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You know, Kirby,
  you aren;t supposed to fall in love with prostitutes. That's the point.
  That's what makes it so pretty I guess.
  I hate you.
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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 10:22 am


heart heart heart
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 10:57 am


Well since I just got my internet back I thought I'd read up on the latest and what I've gotta say is ... wow

I'll be blunt...

THAT.. was hot....

Galladonsfire


Galladonsfire

PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 11:12 am


Now as for the better comment, it seems to me that Janine is starting to see the man that she has always wanted to see in David. Still a bit delusional to the everyday prostitution she has to deal with she feels that she still needs to please him instead of him pleasing her. Yet I thought of something today...how will David deal with Janines boss? o.o
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 5:33 pm


Why would that be an issue? You're weird.

THink of something else.

KirbyVictorious


Galladonsfire

PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 5:40 pm


Well it would be an issue concerning her boss because I'd seem to think that Janines boss owns her...would I presume wrong? If Janines boss finds out David wants Janine to be free... basically not making the boss money and she would be doing her own thing... then he would prolly make trouble cross Davids path.

As for something else... uhhm SEX!!! sex is always interesting xd
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 6:00 pm


No, her boss doesn't own her. That was the last boss. This boss is just another customer for her. She would have to quit her job though.

Pervert.

KirbyVictorious


Galladonsfire

PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 6:43 pm


well you obviously show great interest in sex these days ... YOUR WRITING ABOUT IT!!


and you call me a perv....
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 8:32 pm


I am immune to its weirdness.

You, on the other hand....

KirbyVictorious


Galladonsfire

PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 6:02 pm


KirbyVictorious
I am immune to its weirdness.

You, on the other hand....


oh sure! and you say I'm weird.......


acorn eater....
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 6:44 pm


hey. evil

KirbyVictorious


Galladonsfire

PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 7:21 pm


KirbyVictorious
hey. evil


rofl
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:38 pm


Fine see if you get any more story.

KirbyVictorious


Galladonsfire

PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 8:22 am


KirbyVictorious
Fine see if you get any more story.

sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 3:12 pm


Well go on! Beg for forgiveness. You don't want Zahmen and Des to eat you.

Why does my sotry appeal only to guys?

KirbyVictorious


d e s d e m o n o
Crew

PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 7:24 pm


Because we're all sick, twisted people. DUH.
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