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 Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 10:08 am
Heh... You can write it however you want. That documentary idea sounds interesting. xP
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:10 pm
Actually, I sorta wanted to do something like that ever since I've read Gorillaz: Rise Of The Ogre, a biography of the Gorillaz band. It was an awesome book, made me laugh a lot. I decided to try it here. XP
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:38 pm
That sounds funny. xD I love the Gorillaz. --- I like the artist who draw's the Gorillaz, he did a comic called Tank Girl that I enjoy... o.o --- Anyways... sweatdrop
I'll have to check that book out sometime!
Well, I can't wait to see whut you come up with!~ xD heart I'm wicked excited!!
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 4:20 pm
Good, I like exciting people. biggrin
Anyway, I might get around to writing Orielle's story later. For now, I have a headache that won't go away. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 7:15 am
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 1:13 pm
Blood_Miracle I made her collapse because she's been told she was a fairy tale. That implies she doesn't exist, or that she has no right to exist. That, and there's a deeper meaning behind it. Covered more in the next chapter. It isn't over the top once you find out what happened between Ylva and Ida's brother. I fixed that one line, though. I kinda finished this whole thing in a single sitting, so it may not be totally accurate. Thanks for the heads-up, though. The next chapter will be quite different from all the others, I assure you. sweatdrop Aaah, ok, I'll just shut up, enjoy it and wait to see what happens next. smile I hope you feel better soon, but take all the time you need on this..
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 4:08 am
Summer's coming up soon, and that's when I plan on finishing the story.
DON'T SHUT UP DAMMIT.
I mean, YOU requested this story, and I wanna make it super-awesome and/or perfect. The quality of your paintings are infinitely greater than my writing, and I wanna make my writings as good as your drawings.
Tell me when you want me to change something, dammit! scream
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 3:03 pm
Haha, you are already making it super-awesome, I'm just being nitpicky because I like it when people suggest things I could do differently. whee But I really do love it!
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 4:13 pm
I DID change around the end, though. I made it more... Uh, less actiony, I guess.
Well, yeah, I have that whole 'GUARANTEED TO SATISFY OR A REDO IS IN ORDER' sorta thing going on.
I don't like leaving people hangin'. >_>
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Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 4:54 pm
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 3:32 am
I'm not trying to be difficult, but I do like this ending more... whee heart
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 5:57 am
Good, then I'm satisfied.
I am a writer. None of these things in the story are my own. They are (mostly) yours, and therefore I listen to you if I need to change something.
Geez, I've been explainiing this for a while now. blaugh
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Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 11:41 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 7:12 pm
How's everything goin? Haven't bumped/posted/talked to you in a while. xP
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:57 pm
Big headache right now. -_-
Otherwise, Lego Indiana Jones came out and I've been playing that. >_>
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