flat,
you said "All that fuss over THAT?"
Comments (optional): It's a fun poem, with a simple aabb rhyme scheme. Also, it's got SUPERMAN in it. And stickers. Fun story? The stickers were the only reason I let the doctors give me my shots when I was little. They promised me stickers if I was good. xD
And the concept still works. First time giving blood? The Red Cross will give you a sticker (no joke) that says "Be nice to me, I just gave blood!"
EDIT: OOPS, it's over the word limit. But I like it the way it is. So....uh....just disregard the last two stanzas to make it qualify. Sorry about that! (Just think of the omitted ones as bonus features for your reading pleasure?)
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:38 am
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: hanging gallow
Poem:
Hey boy, there once was a tale
Spoken about an old haunted tree
Whose branches stretched from sky to sky
No no, don’t look that way eyes on me
What you cannot see you cannot fear
Anyways this tree would gobble up
Anything that flowed with blood
From the small blue jays willing to sing
To the foulest wolves with the sharpest teeth
Teeth, no I mean look cotton candy
What a treat!
What do you mean a bite its mine!
Well of course I’m not going to share I mean
Oh look the nurse is done!
Time to go!
Comments (optional): OH LOOK DISTRACTION PLOY GO GO GO!
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:01 am
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Rhea Hyuga
Poem:
Roses are red, Violets are blue.
There is no need for fear, I am here for you.
You are my friend, and I am yours,
I will stay by your side for hours.
We will drink after this, margaritas with lime,
Oh! We gotta go! It's happy hour time!
Comments (optional): Used the 'roses are red' poem as a skeleton, and twisted it C: Not exactly the best but... C:
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:32 pm
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer:Alanna the Pirate Queen
Poem:
Close your eyes and
loose yourself
admist the memories,
feel the soft sweet wind
as it carresses
leaves of trees.
Ignore the pain
ignore the fear
let your dreams take wing,
do not allow your
thoughts to dwell
upon the gentle sting.
Sing a song
or wrap your arms
around the soft fur bear,
hold my hand
and do not fret
for I am always there...
To dry your tears
and pat your head
to give you gentle praise,
to keep you safe
and healthy for
all the rest your days...
Comments (optional): I wrote this poem like this because this is how I used to comfort myself when I was little and afraid of shots. I would close my eyes and pretend I am somewhere else, and that the shot was actually just some one pinching me or something... ^_^
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:00 am
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Zactura
Poem:
So scared of the p***k, so scared of the flash
The silver dart quick and out like a lash
The shiver of flesh as the slender needle dances near
Whispering her song into your trembling ear
"Oh, don't be frightened, you poor dear thing
This, probably, will not even sting!"
She comforts, she croons, waiting and watching
For the time when she can dash under your skin
To the point where you have no choice but to allow her in
And as she releases her blood into yours
You'll never realize what lay beyond her broken doors.
Comments: Nope.
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 7:49 am
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Loquitadeindiana
Poem:
Oh Dear Little Aich,
So brave and strong.
Please dont be afraid.
It will make the Flu be gone before long,
Then you will see that it wasnt that bad,
And the girls will see that they werent wrong.
Comments (optional): Every boy is worried about the girlies think... (OK most anyway wink )
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:21 am
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: JadedTiger22
Poem:
‘Worst childhood memory?’
What’s this, a little bumble bee?
How did you manage to meet me here?
Are you here to play with me?
Yes, nuzzle all you wish up in my mane,
A friend is welcome to a free ride.
:pop!:
What’s brings about this betrayl?
I’ve done nothing to deserve this pain.
Take your sharp little butt and leave me now.
I’ll wonder these fields alone.
I’ve never much cared for bees since then.
….
Oh Snoopy! How I adore this tiny bandage.
So much so I will forgive this deception, Nurse.
Comments (optional): Can’t stand ‘em myself, so we’ll cope together!
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 11:08 am
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Thamin
Poem:
Fear not the needle, little one
you'll only feel a pinch
Just close your eyes, little one
see, that was such a cinch
No pain involved, little one
And you'll feel better soon
Not to mention, Little one
You get this lollipop to boon!
Comments (optional): My Dad actually had this fear - He actually fought so hard once to not get a shot he caused himself to have a mild heart attack. He was declared dead for 2 minutes. ^^;
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:21 pm
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Kejren
Poem:
Illness has fallen over you,
Casted a shadow onto your soul.
It bites at your immune system,
Eats away at your health.
Think of it this way, Aich,
You may choose death by Goat Flu
Or getting a simple, quick shot.
Don't worry, dear Soquili,
It shalln't hurt a bit.
Just the precise p***k of the needle,
Then the relief of knowing you'll be fine.
Don't look at the needle
And you won't even know.
Maybe you'll even get
A Soquili bandaid or two!
Comments; I just wrote free-verse. xD
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 1:44 pm
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Lilly_Foxx
Poem: Frail and weak
Colours fade to harsh monotone
Pain electrifies your veins
A weary drowsiness is your blanket
The injection brought bliss
Tired and listless
Colours roar back to sick vividness
Your muscles burn
The pain ebbs to numbness
The injection brought salvation
You heal
Gain strength
And live
The injection saved your life
Comments (optional): I was born at 24 weeks gestation and have had (as far as my parents could count) well over 10,000 needles in the first four months of my life, only. I still have scars from them due to my paper thin skin at birth.
They are necessary, and and the hyperdermic needle is a God-send.
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:53 pm
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: [Eskimo]
Poem:
Shining like the moon,
All fear slips away into
The needle's sweet kiss.
Comments (optional):
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:34 pm
DON'T BE AFRAID, AICH!!
Writer: Polette
Poem:
Squeeze me tight,
Look into my eyes-
See the stars
that fly quickly by?
I'll give you a pinch,
to show you my love,
And we can then fly away,
Like little doves.
Comments (optional): The 'pinch' is when the needle goes in, and the 'fly away like little doves' is leaving after the shot is finished with. 8]
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