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 Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:07 pm
"Indeed, Zeth. The weapon Nedal and the wound do not match. It doesn't rule out Nedal, but IF he shot, it was another gun.
No other weapons were found near, but they won't be on the ground for long in these areas.
The weapon Maddas used was suitable, but I sensed no lie in his story, he could be strong minded and used to lying nevertheless."
"I got my weapon since I started my job, 2.5 years ago, and the modifications since last year when my wife was injured" the still sad and sniffin' Maddas aid. The more neutral looking Nedal answered
"Months, few. Money I had finally, buy protection I did. Never used to fire beings.. looking new, good care take I"
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:13 pm
"I think I can figure this out....."
Zeth looked around the crime scene and found two big cans in the dark alley. He placed the cans on A ledge and stood back.
"Let's take both weapons and fire at the cans 15 meters away. Maybe we can match the shrapnel and burn marks from both weapons and determine which gun was fired"
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:16 pm
"It wasn't the heavy one for sure. It would have penetrated the body from that range. It's possibly the small one but there are loads of blasters with marks that size. Nedal could have had one and thrown it away too, or anyone else with a reason could have shot"
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:24 pm
"Wait a minute.....didn't one of the officers say it could've been between 15 to 30 meters?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:28 pm
"Yes he did. At the range of 15 metres, a light blaster is enough for such a wound. At 30 metres, a medium can still do...but this gun has a penetratial range of 50 metres, approximatly.
I know who did it, you're focussing on the wrong object. More questions to the persons, all persons, would be more usefull. Don't be afraid to use a bit of persuasion, as long as you don't tell them to make statements hat are untrue.
Also, these tapes are still unwatched"
Swex put the tape into his holotranciever and indeed the image was too blurred to recognize anyone
"see, I told you the system was messed" Swex's eyes rolled of to the guard, then back at the students
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:38 pm
"Forgive me, Master Swex. I am not skilled in investigations as you are. It takes me more time to figure things out."
Zeth then went to the other witnessess and asked around. He asked them the same questions in order: Dfer, Frow, Derk, We'kamp, Se'kamp, and Har. and asked them all the same four questions
"When did you meet the victim?"
"Where were you when he was murdered?"
"Did you know any of the Suspects?"
Where does Ynot come into the picture?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:43 pm
"We met the victim at his house today, as we all agreed on yesterday...we first met him about 3 years ago, when hen just lived here...he's our friend for a while now...
We were walking in front of him, just chatting when it happened. We looked at the falling person first, that is why we missed the shooter..
We never met any of the suspects, we heard about Maddas and the fight however...Ledif told us. He started meeting Ynot a few weeks ago, he camein that distrcit quite often but with her, he fell in love. We heard a lot about her but first met her yesterday, rightafter he bought her freedom..."
"We know the group was in front of the victim ruling them out for murder from several people walking nearby, sir" the officer added
((off now, think about who done it... ))
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 4:45 pm
Zeth grunted with Frustration, not knowing what to do in situations like these. He sighed and smacked his head, not giving up, just not enough for A solid lead.
"I don't know. I can only see one possible motive for this ordeal. Maddas was injured three years ago by Ledif, and that was also the same time Ledif met Hsub. Hsub and Ledif have been friends for this long, but Ledif chose Ynot over her. I can see her getting angry over this. It's possible she knew about Maddas and made a deal with him, but wasn't gonna go down with him if Maddas was the shooter. While she was walking with the group, she stole Maddas' blaster and went into the pub to take a leak. Maddas finds his blaster, but is about to be pickpocketed by Nedal. Maddas fires and hits Ledif in the back of the neck. Startled by this, they both run off and Hsub comes out with a perfect alabie"
Zeth plopped against the pole and sighed
"Good story.....if only there was evidence"
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 4:47 pm
My name is Yue Feathers. I'm a Seventeen year old bounty hunter, born and raised in the lower levels of Coruscant. I lost my mother and father when I was six, to a crazed lunatic, murdering for fun. I vowed to myself I would get revenge on him and at the young age of fourteen, I had found the man and slaughtered him, laughing all the way. I like to hunt people down, especially people who deserve what's coming to them and I like to watch them suffer. I like high-paying bounties. I like Corellian Ale. I like blasters. I like vibroblades. I don't really like people. I like love. I like sex. When you're in love and having sex, it's even better. I like making rude comments. I like barfights. I like gambling. I guess I like bad things. I guess you could call me a bad person.
The man sat alone at the bar of the Vina Lidrina, his slender finger running through drops of condensation on the metal bartop. Despite the loud music, he was deep in thought, his mind wandering from random thought to random thought, wondering how he ended up in this mess in the first place.
He had just rid himself of the starship where his last bounty had been...the Urbania It was a large oval-shaped craft, that hovered through space, stopping for nothing. There was a huge city covering the flat surface, sprawling over every little niche and crevice. A canopy of clear durasteel spread over the top, giving inhabitants a permanent view of space. The minimal times that the floating city needed to restock something or refuel itself, ships brought the items to them, giving them no reason to slow down.
Now he came home to everything vile: gangs, crime, drugs. Kracerum used to boast a great vacation getaway, until the city's reputation and status crumbled downhill. All under the reign of one Ryled Mirdele. Yue's newest bounty was that man. There was a price out on his head, and Feathers was always up for a challenge...
He wasn't really thinking much about that now though. He just sat at the bar, savoring the flavor of the smooth ale sliding down his throat.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 4:56 pm
I'm guilty of many things. Killing people. Seeking revenge. Lying. Cheating. Having little boyhood fantasies and falling in love, or just lust, with people I can never have. That's one of my main problems right now. There's a girl I've had my eye on since I was younger... It's a main challenge in my life to let her know I exist and to get what I want from her. I've never personally met her, but I will change that after I clear this bounty...
She's the Queen Mother of Hapes. Her name is Raina. She's a fiesty little thing. You can just tell on the holos of her, you can see her trying to keep her cool and stuff. But she just wants to smack everyone around her, you know it. So I'm guilty of endlessly looping old public holos of her, propping myself down in front of the screen and just staring. No blinking. No eating. No drinking. No anything. Just wishing. I've never been in love. So this must be what it feels like... or maybe it's just a sick obsession. Sick obsessions are one of my specialities for some reason...
Yue broke out of his reverie, spinning himself around on his barstool. His deep gray eyes wandered out over the huge club and the crowd stuffed inside. Cords of light dashed across the ceiling, pulsing with many different colors while the other light spilling across the room was from the walls. Light pushed it's way through millions of pinholes in the walls and like the cords across the ceiling, the pinholes were all different colors. The walls were a dark metal shade, the same as the ceiling and the floor, which was a work of art in itself. The ground was made of a strong clear material and under it were chambers a few feet deep, filled with water that held colored stones and glittering gems at the bottom. The cords of light that were on the ceiling also worked their way through the water underfoot, giving the water the illusion of always changing colors. The huge floor in the middle was where most of the crowd was, dancing and moving to the beat of the insanely loud music. Yue recognized it as a song he heard many times in this club earlier in his life...before he left for the Urbania. He thought about staying at his old home a lot lately and he had no idea why, a bounty hunter shouldn't become attached to anything.
He rested his elbows back on the countertop and slouched down, setting his feet on the silver rungs that spiraled down the bottom of the seat. A twi'lek who was making her way around the dance floor saw the unintentional immorality of the way he was sitting, his feet set so high on the rungs that his legs were spread apart, and she took it as some sort of random invite to approach him.
She spoke to him in rough basic, her words simple enough that he understood them, "Hey baby..." She stood as close as she could to him without smacking him in the face with her spastic dance moves.
Oh, the audacity.
He opened his mouth to say something, until his train of thought-to-words was interrupted by a female voice from beside him, an octave or two higher than his.
" Hey sweetheart, would you mind backing off? He's mine. "
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:09 pm
The twi''lek looked offended at the snappy tone of the voice as she slinked away from the male and female, the male seated and the female standing. Yue watched her vanish into the crowd and smirked as he turned to look up at the devilish female.
"I''m yours?"
"Yeah. Unless you wanted to go home with that. She''s been all over every guy twice in this club. And that has only been in the past standard... oh..." Her silver eyes glanced upwards as she jokingly calcuated the time, "...one and a half hours, I''d say."
"I''m not here to hit on the ladies, ''Elowen."
"Then what are you here for?"
Yue lied, not about to trust the female that he hadn''t seen in so long...a past partner in the bounty hunting buisness she was now just another person to get in the way...or to become an enemy
"To get drunk of course."
They shared a laugh as Elowen seated herself beside who she thought was a friend and Yue turned to face the bar. They were both here to relax. but now slightly suspicious at seeing each other again...after the long period of harsh arguments and near death experiences. The job had been taxing on both of them for the past months and the Vina Ladrina, as hyper and loud as it was, was one of the only places the two could unwind.
Elowen Tesker had been Yue''s partner. They were both very able bounty hunters and they worked on an equal level, each bounty they recieved went towards a short lived vacation that would never last forever. Elowen was an undeniably beautiful woman, bred and born in Hyllyard City on Myrkr. Her eyes were a dull shade of mercury, that contained slightly visible specks of red, while her hair was a deep shade of crimson that was cropped shorter in the back than it was in the front. It was still long enough to be tied into a tighly wound piece of string at the nape of her neck, like it was now. No matter what Elowen, or her unruly hair, looked like, her charm caused gentlemen to swarm around her at the snap of a finger or the upturn of his thin lips.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:11 pm
Glacian took the security recordings and took off his holocron on his shoulder and put the chips in it. He pushed a button and a three smaller disks folded out. One projected a small Isis figure, one a holokeyboard and the other a cube screen. "Need my help already?" she said with a cocked eyebrow.
"I just need you to defragment the data and recompile it to see if that clears it up. You can do that faster that me, and I'm going to look for any purposely planted bugs or data destruction that i can undo, this should only take a few minutes with us both working at it, then we can project it 3D to everyone here, minus the bathroom, we will view that privately unless she did something suspicious like hid something in a wall or something. With that, he began typing on the holopad and Isis began defragmenting.........
[the file will play when it has been restored enough to play without errors Edge, so you can decide when to post what the file shows.]]
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:21 pm
Yue turned to Elowen as if to say something to the woman so that the woman turned her head as well to look at his face, her eyes distracted, his hand leapt out like a viper and sunk into her stomach, in his hand a short throwing blade known as a kunai sunk into her stomach, blood splurted out onto his hand...and the woman''s eyes looked back at Yue as if she couldn''t believe what was happening...Yue pushed it in further and her silver eyes glazed over, setting her head gently down on the counter, he was sure that the barkeep would think her as a drunk until morning until he noticed her still not moving and quite dead...with a flick of his wrist Yue removed the weapon and brought out a hankerchief to whipe the blood off his hand...it had been unfortunate that he had met her today in the bar...less she might have lived...but Yue would not have any distractions...
Fate''s weaves her web in ways that are not profitable for eveyone...
Yue then walked to an exit cloaked in shadow and pushed out the door setting off an alarm that caused the rest of the people to file out the doors...thinking it was a fire...he would cause enough rucus to keep his murder under wraps
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:14 pm
i have 2 ideas who has done it. Though it doesn't seem like Maddas he is the only one with the blaster that would have killed the vic. so unless Maddas lost his blaster then found it i believe it has to be him. Kari said, unsure of what she was about to say but felt she has done her best to figure this riddle out.
First is that Maddas didn't want to kill him just stun is or hurt him to steal the money, we saw his blaster and fire ion and normal blasts. One idea is that he ment to hit him with an ion blast but instead hit in with a normal blaster shot killing him and in his panic ran. Maddas did say he was very poor and wanted to help his kids. Kari stated taking a long breath.
The other idea is that his girlfriend Ynot. She could have asked Maddas to kill her boyfriend and then she would recieve the money for him and pay Maddas some of it. Both ideas are REALLY out there, there doesn't seem to be alot of evidence to prove anything. Myself i don't feel Maddas did it, however he is the only one that could have. Kari said, feeling despessed that it was the best idea she could come up with.
Only downside is i see flaws with both my ideas, Why would Ynot have her boyfriend killed if he was going to use the money on her anyway? Second how would anyone mess up what kind of blaster bolts you blaster is shooting? This is alot harder then i thought it would be. Kari said still unsure of everything she has said.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:48 pm
As Glacian continued to type he said to his fellow Jedi, "I think that Ms.Egroeg took Maddas's blaster and shot Ledif in the back of the head, took his money and hid it in the building somewhere, possibly in the bathroom or a safe deposit box or something like that. Then she came out with a valide alibi and just her luck, the security recording is on the frizt, which speaking of, I've almost fixed.
Either that or Maddas was in on it and shot him while Ms.Egroeg went inside to 'stash the cash' either way, I think Ms.Egroeg went into the buidling to hid something, most possible the credits."
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