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 Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:54 pm
((Kidou is the name of my character so sorry if it gets confusing sweatdrop ))
Kidou jumped from rooftop to rooftop scanning the surrounding area for any abnormalities. His red scarf was blown from side to side because of the air resistance. ......., Kidou thought as he gracefully landed on a roof, I guess this is going to be a quiet night. Unfortunately at that exact moment two screams emitted and from a nearby alley one was a woman's and one was a hollow's. Hearing the sounds Kidou races towards it. When he gets there all he finds is a disoriented woman. "Eh?" Kidou said aloud and to no one in particular, "There should be a hollow here." And then it came to him Nobody ever looks up. Kidou immediately looked up to see a hollow falling from the sky, threatening to crush him. Kidou jumped backwards quickly as a hollow came crashing down to earth. It was of the most unusual hollows he had ever seen. It had the upper body of a muscled animal and the lower body of what looked like a dragon. The hollow whipped it's tail towards Kidou in a violent manner. Wow, Kidou thought as he jumped into the air, This thing is pretty fast. It looked up, letting out an ear splitting howl, angry that it had lost it's prey. Kidou vertically slashed at the back of the beast head while falling. The hollow turned around, but a split second to late. Kidou's blade dug into the back of the things head but not as far as Kidou had guessed. At that moment the hollow swung it's tail at Kidou again. This time the blow hit Kidou and he slammed into a wall. Kidou hit the wall so hard that he broke it sending dust, rubble, and brick flying. A cloud of dust had formed around the area where the wall once was. The hollow sweeped his tail through the dust and rubble to reveal it's new prey. When all the dust had cleared the area the hollow found nothing, Kidou had disappeared. The hollow screamed it's anger towards the sky. Kidou, who had flash stepped behind the hollow, yelled "Hey!" the hollow turned around immediately, "Take this, Hado number 4 White Lightning!!" Kidou shouted as he pointed his right palm towards the beast. Out of his hand came a large lightning bolt that moved towards the beast at amazing speeds. The lightning hit it's target head on. A large scream tore through the dust and rubble that now shrouded the hollow. When the dust settled the last remains of the beast could be seen fading away. "Well," said Kidou aloud and to no one in particular, "That wasn't so bad."
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:01 pm
^_^ I actually like this sample a lot. It seems insanely realistic and less drawn out than most samples I see. Although your character name is going to drive me nuts, your totally In.
Accepted.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:10 pm
((Eh.....Sorry about that. I can change it if that would make things easier. Also, could you or one of your seated officers help me with my zampakuto training?))
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:01 pm
Welcome!~ Glad to have you. ^^
I'd be glad to help you. If you see my yellow dot online, send a PM my way, and I'll help you with anything, anytime. I really don't do much on Gaia besides lurk around the guild, so you won't be annoying me at all.
We all kinda communicate through MSN/YIM, so if you have one, let us have it. If you have any questions, its much easier to chat over an Instant Messenger.
Post in the training thread, and I'll help you out. Is there something in particular you'd like to learn?
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:19 pm
((Why thank you very much Madam Waffles. I just want to work on gaining my zampakuto right now. I've already posted in the training thread so whenever your ready come and find me there.))
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:44 pm
No problem. ^^ Well, you already have your Zampacto. You have to wait 2 month for Shikkai. but I can help you draw out more unique qualities for your blade. Such as size, or color.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 4:08 pm
Woohoo! New meat!
((Just so you know guys, I might get hacked so if I make a new account I'll pm you... >_> <_<
I didn't know about this... MSN communication... mines colm_zihark@hotmail. com if it means any importance to you ='|))
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 4:12 pm
Madam Waffles No problem. ^^ Well, you already have your Zampacto. You have to wait 2 month for Shikkai. but I can help you draw out more unique qualities for your blade. Such as size, or color.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 4:15 pm
Kidou Shikaku Madam Waffles No problem. ^^ Well, you already have your Zampacto. You have to wait 2 month for Shikkai. but I can help you draw out more unique qualities for your blade. Such as size, or color. I thought the same thing! I know how you feel man! That really is confuzing! I told you guys! ~Mwahaha!~
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:12 pm
Silence covered everything. Around here Rima’s house was deeply covered in thick trees, mostly all of them Sakura trees, yet they were currently not in bloom. Soon enough the whole town, no city would be covered in the petals. It was beautiful, but yet beautiful things never seemed to last too long. They lingered, and then died. Although they reawaken year after year. Slate blue eyes were fixed on the trees, a slender, petite female stared at them. Her family didn’t just own a house here; they owned a few large houses over here. It wasn’t just her father, stepmother and her, it was the whole family.
Rima wore a long white kimono that never seemed to get dirty. Just like her extremely white hair. Whack! “Stop staring you foolish child and get ready for school. You’re lucky that was a spoon and not a sword!” Her grandmother scolded. Out of her entire family she had to say that she liked her grandmother and grandfather the best. She never really showed it, but other her extremely sensitive father and evil stepmother, they showed the most care. They scolded her quite often, but they were the elders of her family, what else were they suppose to do?
Quickly the teen changed into a white sun dress and out of her regular home attire. Everyone around here at home usually wore kimonos, and kimono sandals. At school that would be good if there were a festival or dance. Yet even Rima doubted anyone would actually wear a kimono to a dance. Probably the person who did would be laughed at. Rima pulled her hair up in to long pony tails. Her slate blue eyes reflected in the mirror. She was unusually pale, yet she never seemed to tan the slightest bit in the sun.
Her slender fingers grasped her white tote bag that held her belongings in it. She had a spot for everything in her bedroom. She wasn’t a neat freak, but her room was actually quite clean. Slipping on a pair of flats she stalked out of her home and through the gate, a small sign next to it reading ‘Namikaze Resident’. Rima could already tell she missed her bus. She was an early riser and yet she never got to the bus on time. Quite frankly she liked walking better than riding things. Rima was never late anyway, and if she was today. Well that would be the first.
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:35 pm
Haha! I like it. x3 As long as Yuki doesn't intercept, accepted!
We have classes every Wednesday 5-8 EST, and feel free to IM me anytime. ^^
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 1:11 pm
((This is a sample from my RP Eternal Hour. It's the same one Colm submitted but this time I would like you to look at my posts hightlighted in green! Colm reffered me to the guild and suggested I use this post. It's a good example of my skills I suppose though it's not my best. Enjoy!))
Pharaoh: Quaoluin sniffed "Servant, bring them to me, bring me the Exile!" He stood up and begin pacing in suspense waiting for the Exile to march outfitted with chains.
How odd, the Exile's had been quite bold of late, first the poor assassination attempt and now a single infultrator? Were the Exiles having dicipline issues, or was this some sort of new tactic? One thing Quaoluin definately knew was that the Exiles we getting bold and sloppy.
Colm Kuchiki: Minato thought for a moment, how long could he accually keep her here without being exposed? He would need to bring her back when he is stationed back in the fortress, if he was again. He would bring her with and on the way he would give her a chance to leave, wether she did or not was her decision. He started to wonder why they hadn't been called to meet with Quaoluin yet... it seemed like forever. Minato heard a know on the door, he answered it like he normally would. "What is it?".
"Lord Quaoluin wishes to see you now." The servant informed.
Minato signaled for Hanake to follow him, and she did. The servant lead them to a large, black and red door. He opened it and gestured them to go inside. Minato had been in here many times, he knew it well. He walked halfway up the hall and then bowed to Quaoluin, seeing Hanake do this after he did. "Lord Quaoluin, I have information and other matters I wish to discuss with you." Minato said coldly.
Pharaoh: Quaoluin stopped pacing and nodded to the two "Minato there will be time to discuss those matters after I am formally introduced to, her!" a scrutenizing gaze fell upon his face "The..." he cleared his throat "...Exile I presume?"
Colm Kuchiki: Minato thought about his situation, he didn't want to lie to the person he is most loyal to, but he didn't want Hanake to be cought because he was the one who brought her here. "No," He said calmly, "she is my niece from the city, her father recently died and I was the only one left in the family." He lied, he wouldn't know if Quaoluin would believe it, he didn't even know if he had relatives that were still living. "She wishes to join the Empire army..." This one the part he made up to give his story stability.
Pharaoh: Quaoluin laughed aloud and sat down giving a sceptical glare to Minato and Hanake "I'm doubtful, resourses tell me shes an Exile! But no worries, she can stay. However , under no circomstances will any information concerning the Empire be devulged to her." He locked eyes with Minato "Do you understand?"
Colm Kuchiki: Minato was naturally calm now, "Thank you Lord Quaoluin, I promise I have not, and will not reveal any Empire Classified information to her. I apologize for having to try and lie to you, I am willing to accept any punishment." Minato kept his eyes locked with Quaoluin, he knew that looking away would make him angry, especially if it was one of his Military Commanders. Also to make sure Minato was still emotionless, by making sure he had no fear.
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 1:33 pm
It is an okay example, but could you please provide another? It was used before, and I want to see something new for you. Remember, you can take it from anywhere, you don't have to write anything up again.
I just want to get a real evaluation of yours skills.
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 1:46 pm
Okay, I will see what I can scrounge up! It will most likely be at least two of my better examples if that is okay, I wanna give you a variety to look at!
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