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Runnik tapped on Haru's shoulder "hey, i'm new here i'm sure I have to go see some form of management to finalise my enrolment would you be able to point me the right direction, or better yet show me where to go the ones i have here seem rather out of date" hoping that this person would be somewhat normal growing up around normal humans runnik wasn't used to being around monsters

(umm well i have never understood humor so i cant really judge :S)

(eden?.....well anyway onto the review. as an actor I kinda have to point out the bad acting, my apologies, and your skit didn't really seem to have a...you know...punchline. There was no big joke, nothing that really stood out. I mean the cleaning lady was hard to hear, and what dialog I did get wasn't really all that funny. the whole sweeping thing was pretty funny I guess, but it didn't go anywhere. I mean if the cleaning lady was supposed to be the whole joke of the skit then it probably should have ended when she left. Continuing on with the whole divorce thing just made it seem unpleasant and by consequence the whole thing just kinda pattered out. The important thing for a skit is to have a good ending and it really just didn't end well at all. I mean if they had started talking about the divorce after the maid left and the maid suddenly appeared again and kept sweeping them that would have been a salvagable ending, but as it is I can't say it was all that good. Also the dialog in general could have been better written to make the scenario more clear. I mean you used cuts anyways, the whole point of doing that is so you can keep re shooting until you get a good clear take. well thats my review I give it 2 out of 5 stars. sorry)

i was told i would be able to meet someone how would explain the school before i went but i was also told i would be enrolled here" holding out the piece of paper with random scribbles and i am not human he held his other hand out which turned to stone a fiery red began to emit from inside the rock as it became molten "even if im a cross breed im still an elemental thus able to receive the email that all student supposedly get" runniks hair moved from the heat showing one red coloured eye and one brown

Runnik followed Haru "demon? i always thought you were just myth but then again being brought up around humans i guess every things gonna be twisted" Runnik seemed to only just catch onto a detail "btw what happened here you said you were on a vacation and then there was a fight care to elaborate?"

☯ ♘Haru Suzumia♘ ☯

Haru rolled her eyes."well you see Rina is more into...bloody gory things....and shes also into seeing friends put agenst eachother. shes insain....she likes to see fights that are long and dran out..im shure she likes it that way with pain too....poision would have been too easy and no fun for her to watch..."Haru said."or atleast thats what i think..."Haru said.
"and it was just a rock...it doesent feel."Haru said and kept walking.

"you have a lot to learn about respecting the earth and dont tell me that a rock cannot feel you cannot feel its pain because it cannot speak to you you cant hear its screams every waking moment as man carves their existence into my home" runnik had turned to stone "i am a being of rock yet i feel just the same way you can, i really hope that this fact does not need to be proven" slowly returning to human form seemingly staggering the ground seemed to warp slightly as if to try to keep runnik upright