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this Bio is quite decent. it is very basic and concise. I like how there are no obvious grammar or spelling errors (and i don't know the proper word either.. though i believe it's 'practicing medicine'.) i like the character, he has potential, I would just like you to expand on his personality. does he have little quirks? how does he act around different kinds of people? what does he do in his free time? stuff like that. I enjoyed the parents being accident prone stunt doubles. Overall Good character, will be approved once personality is fleshed out more.

@ kind: Well, I believe you should tone him down quite a bit. Though the yerk thing is rather cool, I'm very iffy on the psychics. I'm mostly fine with the yerks being psychic, but not your character being naturally psychic. so, other than that, it's a good character. Tone it down, and remove the part about him being naturally psychic. Also, PM more on these groods, maybe some of their technology, common tactics and weapons, etc. that kinda stuff.

I said i was fine with him being psychic from the yerks, but i'd need more info on them and the groods first. Also, check out other approved bios for the amount of power or ability i've let through. Heck, i'm the GM and MY character isn't that 'powerful'. basically, the psychicly sensing everything before it happens is a form of godmodding. i'd be fine with him using it for communications and limited sensing, but not on the scale you're asking. you're trying to make a character that overshadows the rest, not one that is equal to or only slightly better than the others. (yes, I'm being mean, but I want certain kinds of characters and certain things to happen in my RP. Make your character grow within the story, not overshadow it)

OK. Changed it. If you really want to know his extent of psychic abilties, he has that of a starcraft ghost, only able to enforce himself and somewhat enable to cloak his pressence.

I'd like to join up, if it's not to late. Please, if there are any grammar inconsistencies, it about 3:30am here, and suffering from insomnia... So tired emo

Gaian Name: Automatov
-General
Name: Edward "Doc" Victor
Age: 18
Height: 5' 10''
Weight: 168lbs
Species: Terran
Job: Combat Medic
Rank: Private

-Psychological
Personality: Normally a light hearted and care free person, he is easily intimidated, and is quiet when first meeting new people. Though when he's with someone he's comfortable with he opens up. He cares greatly about the people he serves with, and often believes their life is in his hands. He has a very hard time dealing with death, and will often blame him self for the person's death if he is unable to save them. He is fascinated by other species and cultures, and often likes to bring back "souvenirs" from the field. He also always feels the need to be on good terms with everyone, even if they dislike him.
Likes: Life, being humble, saving others, keeping fit (mentally, physically, and in weapon proficiency), collecting souvenirs, and weaponry.
Dislikes: Death, egotistical people, Drathonians, and arguing.
Goals: To serve and protect his comrades to his fullest, even if it means his own death. Also hopefully to see the end of the war.

-History
Short History: Edward grew up in a small urban household on a heavily populated planet with his father, mother, and older sister. His parents former medical officers, worked at a local hospital. For the first four years of his life the hospital was practically Edward's only world. Shortly after his fourth birthday the Drathonians betrayed humanity and attacked, destroying the majority of the planet. Edward and his sister barely escaped, but at the tragic loss of both their parents. After spending a year wandering, Edward and his sister found a home on a small colony near the outskirts of Terran territory, and tried to start a new life. Eventually Edward's sister sent him to a boardinghouse to live, and enlisted in the military as a pilot. A few months later she died when the academy she was training at, was attacked by a Drathonian raiding party.

Edward at the age of sixteen eventually enlisted in the military with a fake consent form he had forged. Edward went through basic and received his CMB with flying colors. His proficiency in advanced medical combat training, and combat simulation, earned him a spot on the Battle Hymm, as primary assault combat medic. He is still green, and lacks experience in the actual combat though.

-Notes
Appearance: Light skined, his body is toned, athletically built, yet somewhat slim from physical training. His hair is dirty blond, short and slightly spiked. His deep green eyes have a sense of calm and understanding. He has a boyish slim face, which he keeps clean-shaven, and his smile is warm and kind, usually giving a friendly smirk. He dresses in standard two-piece green BDU, on each shoulder the medic logo is embroidered.
Distinguishing characteristics: Green BDU, carries a utility pouch on the left side of his pistol belt, his combat helmet says "doc" above the visor. And also has it printed on the back of his armor. Only wears his armor in combat situations, finds it too uncomfortable to wear all the time.

Thank you very much, and yep, that is my self talking.

I'll be making my introduction post soon. razz

Gaian Name: Ard Rys Grianne
-General
Name: Clarissa Rose
Age: 24
Height: 5' 8''
Weight: 101lbs
Species: Terran
Job: Sniper
Rank: Private

-Psychological
Personality: Clarissa is a serious person for a large majority of the time, and she is always a very patient person. She is also very stubborn and is always ready to fight for something if required. But when she is not working, and when she is around people she likes, she can lighten a bit.
Likes: Working, target practice, reading romance novels, and looking for her fiancee.
Dislikes: Slackers, people with poor aim, feeling useless, horror novels and movies, and Italian food.

-History
Short History: Clarissa grew up as the daughter of two soldiers. Her mother, Sarah, was a marine and her father, Jacob, was a pilot. When she was young her mother died in combat and was raised by her father on board the Hymn. While growing up on the Hymn she always felt like she was being a burden on others and was therefore always going around seeing if anybody needed help doing any kind of job. Doing this she received basic practice in helping mechanics fix ships and fighters, she watched soldiers training for combat, and she learned other assorted skills like cooking and navigation. None of the fields she helped with were very interesting to her and she mainly forgot some of the skills, but she did find a hobby in practicing her marksmanship when the opportunity showed itself. And it was around the age of 14 that Clarissa decided that she wanted to train to become a military sniper.
Her father, when he had heard of what she had decided on as a career, laughed and would bring up from then on how much Clarissa reminded him of her mother. She always hated when he talked like that, it made her feel odd.
When she was 16 and a few years away from going into the military her father came up to her and said that he had arranged a marriage for her between her and the son of one of his pilot friends, Mark Kerning, in Green Squadron. Whether her father was joking or not didn't matter to her, she set her mind right away to marrying the son.

-Notes
Appearance: Clarissa has lightly tanned skin, a lean and limber body, and short black hair just a few inches in length. She has sharp blue eyes that contrast the other features on her thin face.
Distinguishing characteristics: Clarissa takes great care of her personal hygiene(even more so than military regulation requires) in the event that she unexpectedly runs into her fiancee.