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 Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:10 am
((OK guys! I'm back! pirate What did I miss?))
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:11 am
Cognoscenti A figure garbed in a trenchcoat and hood slowly approached the group, in a weak masculine voice, "Heading anywhere important?" he asked. (This isn't a Freeform rp, you have to submit a profile first or your posts will just get deleted. You should read the front page then send your profile to the thread creator. After they give you the thumbs up THEN you can rp. If you continue most likely what will happen is you will piss off the regulars and they will ignore you as a result).
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:51 am
"Where am I from?" This posed a potential problem. He had not yet heard a name of a place other than where he was. He couldn't blatantly say he had just arrived from space; they'd never buy it, they didn't even know what he was. On the other hand, he couldn't ignore the question.
He could always fake insanity.
But that wasn't a good idea either.
"I am from just outside of the city center. I have never before been inside of the city center."
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 12:48 pm
[[I knew I forgot someone. Sry... sweatdrop Go right ahead.]]
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:06 pm
((Onamisaki, (that's the third time I spelled your username BTW) it's your turn to post lol.))
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:10 pm
[[YAY!!!! Ok, ^_^ I was trying to get off the phone because I can't hold two trains of thought at once. Gimme a sec to find the last two posts.]]
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:35 pm
[[Gosh... I'm going to miss that name, Saki. cry ]]
In the middle of her incoherent babbling, a voice split her thoughts and scattered them. She turned to see a young woman with cropped black hair, stalking up them, rage burning in her golden eyes.
An unsettling feeling rose up, and Sakeri whipped the claws from her Daemon, standing ready to attack as Amati stood loyaly next to her. His teeth were bared as he crouched low toward the ground, ready to pounch at any given time. He could tell from her scent that she was no ordinary human.
"Who are you?" she hissed, the hairs rising on her neck. Something about this girl just wasn't right.
[[Eh... I remember we had a plot planned for this, but I don't remember what. All I remember is that we were going to fight Duckie. If she isn't able to post just grab me and run for your life. She can catch up with us later.]]
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:50 pm
[Alrighty my guy's profile is up!]
A figure dressed as a fencer observed the individuals from a distance and began devising a plan. Firesteel ran through its possibilities.
Role - Infiltration
A. Acquire civilian clothing.
B. Ranged execution.
C. Ambush and melee.
After a minute of risk assessment, Firesteel made its decision and began to look for a victim.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 3:02 pm
Onamisaki [[Gosh... I'm going to miss that name, Saki. cry ]] OOC: No you're not, 'cause it's short, easy to spell, and is reminiscent of Jappanese alcohal(sp? wow that's pathetic); I'll be using it plenty I'm sure...the name that is wink lol BIC: At that moment; he saw it. It didn't seem like much a first, just a little black dot in the sky. But when Edger took a second look, there was a black hole about as large as the roof to the Astrodome hanging over the Montreal Post Office. Edger stared "Holy mother of.......its happening again." He tried to scream, get the people gawking on the sidewalk to flee, but it was too late. Immediately a swarm of feinds poured out from the hole like molten metal from the ironworks of Hell. Edger knew he was about the only one who could do something in this situation, but he was so overpowered. He shook his head and scowled at the swarm, it didn't matter. He walked forward as crowds of terrified residents ran past. He saw the vile little beasts now, red-orange and black impish things, bat-like wings, twisting scropian tails, pointed ears, and yellow eyes full of victrolic intelligence. Edger smirked, he'd show them who was the smart one. He climbed on top of Cafe' table, raising his staff into the air. It glowed dark purple as he spoke his incantation "Libra Mortis....Skult!" A tremble in the earth beckoned, and in a blast of hellfire a skeletal mage with the unhallow fire burning in his hands grinned at his overpowering foe. Edger jumped from the table and commanded, "Ok.....LET'S DO THIS THING!" OOC: Woot for action!
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 4:00 pm
Iori held the dog in his arms as the tv in teh bar covered the mass murder down town. The news suddenly switched its coverage.
"An unknown explosion occurred in a mineshaft in the mountains earlier.........
the government believes terrorism is behind it"
Iori walked outside and saw black smoke spewing up from the north of the bar. His exit unknown to the patrons in the bar as he runs down the street and waves down a cab passing by.
He opened the door and the cab driver saw the dog.
"Woah man, No pets allowed in this vehicle pal."
Iori looked at the man for a few moments and started to get angry at the scum he just met. He stares at the man with his piercing eyes as he tightened his fist.
"Dude your holding me up i said before no pets in the car."
said the man
Iori lowered the dog onto the sidewalk as he leaned over into the car.
"Hurry up and get in man!" Said the Cab driver
Iori clenched his fist tighter as it rushed towards the mans face.
Iori pulls his arm back towards him as the man sat there as blood dripped from his nose and his jaw cracked into pieces.
Iori walked to the drivers side door and pulled the man out of the car leaving him on the ground unconscious as people screamed for the police and an ambulance.
Iori got into the cab as his dog jumped into the passengers seat as he reached over to close the side door. He then sped away before the police or ambulance could arrive.
(((I got impatient >< whee whee whee ))
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 4:24 pm
Firesteel looked down upon the fallen cab driver, Target acquired.... The droid activated its cloak and leapt down to pick up the human. Sprouting its fiberglass glider, it leapt into the air toward another roof top.
It landed and looked upon the man for a moment before strangulating him to death. Firesteel donned the man's clothes and looked down at the speeding cab, Distance is gaining...find alternative route...
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 6:55 pm
((O.O OK. I'll just call you Saki lol.))
Kin turned his head, and spotted Sakeri and Amati on their guard against someone, and looked to see who it was, spotting the short haired simpleton-looking girl, of which he felt much amused at how angsty the stranger seemed. "Yo," he raised his hand to wave, and smiled cheerfully, totally off guard.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:46 pm
As ruko walked down the streets she heard a noise and flew up in the air and saw from above two boy and two girls she decided to land next the them and "Introduce herself" as she landed she saw that one of them atleast was a purifier "Well hello there fellow purifier" she looked at the others and clearly identified one as another purifier "Gee when did we start hunting in packs?"(How was that one? also i was not sure on the sex of "Amati" So i assumed she was a girl if not please tell me so i can edit?)
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:18 pm
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