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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 4:05 pm

Go for it! And if you want to be an Editor for me, Malystix, by all means...just let me know when you think you are there! lol

Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 5:17 pm

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Thank you very much. I thought they reminded me of elves, and just had to draw them.

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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 5:18 pm

Pretea

Go for it! And if you want to be an Editor for me, Malystix, by all means...just let me know when you think you are there! lol

Well, I am unsure of how to edit the text. You would have to show me, but I would love to do that. I am normally on about 4-5 EST, though I won't be tommorrow (academic stuff).

Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 5:20 pm

Ok, here's the beginning of the comic. I know it's not much right now, but it will get longer.

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If you can't tell, the person in teal w/ purple hair is Kamiku, and Hakkai is in blue with the red hair (which I messed up on - I picked up the wrong colour! stressed ).

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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 9:11 pm

Lol, it's not a big deal! You read it, tell me if it makes sense, etc, etc, etcf.

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:28 am

Pretea

Lol, it's not a big deal! You read it, tell me if it makes sense, etc, etc, etc.

Can I change the actual text? Like, verb forms and such? Because everyone messes up with grammar every one and a while, and it annoys me more than anything.

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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 10:02 am

All I ask, is that if you do so, tell me where it is. I have a certain form of style, so if a person changes things around, it will loose it. But I really do need someone in there who can tell me about the grammer and such, what I need to edit and so on. lol

I'm really easy going, so it doesn't bother me. First of all, though, I suggest you read the stories so far so you know where they re comming from and go from there.

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 5:57 pm

Pretea

All I ask, is that if you do so, tell me where it is. I have a certain form of style, so if a person changes things around, it will loose it. But I really do need someone in there who can tell me about the grammer and such, what I need to edit and so on. lol

I'm really easy going, so it doesn't bother me. First of all, though, I suggest you read the stories so far so you know where they re comming from and go from there.

I am like two chapters from being done Insanity's Requiem. And don't worry, I won't mess with your writing style, at least, as little as I can, because I know how you feel. One of my friends, when editing my papers, changes all of my stylistic things, and it annoys the s**t out of me. I will edit most for grammar and verb tense, things like that - and redundance. I hate that the most.

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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 6:36 pm

As do I. And when it comes to your own writing, you don't always catch it!! lol

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 4:42 pm

Yeah, I hate that. Some things that I write make perfect sense to me, but when other people read them, they cannot comprehend them at all. It surprises me, because I think I make it abundantly clear, but I guess I don't.

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Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 5:30 pm

It's basically because you have the words in yourhead, but you don't type them on the paper.

Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 4:53 pm

Yeah, and I know what I want to say, and how to say it, as well as what is supposed to happen next in the story. I almost have the first chapter edited (no, it is not taking me a long time because it is horrible, but just because I'm lazy) and will PM it to you when I am done.