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Daunk

PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:43 pm


he passes te man but not so much for the man eating flower that is if you get close enough.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:55 pm


((so we did not pass the guy eating the plant yet?i didn't get your last post sorry))

LIZACAT2


Daunk

PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:58 pm


no its a man-eating plant aka it eats people
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:21 pm


((oh i though you said a man eating a plant not a man-eating plant sorry!!))

Link drew his sword and shield and cautiously step to the plant,it striked him but luckily he blocked it with his wooden shield and struck it once,it didn't die so he side jumped and then leaped doing an attack in mid air stunning the man-eating plant for a few seconds!

LIZACAT2


Daunk

PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:31 pm


it stands there straight up for a few seconds allowing a horizontal slash
navi flys from your hat and flys in a line infront of it saying hit here please! then went flying back in his hat
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:41 pm


Link obeyed and Hit there finally the plant died and was gone!!

((im going to do the dishes so ill be right back^^))

LIZACAT2


Daunk

PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:49 pm


a large stick and deku nut are all thats left after it explods
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:02 pm


Link collectes them and then sittes down for a break......

((sorry it toke longer then what i thought it would take)) sweatdrop

LIZACAT2


Daunk

PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:12 pm


its fine, can i make the story kinda funny later?

"congratulations link you defeated your first monster!"
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:32 pm


((of course!you can! ))

link blushed and bowed yay!
((lol x]))

LIZACAT2


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:59 am


(( ninja Just dropped by and noticed your role play. If you don't mind, I have a few suggestions and bits of advice. Take or ignore as you wish.))

(One thing I would like to note as I was reading this. Daunk, you might want to try and stear a little distance from being too close to the game. Make this your own world, your own story. Have similarities, but try not to have it run almost perfectly with the game. (If you can, I suggest you read the new Mangas that have been made off this story. Might wish to incorperate some of that into this maybe? Or take some ideas from it?) As you may have already noticed, trying to keep a money system in a role play like this isn't going to be easy, and collecting money is going to be hard. This probably wont be the first time you will have to do a time skip to get gold.)

(As far as actual role play, you two might want to consider using a bit more punctuation (EI: Using "Quotes" when someone is speeking), as I was rather confused in a few spots when I was reading along. This is only if you two are finding it a problem for yourselves though, as you two are the only two in this roleplay at this time.)

(Please. Remember this is just a suggestion. Nothing more. Also... if you need this post removed, please PM me and I'll delete it for you. This is your role play, and I wouldn't want my post to be getting in your way.)

(PS: I'm a HUGE Zelda fan... so I'm kinda happy that someone made a role play about it.)
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:10 am


((I'll try))


"there shouldn't be that many more detours today. "

((im going to a funeral ill be back in a while))

Daunk


LIZACAT2

PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:49 pm


((aw ok talk to you later)) crying

Link walked up to the entrench to deku tree place
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:31 pm


he sees ta darkend deku tree
"link... kill these things inside me please. but before you go in you need this..." a small branch reaches out and touches you head and the branch is full of life.
DADADAAAA
you got faori's fwooshh
any non-magical item you can see when you use this will come to you unless its a weapon WHEN THE HOLDER IS ON GUARD

Daunk


LIZACAT2

PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:07 pm


''Wow thank you Deku tree!and i will kill the thing that are making you this way!''And with that link took the faori's fwooshh,and entered the Deku tree.
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