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Jes-sama

PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 3:32 pm


It's not necessarily that I want to become an arrancar, but rather that I was one, became inactive, and am now active again... So... I imagine I don't have to reapply (or maybe i do). If I do, that'd be good to know. If i don't, it'd be awesome to get a short run-down of what's going on in the guild at the moment. Seems like a lot is different.
PostPosted: Wed May 13, 2009 7:07 pm


Pretty sure Las Noches is going under a leadership change. Probably a bit harrowing for the new leader, so I'd give them a week or so.

Jes-sama


Tosh_Crimson

PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 11:35 pm


Name: Hakujou Escudo (Heartless Shield)

Number: Fraccion 8/14

Aliases/ Nicknames: Hakujou The Heartless

Physical Description: Hakujou is a silent person not really one that wants to fight but when provoked he proves to be merciless. Hakujou will often try to help his fellow hallow even though that is not the "norm" for their kind. Many other Arrancar resent him for his compassion and even more for his rank. Hakujou's life and position are threatened almost daily but each battle Hakujou becomes stronger. Hakujou stands at 6'4 with wild green hair and tanned skin. The mask Hakujou wears is fragmented from his many battles. The mask is made of horned white fragments that run along under his left eye and bend into his hairline letting three large spikes jut up from his hair in the form of a half crown. Hakujou has 3 piercings on his left ear one on the lobe another in the mid ear and the last toward the top of his ear. Each of these holes are filled with a small silver loop. On Hakujou's right eye brow he also has 2 silver studs. The cloths He wears are all white and consist of a white long sleeved jacket that has a higher collar to cover his mouth a bit and cuts off at his mid section where his number is displayed. The long white pants he wears are that of a normal Arrancar. Hakujou wears white sandals with black socks.

Zanpacto & Resurrection:


Zanpacto:
Hakujou's Zanpacto is of average length and width but has a green hilt with a small gold orb at the end of it.

Resurrection:
Hakujou looses his former clothing and grows bone like gauntlets and Grieves along his arms and legs. The horns on his head grow a bit longer and bend back and around to form an upside down crescent moon on the back of his head. The pants he wore are now white bone version of themselves and he no longer wears a shirt. The Gauntlets and Grieves have jet like thrusters coming out of the elbow and heels to provide extra speed when attacking or moving. Hakujou's special shield forms around these weapons to increase their striking power.

Special Accessories:
none

Abilities: Hakujou has the special ability to create invisible barriers around himself. Hakujou can manipulate the size and shape of these barriers from making them small spheres around his fists to large sharp blades around his forearms. The stronger and larger a barrier is the more power and concentration is needed to form and maintain it and so this ability can be overexerted rather quickly. Hakujou mainly uses these barriers to fight but at times he will use himself as a shield to protect his allies.

Personality: Hakujou does not like those that pick on the weak and will often try to defend them. Although he feels this way he will more often stand back and let people be slaughtered if the Arrancar out ranks him. Hakujou tends to be a hopeless romantic when it comes to someone he likes and will try his best to protect that person even at the coast of his own life.

Biography/History:
Hakujou was born into a very abusive family his mother fell ill shortly after his birth and could never recover she died on his seventh birthday. Hakujou's father blamed Hakujou for her death and would relentlessly beat and threaten him. Hakujou grew up silent and scared of the world. The only light was his best friend Nina who had always supported his efforts and wanted to hang around him even though he was considered an outsider. When a bully tried to rape Nine Hakujou went into a rage and almost killed the kid. Nina was the only one able to get through to him at the time whispering to him that it was ok and that she didn't want to see anyone die. Nina was his first love and Hakujou wanted to protect her. Although fate had other plans in store for Nina for she was born with a curse. A curse known as beauty. Nina was lusted after by many of the boys in their school and soon they had had enough of the weird kid gaining all of her attention. While Nina waited for him at the school gate Hakujou was being beaten and raped in the gym by half of the group that was after Nina. The other half waited for Nina to start her walk home alone so they could beat and rape her to death. Hakujou recovered months later hearing about Nina 2 weeks after she had her funeral. Hakujou swore never to love another. Although as time passed Hakujou was able to embrace Nina's death and would pray for her safety. Soon a new kid came to school also an outsider with his long blond hair and blue eye's. The boys name way Kyle. Kyle was a much stronger person the Hokujou and would get into fights with anyone that made fun of him. Hakujou wished for his strength and courage and asked him to help Hakujou become more like himself. Kyle accepted him and helped train him to fight. Hakujou learned many defensive styles but little about offense other then reverse styles only wanting to use his strength to protect the weak like Nina would have wanted. After his training Kyle confessed that he had liked Hakujou and wanted to have a relationship with him. Hakujou was hesitant but soon accepted this new form of love and learned that he himself loved Kyle as well. The two remained happy together in secret but it didn't last very long. What Hakujou didn't know was that Nina's ghost had been fallowing him around since the day she had died. Nina was filled with anger for the way she had died but her spirit calmed when Hakujou prayed to her. But soon after meeting Kyle the time he spent praying became less and less and when she finally found out why he had left her spirit to rot she became a hallow. Hakujou had some sense of the spirit world and new that something was coming for him and stood to fight the creature. Although he didn't suspect a large snake like monster with his lost loves face. The hallow attack him and Hakujou held her for a while until Kyle came over for their date they had planed. When Nina saw him she grew a horrible rage and lunged at him to attack. Kyle was saved however when Hokujou pushed him out of the way and was impaled by her long spiked tail instead. Nina returned her tail to take a second strike but a shinigami arrived just in time to take care of her. Hakujou however remained dieing in his lovers arms. When he finally awoke Hakujou had little memory only that of the bad parts of his life. This caused him to live in despair until a hole appeared in his heart. His hallow hole. Once born a Hallow Hakujou used his power of "Ultimate shield" to catch shinigami that mistook him for a weaker hallow and quickly grow until he became an Arrancar.

Powers:

Cero
Descanso-Cero (Breaking Cero): A Cero that Hakujou forms using the shattered pieces of one or multiple barriers he has created. The barrier fragments gather at the tip of Hakujou's finger become charged and then released. The Cero charged pieces often form a scatter shot effect hitting a large area but are not very accurate.
High-Speed Regeneration
Sonido
Hierro
Negación

Role-Play Example:


Quote:
Hakujou was standing in front of two giant white doors awaiting to enter and meet Master Aizen. Hakujou had not heard much of the Shinigami that now ruled the world of the Hollow but he new that he should fear and respect him. After waiting for half an hour a large Black Arrancar opened the two doors and motioned him in.

The throne room was extravagant the white pillars and floor seemed to be carved perfection. The moon light shone through large windows floating across the white expanse like butterfly wings. At the end of the room was a large throne with a man sitting in it. The man was tall and had an intelligent look about him and Hakujou could feel a chill run through his very soul. Once Hakujou was in front of his throne he knelt in greeting.

"Master Aizen-sama I am your loyal servant Hakujou Escudo" Hakujou stared at the floor as he said this his body seemingly frozen in fear of the mans presents.

"Oh? What have you to report of the outer dessert my young Arrancar" Aizen said with a rather cocky smirk that Hakujou could not see do to his current situation.

"3 Shinigami had arrived my lord I fallowed them to learn how they had gotten into our realm but was soon spotted and forced to kill them". Hakujou had hopped to learn more from his encounter with the Shinigami but they fell far to easy for him to learn anything new.

"Very good then..." Aizen looked the young Arrancar over "Patrol the Southern dessert and keep Las Noches informed you may go" Aizen waved dismissively.

Hakujou stood, bowed, and turned to leave. "Oh and one more thing if you find anymore Shinigami bring them back to Las Noches..... Alive....". Hakujou nodded and was escorted back to the double white doors he had entered from. Once he had left the castle he sighed in relief. Something was off about that Shinigami Hakujou new but was far to afraid to challenge him and so Hakujou set out to the south to fulfill his duties.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:22 pm


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Name: Kenji-Kenso


Aliases/ Nicknames: Kenji


Number: (2/22) Fraccion


Physical Description:


Kenji stands 5 feet 10 inches tall and weighs in at 165 lbs. He is of medium build but prides himself on his speed and agility. Kenji has silver/white hair and very white pale colored skin. He wears a silver metal colored mask at all times. The mask covers multiple scars from fights Kenji has been in. It wasn’t until recently that he started to use it. Kenji’s eyes seem to glow a bright yellow in color. His demon horns and tail were a gift from Aizen’s transformation which just about killed Kenji.

Kenji’s hole is in the center of his chest between both breasts and is mostly covered by his uniform. Kenji wears the typical white Arrancar’s uniform with the black sash. His Number is tattooed to his right side of his neck for all to see.


Zanpakutou Name: ” Cosechadora de alma” – Soul Reaper


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Zanpakutou Description:


Kenji’s Katana sword is 43 7/8" overall. It has a 27 1/8" sharpened steel blade with a temper line. It has a black composition handle with a black cord wrap. It has a black finish metal tsuba with gold artwork. The sword has a black finish composition scabbard.


Resurreccion:


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Name: “Consuma su alma” – Consume their Souls


When commanded Kenji’s body changes into that of a male devil. His skin color becomes that of gray and black. Wings grow from his back and thick hard spikes grow out from all over his body. His horns on his head grow to almost 2 feet in length. Kenji’s hands and feet turn into sharp hard claws that are used to attack and defend with. Kenji’s silver metal colored mask breaks in half to expose the right side of his scared face and fangs.


(See picture above for a better description of what Kenji looks like.)


Los hermanos salen –“ Brothers Come Forth”


When commanded by Kenji, his body splits and makes three other clones of himself. Each clone looks, acts, speaks, attacks, and defends just like Kenji. There is no way possible to tell the difference between them and Kenji.


Los infiernos despiden – “Hell’s Fire


Kenji can generate and throw basketball sized fireballs from his hands at will. These fireballs are generated from a substance like napalm and are very hard to put out. They continuously burn threw the flesh and bone when contact is made to the skin. Should one of these hit a building or wooded area, they would do the same damage as napalm would.


Special Accessories:


Kenji only has his uniform, katana, and his mask. Nothing else.


Abilities:


Extraordinary speed & agility, hearing, and sight make Kenji a deadly assassin.


Personality:


Evil, vengeful, cold hearted, and malicious are just a few words that can describe Kenji's personality. He enjoys killing and when he is not killing, he enjoys mischief above all else.


Biography/History:


Kenji was picked on everyday of his life. His anger grew daily and before long he started to think of ways to kill people who ******** with him. On the day of his death he was going to take his revenge on a group of gang bangers who kicked his a** the day prior and robbed him. While crossing the street and reaching into his pocket to grab the 9mm pistol he was hit by a car and killed.

Kenji’s soul walked earth for a long time until one day when he came across Aizen and begged him for help. After striking a deal with Aizen, Kenji was brought back to Las Noches where he trained for an undetermined amount of time and became what he is today.


Powers:


Bala: Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twentyfold speed.

Cero: are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Vizards have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. Various Arrancar and Hollow characters display variants of the technique, such as the Espada-exclusive Gran Rey Cero, the Cero Oscuras that Ulquiorra Cifer can use only in his released form, as well as the Cero Sincrético performed by Pesche Guatische and Dondochakka Bilstin.

Garganta: is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Sonido: is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps.

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Role-Play Example:

Kenji walks through the cave headed to Aizen’s chambers. While walking he continues to hear Grimmjow’s words in his head, “Don’t ******** this up Kenji. I spent a long damn time training you and sending you out on missions to get you ready for this day and now it’s your time to go in front of Aizen and become one of us officially. You ******** this up and it reflects on me and I will kill you. Do you understand?” Kenji looks at his leader and mentor and bow’s saying, “Grimmjow-San, I will make you proud of the day that you took me in. I will show Aizen that I can be trusted to be one of his greatest soldiers ever.”

Kenji stops short of walking up to the guarded metal double doors. Taking a few seconds to fix his new uniform and Zanpakuto he looks up at the two guards who are laughing at him and says, “What’s so funny boys? After today, you won’t be laughing at me anymore.” Kenji gives them both an evil smile and their faces change right away. Kenji has a reputation of an evil assassin who enjoys killing his enemy slowly and painfully.

The two guards open the double metal doors and Kenji steps into the room. All of the Espada’s where there lined up watching as Renji walked down the aisle toward Aizen who was sitting on a golden thrown looking down at him. Kenji didn’t even look at Grimmjow when he passed him. Stopping about four paces away from the stairs leading up to Aizen, Kenji takes to one knee and bows his head saying, “Master Aizen-San, my name is Kenji and I offer my service and loyalty to you …”

Kenji-Kenso


Pandaman2

PostPosted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 8:09 pm




Name: Eru Yoshi

Former Name: Artemis Kalis

Number: 99

Aliases/ Nicknames:Yoshi, Skates,Air

Age:Unknown appears to be 15.

Physical Description:
Eru is a slender, yet fairly muscular, male arrancar that is of average hieght with a childish appearance, short, messy silver hair, pale skin, and bright green eye that contrast with the rest of Eru's body.His Facial expression rarely changes ,and he is almost always smiling,or laughing. Eru wears the typical Arrancar clothes: a white jacket,black sash,and white hakama. The only differences to the clothes is that the bottom of the jacket's sleeves,are wider then the rest, also were the sleeves begin is a large cut revealing the shoulders. On each shoulder is a tattoo, on the right shoulder is the kanji for Pure, and on his left shoulder is the kanji for hope.Like most Arrancar , he possesses remnants of his life as a Hollow in his appearance. His Hollow hole is located at the base of his throat. The remainder of his hollow mack lies around his neck, forming a thin necklace made from segmented pieces.

Zanpakuto & Resurreccion:

Zanpakuto: Vida(ライツフ,raiffu; Spanish for Life,)
Unlike most zanpakuto that take the form of a katana or other type of blade , Eru's zanpakuto takes the form of a pair of white, bone-like inline skates, that he wears almost all the time. A unique thing about these skates that when pressure is applied to them the wheels automatically start to spin.

Resurreccion: Eru's release phrase for his Zanpakuto is Mourn(モオン,Moon)
To release his Zanpakuto Eru presses his skates down on whatever surface he is on, and keeps them in place as they spin throwing up a cloud of smoke if the wheels spin on the right surface. He then pushes off the surface he is on sending his shooting forwards on the skates actually disappearing from view as if he has used sonido, while calling out his zanpakuto's release command, in turn creating a sonic boom, and sending tremendous gusts of winds through out the vicinity.

When he reappears his appearance has changed drastically. His Zanpakuto had changed from simple skates, to armor like skates that extend up to his knee , behind the skates are two large blade attachments. His attire changes somewhat, for example his jacket disappears, and his hakama turns into more formfitting, white pants. Also is hollow mask disappears and is replaced by helmet with a visor that goes down past his nose hiding over half his face. Also now on his chest just below his hollow hole which is now somewhat smaller is the kanji for Life.

Resurreccion Special Abilities:The many power of his resurrection is Rejection of mostly anything while certain powers, and other such things can automatically be rejected others need to be manually rejected by the Eru. His speed an endurance is greatly enhanced as now he can move so fast on his own with his skates that it looks like he is using a very fast sonido with out using a sonido, this is achieved the same way when he is not in resurrection.

Rechazar:(レケザ, Spanish for Reject)
This is Eru's main power while in resurection, as it suggest he rejects things, for example he automatically rejects effects of powers, poisons, pain, emotions, laws, and ect. But when dealing with physical things it requires him to yell out Rerhazar. This take time so if the attack his fast, or to close it will have no affect, also if it's a surprise attack he can't reject it because he doesn't no what to reject. When Rerhazar is used it has a 5 second recharge time, and if he widens to rejection field from out of the 6 foot radius around him it will take longer to recharge. For every 5 feet another 2 seconds is added.

Blades: The blades on the back of the skates serve two purposes, one it is used as closed combat weapon,and two it allows him to fire off deadly projectiles that take the form of crescent moon.

Kanji: The three kanji on his body are not just for show, as he fights the kanjis start shining with a white light, and the longer he fights the brighter they get. This is to keep tracks of how much energy he can put into attack as well when all three are shining he can go into a mode of extreme power, and speed. while in this mode he far exceeds all limits of his power, however this only lasts for a short time and after it is canceled out it leaves him in a state of weakness.
((It takes 5 posts to get one Kanji fully brightened , and the power boost lasts for about 4/5 posts))

Sanar rechazar:(セナ レケザ,Sena Rekeza,) Spanish for Heal Reject;
This is a power the rejects the damage out of whoever he is healing, this however can not be used on himself. It is somewhat similar
to certain healing abilities. There are two main ways that he heals, one he just places his hand on the the place of damage and says"Sanar Rechazar" instantly rejecting the damage from the body, this damage take the form of a bubble and can if needed to be rejected into a body, or can just be rejected into nothingness. For more serious injuries Sanar Rechazar takes the form of a Asian Lung made from white reiatsu that literally sucks the damage out form the victim, this takes time depending on how serious the damage is. Sanar Rechzr can not heal psychological damage.

Special Accessories:
Carries around a hunting knife in case he needs to use a blade.

Abilities:
Due to his skates Eru is able to move as fast as a slow sonido with out using a sonido through a simple mean of applying a lot of pressure to the skates, and when he uses sonido he can boost it's speed by adding the skates into the equation. Also he has a lot of energy when it comes to anything. Physically he is strong, but not STRONG like super super super STRONG.

Personality:
He is a composed, intelligent, and some what mature Arrancar that believes anything is possible, and people are only evil when they say they are. He is also quite trustful, and despises killing. For example not once in his life as a hollow as he devoured a innocent soul,or soul reaper. He can also be childish at times , and quite the nagging brat when he is looking for something important.When faced with a problem he like to use a safe answer to that problem ,but will use violence if he has no other choice. He has a lot of honor and respects others who also believe this.


Biography/History:
Eru's life was like any other boys life, he was a singled, but he had a twin that died at birth. He grew up in a family that cared , and loved him dearly. He was a straight A student even in his younger years, and had a knack for going fast. This lead him to join the track team in 5th grade.
When he entered the 7th grade he went for a new hobby which involved inline skates. After only 2 months of using the skates he became widely known as the Prodigy Rookie in the sports world, and brought back Aggressive Inline Skating back into the X games, where he won many Gold Medals. By the age of twelve he was living large.

When he turned 13 he settled down to focus on his school work, while he did go to events while on breaks, he mostly stayed home. During this time the Arrancar Artemis Kalis died, but now before a small essence of his younger shelf found its way into Eru this caused him to start seeing things, like masked monsters, and people with swords, that were dressed in black.

After awhile his grades started to drop, and he kept on getting into trouble more and more. Finally it proved to much for him, and he had to quit school. This was half way in his 7th grade year. Form that point on he was traveling to do what he loved to do. So he was completely back into sports. He had to be home schooled, but he didn't mind. His main reason for this was so that it would be harder for him to see the beings he saw. This had actually helped him seeing how he spent so little time in one place to actually see many of these beings.

On his 15th birthday was the day he had died, he wasn't killed by an accident or by a human, surprisingly he was killed by a shinigami who mistaken him for a hollow due the essence of Artemis in him.

When he came back to it all he was a hollow, this was caused by the hollow essence in him that instantly turned him into a hollow only days after his death. From there he found his way into Hueco Mundo where he devoured hollow after hollow, and never once did he devour a shinigami, or innocent soul. After awhile he found by Aizen who turned him into an arrancar whether he was a Vastro Lorde, or Adjuchas at the time was unknown to all but Aizen. So far he has not decided to give out this information.

Powers:

Bala (虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "bullet", Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twentyfold speed.

Cero (虚閃 (セロ)|sero| Spanish for "Zero", Japanese for "Hollow Flash", "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Vizards have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently.

Garganta (黒腔(ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat", Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Hierro (鋼皮(イエロ), iero; Spanish for "Iron", Japanese for "Steel Skin") refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin than usual.

Negación (反膜 (ネガシオン), negashion; Spanish for "Negation", Japanese for "Counter Membrane") are energy fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Negación fields surround a target in a square beam of light that isolates the target from the dimension they are currently in, making it impossible to harm them. The field then pulls the target towards the menos that created the field.

Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキス), Pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry", Japanese for "Probe Circuit") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions very-similarly to sonar.

Sonído (響転 (ソニード), Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound" Japanese for "Transfer Effects") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps.

Resurrección ((帰刃 (レスレクシオン)|resurekushion; Spanish for "Resurrection", Japanese for "Returning Blade") Most Arrancar have the ability to seal their power within a zanpakutō. Upon releasing their zanpakutō, they gain all of their former unique hollow abilities back, essentially 'resurrecting' their old selves. When using this ability, they essentially combine their human form and their hollow form, incidentally increasing their power considerably.

High-Speed Regeneration- is the ability that allows a hollow to heal any injuries very quickly. Hollows outside of the Menos class who exhibit this ability are very rare; and even then it is usually exclusive to the Gillian Class. For some reason, they seem to lose this ability once they evolve to Adjuchas Class (with the possible exception of Nnoitra) Ulquiorra states that most Arrancar gave up Regeneration for far greater strength.


Random Facts:

*When not wearing skates Eru has no sense of Balance and so he will constantly fall.

*Favorite snack is Swedish Fish

*Was killed by a shinigami

*Was an athlete

*Died while Skating

*Has a thing against Ice Skaters

*Loves to fly on skates

*Theme song

Role-Play Example:

Eru looked down at the shinigami below him. Only a short while ago he had been sleeping in one of the many rooms of Las Noches when a shinigami barged in with shikia released. This had woken Eru up and a fight ensued. The fight didn't last long, but it had caused a lot of damage to the room because of the shinigmai's shikia. The fight ended with Eru cutting the shinigami's right arm off, and now he had his right skate pressed against the shinigami's throat. The shinigami struggled against the skate , but to no avail he had already lost enough blood that it had made him weak.

Picking the shinigami up, Eru opened up a gargantua open and threw the shinigami through it. The reason behind this was simple the shinigami wasn't the one that had killed him so he had no need to kill him.

"Why didn't you kill him?"
Came a males voice some where behind Eru. Turning around he saw Aizen standing in the door way of the room. Bowing to him Eru gave him a smile.
"The reason is simple Aizen-sama he wasn't the shinigami that killed me."
Eru said answering Aizens question. Walking past Aizen he gave him another smile before going to leave.
"Remember Eru even the better man kills."
Aizen said repaying Eru's smile with his own.
"I will remember that Aizen-sama but now I most leave."
With that Eru finally left the area.



PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:20 am


Hakujou (Tosh)- You're accepted. It was shorter than I had hoped, but its fine. Copy and paste your profile into the profile thread.

Katsu- You're is not yet accepted. You're abilities can easily be lead to godmodding and should be better limited. Also, the wording for your entire profile is far too casual and you make some grammatical mistakes on it as well. Fix this and it will be accepted.

Let me know when you fixed it.

Madi Lerato


Kenji-Kenso

PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 8:32 am


Ummm, ma'am can you give me some examples of what you mean by godmodding in my profile. Also I'm not sure what you mean by "my wording is far to casual" can you give me an example of that as well.

The grammer mistakes are no problem, I'll check those in Word and fix them.

Your help is much appreciated.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:50 am


Your zanpakutou has 3 inches of nothing in it, rework your math.
As far as the casual writing goes, think of how you'd verbally tell someone about you're profiling. When I read it, it seems like you're telling a friend about it as the dialogue feels as such.
The writing should lie on more of a professional sense as if you're telling an interviewer or some professional of sorts about said profile.
Check some of the crew's profiles in the "Character Profile/Stories" sub-forum. You'll get a general as of what I mean.
I'm not too concerned with the length, but I strive for detail and less casual writing.

Also don't call me ma'am. I ******** hate that.

Madi Lerato


Pandaman2

PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 10:21 am


I think my friend told me that you were a guy.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 11:13 am


And? What of it?

Katsu, your profile is accepted. Copypasta it into the profile thread.

Madi Lerato


Wulf Lonfan

PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 11:23 am


Katsu, I hope you know that Grimmjow doesn't exist within this guild...
PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:06 pm


Wulf Lonfan - I know. I just used him as an example for my RP. I don't know anyone here yet so I used him.

Feiy Boelba - Thank you. I can continue to work on it once I post it there right?

Kenji-Kenso


Xx AI AMI xX

PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:05 pm


Please keep this for profile applications only, no chatting.

*points to OOC Thread*

We have a thread for nonsense talk! *giggles*

Thank you for understanding!
PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:30 pm


I'm soory to add to this but I just wanted to say that I was finished.

Pandaman2

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