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PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 2:29 pm


BECCA! COME BACK TO US!
PostPosted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 4:27 pm


Alright..... I'm sooooo sorry for late update!!!
Bad few weeks.
New chapter up as soon as Moshy edits it.
And one more thing, I will keep on writing whenever possible.
Sooooo sorry.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 8:14 pm


New chapter. edited by two people. I had to draw names from a hat. Edited by Moshy.

CHAPTER EIGHT -{double date}
"Oh Becca, I hope you don't mind, but we're going on a double date."
"Oh, no problem," I said, standing up and stretching.
"May I present, Tay!" said Gerard, gesturing towards a girl in Mikey’s doorway.
"Hey Mikey, and Mikey’s lover," said a short waving girl with glasses.
"Hi!" Mikey said with toothpaste ad smiles.
"Let’s get going you guys; it's 5 already," said an anxious Gerard.
So Mikey and I started going down the stairs, soon making it a race. "Catch me if you can!" said a playful Mikey.
"Sure I can!" I said, running after him. He was about to touch the car of the door when I decided to tackle him.
"Cheater!" he screamed while trying to pull me off. We were wrestling 10 seconds after. Gerard walked out at the worst possible time and saw us. "MIKEY!" he screamed.
"Hey man we were just wrestling, sorry," I said, embarrassed. He cracked up in laughter. Tay had a look of complete wonder on her face. But when she saw Mikey and I getting up, she started laughing uncontrollably. When the couple were done laughing, about 10 minutes later we all piled in the car, a small minivan that was probably Ms. Ways'. I had no idea where we were going. But knowing them, it would be fun.
When we hopped out, we were at the mall. The mall I work at. When we entered, Gerard was going in the direction of the coffee place. That made me happy. Yuuummmy coffee. So we walked into the Starbucks, got a table and started sipping our coffee. I was holding Mikey’s hand as I saw some familiar faces. Manny and Kenny.
Oh f**k no; they were not going to ruin this date. I love them to death, but they could possibly ruin this. I sunk a bit down in my chair, trying to go unnoticed. Holy hell, how I failed. They just stumbled upon the table to see us.
"Well, well, well, look who’s on a date." said Kenny, and Manny apparently elbowed him "sneakily".
Manny said, "How about we get going now!?" and dragged Kenny off, not to hear anymore of that. I was not very embarrassed, but I still felt weird. So Gerard brought it up. "So you work with them...wow."
"Yeah," I said, smiling and finishing my coffee. I think the guys sensed that because just then they stood up, throwing away the coffee cups. So there I was walking, through the mall, to the theatre. Mikey Way holding my hand, his fingers intertwining with mine. We got our tickets and went inside. We saw the silence of the lambs. It was thrilling, it was great, and I held on to Mikey for dear life the whole time. I felt so great that night. I had everything; a new friend, an awesome boyfriend, and a great life ahead of me.


Edit: No comments???
PostPosted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:40 pm


Hey you guys.
So if there are any fans of Heaven Knows please help me bring it back.
I want to post new chapters!!

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Eriuza

PostPosted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 2:07 pm


Commennttt.
Now update!
PostPosted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 2:10 pm


I walked hand in hand with Mikey as we entered the school doors for the first time since summer; it smelled like paper in the full hallways. Lanny and Bob were beside me, and so were Tay and Gee. Frank had moved to a different school, and I still missed him. Ray was starting college this year, whereas Mikey, Tay, Lanny and I were juniors, and Gee and Bob were seniors. I walked steadily to my first class, Guitar. Unfortunately no one had that class with me so I would have to bear it alone. But of course a guitar can entertain me. We had a great summer, many memories made. We started a band, Mikey named it "My Chemical Romance." I loved the way it sounds, especially when he says it. I was lead guitrarist, Ray was rythm, Gee sings, and Mikey plays the sparkly red fender bass I got him at a thrift store, and Bob plays drums. I love the band, we even have our own fans; Lanny, Tay, and Frank often cheer us on at gigs. I sure live the life.

I sat down in the familiar wooden bench next to Mikey; we were at the all familiar lunch table. It was Wednesday, a few weeks after school started. We were sharing the usual Coke Zero when we heard loud screams and I started to panic and look around. And then I saw it. A shiny silver barrel. He held up the gun high and started screaming at the person he was across from, he too held a gun.

"In the middle of a gunfight, in the centre of a cafeteria."

He held the gun at the other boys face, a girl shrieking at both of them. Oh my. They're fighting over her.

Bang. Screaming. Bang. More screaming.

I was not screaming; I was just holding on to Mikey, tears running down my face, for dear life. I saw the girl screaming on her knees, hands over a teary face. I pressed my face against Mikey’s shoulder; I didn’t want to see anymore. But then I heard a third bang, and I was scared, I wanted to know everyone in my table was safe. So I looked up. All of them were unharmed. That's all I wanted to see so I put my face against his shoulder once again. The fire alarm went off in what seemed like almost an hour. I stood up as Mikey did. His face was worried, and looked genuinely disturbed and scared at what he must’ve witnessed. We walked as fast as our legs would take us; it was the run of a person with a 20 pound sneakers. I again looked at my friends; Tay was in such a scared state it pained me. And Lanny looked like a ten year old who had just found out that Disneyland burned down with the world supply of kitties and baby pandas trapped inside.

We were dismissed early from school that day. We all called our parents when we got inside Bobs car. We just wanted to let them know we were alive. We went to band practice as we did everyday for a while now. I was shaking profusely, where my and Mikey’s hands met it looked horrible; our hands could whip cake mix. Ray looked confused and rushed up to us.

"What’s wrong guys?" he asked. We were not in the mood to answer so we just went to the garage as he had said nothing. It was freezing cold outside, and when we got into the garage we sat down on the cold hard floor. We flipped on the news and let Ray gasp himself. He left the room as soon as he saw. I wondered why, but my thoughts were interrupted a few minutes later by coffee, blankets, smores, and our favorite CDs. Ray had decided to throw us a sleepover. I decided, what was there to lose? I would stay the night. So he took it upon himself to get the party started. He turned on his goofy mix CD. The first song started. We heard something unzip and something being shuffled.

He turned around. "I'm, too sexy for my shirt, so sexy that it hurts."

He was in drag. Everyone let out huge laughs as we saw the dancing Afro-man. I decided Mikey and I were wearing makeup too. I got up, put some hot pink lipstick on both of us, and picked up feather boas. We started dancing on top of the amps, and soon the others joined in too. We all danced the night away, told scary stories, and had a great time. Perhaps it wasn't such a bad day after all.



Thanks to Lanny and Moshy for support, and Moshy for her mad editing skills.

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Eriuza

PostPosted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 2:12 pm


Lol, that was sweeeeett
(:
PostPosted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 6:37 pm


Hey Leann! What's new? Care to read my new story?
I still love that chapter Becca. It gets me everytime I read it. <333

xvanyaa

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Eriuza

PostPosted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 4:24 am


TAAYYY (:
Unfortunately not much, lol. How about you?
Yeah, I'll check it out in a few hours.
I gotta get to school lol.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 2:50 pm


Thanks love.
Same with me. My life has been quite boring as of late. Which I'm thankful for, after the drama I dealt with over the Summer. xD
Oh, and WRITE DAMMIT! LOL

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Eriuza

PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:00 pm


Ahah, I had like no fun over the summer ):
Boring, boring, boring. + babysitting w/ no pay for a month DX
I need some action! XD Not drama though, that's never needed o:
Write? Like fanfics and stuff?
If so, I actually, to be honest can't do that at the moment..
Or anytime soon. ):
I'm busying myself away this year.
Trying to beat my smart a** brother's marks.
When I do have time, I'll start something, or re-continue that story of mine.
Because I've some new ideas. o:

Edit,
Holy crap.. I wrote too much eh?
xD My bad.

Edit again,
Beccaa, update sooon?
It'd totally make my week (:
PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:43 pm


Awww don't overwork yourself, love. I wouldn't you to be hurt. D:
I'm refraining from clubs and stuff until Sophomore year. That way I'll have time to relax in the beginning and get acquainted to High School, then be able to do those activities for college. Can't wait for them though. (:
Can't wait for your stories either. Hopefully you'll have some more time soon! =D
BECCA! THIS IS SOME SERIOUS BULLCRAP! UPDATE FRIEND! D;

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 9:43 pm


Okay I'm so sorry for not updating but the Burger Boy broke my laptop and I didn't have internet for a few weeks!! D:
BIG CHAPTERS ON THEIR WAY!!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:02 pm


They better be!
D:< -angry/impatientfayce-

Eriuza


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 12:09 pm


Chapter 10- {THE ALL IMPORTANT SENIOR PROM}
I felt nervous. I slid the ring up and down my finger.
My engagment ring.
I rembered it like yesterday.
One week ago Mikey proposed. It was a complete surprise to me, although no one else was the least bt surprised. I came into the My Chem practice room[the ways garage] on a normal Sunday. I was with Lanny and Tay, they walked a bit behind me, and they were shuffling around there things. Which I thought nothing of at the time. I went in and grabbed my David Gilmoure replica strat. I plucked the high e and reached to tighten the string when I saw it.
"HOLY ********!!!!!" I screamed at the top of my lungs.
It was beautiful.
I slid it off the peg and asked Mikey. "Is it..... *sniffle* Is it for me?"
"Yes honey." he said, smiling. "Will you marry me?"
And as soon as I knew it I looked around and all my friends were playing a song for us. It was Sweet Child O Mine. "OH JESUS!!!" I said, crouching to the floor, sobbing out of joy. I put it on my finger, it fit perfectly, it was Mrs. Way's ring. It was a beatiful green diamond, in a elaborate cut.
I turned around again to my friends, the band. Gerard was belting out the vocals, sounding like an angel. Bob was pounding on his drum set, Lanny was playing bass as a replacemt for Mikey, her fingers skillfully sweeping up and down the maple fretboard. Frank was playing rhythm on Pansy, and Ray was playing his Les Paul. I finaly got the strength to pull myself up, and hugged Mikey, whispering shakily "Hell yeah"
....
But now it was today, and I was applying my eyeliner, getting ready to go to the Senior Prom. Lanny and Tay were right next to me, doing their make up as well. I looked down at our dresses. "We are hella tight" I said, looking at our dresses, we all had black, weird dresses, and were wearing fishnets. "I know huh?" said Lanny, opening her mouth wide to apply mascara. I finished up my makeup and got out my Sidekick, I had a new text from Mikey. It read,
"Come meet us outside."
I turned around on my heels and stroke a pose. "LET'S GO LOVIES!!" and we walked out the door, to see the most amazing thing. It was 4 motorcycles. "Sweet Jesus." Tay said, using up her little breath. Gee had his hair down, and was wearing a blue jacket. Mikey was wearing the same, and so was Mikey, and Bob, and Frankie. They looked great. We stepped out, and jumped on the back of their cycles. Hands around Mikey's waist I proclaimed "I feel so ******** cool."
And we rolled out of my driveway with his sweet chuckle dancing through the air.





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