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 Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:24 pm
Gnaa continued walking through the forest. ever slowly he began to slow down his pace as he began feeling the piercing eyes of a stranger watching his every move. 'hmmm, should I kill him, or let hi explain himself.' Gana thought to himself as he pulled out a kunai slowly, spinning around as he threw the small weapon into a bush. getting a response of it hitting metal of some sort. "Who is there. if you refuse to show yourself than I will be forced to destroy you." Gana shouted as he grabbed onto his headcleaver, holding it tightly and waiting for a response.
"So, that is how you respond to the man who youa re looking for." a deep voice called out as Ruiga stepped out from behind the bush, his large ball and chain in hand. "I take it you came here to learn some techniques from me. so, what will it be."
[6/10]
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:34 pm
Gana let go of his blade as he looked Ruiga up and down. especially at how he looked so out of shape. it was hard for Gana to believe that this man was the one who was going to teach him and was the one who knew the fabled denji genmu technique. "Right." Gana shouted as he stared Ruiga in the eyes. "I wish to learn your Denji Genmu technique. I have heard stories of a technique like thats strength and I wish to posess that certain strength as my own."
"Aahahahahaha!" Ruiga laughed loudly as he looked at Gana. "You wish to learn my Denji Genmu technique? fine, but keep in mind, I dont go easy on those I train. and my brother is even worse than I am. so are you ready?"
[7/10]
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:03 pm
Gana thought for a moment as he turned to look Ruiga in the eyes again. "Yes, I am prepared for anything you will need to do in order to teach me. all I ask is that when you are done, I will know what I came here to learn." Gana said with a smirk on his face as he looked his teacher in the face, almost certain that would be enough of a reason to train him.
"Heh, you seem to know exactly what to say Shinobi." Ruiga said with a smirk on his face as he nodded his head. "Alright, I will teach you how." he said as he cracked his knuckles. "Now, in order to do this, you merely have to concentrate your chakra onto the ions in the air, creating a magnetic charge in the air that will synch up with your opponents brain waves and cause them to be unable to move.
[8/10]
Gana looked at Ruiga with a confused look on his face. "Gee, thanks for making it sound so easy." he said with a sigh on his voice as he began to focus his chakra, but finding it difficult to find the ions he was supposed to be charging, let alone charging ions with his chakra was new to him as it was. "I dont know how this is done.
"Heh, that is because you are thinking about it too much. you see, I explained the science of how the technique worked. but in reality, all you do is charge everything around you with yoru chakra and the ions will charge. and the more you charge the greater chance you will match their frequency. its that simple."
[9/10]
Gana nodded his head as he seemed to understand how it worked now. "Ohhh, thanks ruiga." he said with a smirk on his face as he began to focus, performing a string of handseals before focusing his chakra on all of the ions around him. "Lets try this on you." he said with a smirk on his face as he began charging them inside of Ruiga's mind, quickly seeing the effectiveness of the technique. "Thank you Ruiga." he said with a smile on his face as he prepared to walk away.
"Heh, do you think I am done teaching you?" Ruiga asked as he looked at Gana. I still have a few more techniques you could stand to learn from me that would help you in your aspirations."
[10/10]
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:25 am
as ace entered the nano village he was pressed over learning one attack as he was going to take the mist village back from the allaicne he may lose his life in this fight but it woulod be worth it"well lets get down to buisness....to defeat the alince"ace said as he traininer walked out from a shadow"well you have to hurry if you want to save the mist village so i will teach you.....showme what your made of NOW"THE trainer said with furry as he ran at ace with speed
1/10
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:45 am
Ace would not let his feelings get ther best of him if mitsuko would resist he had to take her down with no regret"kid...i will make into a surperb fighter"the mna said as sent a blow top aces stomich"woah.....this may take me all my energy"ace said"well your preatty sad.....for an uchiha.....there is no way you could beat kisame neice if you that weak"the man said as he sent a knee to aces head and flying into the wall as aces back felt the pain
2/10 demji gemji
"kid your time is wating come on and show....you may survive.....comeon kid dont let your feeling get you with this girl....be a man....with the force of a great typhoon"the man said as he threw a punch at ace but he countered and grabbed his fist"thats it kid show me a real uchiha"the man said as ace threw him into a wall as he he jumped off sending another attack and ace propelling jis fist ito his face as ace saw it coming ace grabbed his hand and threw him onto the ground
3/10
as he spinned over him grabbing his arm and lifting him into the air as he jumped behind him "danceing leaf shadow'ace said as the man turned around countering his attack as he he threw ace down with a swift punch wit the stregth of a raging fire ace felt that hit as he spit the blood out his mouth and as ace pulled his wire out and threw it to the tree and swung down as it cut the tree and slice it a bit as ace hit the ground his hands hit his sides as he turned around
4/10
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:53 am
As ace was wasting time he thought about it a bit he knew that he would have to try his best to defeat mitsuko she was better then him in everyway....ace was the sadddest ninja anyone has ever met he barley could do any thing he thought all he needed was power but he now knew what he needed to raise his power as he did he wiped his eyes from the tears coming down just thinking about it.not many people liked ace so as he wiped his eyes he would use all his power
5/10
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:01 am
As ace looked dowbn to the ground he jumped above the man with his emoitens change as he did he pulled a kunai out as he did he jumped back and threw it at the man and then used his speed to his advantage and kept it up with the kunai while he would launch an attack as ace would send an attck to the side as he looked at the kunai he was coming foward as and flash happened he threw ace off course a bit and the kunai was blocked also
6/10
"thats what i am talking about kid"the man siad with a smile as ace made no facial expression as he turned to hate very quickly as he thought about of what everyone said about him then his one best friend lee he would not even give the chance to explain himself ace thought about all of this as he was ready to launch another attac in pain not pyically but mentally his eago was hurt as he launched another attack as he looked at the moon as he would stop wastig everyone time
7/10
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:09 am
Ace jumped on a tree branch and then jumped off into the shadows as he did he walked out slowly to scout for any traps"well id i see your doing betterno need to scout for traps.....this is like war now if you actully want to take her down you better use her wit and i dont think it ill be easy everyone says she good and no one think your good so use this to your advantage everyone badmouth you and in your face they know your not very strong to begain with
8/10
"well ace i can tell your scared to death you dont have to attack her .....this is your chaoice remember this your training is almost over as he would begain to think and say"then he sent a running flying kick to ace as it would hurt his jaw and ace fell to the ground and it started to rain"ace remember to be a ninja you will have to use everything to your advantage remember that"the man said as he would jump back and brush himself off and then look over at ace"do better and you will be ready"the man said
9/10
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:13 am
As ace sent a blow to the man stomich and it sent him back a bit"well ace you ready i will teach you now so are you ready"the man asked ace as he noded and he looked to the sky to see as morning was coming and he and the man stayed up all night fortraining as he did he picked himself up after learning that and he would head for the docks"by the way kid my name is joga remember that"the man said he saw ace leave for the docks as he was headed for another village
10/10 Denji Genmu
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:36 am
Lee suddenly got off teh boat, and started walking to the vilage. not before sasying" thankyou so much for gving me this ride. lee tehn quickly threw the man some coins, and continued on towrds the village. tehre was a tournament coming up, and lee was not sure if he sould enter.. he knew he was good, but he could not beat realy good people like that. but there was slos the easy version, that lee knew he could dop good in. lee then knew taht he would ener in, after hee was doen with this training. he had much to leanr, and he knew he could learn it here.
denji genmu 1/10
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:41 am
lee was almost to teh gate, when he felt a pain in his arm, he had been hit by akunai!! lee qucikly jumpe to te side, as five ,ore landed by lee's feet, lee then qucikly drew his sword, as some more came, he kncoked tehm away with the wind" dance of teh blade" lee etnn quickly jumped up inot te ai, and took out two kunai, as more came at him. lee quickly boocked them, and landedmdoing a back fli[. lee ten quickly hrrew one kunai, and right as the manjumped to deoge, lere threw a nother diverting the path of one of tye kunai straight at the man. he was hit.
2/10
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:46 am
lee qucikly flcikered behind teh man, and said" so what would some one like you, want with some one like me." lee quicklu used leaf rising wind, and kciked the man into the air. lee tehn jumped above him, an dsaid" leaf great whirl wind" as he kciked teh man, dead on. lee tehn quickly back floiped, and laned on the ground, as the masn hit the gorund. lee etnn did soem ahnd sighns, and said" shadow clone jutsu" the cpnes qucikly went up into the trees, there were a lot of them. lee quickly jumped over the man, and tried to kcik him. lee kcik was blocked, but with both hands.
3/10
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:54 am
one of les clones quicklt threw a kunai at the man, and he was forced to let go of lee. lee tehn quickly jumped up inot the iar, and did some hand sighns" royal flush" he sad, as he threw dealy explosive cards at the man, that would surely destroy him. the man quickly threw some kunai, and desroye them before tehy could hit him. lee etnn wquickly flcikered beind him, and used hurricane kikc, to send him flying. lee etn said" well, not to god now." the man quicikl threw a kunai, and lee doged it, bu it turned around ,a nd came back at hi. lee quickly used flyin sawallow, and cut it in half.
4/10
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 9:26 am
lee quickly dodged to teh side, as teh man came at him.. lee ten quicly did soem hand seals, as a water dragon came from teh cloudes. et man was hit, and hew ent flying. le then quicklyv ddi soem ahnd sighns, and said buble trap!" as teh water aorund teh man, fromed a buble, and he was trped. the man qucikly got out soem how, and said" you think you can fool me, with a comrades jutsu.l..!" lee ethn knew that this was a nano ninja, lee quickly flcikered ebhind him, and tried to kick. it was blocked , and lee was thrown to teh side.
5/10
The an qucily did some ahnd selas, and said" genji denmu" Lee knew exactly what this was, it had been used on him a bunch, of times. lee quickly did some ahnd sighns,a dns adi" dance of teh dragon" as a twiser formed in his adn. lee quickly knocked teh dust back at teh man, and said" well, well, well.. look who's parylized now. te man then said" i have nevr failed withy this jutsu, you ust be an amzing shinobi, to do thhis. let me free,a nd i wil tech you it.
6/10
lee quickly noded, as he used dance of the dragon, to blow the dust awa, the man could now move he slowly waked up to lee, and said" i understand you have trained here befoeew, fromyour previous jutsu.." lee quicly nodded,a nd said" eys.. but my traner atatcked me, just as you did.. so i ghuess it woud be a nano custom.." teh man slight;ly noded, and said" yes, i supose you could say that.. now lets get dnw to buissens..." lee qucikly nodded, and said" eys.. lets."
7/10
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 9:35 am
teh man then said" since you seem to know the couinter for genji denmu.. could you explain to me how it works..." lee nodded, he knew exactly how it worked. tehy were small elcitrically charged iron particles, that dirupted a humans senses, and parylizes them. lee tehn quickly said" it is a justu that is used, by putting elctricaly cared iron dust in the air, to disrupt a umans senses, parylzing them.." the man quickl nodded, and said" good.. yoiu seem to under stand it.. now lets get started.." lee quickly nodded, as teh man quickly took him to the docks.
8/10
" you will be trining here, becaise i assume that you wil partcipae in this. he pulled out a magazine, and on top it said" best of the rest tournamnet.." lee quickly nodded, and the man said" okay you wilmbe able to just hop on t boat to go, right after this.." lee nodded once ore,ands aid" thanks.. im earning this jutsu specail for that." teh man tehn nodded back, and said" yes itw ill eb very useful, but make sure they do no use it against you.." lee quicly nodded, and said"okay lets begin."
9/10
The man nodded,a nd sad" okay here are teh ahnd seals.. first lie this" the man showed him a sigh" tehn like this" he sowed lee wn another, and continued like this untll he ahd show lee the whole jutsu" okay that is all you nee to knwo, now just wait for teh boat, to that torunament.. yoy dont want to be late, now do you??" Le shook his head, and said" nope.. thankyou so much.. i will easily wind because of this" the man tehn smiled back at lee,a nd winked" yes it will help!"
10/10
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