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 Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 4:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:04 pm
Only at night walks a blood thirsty beast
He stalks the streets for his next tasty feast
You think what harm could he have been
As he whispers sweet nothings and caresses your skin
He kisses your lips and moves down your neck
And then he does something you'll never expect
You stand there stroking his long black coat
He opens his mouth and rips out your throat
You watch as darkness fills his eyes
He drinks his fill then leaves you to die
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:27 pm
xXKielahXx The First Kiss He stood there beside me clasping my hands in his, he pulled me to his chest our thoughts colliding into one, Pulling me closer, his chest heaving slowly, his heart beating carelessly against my throat. He laced his fingers through mine and held them up high The night was cold it crawled up our backs caressing our flesh with icy fingers. freezing the moment like a solid picture in black, A steady rhythm in my ears, afraid to close my eyes, letting go this vivid night would mean death to the both of us right? He pulled away from me and stared deeply with love across his face. The blank air weaved into our bodies filling our lungs with the chemical of life. He whispered in my ear the words I longed to hear, "I love you" was all he could bear. I remember that day like a recorder laid out to play. The tears soon came to my eyes, relieved to hear he was mine. His blue eyes were like the ocean current changing every day. They swirled with passion above all and they stung like hate driven into a wall, of bodies, below us all. They mesmerized hypnotically like a vampire singing its victim into state. His eyes, were readable, just like mine, we loved the same. I touched his heart with cold hands of love, for love is bittersweet just like the hand of death for death is love. His face drew closer to me, as did mine to his. Soon I could feel his hot breath against my neck. He looked up at me with his eyes of pure blue lust. His lips were half parted, purple from cold, he leaned towards me, bending a bit down, I put my hands on his shoulders and pulled my fingers along the fabric of equality. I felt a tugging in my chest my heart about to burst. Scared half to death, our lips touched in one cold kiss, like mirrors facing each other, a couple of past, present and future. He held me so tightly, like afraid to loose me, but his kiss graced so lightly. His hands ran up along the scars of the past. I was numb to the last pass. Not thinking how long this would last. The greatest moment with him and me, in the night of day, please stand by me, tell we disintegrate… That poem is so sweet and understanding and beutiful!!!! ::claps::
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:01 pm
Youkaikitsune Only at night walks a blood thirsty beast He stalks the streets for his next tasty feast You think what harm could he have been As he whispers sweet nothings and caresses your skin He kisses your lips and moves down your neck And then he does something you'll never expect You stand there stroking his long black coat He opens his mouth and rips out your throat You watch as darkness fills his eyes He drinks his fill then leaves you to die i loves that poem!!! *hugs dude* I love vampires
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:05 pm
Vespa Women xXKielahXx The First Kiss He stood there beside me clasping my hands in his, he pulled me to his chest our thoughts colliding into one, Pulling me closer, his chest heaving slowly, his heart beating carelessly against my throat. He laced his fingers through mine and held them up high The night was cold it crawled up our backs caressing our flesh with icy fingers. freezing the moment like a solid picture in black, A steady rhythm in my ears, afraid to close my eyes, letting go this vivid night would mean death to the both of us right? He pulled away from me and stared deeply with love across his face. The blank air weaved into our bodies filling our lungs with the chemical of life. He whispered in my ear the words I longed to hear, "I love you" was all he could bear. I remember that day like a recorder laid out to play. The tears soon came to my eyes, relieved to hear he was mine. His blue eyes were like the ocean current changing every day. They swirled with passion above all and they stung like hate driven into a wall, of bodies, below us all. They mesmerized hypnotically like a vampire singing its victim into state. His eyes, were readable, just like mine, we loved the same. I touched his heart with cold hands of love, for love is bittersweet just like the hand of death for death is love. His face drew closer to me, as did mine to his. Soon I could feel his hot breath against my neck. He looked up at me with his eyes of pure blue lust. His lips were half parted, purple from cold, he leaned towards me, bending a bit down, I put my hands on his shoulders and pulled my fingers along the fabric of equality. I felt a tugging in my chest my heart about to burst. Scared half to death, our lips touched in one cold kiss, like mirrors facing each other, a couple of past, present and future. He held me so tightly, like afraid to loose me, but his kiss graced so lightly. His hands ran up along the scars of the past. I was numb to the last pass. Not thinking how long this would last. The greatest moment with him and me, in the night of day, please stand by me, tell we disintegrate… That poem is so sweet and understanding and beutiful!!!! ::claps:: thank you ninja
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:35 pm
Ok, Super Improv Time!
I''m gonna theme ghosts and bones whee
Silent whispers sliding
Through the trees in the dead of night
Cold; the unheard sighs of wind
Boisterousity unknown
Wraithlike figures appear only in shades of gray
and tonight the dead
Rise from the grave to play
Morbid tombs open and empty
spilling the dead souls onto the hard earth
Soaring over countless whispers and
Unheard gestures
All thats left of a grand conquest
eloquence even lost to the bones
that litter the mausoleum stone
Prolly overlaps and is too plain, but I like improv, helps me think on my toes or something.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:45 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:45 pm
Shade Macabre Ok, Super Improv Time! I''m gonna theme ghosts and bones whee Silent whispers sliding Through the trees in the dead of night Cold; the unheard sighs of wind Boisterousity unknown Wraithlike figures appear only in shades of gray and tonight the dead Rise from the grave to play Morbid tombs open and empty spilling the dead souls onto the hard earth Soaring over countless whispers and Unheard gestures All thats left of a grand conquest eloquence even lost to the bones that litter the mausoleum stone Prolly overlaps and is too plain, but I like improv, helps me think on my toes or something. awsome dude just awsome ^.^ im gunna post my poem that is in the progress
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:47 pm
xXKielahXx Shade Macabre Ok, Super Improv Time! I''m gonna theme ghosts and bones whee Silent whispers sliding Through the trees in the dead of night Cold; the unheard sighs of wind Boisterousity unknown Wraithlike figures appear only in shades of gray and tonight the dead Rise from the grave to play Morbid tombs open and empty spilling the dead souls onto the hard earth Soaring over countless whispers and Unheard gestures All thats left of a grand conquest eloquence even lost to the bones that litter the mausoleum stone Prolly overlaps and is too plain, but I like improv, helps me think on my toes or something. awsome dude just awsome ^.^ im gunna post my poem that is in the progress Chyes, post, poooost, POST!
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:52 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:53 pm
"Wow i didn't realize how long that poem was...." wink
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:58 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:00 pm
"Here are some lyrics by my favorite writer, Davey Havok from Afi, I can't explain how much he has inspired me. This may sound gay and stuff but he is like a god to me in writing. His Lyrics are numbing and i can't stand not hearig his voice ring through my ears as my cd player blasts his resonating voice. Here is my favorite and one of the most inspiring song by him and his band."
AFI LYRICS
"Ever And A Day"
Lie in comfort of sweet calamity with nothing left to lose.
Lie in the darkness, I'm slowly drowned to sleep
nothing left to lose.
Three tears I've saved for you.
I'd retrace the steps that lead me here but nothing lives behind me.
So I lie in this field bathed in the light that loves me,
with nothing left to lose.
Three tears I've saved for you.
Will you be my beloved?
Will you help me to get through?
Will you be my destruction?
Will you help me to be through?
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:06 pm
xXKielahXx "Here are some lyrics by my favorite writer, Davey Havok from Afi, I can't explain how much he has inspired me. This may sound gay and stuff but he is like a god to me in writing. His Lyrics are numbing and i can't stand not hearig his voice ring through my ears as my cd player blasts his resonating voice. Here is my favorite and one of the most inspiring song by him and his band." AFI LYRICS "Ever And A Day" Lie in comfort of sweet calamity with nothing left to lose. Lie in the darkness, I'm slowly drowned to sleep nothing left to lose. Three tears I've saved for you. I'd retrace the steps that lead me here but nothing lives behind me. So I lie in this field bathed in the light that loves me, with nothing left to lose. Three tears I've saved for you. Will you be my beloved? Will you help me to get through? Will you be my destruction? Will you help me to be through? I'm a fan of Davey Havok, but not huge, I got a few Afi songs here and there. I think the only person I really look up to in writing is uh...Well..I guess Gerard Way, but Iuno if he writes the lyrics for the band or not. (MCR) I also bring alot of stuff I pick up here and there reading, or watching TV(tv rules me!)...and Queen xd
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:07 pm
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