| do you think for my first time making an RP i did good? |
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 Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:03 pm
the captian stood there tranfixed. his gazed interlocked. with hers. no. he decided, he was going to break her. like he was lucain. he was going to make her life worse then hell. the cpt called the gaurd back teelling not to do what they intended.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:07 pm
She saw the guard come back. Are they planning a way to kill me? she asked herself. Or are they just going to torture me until I die? They could do that many ways, but it won't be as easy as they might think. She kept her gaze looking straight up at the captain, not moving at all. She was going to make him do something about her being there if it was the last thing she did. She didn't care about torture.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:13 pm
the cpt. went back to his chess game. then retierd to bed, he looked at the picture by his bed. "leila....." durand said slowly. he was loking at a picture of him and his dead wife. he was so rough, because when she died, all he had was the military. he lay in his bed, staring at the picture. dozing off to sleep.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:14 pm
"i know i owe you a lot, but we should keep an eye on that girl, she could be as much trouble as i am..." she got up, and started to walk where the other girl had headed.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:17 pm
Riane broke her gaze from the now empty glass. She walked to a cell with a cot in it. It was empty so she just walked in and took it. she fell uneasily to sleep. They were gonna try and kill her tomorrow or have the Hell Hounds bring her back up for more torture. She would just take it. She didn't care anymore. Either she was going to die now or later. Either way, it would probably be here.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:21 pm
Aubry walked to where the other girl was. she said,
"hello, my name is Aubry. you were very brave out there... when they sent the hell hounds out..." she looked at the girl and smiled. the other girl looked so depressed.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:24 pm
all of a sudden about twenty inmates blocked the entrance to the cell, no one could get out.
lucain said "see?" so, you can owe me, and not get....say butt raped?"(sorry for the language, but in the prizon its alowed. crimanals are like that)
that goes for everone in here. lucain wasnt chuckling anymore. he was now seruis.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:25 pm
"Hi, I'm Riane," she said wearily. "Thanks, I was just trying not to die today." She smiled a little. It was true, she was depressed. She didn't want to be here as much as the next inmate, but she just felt to young. She had been hanging out with the guys in their 20s but she was virtually the only girl. She felt sad all the time.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:49 pm
(((me, if you read a couple of posts before, you would have found out that i was already with riane, and talking with her... it is good to pay attention... )))
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:02 pm
((the inmates surrounded you guys too.)))
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:05 pm
(((ok... whatever... and can you explain what lucien said? i don't understand it... when he say see? so you can owe me.... blahblahblah...)))
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:08 pm
(((the inmates see fun when they see girls...sorry, but thats how it is in prizon...they want to rape u, but lucian says, he can stop them, but u owe him.)))
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:13 pm
(((ooooooh... ok! thanx for explaining!)))
"well, if any of these idiots even think about it, they will get their di*** kicked.... do i make myself clear!" she shouted to all the inmates around her. they all nodded. "but, i do owe you, so, i will give you something that no other person in this lifetime will get..." she walked up to him, and kissed him on the cheek.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:49 pm
"Yeah," Riane seconded, standing up. She looked at Lucian. "Thanks a lot," she said kindly for the first time since she went to the first prison.
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