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 Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 2:43 pm
Unintentional Happiness Anarchomaniac
Sorry, was getting to it. I wanted a sandwich first.
All right, there are a couple technical things that I'd like fixed and it's just because I'm an a**l b***h. So if you don't agree, than pity.
In any case, you messed up the "age" part of it. I'm annoyed that you hadn't noticed it, but I'd like you to fix it. Also, going along with the age thing, I specifically stated that it has to be WRITTEN out. Not just "17", but rather "seventeen" or "Seventeen". Also, along with that, the dorms I requested be written out as well. So please fix that.
Along with my a**l way, I'm going to request that you get rid of all OOC references inside of your profile (ie. the reference to having more than two paragraphs "xP" as well as the Barton Town reference).It makes it look low-class and simply not what I'd like associated with my role play.
Under the appearance, both fairytale and non-fairytale, I'd like there to be more detail as well. There is just too little for my tastes. I feel you need some more details, especially under the fairytale appearance. Just 'cause people know what that cat is supposed to look like doesn't mean by just writing that much, we get what you want it to look like.
Your biography is okay, enough to go by. And in your other section you didn't even need anything, you could've said that there was nothing more to him. (Also, get rid of the OOC reference, once more).
:/ At this point in time I cannot accept you into the role play, my apologies. If you wish for another chance, please fix the errors that you've made thus far.
Also, please go and reread the rules, you have missed something. =___= Aye aye Captain! *looks at UnHap's character and notes irony of comment*
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:44 pm
=____= My goodness, I'm bored. xD
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:34 am
Oh my, this looks like quite the roleplay. And finally, in all my years of roleplaying, I've come across someone who's possibly more a**l than me. xD
I guess I'm just following the status quo, and posting to tell you I'm going to post. I really want to make a drag queen fairy now. ("'Cause you're filthy... mmm, lookin' gorgeous...")
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 11:12 am
Err...um...
I updated my Character Bio. I'm not very keen on making a full bio all at once because I prefer showing characterization through dialogue >.<;
But I hope my updated bio is better.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:35 pm
Morael Ha! Why thank you? Why not, I guess it could be a compliment, in some sort of sense.
XDDDD Drag Queen Fairy sounds funderful and I like the whole posting to tell me your going to post thing. xD Always fun to get a warning.
Anarchomaniac - It's tres better now, "dahling". There's just one little bit I must request that you do.
Take away the little "" and ah, go and read the rules, please. :] Your still missing a little bit.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:53 pm
Unintentional Happiness Morael Ha! Why thank you? Why not, I guess it could be a compliment, in some sort of sense.
XDDDD Drag Queen Fairy sounds funderful and I like the whole posting to tell me your going to post thing. xD Always fun to get a warning.
Anarchomaniac - It's tres better now, "dahling". There's just one little bit I must request that you do.
Take away the little "" and ah, go and read the rules, please. :] Your still missing a little bit. And I thought I was a perfectionist O.o
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:13 pm
Quote: I'd like there to be at least 15+ lines per post (three+ paragraphs per post) Technically its one post and it has around 48 lines altogether... Quote: Boys May be Girls and Girls May Be Boys "may"... Pretty sure I didn't break any of these Quote: Heterosexual Characters Only Yep he's straight... Got that down... Quote: Romance, Drama, and Fighting Allowed Yep, got that one Did that... Subjective to your mind so I don't know how that makes much of a rule. Define "amazing" - Google results: inspiring awe or admiration or wonder; surprising greatly; overused as a hyperbole for "good.". What counts as amazing? I don't know. If I myself am as cynical like my character, then realism accomplished I did this test. Score: 13. Said this about my result: 0-16 Points Most likely Not-Sue. Characters at this level could probably take a little spicing up without hurting them any. Drew it myself. Doesn't apply as of yet. Alice in Wonderland The profile is in size 10He's a human alright. I read the rules. The only thing is "wow me". How do I do that?
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:50 pm
.::The Wicked Witch::. b a s i c i n f o r m a t i o n Hello, My name is
I Have Been on this Earth for About
I am of the
I'm staying in dorm number
I'm currently enrolled in grade number
c o l o r m e p r e t t y
How I Normally Look
Nathan's just shy of being exactly six feet tall, so he's a bit tall for his age. He's broad in the shoulders and fairly in-shape; he has the Classic build, with his torso's overall shape roughly that of a "V." His face follows the Greek trend, with a long, straight nose and square jaw.
His eyes have a vaguely almond shape to them, and are ever-changing in their colour: Thanks to the ubiquity of his Fairytale self, he has a huge amount of coloured contact lenses; nobody knows what his actual eye colour is, especially because he changes his contacts anywhere from two to four times per day. Red, blue, neon pink, sewer green--you name a colour, he probably has five sets of contacts, each in a slightly different shade of it. (Perhaps his favorite pair is the nigritude ultramine set, just because of the complexity of the name.)
Out of necessity for his Fairytale self, Nathan keeps his dark brown hair pretty short, and very rarely does he do anything to it, like spiking it up with gel. His skin is also fairly pale; he avoids great exposure to the sun with a combination of staying inside and covering his body almost completely whenever he goes out. As a result of such precautions and the clean-up he has to do for his Fairytale form's makeup, he has great skin, with nary a blemish or scar.
When it comes to clothes, Nathan's philosophy is "easy on, easy off," and "whatever you can fit underneath a dress without it bunching up and becoming uncomfortable." In that vein, he favors tight shirts and shorts for underwear, and baggy sweaters and jeans to go over. He likes to wear nice, flat tennis shoes in order to relax his feet. For the most part, his shirts and sweaters and shoes are in varying shades of blue, red, and black. He has one piercing per ear, but usually just wears posts when he's out of costume.
Fairytale Appearance
At first, Nathan was a bit uncomfortable with the idea of putting on large amounts of makeup just to become his Fairytale self, but he's grown used to it; in fact, he's actually come to see it as kind of fun. Depending on what he feels like, he can either become an old crone through strategic placement of warts, liner-drawn "wrinkles," and a yellow base layer; or he can throw on the eyeliner, blush, lipstick and eyeshadow for the hip and modern young witch. Much like his collection of contact lenses, his collection of eyeshadows, lipsticks, and blushes is fairly expansive.
He has a small trio of wigs: One is straight, long, and blonde; another is short, auburn, and bob-cut; and the third is black and plaited. On some days he'll forgo the wig, for a more modern type of witch.
The centerpiece of his wardrobe is his singular dress: a simple full-length, long-sleeved affair, with a belt about the waist and a high neck; it's the classic sort of dress that a witch wears, and he can wear a pair of shorts underneath it without looking strange. He accessorizes with a pair of black and white striped tights, pointed black boots, a cloak, a long wand, and the iconic pointy black hat.
At times, in his quest to modernize the idea of the storybook witch, Nathan will don a simple black panstuit in lieu of the dress. He's coming to favor it over the dress, but some of his professors have attempted to discourage the idea because "witches wear dresses, not business suits."
y o u o u g h t t o k n o w
How I am
Nathan is, on the whole, a rather pleasant and joyful person, with a big soft spot for things like little doggies, moonlight, roses, and the sound of laughter.
Well, that's from his point of view. "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder" is a phrase that rather stronly applies to Nathan, mainly because he's got something of a sinister streak to him.
Where he sees "cute little puppies," others see "feral wolves."
Where he sees "gorgeous moonlit landscapes," others see "creepy nighttime moors."
Where he sees "beautiful roses," others see "plants in need of a good watering."
Where he hears "melodious laughter," others hear "disturbing cackling."
Really, his perception of the world boils down to an appreciation of the macabre and the decay of the world. He has a rather disturbing grasp of the fact that all things end, that nothing is permanent; so he believes that the extinguishing of something is the recognition of its existence. He's not so much a nihilist as an anti-nihilist.
It's probably thanks to his worldview that he's so adept at being a Wicked Witch. Witches always lose, just because they're supposed to, but everyone really remembers them because after all of their horrible deeds, they finally died or went away. Nathan figures that if he's eternally destined to lose in his Fairytale life, he may as well make a mark in history and be as much of a terror as possible. (To that end, he'll sometimes spread rumours that he's cursed certain students when he has, in fact, done nothing of the sort. He then takes credit for whatever misfortune befalls the "cursed.")
That's not to say that he eschews social contact, though. He also figures that most of the witches who got killed in the past had gone stir-crazy to begin with; it seems that witches in general rarely have associates in stories, but all the ones who kicked it were either nuts or way too demanding of any followers they might have. So, in an effort to avoid kicking it early and leaving with a short career, he prefers to surround himself with good, close friends as a sort of surrogate family (thanks to the school cutting him off from his real one--and they're on his Big List Of Post-Graduation Fireball Targets for doing so). He'll try and make friends with anyone, just to enjoy the sort of variety he enjoys with his makeup.
Well, except for the pretty princesses. They're a lot of bitches.
And screw their p***k royalty boyfriends, too.
How I came to be
The best way to make a wicked witch is to find someone in a perfectly normal, happy family, and then wrench them away from it and browbeat them with the notion that they're evil with frightening powers. It's even better when that normal, happy person is a thirteen-year-old boy who had a strangeness about him to begin with.
Nathan came from an absolutely normal family. His parents both worked hard and provided for their three children, with plenty of food on the table and enough loving support for each child. They were absolutely happy in their moderately-sized home (with red siding, no mortgages, two full baths, two decent cars, and a dog); and despite the personality conflicts that always arise in any family, they got along. Even with their strange individual quirks (like Nathan's macabre outlook on life--he was a special child--or his older sister's horrible case of nymphomania), things clicked and they were respected for their togetherness.
Then one day, a month before he was set to enter the local high school, Nathan recieved a letter of acceptance to Ever After. His parents were excited that their son had been accepted into a prestigious school, but he was completely confused. He'd never heard anything about the school, but it seemed like he didn't have much of a choice; he was going, whether he wanted to or not.
And then he was dropped off in the woods with a suitcase, a poor set of directions to the school, and a hurried goodbye from his parents.
He finally managed to find his way to the split in the path and took the lefthand path entirely by accident--he tripped on a tree root and fell, suitcase and all, down the path. The path's length was apparent, and as he was nursing s few bruises from his luggage and was tired of walking about the woods, he just dusted himself off and waded through the rest of the foliage to the gates.
The whole crossdressing thing wasn't really something Nathan was too enthused with at first, but then he started to notice the lack of replies to his bimonthly letters to home. He asked about the rest of the students and began to piece together the idea that the school wasn't too up on students keeping up with their family. Right after that, he began to piece together another idea: If the school wanted to screw with him, then they'd have one hell of an angry witch to deal with. He fully embraced the idea of being a wicked witch, dress and makeup and all, if he could encircle the entire building with a thicket of thorns.
s o m e o t h e r i n f o r m a t i o n
There's something else you ought to know
Nathan will burst into rhyme whenever casting a curse, just because "that's what witches do." .::Morael S.O.L.::.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:58 pm
I have finished mine I believe, and it is on page three. Let me know of anything that must be changed, but I can't really see anything that needs to be done. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 5:20 pm
May I point out the little bit of information that I requested be put at the end of the profile? In rule number nine.Rule ... By the way, I'd like you to state your eye color at the end of your profile post when posting it, just as a whole checking type of thing, which assures me that you read the rules.
I'm going to edit that rule after I know that you've read this post. So please, try to pay attention to the minuet details. Sometimes they may be just a bit more helpful. It's a lot of information to read, but yeah.
Morael - <3 Wicked Witch
Sauronbane I'll check it out in a few moments.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:39 pm
No offence, Versi, but for lurking, you're not very quiet about it... XP
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 11:18 am
Arights, I put his eye colour in the end of the profile biggrin
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 12:48 pm
*Bangs head on desk* I think she meant, your real life eye color >.< Maybe not but I'm not sure.....
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 2:34 pm
.::The Caterpillar::.  b a s i c i n f o r m a t i o n Hello, My name is
I Have Been on this Earth for About
I am of the
I'm staying in dorm number
I'm currently enrolled in grade number
c o l o r m e p r e t t y
How I Normally Look
Fairytale Appearance
y o u o u g h t t o k n o w
How I am
How I came to be
s o m e o t h e r i n f o r m a t i o n
There's something else you ought to know
.::Username Here::.
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