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PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 12:55 pm


Ah sounds like fun

Most of my friends live far away unfortunately.. the whole 'grown up and moved away' thing.. but maybe one of my coworkers -ponders- ah well, I'll get to it eventually
PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:13 pm


Yes, you will.

The road tour was awesome, by the way.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:30 am


My goal to get back into good writing habits...is slowly but surely coming along. ^^ I almost have this story I was working on for the last two weeks finished.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 12:15 pm


Ooo go you! Get yourself finished!

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:46 pm


good luck!
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 7:18 am


*long overdue update* Finished the story I was working on, knocked out a lot of other writing over the past few months, and I am working on something else now.

Also, I rediscovered R.L. Stine and despite some of the flaws that this blog points out and makes fun of (and that I generally agree with despite myself), I still found myself re-in-love with the Goosebumps series.

Currently reading whichever books I can get my hands on. And judging by the list, the twenty-or-so books I have are barely scratching the surface. I only have a third of the main series, let alone all the rest.

Books of the moment: Welcome to Dead House, Curse of the Mummy's Tomb

Looking forward to: Night of the Living Dummy II and III, Slappy's Nightmare, and Revenge of the Living Dummy, all of which I ordered just last night, and will be diving into once I get them.

Slappy fan, what?

Further looking forward to: The rest of the HorrorLand books. Revenge of the Living Dummy just happened to both have Slappy and be the first book in that series. It will be the only series that N actually shells out the full price for rather than locate them in thrift stores as she has been doing with the others. And that is mostly because it is a) new, and b) the first series that has a continuous, on-going story line.

In any case...

I saw Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. I liked it, and that can be partial bias that that was my favorite book in the series. Ever since Order of the Phoenix, I decided the movies were worth my time to watch again, and I look forward to the two-part Deathly Hallows.

Now to kick back and see how any of this influences my future writing, because it is bound to happen.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:04 am


Oh wow, I did love Goosebumps when I was younger! Slappy used to scare me, hate those dummys. My favourite was the mummy one or the scarecrow one.

Harry Potter movie was brilliant I though, the only bit that sucked was how Snape told Harry he was the half blood prince...how anti-climactic. Definitely my favourite of the series smile

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:46 pm


Slappy was one of my favorite characters as a kid. I think back then, I was able to appreciate a good b*****d. Re-reading the books with him opened up a lot of additional creepiness that went over my head as a kid, though. Like how most of his owners tend to be twelve-year-old girls. Combine that with his motive for wanting slaves (and R.L. Stine is never clear on what he wants slaves for, so the imagination opens up plenty of possibilities...I, personally, just think it because he is a control freak and likes being a jerk, but the naughtier implications are not lost on me). Suddenly, the creepiness goes up ten notches.

I am also better able to appreciate his talent for manipulation to get what he wants. He knows that "the dummy did it" will not fly with parents, and milks this for as much as he can. Plus, pulling some lines in the books out-of-context can lead to some amusing results, but you can do that with pretty much any Goosebumps book. R.L. Stine makes it almost too easy. Oh, the things you miss when you are very young and naive...

I recently received and read Slappy's Nightmare, and I think it just usurped Night of the Living Dummy II's long-held title of "N's favorite Goosebumps book ever."

You know how he likes to come to life, create misery for his owner, and then uses said misery as a basis to make said owner his slave? He got the tables turned on him. Hard.

Basically, his owner-of-the-moment---a long-time ventriloquist named Jimmy O'James---got a little sick of Slappy insulting him onstage and ruining his acts. He bought another dummy named Wally (pretty much Slappy's twin) and threatened to replace him. Wally also came with a bunch of papers that had little spells on them. Jimmy read off one of the spells and cursed him: now Slappy has a week to do three good deeds, or he forfeits his life to Wally and will be put to sleep forever.

So, being as he really does not want to die, Slappy tries to do the good deeds. And every time he tries to be good and do something nice, someone ruins it. Horribly. You actually feel so bad for him after a while, especially as each deed escalates in seriousness when they fail miserably, and time is clearly running out.

But it also came with a lot of the same creepy humor R.L. Stine is known for---and the mandatory twist ending made me bust a gut. I consider it the funniest book I have read in a while.

I am very fond of stories that turn the tables on a character because of situations like this. There is a sort of satisfaction derived from forcing them to cope with their own medicine. I tend to do that a lot myself in my own writing.

Back to Harry Potter, I wished they kept the "DON'T CALL ME COWARD!" line in. It would have made that whole scene better, in my opinion.

And thanks. ^^

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:17 am


In the last two months, N has:

-Read all her original Goosebumps books minus some of the Give Yourself Goosebumps ones (I like to try out all the options, and it takes me forever to do)
-Bought and finished the new HorrorLand series, and intends to buy the Survival Guide when it comes out next week
-Started Salem's Lot by Stephen King for a change of pace. So far, so good
-Seen 9 on opening day. It was a brilliant movie

I have also almost finished my "real-life fairy tale," where I took a story about toys and made them real people. I had a writing class last quarter, and I wish my teacher (who was harsh) was able to criticize it. Mine was apparently one of those which she could not find much to correct/change/criticize.

While it is nice that there was not much she felt needed improvement, I like getting harsh critique and suggestions for improvement. So it was both wonderful and frustrating.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:14 pm


I need to learn to not get distracted. I am about halfway through Salem's Lot, but I keep picking up/finishing other books before I get much further. In any case, I found Blood and Chocolate was a nice romance with actual substance, and actually surprised me with who the heroine hooked up with in the end. And it also gave me a few ideas for my own werewolves.

My other readings were more Goosebumps books. I literally remembered nothing about Be Careful What You Wish For when I read it as a kid, and I really liked it (though I guessed the twist about halfway through the book). The Scarecrow Walks at Midnight is nice if you like slower-paced books.

In terms of actual writing, I have gotten a few things knocked out, and fixed a few flaws and patched up some plot holes by adding a new character. Consequently, though, this also opened up a few new loose ends for me to play with. I do not mind; I like how the story is changing because of this one new character.

I realized I am going to have to fix a scene I wrote previously, though. One character has to go through another character's mind to help her, but the problem comes with the mind-reader character having issues with a breach of trust. I realized he would not just barge into someone's mind as I had him do, so I need to find some solid grounding for him to do this (most likely without consent), because the mind-reading is literally the only way to help the troubled character (there is a secret locked away by a magical means, and she is literally unable to talk about/hint to it in any way, shape, or form, so the secret has to be discovered, in a sense).

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:52 am


Finally finished Salem's Lot. I think Stephen King is going on the list of "authors I will read when I want to slow down," since his pacing is fairly relaxing.

Got some minor things done in terms of writing. I really should stop being so lazy. >>
PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:51 am


I watched the film Blood and Chocolate and didn't like it! Is the book better? (Must be!)

As for Stephen King, I was reading his books at about eight or nine and didn't really understand them. At about eleven I understood a lot more but I soon went off them as they were too descriptive.

Haha summer makes people lazy in writing xD

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:31 pm


I have never seen the film, so I cannot comment on it. I liked the book, though. It had a better and more realistic look on werewolves than what I usually see.

It only took me this long to finish Salem's Lot because I kept misplacing the book, otherwise I would have had it finished months ago. Now to find another book to read in the meantime. I have some on my shelf that have never been touched. >>

As for reading things above one's level...I remember trying to read The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde in third grade. My teacher had books organized by color. If I remember right: green for ridiculously easy, kindergarten levels, blue for books a step above that, yellow for those under-100-pages novels for kids, orange for about third-grade reading level, red for slightly harder, and brown for really hard, sixth-grade-and-up.

The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde was a brown-level book. I was doing fine with the reds, so I took a step up once. I ended up confused and frustrated (and once we started a book, we had to finish it unless the teacher said otherwise), and I ended up hating it because I was unable to retain anything from it. I want to try to re-read it again, though.

I have a similar issue with Twilight. When I can think about the book a week later and not remember a damn thing about the main characters... Considering I can usually pick up a book I read years ago and go, "Hey, I remember such-and-such character/event/ending/what have you!", it pisses me off when I pick up a book, look at it, and draw a blank about even one memorable thing that stuck in my mind.

Hell, when I got into Goosebumps again, I was still able to remember key events from certain books. Specific examples:

-The "AMY AMY AMY AMY" painted on the walls in Night of the Living Dummy II was the first thing that jumped into my mind when I found it in a thrift store (I also remember being disappointed that this scene was cut from the TV episode, but now that I am older, I noticed this was---rightfully---cut to save time and move the story along). I also specifically remembered Slappy as a character (and I have the firm belief that he is the first character in any literary work that jumped into my mind, grabbed a hold, and stayed there), and I remembered that when he was first found, there was a sandwich stuck in his head. XP "I felt something warm inside. Slappy's brain!" [/paraphrase]

-The Barking Ghost brought back some memories, as my teacher read it to the class in second grade. The red eyes of the dogs, and the scene in the shed (specifically, one of the main characters getting dragged there, and the dismembered voices inside it), and a fight scene with said dogs were as fresh in my mind as they were when my teacher first read it to me.

In both cases, I was also able to remember the story line (Amy is trying to prove that her dummy really is alive; the two kids end up as ghost dogs and are trying to change back), even if I forgot [part of] the twist at the end.

What did I retain from Twilight not even years, but a few weeks later? Edward sparkles and drives crazy, Bella...had a broken leg and had to have Edward help her dance, and James beat the crap out of Bella in an old ballet studio, including throwing her into (and at least cracking---I do not remember if it shattered or not) a mirror. The scene that sticks out the most? Is because James had more personality than Bella or Edward. Yes, the character who was supposed to be a two-dimensional sadistic b*****d was more memorable than the protagonist and her hero. I could tell you how James carried out this plan and executed it, but I cannot tell you much else other than what I just said about Edward or Bella without help or looking at a review.

Did I remember the story line? Only that Bella wants Edward to love her, but there should be more to it than just that. I even remember drawing a blank when the librarian asked how it was when I returned it, and all I could say was, "...It was okay." I do know that when I found out there was going to be a second book, I kind of shrugged and moved on.

I guess in short, if you want me to like a book, you damn well better make it so I can at least remember the protagonist and how the story goes. Specific memorable scenes will not hurt, either.

[/long rant was long]

Summer and college. @_@
PostPosted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 11:53 pm


A friend and I had a nice chat about how most horror franchises have no idea when to quit (Nightmare on Elm Street and Friday the 13th, with your unnecessary sequels and now with your remakes, I am looking at you), that not just horror---though that was the big one---franchises in general need to do more with their characters instead of rehashing the plot, and if your franchise grows enough that you start to parody yourself, that means you should quit instead of making another five movies.

In that same vein, make sure the entire premise of the story is not a wall-banger in and of itself (hellooooo, Friday the 13th!) or come up with dumb ways to bring a villain back. Even fans of Nightmare on Elm Street admit that it got to a point where Freddy only goes away/gets defeated because he allows it to, not because he was beaten. And in-universe for Friday the 13th, people KNOW stupid kids had sex and died. So what do they do? And if Crystal Lake keeps having tragedies happening, WHY THE HELL DOES IT KEEP OPENING?

Also, it appears to me that a ton of horror fans are stupid. Why pay for more or less the same movie six or more times? Even if I am not a horror fan, I like to say I know when a franchise should quit. For example, I think Shrek Forever After is going to be the first film in that series that if I see it in theatres at all, it will be the dollar theatre. Why? The third one sucked, and the fourth one does not look very promising. It has become a cash cow, and I hope they live up to their promise of this being the last installment.

In other news, I think that this related picture is adorable, and I have seriously considered buying that shirt, even if I am not a fan.

Also in other news, I love my roommate for providing the third option I needed to progress in my story. You know how characters grow and change? One of mine changed enough that a decision he made would no longer make sense. Unfortunately, I need this decision for like four of the subplots. The solutions I thought up were to change his motive for the decision, or make another character (who needs some more "you are such a b*****d!" points anyway) be the cause of the decision, but that would take a lot of work, given the circumstances, and possibly mess things up even more. My roommate gave a suggestion to have the decision made through another character (one I had not considered), and now I just might able to salvage it. <3

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:59 am


Haha love that picture! Twilight is a severe piece of crap for the reasons you stated! I agree that Shrek needs to end soon...three was rubbish.

I hope that your novel will sort it out soon!
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