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 Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 4:51 pm
I like that "little rhyme of yours Ashie.
now chapter three is comming atcha... appologys, the nice little battle is in the next chapter, Enjoy and feel free to let me know if somethings not sounding right:
Chapter 3
“Who are they?” Chou asked in a whisper.
“They don’t look like anyone from the village.”
Aura was sitting in a small clearing and Alex was behind her leaning on a tree, arms crossed. He opened his eyes and looked at the bushes Amon and Sora were peering through.
Chou pulled Sora back. “Sora, I really don’t think we should be here.”
Sora pulled away. “Chou shh, we’ve got to find out what they’re doing here.” Sora whispered and looked back through the bushes. “I mean have you ever seen anyone sit still for so long?” Then Sora noticed the man was gone. “Hey wait where’d the man go?”
Chou looked back through the bushes as well. Then from behind them came an “Ackhem.”
“Can I help you kids?”
Sora and Amon turned around and saw Alex behind them.
Sora spoke first. “No we’re fine thank you.” Then after grabbing Chous’ arm added. “We’ll be going now.” Sora stud up dragging him to his feet and the two took off back toward the village.
“Alex!”
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Sora entered the village first stopping at the entrance she turned and waited for Chou. He finally ran into the village entrance.
“Can’t you slow down every once in a while… not all of us are fast runners like you.” He breathed.
“Sorry, do you think we should tell Zack?”
“Are you kidding, of course, two strange people not far from the village.” Chou walked purposely toward the main house. “It’s our duty to let Zack know.”
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“Alex, there you are, something’s wrong, Ash isn’t answering me.” Aura said pulling back her curly black hair into a red hair tie. Then noticing Alex wasn’t where she had last seen him added. “What are you doing over there?”
“We had some young guests.” Alex said. “They ran off toward the village before you called for me.”
“Alright that’ll make it a bit tougher.” Aura responded, as she finished putting her hair up. “Okay, Alex go back and get Kit and Rose, and anyone else that’s free.” Aura started toward the village, Alex in tow. “Try not to tell Ari or Muir, they’ll be mad, but we may not get out of the village without the alarm being raised. Tell everyone to stay back unless it gets to bad, we don’t need a pointless war.”
“Understood.” Alex disappeared.
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“So, why don’t you give me that file and I will let you leave.” Kaze said.
Ash griped the file tighter. “No.” She said staring at Kaze hatefully. “My sister needs this file.” She moved away from Kaze’s grip.
“If it’s that important to her why didn’t she come herself?” Kaze asked reaching for the file.
“Stay back!” Ash said sternly as she grabbed the hilt of her short sword. However before she drew her sword the door to the room slammed open.
The sudden noise startled the two and Ash lost her focus and became visible to Kaze and the person whom opened the door.
“Kaze!” Zack stopped seeing Kaze near the left wall. “what’s going on?” he asked seeing Ash behind him.
“I just…” Kaze stumbled forward as Ash pushed by him and made her way past Zack.
“Kaze?” Zack asked looking back at him.
“So what’s wrong?” Kaze asked passing Zack’s question over with his own.
“I believe we’ve got trouble coming.” Zack said.
“I think it’s already here.” Kaze thought as he fallowed Zack out.
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“You’d knew we’d be sent home Sora.” Chou said as he and Sora turned down a road. They saw a group of men running up the road toward them. The two kids moved off to the side.
One of the men stopped. “Chou go on home, Sora you too.” He said then ran to catch back up with the group.
“Alright Pop.” Chou said, as he watched the group disappear down the road. “See Sora.” He said turning around, but Sora was already gone. “Geez.”
“`Go home Sora` Yea right and miss out on whatever’s going to happen no way.” Sora said as she made her way back toward the main house. Rounding a corner of a house she quickly hid behind a couple of trash cans. “That’s the girl from earlier.” She thought to herself. She watched as Aura pulled a young girl- who looked Soras’ own age- into the alleyway.
`Thankfully I’m close enough to hear them` Sora thought.
“What happened?” Aura scolded.
“A human walked in before I had a chance to leave.” Ash answered.
“Ash!” Aura nearly yelled.
“Shh! Its okay look” Ash held out the folder. “It’s yours”
Aura looked at the folder a smile playing on her face. “thank you Ash but we need to get out of here before trouble shows up.”
Ash nodded handing Aura the folder. Aura took it rolled it up and stuck it in a cylinder holder and clipped it onto her waist beside her swords sheath.
“lets go.” Aura said.
She and Ash started down the ally headed Soras way. Sora knew she had to stop them. She picked up a can from the ground and tossed it in front of the two girls.
Aura and Ash stopped then watched as Sora made her way out of the shadows to stand in front of them.
I cannot let you leave.” Sora said pulling out her sword and holds it in front her.
Ash growled and lunged at Sora, but was grabbed in mid attack by Aura.
“Ash NO.”
Without taking her eyes off Sora Ash yelled back at Aura.
“She’s the one that called us scum, she said we were monsters!” Ash glared at Sora. “You said she was mine the next time I saw her.” Ash was getting upset, her eyes started to glow a red color and wind started to blow heavily around them.
Aura sighed. “Alright, but hurry up, and there is no killing I promised.”
“no killing.” Ash answered. After Aura let her go Ash leapt at Sora, who by this time, had placed a whistle between her lips and still had the sword in front of her.
When Ash leapt at Sora the whistle let out a loud shrill sound. Aura quickly covered her ears the loud sound making them feel like a knife stabbing them from the inside.
Ash however didn’t seem to notice or else she didn’t care. Ash took a swing at Sora whom quickly blocked the first swing, but Ash swung with her second sword catching the whistle and flinging it away.
Aura watched the two, Ash and Sora seamed like they were equal in there skills. Then it hit her the three of them were being surrounded.
“Great!” she muttered to herself. “Ash we need to go now!” Aura yelled but it was all in vain as the two girls continued to fight as Ash met Sora’s sword with a clang.
Aura took a step toward the girls, a move that proved to be the wrong one as she was quickly surrounded.
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I know not much, but, I think you all will like the next chapter. >.> now to finish wrighting it and typeing it out. YELL at me if it's not up by the end of next week 'k.
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 9:02 pm
Auradria Riddle I like that "little rhyme of yours Ashie. now chapter three is comming atcha... appologys, the nice little battle is in the next chapter, Enjoy and feel free to let me know if somethings not sounding right: Chapter 3 “Who are they?” Chou asked in a whisper. “They don’t look like anyone from the village.” Aura was sitting in a small clearing and Alex was behind her leaning on a tree, arms crossed. He opened his eyes and looked at the bushes Amon and Sora were peering through. Chou pulled Sora back. “Sora, I really don’t think we should be here.” Sora pulled away. “Chou shh, we’ve got to find out what they’re doing here.” Sora whispered and looked back through the bushes. “I mean have you ever seen anyone sit still for so long?” Then Sora noticed the man was gone. “Hey wait where’d the man go?” Chou looked back through the bushes as well. Then from behind them came an “Ackhem.” “Can I help you kids?” Sora and Amon turned around and saw Alex behind them. Sora spoke first. “No we’re fine thank you.” Then after grabbing Chous’ arm added. “We’ll be going now.” Sora stud up dragging him to his feet and the two took off back toward the village. “Alex!” ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ Sora entered the village first stopping at the entrance she turned and waited for Chou. He finally ran into the village entrance. “Can’t you slow down every once in a while… not all of us are fast runners like you.” He breathed. “Sorry, do you think we should tell Zack?” “Are you kidding, of course, two strange people not far from the village.” Chou walked purposely toward the main house. “It’s our duty to let Zack know.” ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ “Alex, there you are, something’s wrong, Ash isn’t answering me.” Aura said pulling back her curly black hair into a red hair tie. Then noticing Alex wasn’t where she had last seen him added. “What are you doing over there?” “We had some young guests.” Alex said. “They ran off toward the village before you called for me.” “Alright that’ll make it a bit tougher.” Aura responded, as she finished putting her hair up. “Okay, Alex go back and get Kit and Rose, and anyone else that’s free.” Aura started toward the village, Alex in tow. “Try not to tell Ari or Muir, they’ll be mad, but we may not get out of the village without the alarm being raised. Tell everyone to stay back unless it gets to bad, we don’t need a pointless war.” “Understood.” Alex disappeared. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ “So, why don’t you give me that file and I will let you leave.” Kaze said. Ash griped the file tighter. “No.” She said staring at Kaze hatefully. “My sister needs this file.” She moved away from Kaze’s grip. “If it’s that important to her why didn’t she come herself?” Kaze asked reaching for the file. “Stay back!” Ash said sternly as she grabbed the hilt of her short sword. However before she drew her sword the door to the room slammed open. The sudden noise startled the two and Ash lost her focus and became visible to Kaze and the person whom opened the door. “Kaze!” Zack stopped seeing Kaze near the left wall. “what’s going on?” he asked seeing Ash behind him. “I just…” Kaze stumbled forward as Ash pushed by him and made her way past Zack. “Kaze?” Zack asked looking back at him. “So what’s wrong?” Kaze asked passing Zack’s question over with his own. “I believe we’ve got trouble coming.” Zack said. “I think it’s already here.” Kaze thought as he fallowed Zack out. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ “You’d knew we’d be sent home Sora.” Chou said as he and Sora turned down a road. They saw a group of men running up the road toward them. The two kids moved off to the side. One of the men stopped. “Chou go on home, Sora you too.” He said then ran to catch back up with the group. “Alright Pop.” Chou said, as he watched the group disappear down the road. “See Sora.” He said turning around, but Sora was already gone. “Geez.” “`Go home Sora` Yea right and miss out on whatever’s going to happen no way.” Sora said as she made her way back toward the main house. Rounding a corner of a house she quickly hid behind a couple of trash cans. “That’s the girl from earlier.” She thought to herself. She watched as Aura pulled a young girl- who looked Soras’ own age- into the alleyway. `Thankfully I’m close enough to hear them` Sora thought. “What happened?” Aura scolded. “A human walked in before I had a chance to leave.” Ash answered. “Ash!” Aura nearly yelled. “Shh! Its okay look” Ash held out the folder. “It’s yours” Aura looked at the folder a smile playing on her face. “thank you Ash but we need to get out of here before trouble shows up.” Ash nodded handing Aura the folder. Aura took it rolled it up and stuck it in a cylinder holder and clipped it onto her waist beside her swords sheath. “lets go.” Aura said. She and Ash started down the ally headed Soras way. Sora knew she had to stop them. She picked up a can from the ground and tossed it in front of the two girls. Aura and Ash stopped then watched as Sora made her way out of the shadows to stand in front of them. I cannot let you leave.” Sora said pulling out her sword and holds it in front her. Ash growled and lunged at Sora, but was grabbed in mid attack by Aura. “Ash NO.” Without taking her eyes off Sora Ash yelled back at Aura. “She’s the one that called us scum, she said we were monsters!” Ash glared at Sora. “You said she was mine the next time I saw her.” Ash was getting upset, her eyes started to glow a red color and wind started to blow heavily around them. Aura sighed. “Alright, but hurry up, and there is no killing I promised.” “no killing.” Ash answered. After Aura let her go Ash leapt at Sora, who by this time, had placed a whistle between her lips and still had the sword in front of her. When Ash leapt at Sora the whistle let out a loud shrill sound. Aura quickly covered her ears the loud sound making them feel like a knife stabbing them from the inside. Ash however didn’t seem to notice or else she didn’t care. Ash took a swing at Sora whom quickly blocked the first swing, but Ash swung with her second sword catching the whistle and flinging it away. Aura watched the two, Ash and Sora seamed like they were equal in there skills. Then it hit her the three of them were being surrounded. “Great!” she muttered to herself. “Ash we need to go now!” Aura yelled but it was all in vain as the two girls continued to fight as Ash met Sora’s sword with a clang. Aura took a step toward the girls, a move that proved to be the wrong one as she was quickly surrounded. ~ I know not much, but, I think you all will like the next chapter. >.> now to finish wrighting it and typeing it out. YELL at me if it's not up by the end of next week 'k. -_- I'm not a slow runner I can outrun some of the skinny people in my school......I NEVER run away from anything.....I break the rules..... This Chou is the complete opposite of myself and I hate him but I guess that's the plan isn,t it? For him to be the opposite of myself. Well, other than that I generally like the story. Next week? next week!?! I'ma start yellin at you NOW! FINISH AND UPLOAD TEH STOREH!!!! I DISPISE THESE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!!!
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AshoftheMidnightRose Crew
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 11:00 pm
chouthenekoarmyveteran -_- I'm not a slow runner I can outrun some of the skinny people in my school......I NEVER run away from anything.....I break the rules..... This Chou is the complete opposite of myself and I hate him but I guess that's the plan isn,t it? For him to be the opposite of myself. Well, other than that I generally like the story. Next week? next week!?! I'ma start yellin at you NOW! FINISH AND UPLOAD TEH STOREH!!!! I DISPISE THESE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!!! Don't yell at poor Aura-chan! She's doin' her best! xd Yeah I'd probably be makin' friends with everybody and being all happy instead of fighting. I'm not easy to piss off but snide comments towards a friend or family member do tend to set me off. >.>
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 2:27 am
AshoftheMidnightRose chouthenekoarmyveteran -_- I'm not a slow runner I can outrun some of the skinny people in my school......I NEVER run away from anything.....I break the rules..... This Chou is the complete opposite of myself and I hate him but I guess that's the plan isn,t it? For him to be the opposite of myself. Well, other than that I generally like the story. Next week? next week!?! I'ma start yellin at you NOW! FINISH AND UPLOAD TEH STOREH!!!! I DISPISE THESE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!!! Don't yell at poor Aura-chan! She's doin' her best! xd Yeah I'd probably be makin' friends with everybody and being all happy instead of fighting. I'm not easy to piss off but snide comments towards a friend or family member do tend to set me off. >.> to answer chou-chan first I have to start the story Chou off like this as part of the plan. don't worry story chou is not going to be a wimp like it looks like he is 'k 'k. and yes next week XP I think these cliffhangers are the only thing keeping your guy's attention XP now Ashie thank you. And story Ash is a sweet person but like you said rude comments and she becomes a firecracker.
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 4:26 pm
Auradria Riddle AshoftheMidnightRose chouthenekoarmyveteran -_- I'm not a slow runner I can outrun some of the skinny people in my school......I NEVER run away from anything.....I break the rules..... This Chou is the complete opposite of myself and I hate him but I guess that's the plan isn,t it? For him to be the opposite of myself. Well, other than that I generally like the story. Next week? next week!?! I'ma start yellin at you NOW! FINISH AND UPLOAD TEH STOREH!!!! I DISPISE THESE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!!! Don't yell at poor Aura-chan! She's doin' her best! xd Yeah I'd probably be makin' friends with everybody and being all happy instead of fighting. I'm not easy to piss off but snide comments towards a friend or family member do tend to set me off. >.> to answer chou-chan first I have to start the story Chou off like this as part of the plan. don't worry story chou is not going to be a wimp like it looks like he is 'k 'k. and yes next week XP I think these cliffhangers are the only thing keeping your guy's attention XP now Ashie thank you. And story Ash is a sweet person but like you said rude comments and she becomes a firecracker. O.O I BLOW UP AND MAKE THIS LITTLE POPPING NOISE?!?! gonk xd No no. I'm kidding.
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:38 pm
HAHA I am back... sorry I wasn't on last week stare NOT MY FALT!...anyway yes its chapter four... and sorry Chou it has another cliffhanger... oh and Ash sorry! Also posted in the art thread is a link to my deviantart page with a Comic page I'd love any comments on it...okay now that the shameless plug is done on with the new chapter.
Chapter 4
Ash and Sora didn’t seem to notice the group that had surrounded Aura as they continued there fight.
Sora was becoming annoyed with her opponent, every swing Sora thought would connect was blocked by one of Ash’s swords.
~This is getting me nowhere.~ Sora thought as another one of her attacks was blocked. ~I have to do something, but what.~
~She’s good…for a human.~ Ash acknowledged, as Sora blocked her attack.
~there’s no other choice.~ Sora said to herself as Ash swung again.
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Aura looked around her at the 8 men with hoods hiding their faces’.
“What?. You need so many to take on little ‘ol me?” Aura said with a genuine smile.
No one moved or said a word, the men stud in place focused on their mission.
“Alright I’ll make it fair then.” Aura said shrugging as she started to place her sword in its sleeve. As she did that a few of the men fidgeted a bit unsure of what was going to take place next. However they didn’t have to wait long to find out, as Aura finished sliding her sword into its sleeve it clicked into place, at that moment the men who had surrounded her where blown off their feet. Half of the men were blown into the walls that were on either side. The others were knocked back onto the ground.
After making sure none of them were going to get back up Aura looked over at Ash and the young girl she was fighting, it seemed to her that the two young girls hadn’t taken heed of what had just happened. Aura however noticed that the young girl’s eyes were different they started to turn red like hers and Ashes’ do when they got serious about there fights.
“You’ve got to be kidding me.” Aura said and started to walk past the people laying on the ground, but stopped when a dark figure appeared before her.
“you will go no farther.” It said and went in for the attack.
Sora had gotten faster and seemed to know where Ash was going to strike and was able to block and strike back causing Ash to go on the defensive.
Ash hopped back creating some space between herself and Sora her swords still ready to strike.
“this is different.” Ash said just before Sora attacked this time it was Ash who was barely able to block as the swords seemed to create sparks when they connected and to Ash that just wasn’t going to cut it so taking an idea from one of Auras’ books the next time Sora and Ash’s swords connected Sora was blown off her feet and back a few feet, the sword she was using skidded farther from where she laid.
Ash spun around and catches a sai blade with her own. Chou was standing behind her.
“well, well what heave we here?” Ash mocked. “Didn’t you know you can’t surprise us human.”
Chou smirked back pulling his sai away from Ashs’ short sword. “We’ll see won’t we vampire.” He stud ready to attack.
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“Let’s just go.” Kit said walking by Rose. “We’re missing the fun.”
Rose grabbed Kit’s arm “Kit wait, Aura’s right on this one, if we rush in there there’ll be war, something we can’t afford to provoke this time. That and Aura promised Ari and Muir there wouldn’t be anymore unnecessary battles.”
“they are in trouble Aura’s already used two of her tricks. She only uses them when she needs too so there has to be something wrong. So I’m with Kit lets go.” Bit said standing up.
“How was Aura going to let us know if she needed us Alex?” Rave asked.
“She’ll let us know-“ A voice said stepping into the clearing, it was Ari.
“In her own little way.” A females voice said stepping up beside Ari.
“Ari, Muir, how’d you two find out?” Kit asked.
“I knew she was up to something. So I had her followed.” At that a small bat landed on Ari’s outstretched arm.
“Anyway, I think Auraria has things under control only two uses of her magic and who knows maybe they weren’t both hers.” Muir smiled. “I think we should let the girls get out on their own, if we bail them out all the time they’ll never get any stronger.” Muir choose a low tree branch and sat.
“And like Muir said Aura will let us know if it gets to be too much.” Ari finished.
“Agreed.” Muir said.
Bit, Rose, Kit, and Alex. nodded their agreement.
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Aura ducked under the sword swung by her attacker. She had a hand on her sword hilt but has yet to draw her sword.
“Draw your weapon Vampire lets see how good you are.” The man said stepping back.
Aura stud not moving and smiled a sincere smile. “I know how good I am hunter. The question is, how good are you?”
The hunter adjusted his sword and then ran toward Aura.
Aura switched her attack stance with her hand gripping the swords handle, and as soon as the man reached a certain point Aura quickly pulled her sword out of its sheath.
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Ash was holding her own agents her new opponent, matching his attacks and moving with purpose.
Chou had been watching Ash’s moves closely as a fight would allow trying to find an opening, and he had found it.
With Ash’s next swing with her short sword instead of blocking he ducked under her swing and quickly before Ash had a chance to react he colt her hanging rabbets foot and yanked. Ash’s sword clanged to the ground behind chou. Ash watched her sword fly through the air, surprised that someone had gotten her sword out of her hand.
Before she could regain her composer Chou had swept kicked Ash knocking her backwards onto her back causing her to lose her other sword. Chou kicked it away and stud over Ash a sai pointed at her.
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The guy continued a few feet past Aura. Aura had her sword strait out, she was first to relax. She turned around and saw her opponent kneeling on the ground, he had placed his sword into the ground, and he used his sword to stand up.
Aura smirked. “Apparently, your not as----“ Aura stopped, and looked down she realized her shirt was torn.
“----Good as I thought.” The man said holding his side.
“Fine, I can see that I need to focus on you more.” Aura pointed a finger into the sky a spark flue into the air upon reaching treetop height it burst into a firework type display.
“Now that that’s taken care of, see if you can keep up.” Aura said, turning and headed deeper into the forested area to the left, She was closely fallowed by the hunter.
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Chaotic Rose Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 11:16 am
Wow everyone writes so wonderfully!
I am completely enchanted with your story Aura!
I feel honored to be a part of it!
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:08 pm
Auradria Riddle HAHA I am back... sorry I wasn't on last week stare NOT MY FALT!...anyway yes its chapter four... and sorry Chou it has another cliffhanger... oh and Ash sorry! Also posted in the art thread is a link to my deviantart page with a Comic page I'd love any comments on it...okay now that the shameless plug is done on with the new chapter. Chapter 4 Ash and Sora didn’t seem to notice the group that had surrounded Aura as they continued there fight. Sora was becoming annoyed with her opponent, every swing Sora thought would connect was blocked by one of Ash’s swords. ~This is getting me nowhere.~ Sora thought as another one of her attacks was blocked. ~I have to do something, but what.~ ~She’s good…for a human.~ Ash acknowledged, as Sora blocked her attack. ~there’s no other choice.~ Sora said to herself as Ash swung again. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ Aura looked around her at the 8 men with hoods hiding their faces’. “What?. You need so many to take on little ‘ol me?” Aura said with a genuine smile. No one moved or said a word, the men stud in place focused on their mission. “Alright I’ll make it fair then.” Aura said shrugging as she started to place her sword in its sleeve. As she did that a few of the men fidgeted a bit unsure of what was going to take place next. However they didn’t have to wait long to find out, as Aura finished sliding her sword into its sleeve it clicked into place, at that moment the men who had surrounded her where blown off their feet. Half of the men were blown into the walls that were on either side. The others were knocked back onto the ground. After making sure none of them were going to get back up Aura looked over at Ash and the young girl she was fighting, it seemed to her that the two young girls hadn’t taken heed of what had just happened. Aura however noticed that the young girl’s eyes were different they started to turn red like hers and Ashes’ do when they got serious about there fights. “You’ve got to be kidding me.” Aura said and started to walk past the people laying on the ground, but stopped when a dark figure appeared before her. “you will go no farther.” It said and went in for the attack. Sora had gotten faster and seemed to know where Ash was going to strike and was able to block and strike back causing Ash to go on the defensive. Ash hopped back creating some space between herself and Sora her swords still ready to strike. “this is different.” Ash said just before Sora attacked this time it was Ash who was barely able to block as the swords seemed to create sparks when they connected and to Ash that just wasn’t going to cut it so taking an idea from one of Auras’ books the next time Sora and Ash’s swords connected Sora was blown off her feet and back a few feet, the sword she was using skidded farther from where she laid. Ash spun around and catches a sai blade with her own. Chou was standing behind her. “well, well what heave we here?” Ash mocked. “Didn’t you know you can’t surprise us human.” Chou smirked back pulling his sai away from Ashs’ short sword. “We’ll see won’t we vampire.” He stud ready to attack. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ “Let’s just go.” Kit said walking by Rose. “We’re missing the fun.” Rose grabbed Kit’s arm “Kit wait, Aura’s right on this one, if we rush in there there’ll be war, something we can’t afford to provoke this time. That and Aura promised Ari and Muir there wouldn’t be anymore unnecessary battles.” “they are in trouble Aura’s already used two of her tricks. She only uses them when she needs too so there has to be something wrong. So I’m with Kit lets go.” Bit said standing up. “How was Aura going to let us know if she needed us Alex?” Rave asked. “She’ll let us know-“ A voice said stepping into the clearing, it was Ari. “In her own little way.” A females voice said stepping up beside Ari. “Ari, Muir, how’d you two find out?” Kit asked. “I knew she was up to something. So I had her followed.” At that a small bat landed on Ari’s outstretched arm. “Anyway, I think Auraria has things under control only two uses of her magic and who knows maybe they weren’t both hers.” Muir smiled. “I think we should let the girls get out on their own, if we bail them out all the time they’ll never get any stronger.” Muir choose a low tree branch and sat. “And like Muir said Aura will let us know if it gets to be too much.” Ari finished. “Agreed.” Muir said. Bit, Rose, Kit, and Alex. nodded their agreement. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ Aura ducked under the sword swung by her attacker. She had a hand on her sword hilt but has yet to draw her sword. “Draw your weapon Vampire lets see how good you are.” The man said stepping back. Aura stud not moving and smiled a sincere smile. “I know how good I am hunter. The question is, how good are you?” The hunter adjusted his sword and then ran toward Aura. Aura switched her attack stance with her hand gripping the swords handle, and as soon as the man reached a certain point Aura quickly pulled her sword out of its sheath. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ Ash was holding her own agents her new opponent, matching his attacks and moving with purpose. Chou had been watching Ash’s moves closely as a fight would allow trying to find an opening, and he had found it. With Ash’s next swing with her short sword instead of blocking he ducked under her swing and quickly before Ash had a chance to react he colt her hanging rabbets foot and yanked. Ash’s sword clanged to the ground behind chou. Ash watched her sword fly through the air, surprised that someone had gotten her sword out of her hand. Before she could regain her composer Chou had swept kicked Ash knocking her backwards onto her back causing her to lose her other sword. Chou kicked it away and stud over Ash a sai pointed at her. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ The guy continued a few feet past Aura. Aura had her sword strait out, she was first to relax. She turned around and saw her opponent kneeling on the ground, he had placed his sword into the ground, and he used his sword to stand up. Aura smirked. “Apparently, your not as----“ Aura stopped, and looked down she realized her shirt was torn. “----Good as I thought.” The man said holding his side. “Fine, I can see that I need to focus on you more.” Aura pointed a finger into the sky a spark flue into the air upon reaching treetop height it burst into a firework type display. “Now that that’s taken care of, see if you can keep up.” Aura said, turning and headed deeper into the forested area to the left, She was closely fallowed by the hunter. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ Awesome!!!! I love it.
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AshoftheMidnightRose Crew
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 5:35 pm
XD Cha. I kick butt.*twirls baseball bat from her room for 5 mins. before dropping it on her foot* >_O;;.....owie.....
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 10:17 am
Hey guys... i've been working on a story... not sure if it's good or not... you decide xp Part One
Life isn’t crazy enough... Let’s bring down the house on this one...
Leon walked slowly through the satanic looking hallway. He wore his signature black trenchcoat, blue raver goggles on his forehead, skull t-shirt and ripped rocker style pants, also black goth boots. His footsteps faint on the blood splattered carpet, he knew where he was. This was the castle of Alucard, the strongest vampire alive. Leon was a vampire himself, not as strong but just as graceful as the owner of this dreadful palace. He stepped past a door, spotting a coffin, he felt an odd aura wafting around the coffin. "That's peculiar, is there a fresh vampire in that coffin? It smells female," he whispered, pulling the trenchcoat close to his body. Leon slowly inched over to the casket, scanning the room, searching for any potential threats. It was pleasant, flowers everywhere, a mirror. Not a bad hangout for the old fool, he thought as he felt a slight tingling in his body. "No don't get close!" a girls voice exclaimed as Leon got closer to the coffin. It sounded young, about his age of sixteen. "Why not? I'm planning on getting you out," he stated slowly. He felt a jolt of electricity, and saw bolts of it crackling around him, "Get back! You'll get badly hurt if you come closer!" the girls voice shouted, he shrugged it off, as he stepped forward, the electricity intensified, engulfing him. "Hmm? What's this?" he wondered aloud, he saw it crackling and spatting to and fro. The electricity fluctuated and fizzed, spiraling into his goggles. Oh my god, did he just survive that? the girl wondered, as Leon walked up to her. "Hmm... how dull," he whined, he was hoping for something that would give him some fun for the night. He walked to the coffin and sat down on the rim, looking into the glass. There lay a dark skinned woman, with about D-cup sized breasts, innocent looking eyes and black hair down to her neck. He smiled, "Need some help, lass?" he asked with a clever grin. She stared at him through the glass, her eyes scanning over what parts of him she could see. He is strong, I wonder how much he has been through, she wondered quietly. Leon quickly drew his dagger, and in a swift movement, dicing open the coffin latches. The girl's eyes were wide as the casket came unlatched. "Would you like me to get you out of this hellish place?" Leon asked with a calm tone. He extended his hand out to the girl in the casket, which she took shyly. Carefully lifting her out of the coffin, he had a sudden urge to escape. "Things are about to get crazy," he announced as he picked the girl up in the bridal fashion. He bolted for the window, his feet carrying him faster than any other vampire. As he burst through the window, bat wings erupted from his trenchcoat, carrying him high into the air. This man is no ordinary vampire, the girl thought, holding tightly to his chest. It seemed as if things were going to change in town, but would they be for the better?
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:26 pm
Nice. But I know the stories you write. Remember. This is a "clean" atmosphere here in the guild. Try to keep it as subtle as you can with your pervertedness.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:54 pm
alright Chou-sama... (lol!)
i'lll keep it low... there was only one perverted reference in that ad that was the girls breast size xp
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AshoftheMidnightRose Crew
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 9:35 pm
=_=;;.....................................::cough::..........
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 2:05 pm
Hey all, I got the second part in ^_^ Part Two
Let's get things going
It was nearing midnight, and the air was calm and cool. Leon's wings were beginning to get sore from the flight from the castle. "By the way," he had forgotten to ask her name, "what is your name, madam?" His eyes were looking straight at her, not paying attention to the path ahead. "It's Jackie, now could you pleas- AHH!" she shouted as he dodged a tree, his eyes still on her
"Could I please what?"
"Keep your eyes on where we're going."
"Right," he said smugly, he shifted his gaze back ahead just in time to barely avoid another tree. He spotted a small inn around town and decided against everything to stay the night there, even though it was 3 miles away from Alucard’s hellhole. Carefully, he landed in front of a wornout, but slightly fancy, inn. It seemed safe, for all he knew.
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He walked up to the check-in counter and got a decently warm welcome, "Oh, Leon Tresona! How nice to see you again. sir!" the female receptionist exclaimed with noticable happiness. Even though Jackie was in a warm building, she kept hugging her arms around her body. She was freezing and couldn't warm up. "Jackie, would you like to share a room, or sleep serperately?" Leon's voice had jolted her back to reality. She realized that Alucard would be looking for her, and she may need someone watching over her in the night, "Yes, Leon, that sounds fine." He turned back to the woman, she had already punched it in and had his key on the desk. "Thanks, lass. We'll be here till the morning," Leon bowed repsectfully as he thanked her, the receptionist was grateful to him for helping this small village so many times. "Oh my name is Cathy!" she called to him as Jackie and Leon walked up the stairs.
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They carefully walked up the stairs, Leon's eyes were scanning for any threats, while Jackie was sticking close behind him, watching his movements carefully. Her face was red, for reasons she didn't know. Leon edged to the door and inserted the key, No electrocution or explosion, he marked off "Shocked to death" and "Blown to bits" off of his mental checklist. The door creaked open, making Leon's senses highten to even greater spikes of adrenaline. It was safe inside, no spiders leaping from holes in the walls; no poisonous lizards crawling from the bed to feast on them; and no psycho vampire bounty hunters. "Thank god, a normal hotel room," he sighed with noticable relief. His stretched his back out as he laid his trench coat onto the hanger, "Jackie, will you be ok tonight?" he asked calmly. She was jolted back to reality yet again by Leon's voice, it was soothing but had urgency layered thinly over it. "Yes, I think," she replied instictively. His eyes were calm and locked on hers, which made her cheeks appear warm and flushed.
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