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 Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:11 am
I always RP-ed with him before since he was in my squad. Because of that, I now understand most of his grammar mistakes [some of which are really off]. I always did get bothered by it though...
So is it a yes from you?
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:36 am
Since I'm the one who recommended him my vote in the matter is obvious... so I'll leave it to the others.
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:38 am
Quote: Kai leaned in his cozy chair in his lieutenant ranked office, rocking it back and forth as he placed his beer feet on his desk and whistled a familiar toon, and waited patiently for some-one to call upon him. He soon scratched in between his toes and waited for a spell longer. Damn, when will something exciting or fun happen in Seiretei, everything has been its usual boring here, what a nuisance?’’ He said as he muttered under his breath in disappointment. Fine, suppose I’ll have to fetch out my own fun?’’ The disappointed lieutenant captain threw on his socks and sandals and finally grabbed his zanpukto exiting his office and all together leaving 10th company in search of ‘’fun.’’ The wind blew through the grass and the sun shined down towards Kai as he looked down upon 10th company from a distant hill top scattered with sakura blossomed trees ,one by one they fell as he attempted to open a senkaimon. Once it appear ed Kai walked toward the darkness and disappeared within seconds, and before the sun’s eyes he was gone, un-seen and un-heard, he vanished. Once again the senkaimon opened and there he stood in ‘’ Heuco Mudno Forest,’’ although being his first time in the dried and lonely forest he knew there would be an Arancar or luckily an Espada wandering around and so he journeyed out in search of one of the two. Hmmmm…I didn’t anticipate ‘’ Heuco Mundo Forest,’’ to be so boring, everything is dead and motionless. What a waist of time maybe I should of stayed in my office?’’ He said as he wandered father into the forest. A twig soon broke behind him, startled him Kai tightened his grip on his zanpukto, eventually Kai gained the courage to speak and did so loudly. ''Who goes there!?’’He shouted. A dark figure soon coming into the light approached Kai and in a instant a smile hit his face he soon regret his words as the figure drew near, the figure then spoke with a high pitched voice. ''My-my didn’t think a Shinigami would be wandering so far from soul society, suppose I hit the jack pot?’’ ''No more like you crapped out. '' Kai said in a strong voice , showing no fear but only courage , in a instant Kai discharged a electrically pulse at the espada a , useless the espada deflected as if it was nothing with his sword, angered he flash steps at the enemy clashing his sword at his . ''Kai Tetsu 10th company lieutenant, you are?’’ Kai smiled still holding up his strength against the strong espada, outputting a strengthening spiritual energy. ''Lupi Espada 6.’’ He said soon wearing a devilish smile; he then threw himself back and sheathed his sword soon performing a cero. ''Well-well this is going to be a interesting fight. ''Kai said retaining his fighting stance as the wind blew rapidly hitting the dead trees. So yeah, unless I'm mistaken his only spelling errors are in Spanish/Japanese words. Which I don't find to be bad especially if you aren't well versed in those languages. neutral As for grammar, I ain't good at it, but eh. Feel free to point them out to me if you want.
His " are odd but I've seen it happen due to OS or something... Sentence flow is lacking, I'll recognize that and comma splicing occurs periodically. However, it's no more annoying than Zique's or Agi's random OOC just shoved inside a paragraph to explain something. And yeah, the align s**t is stupid... >.>
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:42 am
I do agree with the align thing, but otherwise I like his.
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 5:21 pm
XziqueX I always RP-ed with him before since he was in my squad. Because of that, I now understand most of his grammar mistakes [some of which are really off]. I always did get bothered by it though...
So is it a yes from you? I guess it is a yes. My only problem with him is the grammar but I can see past that and know he's capable of handling the job.
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:40 pm
Well Hm. I guess I'll say yes, It is only temporary.
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II The Metal Alchemist II
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:49 am
Kitsune-tono Quote: Kai leaned in his cozy chair in his lieutenant ranked office, rocking it back and forth as he placed his beer feet on his desk and whistled a familiar toon, and waited patiently for some-one to call upon him. He soon scratched in between his toes and waited for a spell longer. Damn, when will something exciting or fun happen in Seiretei, everything has been its usual boring here, what a nuisance?’’ He said as he muttered under his breath in disappointment. Fine, suppose I’ll have to fetch out my own fun?’’ The disappointed lieutenant captain threw on his socks and sandals and finally grabbed his zanpukto exiting his office and all together leaving 10th company in search of ‘’fun.’’ The wind blew through the grass and the sun shined down towards Kai as he looked down upon 10th company from a distant hill top scattered with sakura blossomed trees ,one by one they fell as he attempted to open a senkaimon. Once it appear ed Kai walked toward the darkness and disappeared within seconds, and before the sun’s eyes he was gone, un-seen and un-heard, he vanished. Once again the senkaimon opened and there he stood in ‘’ Heuco Mudno Forest,’’ although being his first time in the dried and lonely forest he knew there would be an Arancar or luckily an Espada wandering around and so he journeyed out in search of one of the two. Hmmmm…I didn’t anticipate ‘’ Heuco Mundo Forest,’’ to be so boring, everything is dead and motionless. What a waist of time maybe I should of stayed in my office?’’ He said as he wandered father into the forest. A twig soon broke behind him, startled him Kai tightened his grip on his zanpukto, eventually Kai gained the courage to speak and did so loudly. ''Who goes there!?’’He shouted. A dark figure soon coming into the light approached Kai and in a instant a smile hit his face he soon regret his words as the figure drew near, the figure then spoke with a high pitched voice. ''My-my didn’t think a Shinigami would be wandering so far from soul society, suppose I hit the jack pot?’’ ''No more like you crapped out. '' Kai said in a strong voice , showing no fear but only courage , in a instant Kai discharged a electrically pulse at the espada a , useless the espada deflected as if it was nothing with his sword, angered he flash steps at the enemy clashing his sword at his . ''Kai Tetsu 10th company lieutenant, you are?’’ Kai smiled still holding up his strength against the strong espada, outputting a strengthening spiritual energy. ''Lupi Espada 6.’’ He said soon wearing a devilish smile; he then threw himself back and sheathed his sword soon performing a cero. ''Well-well this is going to be a interesting fight. ''Kai said retaining his fighting stance as the wind blew rapidly hitting the dead trees. So yeah, unless I'm mistaken his only spelling errors are in Spanish/Japanese words. Which I don't find to be bad especially if you aren't well versed in those languages. neutral As for grammar, I ain't good at it, but eh. Feel free to point them out to me if you want.
His " are odd but I've seen it happen due to OS or something... Sentence flow is lacking, I'll recognize that and comma splicing occurs periodically. However, it's no more annoying than Zique's or Agi's random OOC just shoved inside a paragraph to explain something. And yeah, the align s**t is stupid... >.>
Some other words were also misspelled, not just the Spanish and Japanese ones. But he has more grammatical errors compared to spelling errors. I may not have bolded all the misspelled words though, but that's not the point.
And inserting those random OOCs are quite fun~ XD You're just boring because you put your notes either before or at the end of your post. =P
Despite that, a lot of the crew still agreed on making him a captain, and so he promote him. Like before, his position will only be temporary unless he proves himself to be worthy. Anyone who thinks he doesn't deserve his spot can demote him anytime. I'll go and ask which squad he wants before promoting him.
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:56 am
XziqueX Kitsu, you are mistaken. scream
Some other words were also misspelled, not just the Spanish and Japanese ones. But he has more grammatical errors compared to spelling errors. I may not have bolded all the misspelled words though, but that's not the point.
And inserting those random OOCs are quite fun~ XD You're just boring because you put your notes either before or at the end of your post. =P
Despite that, a lot of the crew still agreed on making him a captain, and so he promote him. Like before, his position will only be temporary unless he proves himself to be worthy. Anyone who thinks he doesn't deserve his spot can demote him anytime. I'll go and ask which squad he wants before promoting him. I DON'T SEE THEM, CAPTAIN IDIOT, I DON'T PAY THAT MUCH ATTENTION! scream
Not really though, your OOC breaks sentence flow, so is quite annoying.
But yar, I has no problem. >.>
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:10 am
Kitsune-tono XziqueX Kitsu, you are mistaken. scream
Some other words were also misspelled, not just the Spanish and Japanese ones. But he has more grammatical errors compared to spelling errors. I may not have bolded all the misspelled words though, but that's not the point.
And inserting those random OOCs are quite fun~ XD You're just boring because you put your notes either before or at the end of your post. =P
Despite that, a lot of the crew still agreed on making him a captain, and so he promote him. Like before, his position will only be temporary unless he proves himself to be worthy. Anyone who thinks he doesn't deserve his spot can demote him anytime. I'll go and ask which squad he wants before promoting him. I DON'T SEE THEM, CAPTAIN IDIOT, I DON'T PAY THAT MUCH ATTENTION! scream
Not really though, your OOC breaks sentence flow, so is quite annoying.
But yar, I has no problem. >.>
What poor attention span you have...
I don't really care. I'm not the reader so I don't get annoyed by it. XD
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:38 am
I put, "unless I am mistaken", fully implying that I was aware that I could have missed something. I skim paragraphs, and use FF's spell check for such things. I also have a habit of skipping the first line or so in unimportant posts.
That said, he didn't actually misspell beer and toon, he just used the wrong words. Those are grammatical errors, not spelling errors.
BEAT THAT, CAPTAIN IDIOT! scream
I know it doesn't bother you, but it doesn't make it any less annoying.
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:46 am
Still, short attention span.
He did misspell them. If he meant to make it mean the way he wanted to be, that means he thinks that the way you spell "bare" would be "beer". He's bad at spelling at admitted it before anyway~
As I said, I don't care. rofl
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:48 am
So... he's a captain now?
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:54 am
Doesn't matter what he intended to write, in English it is still the wrong usage of words and remains a grammatical error, whether you like it or not. =D
I know you don't care, I just said that. >.>
And my short attention span isn't news to me. I've had ADHD since I was born. I know all about that and I don't need you to point it out for me.
3nodding
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:58 am
@ Dante: Not yet... but he will be.
Well he has both spelling and grammatical errors. There. Done~
*shoves a big sign with the words "Short attention span" to your face*
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:59 am
Oh I know that~  *bites sign*
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