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 Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 7:45 pm
Yay! Another person! Before I start evaluating though, do I have your promise to actually join once you're accepted? The last couple never got back to me even after I sent them several PMs.
Also, I skimmed through it and the Desert Eagle being gold seems a little much.
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 8:00 pm
I'll be posting. I'll also edit the profile in regards to the Desert Eagle.
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 8:01 pm
Edit done. Desert Eagle no longer gold.
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 8:41 pm
Mmk, I'm pretty busy right now, so I'll review your profile tomorrow after work. It looks good, though.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 9:25 am
Hope it's up to par. If you need anything else from me on it, let me know.
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 3:55 pm
Okay, it looks good, but maybe had add a little pre-service history? And maybe add what caused him to become a wanderer and a thief rather than living normally after the discharge. Add that and it should be good.
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 9:02 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:25 pm
NativeForeigner You should find the time to actually get into the RP, lily >> I should, but first I'll have to remake that character, partly to reacquaint myself with her.
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